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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

hey anni ee r u nw a days

u r not updating ur ss




i am so sorry it is that i am caught up with my studies
i will try to update asap

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Posted: 12 years ago


Rajdeep Khurana

Age 28

An engineer by profession, he is still single as he waited to marry his childhood sweet heart, manyata. He is very sweet, warm and welcoming but cannot stand anything against manyata. This year of separation made his love towards her grow more and make him more desperate for her. When it comes to her he becomes ruthless and will fight anything to win her. His parents passed away in an accident three year back.

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 15

Tears fell as he wiped them, but they fell again. The coughs and the affliction of recalling of all the beautiful moment he spent with jai the previous night made him feel dizzy and his pain was beyond control. Akash felt destroyed, dejected and desolated. As he clenched to the letter tightly and read it all over again

"Dear Akash

I know today morning when you wake up you are so going to regret what had happened between us the previous night, it was not your fault so please do not blame yourself or fell sorry. It was just a mistake and nothing else I am sorry to ruin everything. I know I should have tried to stop you should have run away from there but I do not know why I could not do anything like that... I could not stop you because I too wanted it to happen as I know that I love you. I do not when or how but I fell in love with you. But I know that your heart belongs to Manyata and it is fine after all none shall like a gold digger girl who sleeps with a guy just for money. I was not like this akash I was never like this I too was a sweet and innocent girl to whom her family mattered more than anything but when I saw the most precious possession my family breaking I could not handle myself and started to break down I saw my dad ditching my mom and that lady who gave her entire life to her husband was deprived of every right just by one piece of paper it was too much for her as she collapsed and now since years is in hospital. This was the reason I am a gold digger I needed money to cure her. I turned more like a s**t and that time when you rejected me for marriage I was sure about the fact that no one will ever turn to me I am like a toy who can only give pleasure not love. I do not blame you any person would not agree to marry me and then I decided to be a part of your plan. Though I never said this before but as it is I am parting away forever now I am going to confess that I did read that red diary of yours the day you called me in your house for the first time to take my decision at that time I was not willing to work but after reading it I could connect my life with yours... maybe that was a reason to fall in love with you but you need not worry I shall not be a hurdle in your plan so I am moving back I hope that you get the girl you love. Akash I know I do not have any rights still I am saying you that after everything Uday is your brother and you cannot punish him for something where he himself is a victim. He too was a child to lose his father I hope you do understand it

Jai"

He was scattered, he read the letter again and each time it gave him a new meaning as this was the final time he looked up at the ceiling and cried out

AKASH: Where are you dad? Can you hear me? If there was someone to be blamed it is you yes dad you cheated over the both the girl who loved you so much you separated the love of parents from both of us. You made us rival, you made us turn this way. I mean all along my life I had been plotting and planning for people who were my family. No dad this game of your will end indeed and now. I am going to Devgarh I do not know they will accept me or not but I am going to stop this game as in the end even if I get uday ruin still I am a loser as my jai has left me forever ... so now I will take blame for the thing that I should before a long time .

It seemed like eternal hug both were lost in the embrace, the long lost friends celebrated their reunion but someone indeed was not moved by the sight and it was her husband Uday. He pretended to clear his throat to bring them back from this friendship fantasy but little importance was given to that as rajdeep looked down and as usual he pushed the tiny log of her hair at the back of her head as he said looking into her eyes

RAJDEEP: where have you been I missed you so much!

Manyata now felt uneasy at his behavior as she pulled herself aback from his embrace, she clucked as she found Uday boiling in anger as she replied lovingly to Rajdeep to tease her husband a little more

MANYATA: I missed you too and I am so happy that you are here now ... with me

Rajdeep passed a sweet smile as Uday for whom it began hard to resist his anger walked off from the place to an open space to get some air and cool his nerve while meanwhile sharing all the talks about their life rajdeep face turned pale as he looked down at her vermillion and asked almost in a half dead voice

RAJDEEP: are...you married?

