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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: deepu59
wonderful update 😊waiting for next one to know wat gayatri😡 will do

thankyou deepu!! 😳

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

i will comment again later! i have to go and not finishing commenting! sorry

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: pvejani

thankyou deary!

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: billieberry
nice story title⭐️
awesome prologue mini😃! a reversed pv😆

Thankyou @billieberyy! yep it is reverse!

Arpita ditched yash for another guy nd she is even pregnant for him eww!!😡

Love aarti nd prashant phone conversation so cute😃

yep! i know how awful! 😆 thanks

chapter 1

Maansi is aarti sister nice one😊

Ansh is not yet born😛 nd she is getting engaged, love d flashback scene😊

yep Maansi is her sister not friend..

Aarti looking beautiful even with d baby bump😳

of course!

love SP nd gayatri warm greetings😃

Maya bua has started even before engagement😡, good for her SP sealed her mouth😉

yep! as always!

yash still hurt from arpita's betrayal but can't stop loving her

yar.. but he wants to forget her😃

Love aarya room conversations, so honest!!⭐️⭐️

aw thanks

even gayatri doesn't like unborn ansh into d family, but glad SP shuts her up, but who knows what she nd bua gonna cook in their mind😕😉 hmm! waiting eagerly for part 2

it will come soon!😆

continue soon mini, i love ur story😳 nd thanx for d pm😊

thankyou dear! and your welcome😳

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: cynthiagem
Love the story line. So the initial problem will be coming from Gayatri and Maya. Will patiently wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

thankyou dear!.. yep 😳

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Folla
waiting the update 😕 update soon pls

i will update this week if i can dear! sorry for making you all wait!

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Josmi01
waiting

sorry keeping you waiting it will come soon dear!😃

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Nice Part, Mini darling !! 👏👏

Oh wow.. Yash and Aarti talked to each other like friends.. Look at their gesture !! They are too quick being comfortable with each other !!

Hmm.. will be waiting !! 😉

thankyou Isya!!

Yarr.. i know right!

😳 thanks again!

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Shashi1984
Hey! It's superb 👏👏👏 It's interesting. Both are trying to move on in their life. Aarti wants a father for her unborn and he wants love, as he was cheated in love.

He liked Aarti and want to start afresh, but here Aarti do not want love for her she only wants a father.

SP is so nice that he is ready to accept Aarti with her unborn. But I am scared of what G3 and Maya will do.

Pls. pls. PM me if you can when you update.

thankyou @shashi1984!! .. yep he does..

yar its kinda reverse twist ahaha!..we will see what they do!😳

i surely will! thankyou for the comment dear!

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Jaymini Mistry

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#100

SS - Pyaar Dobara (love again) - Part 2

Hey guys! i am glad that everyone enjoyed the prologue and are interested in my SS it is very much appreciated! All your questions will be answered which is why SP is so nice to Aarti ;).. well twists to happen! and Yash and Aarti just have that connection guys :).. Also Maansi is Aarti's sister is married btw..

I want to introduce a character; Shoba Ma is Prashant's mother who brung up Prashant singled handed like Radha! give any clue? Aarti has no one apart from Shoba Ma.

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Gayatri: Ji, I think JiJi is correct about Aarti's baby, how can we accept a baby who is not our blood? I accept Aarti but not this baby!
SurajPratap: Gayatri! Aarti is a loving girl and would not do what Arpita did! I trust this woman completely! Yash is also happy with the alliance so please shut up and please think about Yash!
Gayatri (in her head): I will not let this baby come in my house! never!

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Aarti: YashJi, I am just all broken up inside and I don't know what to do..
Yash: AartiJi, everything will be fine, don't worry!

Yash placed his hand on Aarti's hand but then drifted back seeing Aarti's face. They both got off each others shoulders.

Yash: sorry, I just want to start this as friendship? you will be my friend right? we can live as friends?
Aarti: YashJi.. your very nice and I don't mind friendship but sorry, I cant love again.. I wont be able to.. sorry
Yash: don't be sorry! I will try not to fall in love with a beautiful woman like you!

Aarti blushed, the door opened and it was Maansi telling them if they had finished their talk. They slowly got up, Aarti leading the way got out first. She had her hand placed on her belly which provoked Gayatri.

