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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: rohan_smile

hey.!! watch out...i did all of it...!! anyways..you helped..

Hey chill I won't rob you of your credit rohan but it was team for a couple of pages definitely..😃

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Marium

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

Thank yous

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Thanks a lot for the people who liked the previous update!

And thanks a lot for the people who commented also!

This time i managed to reply everyone of you! 😆

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Marium

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

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Chapter # 9

Disclaimer : Please who ever don't read the note i post after the post of update, is missing some important things. I kinda put down few important announcement or other things there on every update. Kindly start reading it, please.

Next morning shiny and bright rays contacted with Swayam's face because the window was wide open. He groaned in his chest and tried to hide his face in the pillow, only instead he hid his face in Sharon's neck, further. He sighed in relaxation and wanted to sleep more till he smelled some scent. It was a beautiful scent, though. Scent, which he feels when wake up early in the morning and breaths in sun shine. It was a scent of freshness. He lightly rubbed his nose with his hand and opened his eyes, shutting them again when he felt way too bright for his likeness. He tried to opening eyes few more times till he could rightly look into brightness. He looked at his right side and found a perfect and beautiful Sharon sleeping, cuddling into him.

Sharon frowned lightly when rays hit her face but before she could wake up Swayam raised his body and shut the window above. She immediately relaxed and a peaceful smile crept on her tender lips, very lightly which made Swayam smile as well. He touched his falling hairs and ran his fingers in them, playing with few random soft and silky yet a bit tangled bangs. He touched her cheeks and realized how immensely and beautiful soft her skin is. He touched her nose which was cute more than pretty, definitely. It was button shaped, small and weird! Weird? Oh, she suddenly twitched her nose when he touched it. Cute, definitely! That was his thoughts. He smiled but it faded away as soon as his eyes reached towards her delicate and luscious lips. They were of soft natural pink, slightly puckered which he liked, a lot. It resembles to Deepy because they both just pucker their lips intently, lots of times. He couldn't look at the anymore so he looked back to her entire face when he noticed she is nuzzling her face on his shirt.

Sharon moaned lightly and started opening her eyes, which meant that she is waking up. "Good morning, Sleepy heads!" Swayam wished her who was still trying to open her fluttering eyes. She raised her face from his shirt and looked at him, raising her eye brows as she was opening her eyes. "Damn, Sharon, open your eyes already!" Swayam said and chuckled at her. "Good night!" She whispered and turned on other side, stuffing her face in other pillow. "What? Good night? Sharon, it is 7:00 must be awake by now and we need to get off from this bed or else she will run into the room and jump on us! I hope you know what I mean?" Swayam said. Sharon opened her eyes on the other side and his words reminded her suddenly when few days ago Deepy came running into room and jump on them, basically she fall on Swayam, and on very delicate area of his. Ouch! She thought and laughed aloud, clearly her sleep was long gone. "Stop laughing, lady!" Swayam glared at her. "OK, but it was damn funny, you know?" Sharon said and laughed again all of a sudden.

Swayam glared at her and walked out of the bed, clearly grabbing towel to go to the bathroom. Sharon saw this and without even wasting a single second ran into the bathroom, locking it behind her. "It's not fair, Sharon! Come out, right NOW!" Swayam yelled from outside and Sharon just chuckled. "Ya, right. I am not coming out, Swayam. Wait till I am done! Now go check on Deepy!" Sharon said and Swayam heard the sound of shower. She is under the shower which means she isn't coming out. Poor soul he is. He turned to leave the room when he heard Sharon singing a song from inside, "Bheege hoonth tere, piyaasa dil mere." Swayam gritted his teeth and walked out of the room frustrated. He walked towards the dining hall and found Deepy sitting on the dining table, eating. "Good morning, Sunshine." Swayam loudly said to Deepy who stopped eating and looked at him and smiled instantly. "Good morning, Jiju." Deepy said and took another bite of her breakfast, "What are you eating?" He asked looking down at her plate, almost filled entirely with noodles. "Well, I ate scrambled eggs, and then I am eating cheese sandwich and here in the plate is my Maggie." She proudly said. Swayam walked towards her and bent to the level of her tummy, knocking on it making her giggle. "Gosh, your tummy is shouting at you. It will burst, babe." He said and Deepy glared at him, making him giggle. He walked and sat back on his chair. "You didn't bath till now? It is not Sunday. You are going office with Di, right?" She asked gulping down huge bites. "Yes, I am going and you young lady is going to school." He said and looked at the clock, "Deepy, you better hurry up your school bus will be up at 8:00." He said and walked into his room again.

