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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05

Really nice update😛

Loved taarey scenes a lot
Plz update soon !!!

thnk u so much hun!!
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

It was awesome 👏 👏

Hehehehehe she was peeping 🤣
And he caught her red handed 🤣🤣
Awesome 🤣
Then the name frenchy was cute 😆😆
An out standing update 😊

thnk u so much hun!!
im glad u enjoyed d update!!
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awsome update...😊

thnk u so much hun!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shikha_taarey

Im back... after a long tym!! 😆 ... sorry... didnt commented for last two updates!!!really sry! 😛 ... actually was bit busy!! 😳
Dis updtae was really... actually no particular word to describe it 😆 ... pure update me i was laughing lyk mad n still im 🤣[=)]...pet dard kar raha hai yaar🤣
Start itself was so hillarious... taani peeping n d door opened ...omg 😲 ... rey opened door n taani was caught... trust me dear... kuch jyaada hi embarassing tha vo... pehle to rey didnt understood bt den he caught her dat she wad peeping🤣...
Taani ka excuse!!!!! Soo horrible one... darwaaze ka handle saaf kar rahi thi???? Aadhi raat ko aisa kon karta hai.. ... most lame excuse ever i came across🤣
Ohhh... to rey ko washroom jaana tha... arey koi taani ko samjhaao... vo apne questions baad me puch le ... arey filhaal rey is in a critical condition 😉 🤣🤣
Bt rey was actually so rude... agree wid taani... rude n egoistic person 😆 ... Taani asking weather he is sleeping alone n loved rey ka reply...mai chota baccha nai hun to sleep wid dad!!!🤣
Den asking weather dey will get married!!! 😲 😆 ... such a straight forward girl!!😆
Hawww!! Rey called taani a stupid spoilt n wierd girl😲... how rude!!... Rey said dont peep in d washroom atleast... ewww!!! Taani itni gandi thodi hai!!! 🤣🤣
Next day ... MU cleared between taani n shivam... whyyy??? 😡 ... chodo...i dont wanna talk about dat bandar!!!-___-
Shaani decide to go for shopping n taani changes in her room n den sharon ka reaction wen she entered her room!! Mai khud darr gayi ki sharon ne aisa kya dekh liya??? 😲 😕 Bt as soon as she said angel i got dat she was talking bout rey 😳 😆 ... n den taani telling bachpan me gir gayi thi aur sarr par chot lagi thi🤣... mujhe bhi lagi thi😳🤣
Sharon took her outside d washroom n told her to peep... actually...forced her to peep!!! Not again... ye aise tym par hi darwaaza kyun kholta hai??? ...dis was height of embaressment... mai to ab tak sharam se paani paani hogayi hoti!!! 🤣...
Baahar aate hi 'wth'..cant he speak properly!!!... n taani ka excuse... was checking weather dere was someone inside!!!🤣 ..pichle excuse se better tha!!! Rey gave her a better solution...next tym se knock!!how mannerfull rey!!🤣🤣
Sharon calling him frenchy...hawwt frenchy...how true😳...dat was a really nice name!!😆
OMG!!!! Both were actually sort of flirting wid each oder...alot!!! 😲 ...n my poor taani getting jealous!!😔 😆
Sharon was literally drooling on him...me too!! Sry sry...forgot to mention... rey only in towel wet... maar daala yaar!!! Ill go mad if i once again imagine him lyk dat!!☺️☺️... taani bhi resist nai kar paayi use!!! Bhagwaan kare jaldi bhool jaaye shivam ko..as sharon said!! 😆
Sharon invited him to join dem for shopping... bahut accha kaam kiya!! 😆 ... n taani refused bt den baad me maanna pada!!! 😆 ... rey calling sharon 'shar'... n taani getting angry...actually getting jealous!!! 😆 ... n mujhe to aisa lag raha tha as if rey was teasing her..dunno why!! 😛
Kya kaha rey ne sharon se... vo bhi about taani??? 😲 😕 ... i know ye bahut late reveal hoga...bt dont have patience!!😔... does rey wants to make taani jealous... just guessing😆... bt u seriously wanna see a jealous rey... samjho na!!😉😳
Taani again getting uncomfortable on seeing sharey holding each oder's hands!!! 😆
Update jaldi jaldi... mall me kya hoga!!! Waiting!!! 😳 😆

