ARSHI FS-FROM YOU AND ME TILL US UPDATED 26/9

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#621

love the update..
u wrote it perfectly..
u wrote it the way we all wanted to see these confession n everything in the show :)

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monsi08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#622

Awww... so romantic... i always wanted smthing like dis in d show ... thanks for writing dis lovely scene 😊

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fatousha

@angel_prachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#623

loved it very lovely update like always superbbb👍🏼

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Loved the confession... Thanks to all the talented writers we are getting our wishes fulfilled of many scenes, incidents which we wished had been done differently. Confession and Arnav coming to know the extent which Khusi suffered in his absence being one of them...cannot wait to read the next update

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#625

loved the explanations for him keeping her things

would love for you to continue with the contract marriage
and Shyam being exposed

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fleurs

@fleurs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#626

The updates were fab & thanks for the PM 😊

Chapter 5A

Me too I've always wanted Khushi to find her belongings treasured by Arnav secretly in his wardrobe & recall all the incidents leading to her stuff ending up in his possession & as to why he had held onto it finally leading her to think of his always incomplete sentence farq padta hai, kyunki' being completed by his confession through phone I love you, Khushi' ... the update was lovely 😃

Khushi happy that her fears had been washed away by the warmth of his embrace & how secure she felt when he held her close to him, she relieved that now after sharing all her pain & fears to him she had nothing to worry about & she enjoying looking at him tending his plants with love was well written

Arnav enjoying the way Khushi was muttering to herself & searching for the sindoor box, he holding her closer to him & pressing his forehead against hers was a cute scene ... loved this scene of Arnav transferring the vermillion on his forehead onto Khushi's ... beautiful 🤗

Oh Khushi uttering in haste not realizing that her words about his confession to her would hurt him deep down in his heart & suffocate him, Arnav avoiding her that troubled Khushi was well framed

She panicking as Arnav didn't reach home on time & on the other hand Arnav rushing to soothe his wife who would have got frightened of being alone showed how much both cared for each other & how Arnav placed her comfort even before his broken heart & rushed to calm her fear ... he's amazing 👏🤗

Chapter 5B

Arshi's confession was very beautifully framed 😃

Khushi trying to pour out the pain & fear that his absence around her & her not even having a hint of where he was had engulfed her, Arnav not able to comprehend her accusations completely, Arnav hurt deeply when she accused him that he didn't consider her important enough to tell her where & why he was going, worry etching him to see her weak state, he throwing questions to her only to receive silence as a reply, he feeding her which overwhelmed her but she moving away from him in anger was well laid down portraying on how love & care always took the front pushing anger behind

Loved the way Arnav handled his angry wife who was missing his confession. Khushi confused to hear Arnav's question which displayed immeasurable pain hidden in it when she was expecting his anger to burst out, Khushi insisting on Arnav to complete his sentences atleast this time, she admitting to him that her joke had hurt him & that she was aware of what his words meant at that time at which Arnav asked her to explain was awesomely written

Arnav telling Khushi at what a state he was in when he thought he made the last call of his life & how his heart pounded to let her know that he loved her, Khushi in turn opening up the undying love for him enthroning her heart, Arnav encircled in endless joy on hearing her confession & he confessing to her seeing the waiting eyes pleading him to accept his love verbally & soothen her was mind blowing & their kiss sealing their love was adorable 😃

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fleurs

@fleurs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#627

Chapter 5C

The starting quote is so true ... so is the power of pure love ... none can predict its entry & none can force its exit & the walls of control guarding one's heart is no match to the wonders love can do

Arnav amazed at Khushi asking if they could eat & he thinking of the changes that had transpired in their lives after the kidnapping incident & how close they had come to each other & how Khushi expressed her love for him in her actions was lovely 😃

Arnav astonished to find the memories he treasured so long out in the open & understood that it had been discovered by Khushi, Khushi finding him standing stiff in the place where she was seated a while ago crying clutching his box & understanding it to be the reason for the confusion shadowing his face, Khushi asking him to explain the reason behind him treasuring them because she wanted to hear it from his mouth though she knew the reasons was lovely

I wanted to see the scene where Arnav explains to Khushi each instance which made him treasure her things knowingly or unknowingly & thanks Ankita for writing this scene so beautifully 🤗 ... especially I loved it when Arnav honestly told Khushi that he didn't know what made him keep her torn duppatta & how he wanted to throw it but still couldn't do it & also they both reminiscing the day when he almost confessed to her thinking how terrible it was when he thought that it was she in the ambulance & had lost her

Thanks for the PM. Love to read more

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#628

Update was very nice.

