'Don't Take Life For Granted' A Series Of SS - Page 10

Originally posted by: Nickysweet

Awesome story...naina wanted to commit suicide..oh no
Lovely quotes...superb
Don't end it
U should continue tashu..
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Originally posted by: Nickysweet

Nice update.. read next part also😉

Originally posted by: kanug

"Janam Janam Ho Tu Hi Mere Paas Maa"

"Leave me alone. I just don't want to talk to anyone" I slammed the door behind me as soon as I was done shouting at my mom. I was too frustrated. I jumped into my bed burying my face in my pillow. I hate everyone. No one care for me. I just want to leave them all. I want to run away. I was cursing everyone in my brain for hours until my mom interrupted me again.

"Baby it's time for dinner. Come out and eat baby" her sweet voice reached my ear but it just annoyed me further. I just told her few hours ago to leave me alone but she just doesn't understand. "I don't want to eat. Just go away" I yelled back and covered my ears from my pillow so I can no longer hear her voice or the matter of fact any one's voice.

I slept when I have no idea but I was sleeping restlessly. I was sweating and there was some other feeling inside me. I think it was pain that I was feeling. It felt like somebody stabbed me in my chest. I opened my eyes with the feel of that intense pain. I was still sweating my room was dark. I searched for the night lamp switch and opened the light. I looked down to see my front and also moved my hand on my chest but there was no sign of blood, wound or knife. But I still could feel the pain.

With great efforts I stood up and walk out of my room and into my kitchen to drink some water. When I was done drinking almost one entire bottle of water I walked towards my room. I stopped outside my parents' room as soon as I saw it was partially open. I didn't want to face my mom but I don't know why I couldn't stop myself from peeping inside the room. Dad wasn't in the room I wonder where he was at the middle of night. Then my eyes fell on their bed. My eyes popped out and my jaw dropped. I stood there as if I just saw a ghost. The bed was messy and there lay my mom with her hand falling from the bed.

I felt the same stabbing pain inside my chest. I ran up to her and moved her a bit but she didn't respond. I checked her pulse and I couldn't find them or they were stoppe... No I gasped at my own thought. I shook her as hardly as I could but no response. I fell on the floor on my knees. Tears rolled down my eyes as I sat there seeing my mom's lifeless body.

I recalled my last conversation with her and all I could do is my hate myself. I couldn't help but slap myself few times on my face and head. She was gone as I asked her few hours ago. She must be hurt with my rude behavior. I shouldn't have done that to her. She bore me nine months in her womb. She delivered me bearing all the pain of world. She stayed up all night making sure I slept properly. She bathed me no matter how dirty I was. She fed me staying hungry herself. She made me learn how to walk, eat and talk. She caressed me when I cried or was sick. And what did I give her in return? Insult, pain, hatred, harsh words, and also slammed the door on her face. What a child I am? My mom would have been proud of me? I exclaimed sarcastically. I shook her one last time hoping she will wake up but it was of no use.

I wiped my tears and I stood up and walked up to the mirror. I looked at myself with disgust, venom, hatred and pity. You deserved this I said pointing towards my reflection on the mirror. You misbehaved with her, vented all your anger on her when she had nothing to do with your upset mood. You told her to leave you alone. You even slammed the door on her face. So now why the hell are you crying? You got what you wanted. Now party all night, smile and dance. You deserved this but she didn't deserve that after all the love and care she gave you. You deserved thi... before I could complete I hit the ground hard and I think I passed out.

I could feel hot sun rays falling on my face forcing me to wake up. I didn't want to wake up though. I had nothing left in my life. My mom left me without even giving me the chance to apologize. Tears rolled down my eyes and I cursed myself for all that happened. I felt a soft yet old hand wiping tears from both of my eyes. It was a relief when I felt that touch. The hand then moved on my head to my hairs. I felt someone coming close to me. I tighten my eyes and soon loosen it as soon as soft lips kissed my forehead. I so wanted this dream to be true. I so wanted to open my eyes and hug my mom. But I knew it was a dream and it was better if my eyes were shut or else she would disappear or should I say feeling of her presence would disappear.

