TR OS - HO JAANE DO AB FAASLE KUCH TOH KAM

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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE: Firstly i want to tell every one that this os is also similar like my recent os "ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda" and the concept is arranged marriage concept. pls tum log yahi soch rahe honge ki mujhe hamesha ek hi type ke ideas aate hai, i am sorry for that, hope u will like this and haa... i did not include romance coz bada ho jaayega...

TAAREY OS

HO JAANE DO AB FAASLE KUCH TOH KAM


taarey

"Rey, you need time and even she needs, aap dononki shaadi hokey bass 6 mahine hue, and tum donon honeymoon pe bhi nahi gaye, and you are a practical worm! And she is a simple girl jo tumhaare liye stranger hai, I know. But, u need time to understand her and you should give her, just because wo awkward feel kar rahi hai and comfortable nahi hai, tu ussey divorce de dega?"

Said swayam angrily trying to handle rey's decision

R: aur kitna time du swayam?

S: rey, yeh shaadi hai! And koi bhi shaadi, chahe love ho ya arranged fix hoke nahi aati ki successful hogi ya nahi hogi, usko successful banana hamaare haathon me hai!

R: so you want to say ki main intezaar karu!

S: tu na akdu hai! Intezaar karne se kuch nahi hota, wo ek simple and thoda shy girl hai and time lagta hai khulne me, so u should take the initiative ki wo tumse comfortable ho!

R: oh please, u want me to talk to taani in a loving and luppy duppy way? Wo sab mujhse nahi hoga!

S: toh tere shaadi ka kuch nahi ho saqta!

R: wo toh acha hua ki I asked her for divorce and she agreed also!

S: (shocked) what???

R: haan, no argument no convincing, just a simple OK!

Flashback

R: taani

T: haa rey

R: wo main yeh kehna chahta hu ki, hum donon iss arranged marriage me comfortable nahi hai, so

T: so?

R: so kyu na hum donon divorce le le?

Taani was numb; she knows that how much she was hurt! And she also knows that why rey was saying this, just because she was not being open and friendly and being a wife, rey decided to take divorce from her. But she never ever wanted it. She started to blame herself for this situation! Just because she did not accept rey as her husband, rey decided to get divorced, and he has all rights to choose his happiness so she said

T: okay!

Flashback ends

S: you seriously think taani ne yeh dil se kaha hai?

R: itna bada decision koi yu hi bolega? Soch ke hi decide kari hogi na?

S: tu nahi sudhrega! Who knows usne tumhaari khushi ke liye ha bola ho?

R: oh please swayam! She is matured enough to think about herself also!

S: me tumhe aur nahi samjha saqta! Do whatever you want!

Rey reached his home and found taani aiding her finger, as it got cut when she was cutting the vegetables.

R: tum koi bhi kaam theek se nahi kar saqti kya? Kaat diya na apna haath, kaha rehta hai tumhaara dhyaan? and dinner ready hai ya nahi? Mujhe bhook lag rahi hai!

Taani was feeling bad, usko dinner ki padi hai though he saw her finger cut. And still he simply shouted on her! she brushed off her thoughts thinking that he wants to separate from her so why at all she is bothered!

Taani served rey, and he ate and went to his room.

Meanwhile taani got a call from her dad

Td: hello taani beta! Kaisi ho beta?

T: her eyes brimmed up : main theek hu papa. Aap kaise ho?

Td: arey beta me bilkul theek hu! And main kal subah tak tumhaara ghar aa raha hu, me abhi train me hu, mujhe waha kuch kaam hai beta!

T: sach papa! Aap yaha aa rahe hai?

Td: haa beta, kitne din ho gaye apne pari se milke! Damad ji se bhi mil loonga!

T: aap please aa jaayiye papa! Aapki aaj kal bohot yaad aa rahi hai!

Td: haa beta kal milte hai! Rakhta hu!

T: bye papa, good night!

Td: good night beta!