Its good that they have had a heart to heart talk

continue soon

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Mbean

@AmidstTheWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#629

From you and me till us Part 5-(D)

This update is here only and only because of you people out there who read and always leave me overwhelmed with your kind words.Writing about Arnav Singh Raizada talk about his feelings is perhaps the toughest thing to do,but I really hope it turned according to your expectations.I ended up watching all those episodes again to get to the gist of it.

OVER TO YOU ALL NOW!!!!!

The feeling of finally being home was what Arnav and Khushi felt being in each others embrace as they sat under the blanket of stars the warm breeze flowing in,Khushi's head tucked her under his chin as she listened to his rhythmic beating of his heart.Silence has followed as Khushi has told him about what she actually felt that time, he has not said anything in return though his hold on her has tightened immeasurably as if the same fear shadowed his heart even now.Arnav broke the silence after a while as he spoke in trance of the words she has spoken to him that day.

"Aapki wajah se nahi,aapke bawjood bhi hum thik hai".(Not due to you but instead of you I am fine).

"Arnavji".Khushi loosened her hold a bit as she looked up at him perplexed wanting to know why he is repeating the words she has spoken the day she came to give him her resignation letter.He held her face with his one palm,the terror of seeing her unconscious,the turmoil he has gone through all finally making his way out through words as he continued.

"Maine bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha ki tum yahan aaogi,I cant tell you howwas relieved I was to see you in front of my eyes sound and safe,I couldn't sleep whole night Khushi,sirf tumhare baarein mein soch raha tha,Di ko tak bata diya tha sab kuch because I so desperately wanted to know ki tum kaisi ho ko, raat bhar sirf tumhare baarein mein soch raha tha,tum behosh thi.

(I didn't expect that you will come here,I cant tell how relieved I was to see you here in front of my eyes safe and sound,I couldn't sleep whole night Khushi,only your thoughts occupied my mind,I even ended up telling Di everything because I so desperately wanted to know about you).

Khushi listened his each word,understanding dawning on her about how restless he has been seeing her in that condition,their feelings for each other has run so deep for each other since so long and they both have been aloof from its knowledge,She held his face as he lovingly pressed a kiss on her wrist when Khushi spoke shaking her head/

"Hum dono kitne ajeeb hai".(We both are so weird).

"Arnavji,hum bhi kahan so paaye the,baar baar wahi sab kuch hamari aankhoin ke saamney aa raha tha,jiji ne bataya tha ki aap humein ghar lekar gaye the aur -".(Arnavji,even I wasnot able to sleep,everytme I would close my eyes that entire incident will revolved around ,Jiji told me you bought me home but I felt there was something--).Khushi hesitated but finally voiced her doubt to him.

"Aur aisa lag raha tha jaisa kuch hua jo humein nahi pata,jab hamari aankh khuli to sabse pehle aapka khyaal tha aur humein samajh nahi aa raha tha kyun,gussa to hum the aap par aur us par yeh sab,humne kitni saari jalebiyaan bana di thi pata hai aapko!".

(It was like that something happened which I wasn't aware of,when I opened my eyes,the first thought was about you,I was unable ti understand anything,on one hand I was angry and on the other ,do you know how many jalebis I ended up cooking?).Khushi ended feeling a lot better letting it all out ,sharing with him her doubts.

He just sat there looking at her fondly with adulation knowing very well she would speak again and she did as Arnav mentally patted himself.

"Arnavji,kuch aur tha kya?".(Arnav was there something else too?).Khushi asked innocent viable in her eyes.

Seeing her ,he didn't even recognised it was him speaking those words to her as they left his mouth on their own.

"Khushi,tum itni innocent,itni vulnerable lag rahi thi us waqt,It made me want to protect you from everything that would ever come to close to hurt you,main tumhe aise chodna nahi chahta tha aur jab tumne unconsciously jaane se roka ,I only know how I left ".

(Khushi,you looked so innocent and vulnerable that time,It made me want protect you from everything that would ever come close to hurting you,I didn't want to leave you and when unconsciously you stopped me from leaving,I only know how I left).

"Humne aapko jaane se roka tha kaise?"(I stopped you from leaving,how?).Khushi asked curiously to the new found information.

"Jaise tum hamesha karti ho and to tell you the truth Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada I love this habit of yours".(What you do always and to tell you the truth Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada I love this habit of yours).Arnav answered a bit teasingly his voice filled with warmth for her.

Khushi sat clueless as Arnav slowly took her free hand and placed on his tee as her fingers on her own accord clutched it tightly,a bright smile adored her face as the true meaning of his words grasped on her,his eyes smiling at her holding the very expression she has seen in them when she has clutched his vest after she has gained consciousness the day they got rescued from the kidnappers.Her right that made her want to hold on him forever and to know he loved it added another spring in her happiness.