Sharon was peeking out of the bathroom's door, looking nervous. Swayam walked inside and saw her doing this. "Whoa, lock the door Sharon!" he said and turned around immediately. "Sorry. I actually forgot to take a towel with me. Swayam, pass me the towel please?" Sharon asked making Swayam turn around. "Oh, wait." He said and walked towards the dresser to grab the towel while Sharon closed the door until he comes with the towel. He picked the first seen towel and was about to turn but stopped and thought of something. "Well, how about to start something new!" He said to himself and shut his eyes tightly; opening them after a second he walked towards the bathroom and knocked. Sharon peeped out and took the towel from his hand, but before she could close the door he put his foot in between the door. "Put the towel on yourself before I come in side." Swayam said smartly and Sharon gasped from his words. "Ok, as your wish, because I am coming inside." He said and pushed the door lightly and Sharon quickly wrapped the towel around her. Swayam tightly held the knob because his palms were sweating and his heart beat increased intensely. He stepped inside and closed the door behind. He turned around but he wishes he could just run out of the bathroom right now but he need to do this and he have to do this, but all out he wants to do this.

Sharon tightly held the towel around her body, which covered from her chest to middle of her knees. Her gorgeous and smooth bare legs were already naked to be looked at and her locks were sticking to her shoulder. Swayam turned around to look at her, and gasped seeing her. He never saw such a beautiful and gorgeous wife of his in this condition before. He was right he wants to do this and now he thought he would have regretted if he wouldn't have done this. "Sharon," he called her name, barely audible. Sharon looked at him, and looked down once again. Her legs and her hands were shivering. Her face was entirely crimson red and her body was... oh so beautiful right now. Swayam walked further towards her like his own mind and legs were supporting him, and more importantly his heart wasn't supporting her. He was so close that her back hit the cold wall and she looked at her and left in nervousness. Swayam raised his left hand and placed it on the wall beside her face and inched more closer which made her breath totally stop. She was so nervous that her hands badly started trembling and she could leave the towel anytime, before that Swayam held her hands and tightened her grip on towel.

He leaned his face closer and stroked her face with the back of his fingers, making Sharon gasp with slight tingle and she closed her eyes, inhaling a deep breath. Swayam looked at her enchanting lips and towards her eyes which were tightly closed. He rubbed under her left eye very lightly and she relaxed the tightness from her eyes. He could easily see that her cheeks were pink and a bit red too. Her lips were parted and his sweet and minty breath touched the middle of his lips and chin, as he was taller than her. He held the side of her face from another hand, and rubbed his thumb on her lower lips. Sharon opened her eyes lightly and looked at him, who was looking towards her lips and then looked into her eyes, making her redder. He pressed his body more into her, making her gasp slightly and held the collar on his shirt in her hand tightly, scrunching it.

"You are beautiful, Sharon." Swayam lightly whispered and now his scented breath touched Sharon's lips. "Swayam, why are you.." Sharon couldn't complete her sentence as he placed his finger on her wet lips. Her locks were still sticking on her shoulder and few drops were falling from her head, touching her eyes and lips then disappearing under her towel. He removed her hairs from the shoulder and leaned down pressing a kiss on her shoulder. Sharon's eye widen for a second till he kissed her a bit further above on shoulder, pressing his lips more now. He removed his other hand from the wall and held her waist from it, pressing her body into his. Sharon kept holding his collar and pressed the back on her other hand to the wall. Her breath was coming in short gaps and her heart was wildly thumping in her chest, making it difficult to breathe properly. "Swayam," Sharon whispered moaned lightly. Swayam felt electric tingles spread in his entire body listening to her voice. He took her hand from his collar and inter twin their finger, pressing their hand on the wall. He was feeling content, like he wanted to do this from very long time. He leaned further and pressed a kiss on her neck, sucking her skin between his lips. Sharon moaned lightly and arched her neck, and Swayam left the trail of feather soft urgent kisses from her neck to her collarbone and her shoulder. He kissed her jaw line and her cheeks. Sharon bit her lower lips hearing a groan coming from Swayam's chest.