Taani was through a sleepless night in her room, she is really broken that her marriage will be broken within 6 months and she is also scared what will her parents think when her marriage will be divorced.

With so much of happiness and love they have done her marriage. And now what will be the situation when they will come to know about the divorce.

Morning

When rey was getting ready for his office, the door bell rang and taani rushed to open.

Rey came downstairs and found his FIL at the door.

Taani hugged her dad tightly laying her head on his chest, she started weeping silently. Rey was looking at the duo and he started to feel guilty at a small corner in his heart! He came to his Father -in-law and touched his feet and took his blessings.

R: dad, aap yaha achaanak?

Td: haa beta mujhe ek kaam hai yaha bank me, khatam hotey hi chala jaunga!

R: theek hai papa,

And then he gets a call from his office that due to some political reasons there is a strike going on so office employees cannot attend the office, rey gave that day off and he also stayed at home.

R: taani, me office holiday de chukka hu strike ke wajah se, so me aaj ghar pe rahunga!

T: theek hai rey, aap breakfast karne aayiye,

R: haa, me casuals pehenke aata hu

T: papa aap chaliye na, aaj me apne haathon se khilaungi.

And at the breakfast table, taani was serving her dad.

Td: beta, aap khush ho na?

Rey was coming downstairs and he wanted to hear the convo so he stopped there

T: haan papa! Me apne life me bohot khush hu, rey mujhse bohot pyaar karte hai, mere har dukh baant the hai, mujhe jo chahe wo laakar dete hai, me bohot lucky hu ki mujhe rey mila as my husband. Par main bohot buri hu papa, maine kabhi unhe nahi samajh paayi. Bohot buri wife hu main!!!

Rey was in utter shock! Taani apne aap ko blame kar rahi hai! Swayam's words were now ringing in his ears, he finally realized that swayam was right and he was wrong, taani is sacrificing for him!

Slowly he came downstairs with heavy heart. He saw the view in front of him, taani was feeding roti to her dad, he smiled at the view and also felt a pang in his heart!

He went to the dining table and sat there. Taani served him also, he saw her eyes and he found she was deeply hurt and was crying. They completed their breakfast and they washed their hands, taani was in kitchen,

Td: rey beta!

R: ji dad!

Taani's dad was so emotional and

Td: beta, mujhe nahi pata ki main aapki shukriya kaise karu? Mujhe bohot khushi ho rahi hai ki mujhe aap jaise damaadh miley! Meri ek request hai aapse

R: dad, aap aise kyu bol rahe hai? Boliye na

T: beta, meri beti bohot bholi aur gum sum hai, please uspe zyaada zorr mat daaliye, wo dukh kabhi chehre pe nahi dikhaati, par andar hi toot jaati hai, ussey sirf doosron ki khushi se farq padta hai. Aap samajh rahe hai na me kya kehna chahta hu?

R: dad, aap bilkul pareshaan mat hoyiye, me taani ko kabhi bhi . . .

t: papa, apne tablet lijiye, aapko blood pressure high hai na

and rey was in his world the whole day, and taani's dad could not go to the bank due to strike. That day taani was only with her dad and was spending time with her dad, rey was only observing her, he was getting a feeling that he was terribly wrong, he shouldn't have hurted her so much with that divorce word.

That evening, taani's dad was walking in the hall, he did not have his specs so he did not see the table in front, he got hurt as the corner of the table hit his knee and he let out a small scream.

Taani came there running and made him sit and started to rub his knee, rey also came there and could see pure love and care in her eyes. He also felt bad seeing her like that, itna pyaar? And he remembered the words which her dad said to him.

They had their dinner and taani came into rey's room. Rey opened the door and found taani there, he felt happy in his heart

T: rey wo papa agar hum donon ko do alag alag room me dekhengey toh kya sochengey? Isiliye, please aaj ke liye me aap ke room me so jaungi agar aapko koi problem nahi hai toh!

R: nahi taani, koi problem nahi hai, andar aao!