Trying to do some mischief she asked him casually,

"Waise Arnavji,humein pata nahi tha aapko hamari likhavat itni pasand hai".(Though Arnavji,I had no idea you loved my handwriting so much).

"What likhawat(Handwriting) Khushi".Arnav stood up upright at her out of the box question.

"Handwiriting,tabhi toh aapne hamara istifa itni sambhaal ke rakha hai".(Handwriting ,isn't it why you have kept my resignation letter so safely).She answered getting up with him taking his arm for support amidst confirming her reasoning as a profound fact.

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Mbean

@AmidstTheWords

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#630

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"Tumhe lagta hai maine tumhare resignation letter isliye sambhal ke rakha hai?.(You think,this is the reason I kept your resignation letter?).Arnav asked her completely baffled.

"Toh aur kis wajah se?".(What other reason it could be?).Khushi questioned back.

"Sirf tum hi aisa reasoning kar sakti ho Khushi".(Only you can reach to such a reasoning).Arnav said shaking his head as he took hold of the resignation letter he has kept safe for so long.

"Like I told you,maine expect nahi kiya tha ki tum yahan aaogi aur tum resign kar dogi yeh to bilkul bhi nahi,tum gusse mein thi aur kahin na kahin I knew ki tumhara gussa reasonable tha,shayad isliye main chup tha,that was the first time in my life Khushi,that I heard everything quietly, you always answered back to me aur us din jis tarah tumne apne liye stand liya ,the way you didn't gave up and did you best in winning every challenge I had grown to admire that about you and thus your leaving the job was a shocker."

(Like I told you,I never expected that you would come ehre and to top that you will resign,I knew your anger was reasonable and perhaps for the first time in my life I was quiet,you always answered back to me,the way you took up a stand for yourself,the way you didn't gave up and did you best to win every challenge,I had grown to admire that about you and your leaving the job was a shocker).Arnav confessed honestly.

Hearing his honest words,she didn't even realise when she started speaking in a rush eager to make her point.

"Arnavji,hum sach mein naukri nahi chodna chahte the,humein bhi us waqt samajh nahi aa raha tha ki hum kyun kaam pe jaana chahte hai.Jab Jiji aur Buaji ne humse kaha tab humne unhe contract ka kehkar mana karne ki koshish ki par who nahi mane aur upar se woh Shyamji".

(Arnavji,I really didn't want to resign from the job,I myself was failing to realise why I wanted to come to work,even when Jiji and Buaji told me ,I kept telling them about the contract but they didn't relent and to add to it was that Shyamji).

Khushi noticed him getting stiff,his jaw tightened at his mention,she hugged him tight as his muscles started to ease with her touch,seeing him relax after a while she continued.

"Humein to koi yahan aaney bhi nahi de raha tha par aapki nazar mein aapne aapko haara hua dekhna humein yeh manzoor nahi tha, humein nahi pata tha ki aap hamare baarein mein kya sochte hai isse humein farq kyun padta tha,yahan tak ki agle din hum yeh tak yaad nahi tha ki hum aapko istifa de chuke hai,hamare sapne mein toh aap apne khadoos ASR avatar mein".

(Noone was allowing me to come here but I couldn't see myself losing in your eyes,I didn't know why it mattered what you thought about me but I did cared so much that the next day when I woke up I didn't even realised I have given you the resignation letter,my dreams filled with your ASR mode).Khushi conveyed the confusions she went through at that time laughing at she recalled her dreams,he has become the sole bearer of her dreams nomatter in what way they occurred.

"We are similar in much more ways than you think Khushi".Arnav muttered to himself as Khushi glanced at him curiously.He smiled and Khushi felt warmth seeping inside her core seeing it.

"Maine aaj tak kisi ko explanations nahi diye Khushi,par pata nahi kyun,tumhara yeh sochna ki I was aware of the guesthouse's dreaded condition aur phir bhi maine tumhe wahan bheja,it made me restless,I wanted to tell you ki aisa kuch nahi hai ki main kabhi aisa kisi ke saath bhi nahi karta par tum meri baat hi sunne ko taiyaar nahi thi,har baar jab maine tumse baar karne ki koshish ki you ran away,us din mandir mein,jab tum office aayi thi tab bhi ,main us din tumhe apni baat kahe bina jaane nahi deta par"".

(I have never given explanations Khushi,but I don't know why,your believing that I being aware of the guesthouse dreaded condition deliberately put your life in the danger unnerved me,I would never do that to anyone Khushi and I wanted you to know it but you walked everytime I tried talking to you,that day at the temple ,when you came to the office I wouldn't have let you go without listening to me hadn't it been---).Arnav stopped abruptly in between.

"Par kya Arnavji?".(But what Arnavji?).Khushi probed him.

