new maaneet ff bound by destiny Thread 1 Completed - Page 50

Created

Last reply

Replies

815

Views

221.6k

Users

107

Likes

4.4k

Frequent Posters

spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
part 20
OMG how could Maan say all these to her...
damn it...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
gbhat thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
read all the parts and it is a good story. please continue soon
sonal36 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
poor geet sad
maan taunts are very high
lets c wat haappen
waitig
cont soon
lovesim thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
I m not a fan of maaneet
but ur ff is amzing so read it
-Mounika- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
Aww ye maan kya kardiya geet ko daant diya
when he knws hw she tc oftdadi he'l regret
update sn dear
amrinderdhami thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

Just have logged in now and got the chance to read your awesome update.Really dear it's a trea to read your writing coz you alzz put all the emotions with perfection.
So MSK scolded GEET without listening to her and now Poor Geet is totally heartbroken...😭😭😭
I hope Dadi ma will tell the truth to Maan and make him realize that he was wrong to Geet and then MSK will do something to make his Mistsi smile again.
Thanks for the PM dear...😳😳
Loved your update specially the dialogue...👏



thanku soo much dear😊
m glad u liked it


amrinderdhami thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

Commenting for the first time

read all parts

and must say you have written it very nicely

maan helped geet as he wanted her help

but last update did not like maan

how dare he brings her dad in between
the wound she had somewhere hidden tat she is not alone on this earth he himself brought it back in her life making her feel worst.





aww thanx alott dear 😊

m glad u liked it
amrinderdhami thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashmaaneet

awww soo painful ud my poor baby geet when she hd started to forget evrythng n live her life n started believing that she hv someone to call her own maan destroyed it in one second by distrusting her n accusing her of something so horrible n also stopped her frm meeting dadi 😭

maan should nt hv bring geet dad in between 😭😭
will be waitin eagerly for next n thx for pm😊



thanx alott dear 😊
amrinderdhami thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Part-21

Mam apki dadi apko bula rai thi she was asking for u geet just gave the bag to nurse n left from there telling her to give it to dadi as it had daddi's clothes...

Geet left from there thinking about maan's words,she was not angry she was hurt plain hurt,maan's words once again opened her wounds,the fact that she is alone in this world n she has no one to say her own hurted her d most,geet sumwhere has accepted maan in her life though she knew that they ll never share nay rlation of husband wife but still she started seing a frnd in maan n daddima was a mother figure to her but today maan snatchedd that very relation to her,geet walked to km thinking where did she went wrong that maan accused her soo badly

While in hospital as maan was about to enter dadi'd room nurs gave him the package that geet gave him when maan asked wo gave it nurse replied sir wo mrs.khurana left it here

Maan didn't reacted n just nodded n entered to see daddi waitinbg for him seeing his the first thing that daddi asked him was

Maan bete aa gae aap geet kahan h wo abi tak aayi nai

But maan ignored geet's topic n said

Dadima wo nai aayegi aap chaliye maine aapki dischrage ki saari formalities poori kar di h

Aap change kar lijiye hum ghar chalte h

Dadi ma shrugged it thinking that may b maan has send geet back home as vgeet was with her from last two days

Maan n daddi reached home n maan helped dadi to sttle in her room n gave her her medicine while daddi was quite shocked seeing that geet still didn't came to meet her n she asked again

Maan bete wo geet kahan h?? kahin dikh nai rai

Daddima who apne room mai hogi ap abi rest kariye pls n saying this maan made daddi rest

N left d room

While in there room geet sat there near the window pane looking outside n wondering what more life hhas in store for her,first life snatched her father from her but she was still happy to hav a family n maan as a frnd but now today her that tought n dream also broke she realaised that there this realation was noting more than a deal for maan that he did to p his dadi happy n it was her mistake to expect anything from him,but kya maine itne din mai itni si jagah tna sa b trust nai jeet payi mai maan ka k who muje dadi ma k saath trust kar sake but then she consoled her heart saying who r u to him that he ll belive u or trust u,u r just no one to him just a plain startanger who is living in his house,,,geet decided that now she won't do or say an nything that' ll hurt maan n his dadi she ll stay here just as a guest n will do what maan ll ask her to do she ll never say anything,she realise her palce n now she won't forgett that ever,a lone tear escaped her eyes again thinking that now she is all alone in this world

While downstairs maan sat in the hall thinkinga about all the things he cursed himself to hav trusted geet with his daddi n her health,maa galti uski nai teri h tune k ajnabi par itna bharosa karliye k apni dadi ki saari reponsibility uspe de di n see what she did,agar dadi ko kuchho jata toh,how could geet b soo insenstive how could she do all this,,,maan sat there cursing geet forgetting that it was not geet but he himself who was being insenstive towards geet...it was night n still geet didn't came out of her room or had anything while maan gave daddi her medicine n food on tym,daddi tried to ask maan abt geet but maan just shrugged it making lame excuses