thnk u so much hun!!
omg anthr lambu commnt from u!!
yey!!!
tera yeh jo hunar hai na
mashallah! nazar na lagge
heheheh😆
all writers must love u so much na?
hahaha😉
anyhoo its ok u commntd late, at least commnt
toh kiya! n i do luv ur commnts so thnx again!
n im so glad dat u enjoyed d update!😃
i wantd to create a fun n happy aura n i guess
i did so yey me!👏
lol😆
n duh cs mein maine likha toh hai dat rey is an arrgnt
guy..bt dil ka accha hai yaar
so chill
lol😛
n will kick shivam out of my story later..nt now hun
abhi toh bas nok jhok ho raha hai tr ke beech mein
so it will take time
patience!😉
n dear u knw dt 'wth" means "wat the hell" rght?
lol😆
n i dnt wanna tell u anythng abt d story bt yes
i cn assure u dat aage jaake kaafi surprises
n interestng n funny updates aaengge😃
toh just wait n read hun!
thnx again love n
will update soon 😃
🤗 yeh le hug for u!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana.sanju

Hai; i am new here. I am a big fan of taarey and nw after reading ur stry i am crazy abt reading mor plz update soon.😊

thnk u so much hun!!
n welcome..sanjana rght?😊
n yey new reader!
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

awesome update😳

frenchy😆

update soon :D

thnk u so much hun!!
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

nice and cute
omg sharon is too much
and taani and his peeping from key hall

thnk u so much hun!!
lol 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

awesum update .. 👏 👍🏼

TR convo were damn funny .. 🤣
Sharey momentz were makng taani jealous .. ! 😆

really excytd 2 noe abt rey'z plan .. 😃

update soon .. 😊

thnk u so much hun!!
im so glad u enjoyed it!!
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey people!! im bck wid d 7th chapter 😃
sorry for d delay guys..my net ws being an annoying prick!
lol..anyhoo enjoy! n yes since it got delayed, here is a long sa update so pls dnt fogt to like n commnt!! enjoy 😃

Chapter 7

*taani ws getting impatient in d car..her thought wanderd to watvr ShaRey were doing n takng so much time! She honks d car horn repeatedly until dey both came out holding hands! Taani grew suspicious by convinced herself dat it was only a friendly hand-holding..dey sat in d car n drove off to d mall*

Sharon(holding rey's hand) - frenchy look at dis mall..nice na?😃 main aur taanu humesha yaha aate hai for shopping..yaha se u cn get anythng!

Rey - yeah nice mall..bt paris mein isse bhi bade-bade hai malls

Taani - haan woh..

Sharon(cutting taani) - aarey ofc frenchy..no comparison of Mumbai n paris! D capital city of fashion! Gosh I luv paris!😃

Rey - oohh u hve been to paris b4?😊

Taani - woh shar aur..

Sharon(cutting taani again) - duh!😉 Last year me n family went for vacay dre..its so cool! I luvd it! Aur maine itna shopping kiya na I cnt tell u😃

Taani - toh kyu bata rahi hai!😕

Rey - wats ur problem? We r talking here toh y r u commnting?

Sharon - yeah taanu..tujhe kya ho gaya..n pls tu toh kabhi paris bhi nahi gayyi😆

Rey - yeah

Taani - watvr!😡 Cn we chuck dis topic n move on? Lets go n buy dose stupid souvenirs n get out of here..mujhe bht kaam hai ghar pe😡