Arnav moved his face sideways looking at anything inorder to not meet her stare but Khushi wasn't letting go so easily as she forcefully made him face her,seeing her eager eyes, he didn't have the heart to refuse her anything not tonight not ever.Sighing he cupped her face and kissed her eyelids wordlessly telling her the reason of him letting her go that day.Khushi opened her eyes and time cease to stop as their eyes remain locked ,everything else seemed to fade away with the realisation of things slowly seeping in of the bond that has been formed between them since so long.

Moments later as they sat down again,Khushi took out the key from the box(mannat ki chaabi),she didn't ask him anything related to it as it was her only who has returned the key to him though Arnav surprised her by asking a question this time.

"Yeh mannat ki chaabi,yeh tabse tumhare paas thi Khushi,tumne mujhe pehle waapis kyun nahi ki Khushi?".(This the key for wish,it was with you since then,why you didn't returned it to me before Khushi?).Arnav asked his voice tender.

Khushi was taken aback by his sudden question,she hasn't expected him to ask her this,what reason could she give,he was right she could have returned him the key,the day she had resigned or the day she has gone to his office to collect her Devi Maiyya's statue or when they used to meet every single day but she didn't and not wanting to go through the actual reason she has returned it to him she just answered him in one line.

"Usi wajah se jis wajah se aapne hamaari Payal apne pass rakhi thi".(The same reason that made you keep my Ankletswith you).Khushi answered avoiding looking at him.

Arnav understood the reason behind it,her turmoil clearly palpable as she was not meeting his gaze which she only did when she wanted to hide something from him.The night of Diwali,him returning her payal,the proximity,they have been so close and what has followed after that,realising it was as difficult for her as it was to him,he decided to let go off it for the time being,her stance clearly stating she didn't want to bring it up now also.He took a deep sigh the night was too beautiful to ruin.

"Khushi,tumhe aur kuch nahi mila mujhe gift dene ke liye .like really Car Maintainance Manual".(Khushi,you didn't get anything to gift me like really Car Maintainance Manual).Arnav spoke picking up his first gift from her in order to get her mood back to what it was minutes ago and it did the trick as Khushi striked back immediately with her answer ready to be delivered.

"Toh?,Arnavji aapko tire badal nahi aata,koi sunega to kya kahega ki Arnav singh raizada ek mamuli sa tire nahi badal sakte aur agar itna hi kharab laga toh aapne ab tak sambhal kyun rakha isse,woh bhi is packing paper ke saath".

(So?,Arnavji you don't know how to change the tyre,how would someone reach when they would know that Arnav singh raizada don't know how to change an ordinary tire and if it was so bad then why had you kept it so safe that too with this packing paper).Khushi asked incredously as she waved the packing paper in front of his eyes.

Arnav smirked as he saw his wife back in form as he took the packing paper from her hands and straighting it put it back in the box cautiously.Seeing her fuming at his supposed unregard for her gift,he took her hands in his saying.

"Sambhal ke rakha kyunki tumne diya tha,is gift se mujhe hamesha yeh ehsaas hota ki poori duniya mein tumhare jaisa aur koi ho hi nahi sakta".(I kept it safely because you gave me and moreover it always makes me feel that there can be no one else like you ever).

"Arnavji""Khushi got flustered at his answer.

"What,tumhara jaisa pagal aur kaun hoga Khushi!".(What ,besides you who can be this mad Khushi?).How much he loved riling her up he grimaced.

Khushi frowned and turned her back towards him only to be immediately pulled back by his strong hold on her making her land back on his chest He uttered huskily in her ears.

"Besides,I don't need to learn it because you are always going to be there with me".

There was no doubt or uncertainity as he said those words which made Khushi turn immediately in his hold,she started at him dumbfound,did he read minds or else he could know her unanswered reason for giving him that book.

Arnav flicked her nose in response putting a stop to her self thoughts making her aware of the fact that like her even he didn't need her words.

"Jab tum chup hoti ho,tab tumhari aankhein sab kuch sach sach bol deti hai!".(When you are quiet,your eyes speak every single truth!).

His blatant remark stunned her while ArnavTook her arm leading her to the same place they were sitting before,as they talked endlessly well more like Khushi talked and Arnav listened to her chatter as if it was the most important thing in the world,to him it was hearing Khushi narrate about her childhood,how she come to live in with her Amma-Babuji,the pranks she played not realising when sleep evaded the two souls whose heart beat echoed the same symphony.They were written in stars after all.

TRANSLATIONS IN RED.

So Finally we are done with it,ASR finally told Khushi about why he kept her things.Continuation with Shyam's comeback,the contract marriage and the journey ahead.

Are we up for it?.

Tell me what you thought about the update and the entire phase we have been through.I hope I was able to do justice to it.Looking forward to your responses eagerly.

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