Arakshi FF:Hello my dear wrong number-2 Pg 143 - Page 29

Posting her comment here

Great update and nice VM! :)

omg i couldnt hold back my laugh hahahaha pehli biwi dusri biwi a typical sautan typo aayesha must hav felt hihihi
she must be feeling like fool wen sameer told about mrs rathod is actuallly her mother that was hilarious
and sam's reaction wow that was again hilarious im not that old lolz
now that sakshi's n poshni's promise is out in front of arjun everthing will be fine
great update pls new update soon :) luv u

Part 20A

Awe..Vidya, that was lovely and emotional at the end, but I loved it.

Lol..I had forgotten about Ayesha's misunderstanding about the phone call, until you just mentioned it, but I am glad it is all clear now.

Loved Sameer and Ayesha's confession, it was just like them, sweet and simple. No big drama.

Aha...So Arjun has finally lost the battle with his heart and Sakshi with her determination to keep the secret.

Glad Arjun was unwilling to give up on her and wanted to make her his with or without the truth, but the truth had to hurt both. I am actually glad that Sakshi told him, now he can decide what to do on his with it.

Hmm...yeah I do get the feeling he will get the answers he is seeking at his house and yes I think they will come from Rosh herself.

Please update soon.

P.S. The VM and the song is perfect. And as you said at the end there, Arakshi rocks!😃

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res/unres..
Sorry for the delay...!! kya kare ye story padhte time koi diturb kare i really get irritated...so abhi padh k m replying...
coming to the update...
Wow...!!! wow...!! and wow...!!!!
Sach mein aap bohot zada achha likhti hai...
Ireally likee the pace in which your story proceeds...
na slow na fast...just perfect...!!!
You are a really very good writer...you use simple word which connect so easily with your readers...
Each and every word and alphabet i must say has its own soul...in your story...and they all together give life to your story...!!!!
Amazing story...really...!!!
I i totally agree some people do come to know or sense that something that sort may happen...infact i knew 1 such person...so...its truely justified...!!
Amazing story ill say again...!!!
😊

dii can i askk u a que...

r u a professional writer?

argh...stupid me...even professional writers cant write this much beautiful stories...

nd if r not a professional thn my industry is really lacking a gem of a writer...


awsm update dii...

so beautifully scripted...edited...nd screen play...(oops wat to do...poori technical language ho gyi hai meri..)

so beautifully u portrayed roshni's guilt and the solution to both sakshi nd arjun's problems...


continue soon

love
Aisha