FF - No Reservations! Completed! - Page 3

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Jonaki thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great going Poo! Keeping the spirit of NBT alive. Eagerly awaiting next part. Its FFs like yours that keeps the memories of NBT with us...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
I know I may sound too greedy when I'll ask you to update the next chapter as soon as possible... But I don't mind...
Please ..please ..please... Update jaldi...
Your work is always amazing... And this time too...
Eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
poo :


i'm loving it⭐️. and that's not something new or unusual .. i always love your FFs ! loved the way you have portrayed MM here from what we have known them to be since the last 2yrs .. David too looks an interesting character 😃. bdw, in the first update you mentioned about Megha feeling a sharp pain in her stomach ..and even David was talking about her going into labor .. what was that 😲? anything serious😕 ?


update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haaa Pravesh, please don't pull me down with such offense 😆! Thanks for liking the FF and tempting me to write down something! 😃

Kirthi, I'm humbled by your kind words! 🤗😳

Thanks Pratiksha, Meghan!🤗

Anu, I am happy that I cud fill the void in your missing NBT! 🤗

Hi Purvi, This is Poongodi and you can call me Poo! Hope NBT Forum gets retained forever! I wud miss talking here even though missing the show will be covered up soon! 😃

Hila Pranay! Twist ??!! I am scared of that word 😆! Anyway good to know that I cud keep the things simple yet intriguing! 😃

Hiya Jonaki! You are here 🤗! I still remember your SS 'What happens next' during the R-days! Your take on how the story could have unfolded after the Nepal revelation! Have you written anything after this? If any, Please PM me the links! I would like to read them! 😃

Hi @NBTNMKKfan! I am happy with your greed! That's a big compliment for me! 😃😳

Hiya Polly 🤗! Thanks for liking the characterization! Yeah something serious but in a good way! You must have guessed it by now! 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Poo..! This is extraordinaire brilliance..! Awesome work.. And i am so so happy dat you have come with a new FF..! Glad to realize that the magic of MM gonna remain intact through ur ff..!! Thanx for writing this..!
As far as the story is considered, you are an amazing talent.. The way you shape the story is beyong awesome..!!
Loved it and desperately waiting for the next update..!!
*claps*
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
This is awesome, amazing n outstanding stuff Poo..its written with so much thoughfulness, creativity, detailing..!! Aaahh...its so pretty, cute n so delicate!! Loved the characters of Megha & Mohan already.

The strength n personality you briefed about Megha and the caring, humble and tender nature of Mohan...awww just made me fell in love with these two!!!

I have fallen in love with your writing..its so clean, attractive, and the flow is asesome...eagerly waiting for the next part.

Edited by asmitasb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Hey
Awesome Awesome Awesome👏

i am so lovin' it❤️
maybe i am being greedy but could u update little longer parts...maybe i find them a teeny bit short becoz i get so engrossed

thnx for PM🤗

Cheers
😊Yashi
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Champ 🤗! Glad you are back to read my FF now! And your compliments make me turn pink and high! Thanks! 😳☺️

Hi Asmit! *Poo bows to accept your appreciation and recognition* 😳 Yes, you are right! I have put in enough thoughts into it before starting the FF and you got me there! Hope I keep up to your expectations! 😃

Hila Yashi 🤗! I would love to post longer parts but wanted to cut the chapter at the right spot to keep the curiosity alive! What say?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
great going poo 👏
and monu's entry😳 luved it
wen u make a show na cast KA😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter Three

Mohan stared at the heartbroken look in the very pregnant Megha's face, with a deep apology and he too was concerned for her condition. When Megha's gaze settled on Mohan, she found the feel of apology in his eyes. She didn't need apologies from any man; she had been tired of hearing those in the past.

"No, I am fine" She said to David and sat down on the porch. She was too eager to get her project done before the birth of her baby, who was due in few days

"I will be back for the van after a tea" David said and walked towards the small tea shop at the end of the street

"Do you need anything else?" Mohan sat down a little away from her unsure of what to do next

Megha said nothing but shook her head as if to say no. Mohan found her silence too punishing. He would have felt better if she had yelled at him.

"What is happening here?" Renu was confused to see a new man sitting next to a worried Megha

"Megha, are you ok?" She then turned to Mohan and asked "Who are you, man?"

"Hi! I am Mohan. I am coming from Mumbai" Mohan stood up to face Renu

"What are you doing in Alibag?"

"I am on a road trip!"

"What? Ok never mind. Whatever it is, but what are you doing here now?" Renu asked impatiently

Mohan explained her, the accident to which Renu exclaimed and screamed beyond what was expected for the situation. Mohan found it extraordinary as the reaction from the victim herself was nothing of this sort.

"Megha, you get in. Make a tea for yourself and relax. I will take care of this man"

"No Renuji! I should have been more careful too"

"If only you can be little more aggressive" Renu said irritably.

Megha took the damaged painting with her and went inside the house. As Renu confirmed that her head is not seen, she turned to talk to Mohan

"Megha is a single mother. With the baby expected anytime soon, she won't be able to make another picture now. She has lots of plans around this, but all lost in vain"

"When is the baby due?" Mohan asked

"Anytime this week. One can't tell, you know"

"Shall I keep this box inside?" Something clicked on Mohan's mind instantly and he wanted to talk to Megha

"Yes, you can. You will find the store room at the back"

As Mohan walked inside the house with the box from the van he heard Renu's voice

"No peeping inside the girls' rooms, ok!"

He chuckled to himself thinking how he should have been acting but how different he behaved from his age group. He didn't remember the last time he found any young girl attractive enough to catch his eyes for long. But then a flash of Megha's face screened in front of him. He quickly stepped out again and hugged Renu

"Thank you Renuji, for the tip!" Without a pause he kissed on her cheek and went inside again, leaving Renu stunned

Mohan found Megha sitting on a couch in the huge hall attached to the kitchen. A line of closed doors were along the hall side, where the girls' rooms must be, he thought. He took a seat in front of the couch. She looked at him dryly and wondered what he wanted then.

"This is a nice place" Mohan started a casual conversation

"Yes it is" She cut him short with a flat response

"Do you work from here?" He turned around looking for some of her other works and hoped to get a better answer

"I work as a salesgirl in a department store downtown"

"Oh! Then painting?" He asked in confusion

"Painting is my passion. I aspire to setup my own studio and make it big. Then I will focus on it fulltime"

"Where do you paint from then?"

"I live here as a paying guest along with other girls. Renuji is kind enough to lend the store room which I use as my studio now" She explained but didn't know what this man was going to do with the information

He waited for her to continue but when she didn't, he looked at her encouragingly. She sensed herself letting loose with her talks to a stranger. She didn't want to reveal anything more than she intended to. She did not know what Mohan was willing to do and why. She turned away from him and continued to drink her juice.

"I would like to stay and help you" Finally Mohan said in a calm voice

"Are you an artist?" She asked with a surprise that revealed him that she didn't think him to be the types who can sit still long enough to even draw a stick figure

"No. But I can watch the baby that you will be delivering soon, while you can work on another painting for the pending delivery"

Megha stared at Mohan unable to believe her ears and the man who had just smashed her dreams and hopes. He must have sensed her thoughts because he said with a gentle smile

"Come on, Megha! I would make a great nanny while you work! I promise to render my services with a smile and up to your satisfaction" He winked at her with a sexy smile

Chapter Four
Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago

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