"Baby open your eyes. It is bright sunny morning. How about if we have breakfast together and go shopping? I am sure your mood will be great as you love shopping" her sweet voice reached my ears and I opened my eyes. I saw her beautiful face smiling at me. She looked as beautiful as always. She had no sign of anger or sadness on her face. It looked like I was forgiven long time ago. I couldn't believe my eyes "mom is that really you?" My mom kissed my forehead again while I rubbed my eyes to see it more clearly. "Yes baby it's me your mom. Now wake up" she replied with a sweetest smile. I jumped in joy and hugged her as tightly as possible. I didn't know what happened at night was a dream or what is happening right now is a dream all I knew was that I am living this moment to the core. I slightly broke the hug and pecked her both cheeks and hugged her again hiding my face in her chest from entire world, pain and sadness. I was pretty sure that she will save me from all bad stuffs like she always does.

~The End~

Authors Note

I don't know if it was good or not but I wanted to write it so bad that I couldn't stop myself. I have never written something like this. It was my first stuff so please bear with me.

If you liked it and felt it was worth reading it then please pass on this link to your friends/readers.

Also, there is no next part to this OS/SS.

I also wanted to share the song Janam Janam lyrics with you all from the movie Phata Poster Nikla Hero

Janam janam ho tu hi mere paas Maa
Janam janam ho tu hi zameen aasman
Janam janam ho tu hi mere paas Maa
Janam janam ho tu hi zameen aasman

Yeh hai khabar dil mein kahin
Rab rehta hai magar
Mere dil mein rehti bholi bhali meri Maa
Mere dil mein rehti bholi bhali meri Maa

Pagli hai duniya Rab ko manaane
Mandir mazaaron tak jaati hai
Ghar mein hi mere hota hai teerath
Mujhko nazar jab Maa aati hai
Mujhko nazar jab Maa aati hai

Janam janam tu meri ardaas Maa
Janam janam tu mera ehsaas Maa

Sach ka pata dil mein hi hai
Par mujhko yeh pata
Mere dil mein rehti bholi bhali meri Maa
Mere dil mein rehti bholi bhali meri Maa

Bachpan se ab tak Maa se kya seekha
Main yeh jahaan ko batlaaoonga
Jab naaz hoga tumko bhi mujh pe
Woh din yakeenan main laaoonga
Woh din yakeenan main laaoonga

Janam janam hoon tera vishwas Maa..
Janam janam rahoon main tere paas Maa
In khwaahishon in koshishon se pehle to magar

Mere dil mein rehti bholi bhali meri Maa..
Mere dil mein rehti bholi bhali meri Maa...

Love

TaSha ❤️

This is so true we all at some point get angry at our mom
But our mom always look out for us no matter what we may say to her in angry that we regret once we calm down... There is nothing better than a mother love for her child
Beautifully written TaSha, I love how she apologize and appreciate her mom now more than ever I bet she wouldn't hurt her feelings again lol
Superb job...

Lovely update angel it was beautiful..❤️ 👍🏼.
I loved how amazingly you showed us the positive sides of life which we at times refuse to see because of being preoccupied in our own insecurities problems and sorrows ur a true treasure..😳.
I loved all the scenes specially naina and her mother's scene I could actually feel a mother's pain and a daughters remorse for making her mother go through so much of pain..
Naina and kavya naina and siddharth and naina and yuvi all of their scenes were beautifully written by you..👍🏼 ❤️.
A truly inspiring tri-series of chapters plzzz definitely write more will be waiting to read it..😊.
P.S- I'm sorry for posting a super late comment on your work hope I'm forgiven this time by you sorryy pleashhh maaf kar dena teri sister ko..😳.

Tasha amazing os..
totally loved it..
moms are the best person we could ever had..
we vent out all the angry,frustrations to her when she doesnot have fault but still she never stop loving us,caring about us..
In simply word Moms are Best ❤️❤️
thanks for the pm :)
keep writing more:)

awsum os...
well written and so emotional...

this was stunning in its simplicity and force. the tears were about to fall when morning cameand it turned out to have been a nightmare.
loved the thought and the execution.
its true being a mom is a pretty thankless job at times but when push comes to shove we would all fight the whole world alone for her