Sharon - kaam?😕 Kaunsa kaam? We dnt hve any assignments too aaj

Rey - choro na shar..weise bhi humesha woh sari hui rehti hai..lets go

Sharon - okie as u say frenchy

*taani ws very irritated nw..d whole journey dey were ignoring her n now in d mall too! It ws as if she ddnt exist..as ShaRey were walkng ahead, taani ws walkng behind n eyeing dem suspiciously..dey were walkng hand in hand n he was laughing at sharon's antiques..den Sharon stopped n askd rey to buy her ice-cream..taani luvs ice-cream so she followed dem n order her favrte chocolate ice-cream..sharon ordrd d strawberry one n rey paid for it..wen it ws taani's turn, he just walked off wid Sharon leaving taani at d counter..she had to pay for her own ice-cream!*

Taani(aftr paying n walkng behind dem) - uugghh..wat d hell !😡 Shar ke liye ice-cream liya par mere liye pucha tak nahi..so annoying!n who kya..paris yeh hai paris who hai..aggar main kabhi nahi gayi toh its nt my fault..tabse ignoring me as if im a ghost!aur dekho toh sahi keise haato mein haath dalke chal rahe hai saath..yeh sahr bhi kyu itna bhao de rahi hai fren..i mean uss idiot NRI ko..wait do dey like each oder? Ek second, isse mujhe kya..watvr..jo karna hai karlo..shar ke picche bhage ya kisi aur ke picche..mujhe kya..chal taani chup-chap se apna ice-cream khale..no need to think abt dem..if dey like each oder n be it😡

Sharon - frenchy dis gift shop is really good!😃 Dey sell evrythng here..chalo lets go in n see wat we cn buy for ur frends back home

Taani - bt I think he shud go to d oder shop whre dey sell traditional gifts jo india se banni hai..u knw..yeh sab cheese toh waha paris mein bhi toh milte hai i guess

Sharon - aarey bt their stuff is amazing!😃 Chalo na frenchy..weise bhi u shud trust me..main humesha shopping karti rehti hoon..taani toh koi shopping nahi karti..she just follows me arnd 😆 toh I wud knw bttr na..chalo na

Rey - yeah I thnk ur rght shar..lets go😊

Taani - wat?😲 Uuuggghh..fine..i'll just keep my mouth shut n nt say anythng..weise bhi Im just a driver😡

Sharon - oh god taanu..stop being so dramatic..ab chal andar😊

Taani(to herself n imitating sharon) - mujhe jyada pata hai..frenchy yaha chalo frenchy waha chalo..watvr!😡 jo karna hai karlo


*as they were glancing through d stuff inside..*

Sharon - aaww dis is so cute frenchy look! Cute na?😳

Rey - hhmmm😊

Sharon - arrey look at dese photo frames..u cn buy dese..or mayb dese soft toys! Hw cute!😃

Rey - hahaha 😆 shar I wont buy soft toys for my frends!

Sharon - oh yeah..hehehe..hw abt dese perfumes or watches!😃

Rey - yeah dey r nice😊

Sharon - oh shit!!😕

TaaRey(together) - kya hua?😲

*as they said it togthr, their eyes met n dey stared at each oder..taani ws lost in his deep brown eyes..dey were standing n staring at each oder for few seconds wen Sharon brought dem bck to reality*

Sharon - guys I need to go to d loo!😆

Taani - uumm...kya? Shar u ok?😕

Sharon - aarey evrythngs fine..i just need to go to d loo😛

Taani - shar..u seriously scared me..pagal..toh jaa na..we r here only

Sharon - okok..frenchy I'll just b back😉

Rey - yeah take ur time😊

*Sharon leaves n taarey ws d only ones left in d store..as rey ws looking arnd for d gifts, taani's eyes fell on d counter dat had hand made thngs..dey were simple n small bt very beautiful*

Taani - hey u cn buy dese for ur frends! Its hand made stuff😊

*no answer from rey*

Taani - I knw its very simple bt simplicity is d best dnt u thnk?😊 Aur yeh I guess is a specialty from here...I dnt thnk u cn get dem from paris..mayb ur frends will like it😊

*rey ws still looking arnd n ignoring taani completely*

Taani - uugghh..fine!😡 just buy dose stuff toys n photo frames n lets go..mujhe bht kaam hai😡