She went to the bed and took a pillow and a blanket and was comforting herself on a couch beside the bed. Rey was shocked,

R: taani tum couch pe?

T: rey aap waise bhi mere yahan honey se comfortable nahi hongey, toh main aapko aur irritate nahi krna chahti and before rey says something she laid on the couch.

Rey's heart was crying. He also went and lay on his bed and swayam's words and taani's dad words were ringing continuously in his ears, tears rolled down his eyes. He turned towards the couch and saw her angelic face.

And he fell asleep with his teary eyes watching her face, and thunders with rain started off in the mid night! Taani woke up with a startle! She was so scared of that sound so she started sweating and shivering in that fear. Rey got disturbed with the thunders and woke up and found a pathetic sight in front of her. He felt his heart slipped and fell in his stomach.

He went near her and sat behind her on the couch, he softly called her name,

R: taani!

Taani turned and saw rey very close, they were lost in each other's eyes and as soon as the next thunder was in the sky, taani hugged rey tightly As tightly as she can Letting out all the fear in his arms and resting her head on his chest.

Soon he hugged her back caressing her hair and started to cool her down.

R: sh... taani, please daro mat, main yahi hu na, tumhaare paas, please ro mat!

His face was dug into her hair and she was feeling so blessed and safe in his arms, or should we say the most awaited moment for her!

She broke the hug and saw his face, it was full of tears. She wiped his tears and he caught her hand resting his cheek on it, not wanting this moment to end.

He opened his eyes and asked her

R: taani, kya tum sach me mujhse alag hona chahti ho?

Taani nodded her head in a no again hugging him tight.

He broke the hug and kissed her forehead, he lifted her in his arms and placed her on the bed lying on top of her, making the night the most beautiful night for them. (Sorry I am not going in detail as it is too long already).

Morning:

Both were in each other's embrace under a chiffon blanket. Rey woke up first and saw his taani in his chest. He strokes her hair gently digging his fingers in her hair and kissed her on her forehead. She woke up and saw her husband smiling at her. she smiled back.

R: taani, ab hume koi alag nahi kar saqta! Main tumhe saarey khushiyaan dunga! And I love you!

T: rey, I love u!

And so two souls became one and soon they enjoyed their life with 2 little souls jiya and ansh. There was no look back and lived happily ever after!

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Edited by hima_taarey - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res/unres
Me First 🥳
Yippee 😆
I was waiting for it since you told me that you are writing an OS 😆😆
It was too amazing 👏
I really enjoyed reading it 👏
He was giving her divorce
And she agreed 😡
They both were just sacrificing for each other 😲
Well this is what we call True Love ❤️❤️
Love you Hima for such an awesome OS ❤️❤️
Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i vil comment later..going out..now..😉/ unres...
its amazing...as usual...loved it alot...😃😉
Edited by tharu01 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os twin sis...loved it so much ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super amazing OS yr!!!
Loved it a lot!!!😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb awesome

rey want divorce and taani agreed for reys happiness

taani and her dad part superb

taanis dad and rey convo

taarey part loved it

taarey happily ever after😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow os!!
awsm!! perfectly put.. n the things u dint put was ok coz it created its own essence of emotions..!!
thnx 4 pm n keep writing !! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was an awesome os
i just loved it
it was amazing






really emotional
and i could easily feel the love...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😉 😉 I kno dear ki exam time per
Aisa ideas aata hai per itne awesome
Looks like ki yr brain is working very fast
Good sign 4 yr exams, now os kya bolu
Bada hi loving sa tha , loving taani her love
4 her dad n rey , stupid rey har baat itne
Der se kyu samsj aati hai idiot, but now everything
Is fine , love u dear, waiting 4next , greedy na
Always 4 yr stories n taarey
Waiting waiting waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsum OS di

Reyam convo was nice

Rey want divorvce n taani maan gyi..

OMG she luvs him so mch

Then taani n taani dad part was so emotional

Ek ek word dil ko chu gyi di..

I was really teared up.

N their patch up was so sweet

Thanx for PM

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