She passed a warm smile and nodded in a yes then replied proudly

MANYATA: yes to Uday Veer Singh

She looked around to introduce both of them but could find him nowhere and said to Rajdeep

MANYATA: I guess he is out in the parapet let me just call him

Saying this she headed outside just to find him standing in middle of the flower bed and smoking cigarette. Her breath stopped as by now she knew uday prefer smoking and drinking when he is tensed, broken or very angry. The last one was probably his mood he was angry and she exactly knew why, she took small steps towards him aware that soon she would be targeted of his outburst and this was what happened as she called him

MANYATA: Uday what are you doing here?

He did not reply neither did he turn towards her, as she stood in front of her and caressed his face saying

MANYATA: Uday what happened why are you ignoring me?

He showed her hands off as he turned away and started walking and after some distance he stood and replied in a curt tone

UDAY: you go and sit in the car I will go and tell Atul that we are leaving

Before she could say a signal word he was gone and she had no choice, other than simply going and waiting for him after sometime he came there too as he almost banged the car door while closing it and started to drive, she kept pleading him to talk to her but he was extremely angry and was in no state to talk the scene of rajdeep and manyata was burning him each moment and finally he could not hold it any longer as she asked him to talk he stopped the car in an isolated road and turned towards her, his eyes shot fire towards her and his body shook with anger as he said in a loud tone

UDAY: yes now I am talking ask me whatever you want to ask Manyata

She was set off guards by his sudden rudeness, she could see the Uday who was buried in him this many days, who scared her, tears brimmed in her eyes as she ran out of words and managed to say in middle of her sobs

MANYATA: I ...am sorry... I was just trying...to make you jea..lous... please forgive me please I will never do this again.. I will never

She was finding it so hard to breath also, her broken state melted his anger instantly, he cursed himself for treating her this way, with a swift moment he took her into his embrace as he rubbed her back pacifying her pain, she kept her head on his chest as he ran his figure in her hair and said lovingly

UDAY:I am sorry wifey to react in a way like this but you must know I really love you a lot and I can never even bear the thought of you being with someone else I really do not want to lose you I really love you

She did not say anything, she was lost in the moments of the past today his outburst emerged the graved questions in her mind, she wanted to rub all this thoughts forever but she finally could not hold it back anymore and asked him in a cold voice

MANYATA: uday during the first six months of our marriage why should you treat me in that way. I am not complaining but it is just that I am fearing that this moment you are loving me but maybe the very next moment you turn to the old uday... and this sudden outburst scared me. I need my answer today uday please tell me what had I done that you treated me in such a harsh way, why did you give me so much of pain uday ... Why?

Her one question broke his world of love, he knew that one day this question would be asked and he would need an answer but he did not want to lose her neither did he want to keep her in the dark anymore.




done with the update

i am sorry if i offended any body

please hit the like button and no res box

hugss anni

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey anni nice update
i think this rajdeep will be villan from now
i luv this jealous uday
now lets see uday tells her the truth or not
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

hey anni nice update

i think this rajdeep will be villan from now
i luv this jealous uday
now lets see uday tells her the truth or not
thanks for pm
update soon


Thank you dear
yes you are right but indeed a cute villain
and we are going to have more of him
ah lips sealed
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Anni, really glad that Akash has decided to turn over a new leaf😃. I want Jai & Akash united SOON😉! Hope that Manyata is forgiving when Uday tells her about his past life.
Please do continue soon😊!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice update anii...
I like whn Uday jealous
i think rajdeep in villon of this story
lets see uday say manyta true or flse...
Love the update...
Thanks fr pm n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Great update Anni, really glad that Akash has decided to turn over a new leaf😃. I want Jai & Akash united SOON😉!

Hope that Manyata is forgiving when Uday tells her about his past life.
Please do continue soon😊!


thank you so much barfi jiji
yes he has finally realized that if we fight fire with fire we ourselves get burned
well i will try to get them reunited soon
lips completely sealed

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow nice update anii...
I like whn Uday jealous
i think rajdeep in villon of this story
lets see uday say manyta true or flse...
Love the update...
Thanks fr pm n update soon


thank you jiji
and he is going to be jealous for now quite a long
yes he is the new cute villain
lip sealed about that
awn it was my duty

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