Rey - cll shar n ask whre she is..tab tak I will pay for my purchase

Taani - fine😕

Taani(goes outside n calls sharon) - hello shar? Whre r u? rey is paying nw n we hve to go home..tu jaldi aa na

Sharon - taanu, im sorry babes bt im going home..my mom clld n she wants me to come home abhi..she needs some help ghar pe😕

Taani - haan to him gonna drop u na..tu abhi yaha aa shop mein

Sharon - nahi nahi..i hve to go bck nw..sorry taanu..u guys enjoy..fenchy ko mere taraf se bhi sorry bol dena..bye n see u kal collge mein😊

Taani - ok..fine..bye

Rey - shar kaha hai?😲

Taani - woh she went bck home..emergncy hai ghar pet oh she had to go..she said to tell u dat she is sorry

Rey - oohh..okok

Taani - hve u bought d gifts n all? Sara le liya?

Rey - yeah..nw u cn stop complaining coz we r going home..chalo

*dey walkd n took d escalator down..as dey were on d escalator, taani's eyes fell on a couple standing on d oder escalator going up..for a second, d guy looked like shivam! Bt den taani remmbrd him telling her dat he had to go wid his mom for shopping..so mayb she ws his mom..bt she lookd really young to b a mom! She decided to cll him to clear hr doubt*

Taani - ek second..i hve to call sum1😕

Rey - aarey bt I thought u wantd to go home

Taani - wait na

Taani(on call) - hello?

Shivam - hey baby..u missd me? aawww😳

Taani - yeah yeah..accha whre r u rght nw?😕

Shivam - I told u na I hve to take my mom out for shopping..toh im at d mall only..kyu?😲

Taani - which mall? D city mall?😕

Shivam - nahi nahi..im at big-valley mall..kyu?😲

Taani - oohh..kuch nahi..ws just curious..accha I gtg baby..ttyl..enjoy wid ur mom!😃

Shivam - yeah ok..bye..luv u!😳

Taani(to herself) - taani tera dimag kharab ho gaya..hw cn shivam b here..u luv him so much dat tujhe woh har jagah dikh raha hai..dat guy must b sum1 else😃

In d car

Rey - kaha kho gayyi? N kisse itna important cll kar rahi thi?😲

Taani - haan? None of ur business!😕

Rey - omg..ahhahaha..pls dnt tell me😆

Taani - kya? Y r u laughing?😕

Rey - dnt tell me dat Ms.goody-two-shoes has a bf?!?! I cnt blve dis..hahahha😆

Taani - wait wat?😲 Oh hello! If I hve a bf den isse tumhe kya? N y cnt I hve a bf?😕

Rey - hahaha..its just funny dat u hve a bf!😆 I mean I cnt blve ki koi ladka tumhe sambhal sakta hai..bichara..i knw, he must b very ugly na?😛

Taani - wat d hell!😲 Shut up..pls u dnt knw anythng abt him..he is sweet, caring, understanding n very good-looking..unlike u!😡 he loves me very much n we hve been togthr for a year nw..so shut up ok😡

Rey - yeah rght.as if..its ok taani u cn tell me if he is ugly..or bttr yet, he is imaginary! Ahhahaha😆

Taani - shut up!😡 I do hve a good-looking bf n he is real! Nt my imagination ok!😡 N pls, khud ke pass toh koi gf nahi hai n ur talking abt me..look whus talking

Rey - oh hello, ladkiya mere uppar marte hai! N I do infact have a gf whu is beautiful, smart n sexy..tumse toh bttr hai

Taani - oh pls..i dnt blve u..aggar gf hoti toh shar se ese nahi chipak ta! Wait ur gf is shar?😲

Rey - nahi..shar is nt my gf..my gf lives in Mumbai only..i came from france to meet her also u knw..she is a supermodel n she is hawt!