It was night when maan came in daddi's room to give her milk n her medicine maan wasa bout to give her medicine when addi held his hand n asked him

Maan sach sach batiye geet kahan h

Daddima u need to rest so pls hav this medicine

Maan hum ye medicine tabtak nahin lenge jab tak aa p hume ach nai babtae

Dadima geet room mai h soo rai h pls a ba toh aap ye medicine le lijiye

Dadima smiled looking at maan n denied to take the medicine

Dadima kya baat h aap medicine kyun nai kha rai

Maan yaa toh aap hume sach batyenge yaa hume koi medicine nai khani

Kaisa sach daddima

Yai k geet kahan h,hume unse abi milna h

Dadima maine kaha na k wo room mai rest kar rai h

Hum maan hi nai sakte maan k geet room mai soo rai h n humse who subh se milne nai aayi ,jo ladki last do dino mai humare pass se hilli nai,soyi nai aap chahte h k hum maan le k wo soo rai h room me ye jante hbhue k hum yahanh beemar h

Maan looked at dadima shocked n asked aap ye kya keh rae ho dadi ma aap ko uss ladki ki fikar h jiski wajh se aanj apki ye halat h in sab k liye jo jimedar h

Maan ye aap kya bol rae h

Sai toh bol raha hun mai usi nai aapko who sab khane diya n then jab use aapki care karni chaiye thi tabb wo aapko chod k chali gai how could she b soo irresponsible

Daddima looked at maan shocked n said kya bakwas kar rae h aap maan wo sab khane ki jidd humne ki thi geet ne hume kitna roka but humne unse jabardasti zidd ki n then wo beechari bachi isse aap irresponsile keh rae h wo last do raton se ek bar b soyi nai h kyunki wo aapki daddima ki chinta mai unke pass wahan hospital mai thi,usne safei formalities akele poori ki sab kuch khud kiya humara dhyan rakha ghar se hospital humare liye khana bnana khana lana sab kuch uss bachi ne khood kiya kisi ki help nai li sirf isliye kyunki wo nai chati thi k hume kuch ho,n aap keh rae h k usne hume akela chod diya

But aaj subh,,,,maan left the sentenmce iin mid thinking abt d morning events his words n geet's tears

Aaj subh wo humare liye brkfast n humare kapde lene ghar gai thi

Omg daddima ye maine kya kardiya said maan ruffling his hairs

Maan apne kya kaha geet ko,,,bataiye maan akhir kya kaha aapne get ko kahin aapne une

Wo maine use...daddi ma p-ls aap ye medicine lelo pls mai aapko baad mai sab btata hun

Saying this maan was about to go when dadima held his hand

Maan jindagi mai rishte banana bht asaan hota h but une nibhana bht mushkil, bht kam log hote h jine jindagi mai itna acha humsafar n itna pyaar karne wala humsafar milta h,pls maan bhagwaan ne aapko jo mauka diya h use gawaiye nahi,,,kahin aisa na ho jab tak aap samjhe tab tak bhagwan aapse apki sabse pyaari cheez cheen chuka ho,uske diye iss tofe ki kadar karna seekhiye maan zindgai dusra mauka baar bar nai deti..saying this dadima left maan;s hand n

maan went deep in his thought recalling all days events n specially there morning meeting n his hurtfull words n her tears thinking about which his heart pierced maan closed his eyes in regrett n left the room to see geet


okh guys that's it for now

ll b waiting for ur response

thanx alott everyone for ur wonderful comments n all d likes really it means a lott to me thanx alott guys

i hav deleted all those reders who didn't respond or thoose whose r inactive but if by mistake i hav deleted any of my regular reades then pls pm me i ll again add u n m sorry for that


NOTE-

okh guys now i wanna know all of urs views reagarding what u wanna read in future

do u all want geet to forgive maan easily or do u want to see a lil bit of nok-jhok n maan pleading geet for forgiveness n geet not giving in easily

pls share ur views here so that i can start writting d next part soon

thanx

drashtimeetu thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome update
Maan is really heart less
Its tooo kuch.i want geet not to forgive him easily

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Bound by Honour| Note page 50 Bound by Honour| Note page 50

Prologue “Where are you, Sameera?” I yelled unable to hold myself back. “I’m not coming, Maan”. “It is our wedding day. You know what my...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 45~02.08.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

7 months ago

Maaneet SS - When We Met On The Train - 20/01/2025 - Chp 3 / Pg 6

Hey everyone! I'm sharing this SS here since most of you are active on this forum. I hope you'll enjoy the concept! Also, just a heads-up – I'm...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: WaveTeal

1 years ago

My Impossible Love *Maaneet SS* 🔺UPDATED CH 24,25@PG 89 || 20th April

Author's note : Hi Addicted is completed so here I am presenting another NEW story. I will post the first one or two chapters and then based on...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".