He raised his head and came towards her lips, when suddenly someone banged on the door loudly. "Sharon di? Jiju? Is something there? Di, where are my shows? Sarah is making my lunch box." Deepy yelled from outside of door. Hearing her both of them came into their senses and Swayam immediately jerked away. Sharon who didn't like the way he stepped back looked down on the floor, while he turned his back on her. "Leave, Sharon. NOW!" Swayam sternly said, but Sharon wanted to talk to him but she didn't. She wiped the tear which was about to fall out of her eye and said, "Deepy, go out of the room, babe. Give me a minute, Di is coming." She yelled and after few seconds she heard the door of the room clicking shut. She looked at Swayam and walked out of the bathroom. Swayam didn't come out of the bathroom for few minutes giving her, her time to wear clothes.

He felt like killing himself. He was angry and disappointed him. How can he be so ridiculous? How? He felt like he took advantage of her condition and couldn't look at her face now. He was suddenly ashamed of himself. He looked above and mouthed, "Sorry, dad." He walked out of the bathroom thinking she must be gone till now but instead he saw Sharon, completely dressed, leaning over the dresser, and tears slipping from her eyes. She immediately felt his presence and looked at him. They both didn't say anything and Sharon left the room, wiping her tears away so that he won't see it, but it was late as he already did.

Swayam couldn't believe that he did something so stupid. How could he! He wanted to slap himself, but he knew he was helpless as he needed her. He wanted he relationship to work as son as possible. He needed something to stand by his side every single time he needs someone. He wanted to love someone and feel purely and honestly loved by someone. He wanted to work things out as he was depressed and exhausted living this half and incomplete life. This was the reason he took this step, knowing Sharon loves him. He never thought that may be Sharon is still not ready, that she is still not comfortable around him. Of course, why would she? He never did something that could make her comfortable enough for such a thing. He just wanted to feel happy like any other normal happily married man. He made the choice, but it was quicker and wrong. He needs to make everything back to square now. If even he doesn't want to, things already has did, now.

NOTE BELOW.

Edited by -Marium- - 11 years ago

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Marium

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

NOTE

Add --mystery.me-- to get PM's of this FF!

Firstly, kaam pakar ke.. push ups ya ju bhi you guys want woh maar ke sorry. I am so really sorry all of you! 🥱 I was kinda busy, but hey update was ready from like 1 week ago, but likes demand wasn't completed. It still is not but it got compensated as few of my lovely and poor readers spammed 10 pages for me. Yayy!

So, yeah Kriya and Rey will enter in next part as of now they are enjoying Kriya's pregnancy days in their home sweet home. Story will get interesting with many twist and turns! 😎

What will Elena find out about letter, any one guesses? Huh?

Do tell me your guesses and yes if anyone of you wants any kind of particular scene, then put it down and i will try to include it in coming chapter, alright?

Yes, one more thing! Deep, is cute! (Awein, dil kia bolne ko 😆)

As always, 60 likes! 😎 and please i want to see same number of comments as likes because like if i gets 60 comments, then only 20 people comments but but but, you what is the best part, i send 350 PM's, dude! 😡 (I am still anrgy)

-Marium

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nidhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Dearest dii ( I hope you

Don't mind me calling)

Lovely update

Once again I am speechless

I wanted to ask a question,

Do you have any magical

Ability to make me speechless

Every time I read your update?

Anyways, coming to the chapter

I am super happy after reading

This update,

1) loved the way swayam was

Admiring his Sharon

2) loved the way swayam woke

Sharon up (awe, so sad, deepy

Jumped on him to wake him up,

It sure must have been not only

Hilarious but painful too.)

3) swayam-deepy convo was

Beautiful, I always adored their

bonding, it's so sweet and pure.

4) the bathroom scene was

Unexpected and unpredictable

It was heavenly.(special mentions

To Bheege hont tere)

5) I loved the concern he had

For Sharon, hope they sort this

problem out as soon as possible

6) I look forward to see kriyaansh

Soon.