Taani - oohh..bt I still dnt blve u!😛

Rey - I also dnt blve dat u hve a bf..fine lets do one thng..lets hve a bet..im gonna bring my gf n u bring ur bf..lets see kaun kitna sacha hai aur kiska partner jyada hawt hai!😡

Taani - wat?😲 U crazy? A bet? Pls..im nt part of dis

Rey - u scared? I knew it dat u dnt hve a bf! Liar kahiki

Taani - im nt scared n im nt a liar! 😡 uugghh..fine! bet is on! Bt yeh keise hoga?😕 Reyaansh I cnt let my family knw abt shivam so hw will we prove dis?

Rey - fine..lets do one thng..kal raat ko dres dis carnival n festival of firecrackers..lets all meet dre..deal?

Taani - ok weise bhi I hve always wantd to go dre..bt mom aur bhai allow nahi karengge mujhe akele jaana..so its nt possible

Rey - no worries..i hve a plan..just tell ur so clld bf to b ready n will meet tmrrw

Taani - par mom n bhai!😕

Rey - chill I will handle dem..u just get ready tmrrw by 7 n will leave togthr

Taani - fine

Rey - fine

*dey reachd home n taani goes straight to cll Sharon n shivam..she ws so excited for tmrrw! She ws gonna win n she cnt wait to see rey's face wen he will loose..more den dat, she ws excited for a night out wid shivam..it will b their frst date out alone! wen he told shivam abt it, he ws so happy n damn excited! Tani ddnt tell him abt d bet or rey though..she ddnt knw y bt she ddnt wanna tell him..she ws just happy dat dey were going out tmrrw..here taani ws very excited n ws deciding wat to wear tmrrw, bt dre rey ws tensed.. he ddnt hve any gf n nw he ws worried on wat to do..he had to win against taani so he decided to go to d only person dat he could as for help..ANUSHKA ROY!*

At anushka's place

*rey rings d door bell of anushka's place..a 20ish year old girl opens d door..she was a beautiful girl, wid silky long hair n perfect skin which looks flawless.as she opend d door n saw rey, she ran n hugged him..she ws jumping in joy n hugging rey in excitement*

Anushka - omg omg omg!! Rey baby!! I cnt blve ur here! Wow..must b my lucky day

Rey - yeah watvr..cn I come in? I need to talk to u

Anushka - yeah sure! Come in! apna hi ghar samjho baby

Rey(going inside her place n saw a guy sitting on d couch) -I see u hve guest

Guy - anushka, I'll see u..thnx for today😊

Anushka - yeah ok baby..see u..so rey hw come ur here?😳

Rey - uumm..who ws dat guy?😕

Anushka - as usual..d guy ws bored of d gf toh he came to me for comfort..u knw na I cnt stay wid only one guy..n he is very nice n rich toh mera shopping bhi hojata hai..weise kyu? U jealous?😛

Rey - shut up..kaam ki baat karein?

Anushka - oohh straight to d point..like always! U hve nvr changed haan?😳 Toh wats up?

Rey - I need ur help tmrrw..kal raat ko I need u to get ready n come for d firecracker festival..woh jo carnival mein hai..i need u to be my fake gf for a night..will pay u ofc n dnt worry, dinner will b on me

Anushka - wat?😲 Hhmm..u need my help as ur fake gf? Dats so weird coming from u..weise kyu?kisko impress karna hai?😉

Rey - pls anu..u dnt need to knw abt d details..bas kal meet me carnival mein at arnd 7:30..n pls wear sumthng appropriate..ur payment will gve tmrrw only aftr ur job is done..nw I gtg

Anushka - wait rey..dnt u wanna stay for a while? Coffee? Pehle jeise u knw😉

Rey - sorry bt I hve no time..bye..kal dnt b late

Anushka - yeah ok..bye..hhmm tmrw will b fun! Main bhi toh dekhu yeh ladki kaun hai jo rey, out of all people, mere se madad mang raha hai😃


That was it..guys i hve intro anushka roy here..u guys cn read her character sketch on d frst page! 😃 sorry for d delay people!

pls hit d like button n dnt frgt to commnt! 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg!! I guess shivamz truth soon gonna gt reveald..
the strt was fab.. sharey irritatin taani !!!
Then the bet .. the gr8 twist !!
Luvd it
Thnx 4 pm :)

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