7) I want to see swayam's mom

Too, I want to see swaron fighting

Together against her.

8) I would love to see a mystery

Behind mr shekhawat's death.

9) I have seen positivity to

Every extinct in this ff

Can I see a break down state too

(I mean some negativity to add

Suspense.)

Anyways, one the whole I loved

The chapter(as usual).

P.S : update alpha's territory too

Nidhi

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ANMOL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

res

unres wow update nic

sharon thoufht he regret but his thinking is diff

sory 4 late

Edited by swaronlove001 - 11 years ago

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Gawd i thought you are not going to update..like seriously...spamming is a tough task but it all goes when i get the update...

And it was really very awesomely penned down...worth the spamming..

coming to the chapter...loved the morning conversation...and the description...

aww...the way you wrote the part when swayam began realizing he has a damn good looking wife...

and the teasing part to wake her up and the good night too... btw i mean the teasing by sharon...that's unfair!!

"Sharon singing a song from inside, "Bheege hoonth tere, piyaasa dil mere." Swayam gritted his teeth and walked out of the room frustrated"

hahaha...now that was truly fantastic..my fav part..!!

the swayam-deepy convo...you write any other thing in any way...but you write this one way too cutely...i mean yaa..that was again very very cute..the bond they share is like you know something else...its way too deep...!!!

well but i have to admit...cuteness is truly awesome but the way you narrate the romantic parts are above all the words i can write...seriously..the whole in-the-bathroom scene was described in the most beautiful way it could be done..i mean when you are in a story specially in a FF you cant just write some romantic stuff just like that..you have to keep up all the parameters in your head and only then you can give a bang-on write up and i found that thing in this one...not making it more than necessary more just the intimate factors , it was just what the story needed for swaron to gain clarity in their life...and I am happy that deppy disturbed them and swayam jerked..and sharon was hurt...

yup before i begin to sound insane it was because you know if that would not happen then simply they would have lost their senses and regretted it later..( i think so) so better...before that clearing the minds...

swaym's guilt anger frustration disappointment every bit of the last to paragraphs was described nicely, and I would love to read how they get out of it...

all in all..beautifully written..as always...and was a wonderful feeling to read an romantically intense swaronish chapter...

Rohan :)

P.S : I still dont get why are kriyansh entering...not like i dont like them..i love them too..but still..i m not getting it...but it would be fun when they enter...it always is...twist and turns..hmm..sswweett...!! i love reading James Bond type things..you know..elena...hmm maybe something dramatic..would suit the story...whoa..i just went t through the chapters again and there's a good damn story boiling in the cauldron...not baad..i guess why i never looked at that angle of story..so basically swayam's mom the villain..and just the starting...means she is upto something huge..whoa!! it would be fun...UPDATESOON

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Marium...I haven't received pm of this one and then u complaints of no comments from me...huh...

Anyways i m first one to like this story so I m supposed to b first to comment...

whole update was so beautifully penned down...right from the mrng description and swayam vetting drooled over Sharon was so mesmerizing...

and I love deep character day by day.. .

waiting fr romantic swaron and Sharon outburst after sudden change of behavior from swayam...

p.s. now I m not gonna comment if I don't receive pm further

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Marium meri vodka this chapter was blockbuster awesome and you rock you know that right??😳
I loved the opening scene where swayam admired sharon it was sooo pure and lovely I could imagine the looks he was giving to sharon while admiring her like that in the morning..😊.
I liked the little teasing that sharon did bathroom main jaake bheege honth tere gaa ke badi dusht hain she knows what chord to strike to embarass swayam and deepy my my kya haal kar diya bechare swayam ka both the sisters are hell bent uski band bajane pe..😆.
The bathroom scene made me fan myself really brilliant girl no one beats you at writing sensuous scenes..👍🏼. It was something which did'nt portray swayam's lust but his want to be loved by someone and love someone in return thinking that he took the step but then why this misunderstanding yaaar the teasing and happy swaron were better to read kya yaar vodka kyun kiya aisa..😔.
Jaldi update karna ab next chapter..🤗