Pankaj: so Aarti, did you like my Bhaiya? he is very nice and will accept you easily. My bhai has gone through a tough time and he deserves you Aarti.. so what did you think of him?
Aarti: I like him a lot ji.. I think he will be a great dost and also the best father to my Ansh.
Gayatri: all you want is a father not my sons love! what did he ever do!
Suraj Pratap: Gayatri shut your tongue! don't you see we are at her house as their guests!Sh Sh ShobaJi we we.. take your leave.. pranam!

Shoba looked at Suraj Pratap in disgust while Suraj just gave her a little confused smile and walked off to the door. Gayatri watched this weired action that her husband just made and turned to Bua. Bua knew there was something fishy going on. They both bid goodbye and walked away.. Shoba sighed in relieve that they were gone.

Aarti: Ansh beta, I found you the perfect Papa.. I know your real papa isn't here no more but I am sure, your new papa will take a lot of care with you. Don't worry!.. ouch! so you like this new papa hmm? well good!

Aarti dropped a few tears remembering the fact that she had to move on.. She went to her room thinking about this marriage, this Punar Vivah.. she was still not ready for this.. she remembered Yashs words and started to wonder..

At the Schindia Mansion, Gayatri paced up and down her room thinking about Shoba.. She thought in her head that her husband wouldn't do anything but still Bua still brung it up every minute!

Maya Bua: Bhabu! how long are you going to wait to talk to him.. Bhaiya is hiding something and you could tell today! I know its bad for me to talk about my Bhaiya like this but I know theres something fishy between the two.. they have seen each other before by the looks of it and they have had some sort of relationship!
Gayatri: Jiji no! I don't think so! this cant be true! My husband wouldn't do this sort of thing! no way!
Suraj Pratap: Gayatri, I have something to confess.. please forgive me.. I should have told you before.. but before I married you.. I ..I ..
Gayatri: you loved Shoba?
Suraj Pratap: ji haan.. I did.. and then our marriage was fixed by our parents and we got married.. but I found out that Shoba had Prashant and I was the father.. I denied it.. but Gayatri.. Gayatri please listen to me.. please.. let Aarti be our Bahu.. please!
Gayatri: Ji.. how dare you! .. what about our sons.. our eldest son Pankaj, Yash and Prateek! what about them three? don't you care about them?
Suraj Pratap: Gayatri.. I forgot Shoba and I started to love you.. I do care for my sons.. all of them.. Aarti deserves Yash..
Gayatri: is this why you wanted her! your blood? that's why you liked her so much! because that .. that baby is part of you! and that woman! I wont let this baby come in my house! no! only Yash's baby will be accepted in this house!
Suraj Pratap: it was a mistake and Gayatri! Our parents wanted us to get married and we did.. you also had a lover! So please Gayatri let the past remain the past!

Gayatri stormed off with Bua hearing everything.. She went into Yashs room and and grabbed Yash..

Yash: Ma! what happened!
Gayatri: Yash.. Yash.. you want to marry Aarti yes?
Yash: Ji Haan, what happened to her! is she in labour! oh my!
Gayatri: No yash! stop! your not ITS father yet! why do you care so much about her! already!
Yash: because I know she isn't going to let me down and I know it! we have that respect for each other Ma!
Gayatri: I am not letting her baby in this house! you got that Yash! I am open to Aarti but that baby! NO!
Yash: but Ma! she wants to do this marriage for her son! ..
Gayatri: then I will call off this wedding!
Yash: But Ma! I want this marriage to happen! please! this is my future Ma! don't you want to see me happy? or down with Arpita's memories who betrayed us all?
Gayatri: you listen Yash! you either go with your Ma or this baby!
Yash: Ma! you cant do this to me! Ma! wait don't go!..
Gayatri: fine! this baby will come into this house! but I have no relation to it whatsoever! you hear me!
Yash: fine Ma.. but when you see our baby.. you will melt and will accept this relation! I know you will Ma

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Maansi: Aarti!! your wedding has been fixed! with this handsome Yash Schindia!
Aarti: Maansi! you are married you know! you need to go back to Vijay bhaiya's go now!
Maansi: so my sister wants me to leave to quickly hmm? so what did you and Yash talk about hmm?
Aarti: Maansi it was nothing.. just I wanted to say to him that I only want a father for my Ansh and he accepted.. then we talked about our past life that's it Maansi!.. hold on I am getting a call..
Aarti: hello?
Yash: hello, it is me YashJi.. erm.. I know sorry for calling you now..
Aarti: its okay Yashji.. did you want to say something!
Maansi: ooo Aarti!
Aarti: chup! sorry ..
Yash: no its okay! erm..I was wondering.. maybe we could go for a movie tomorrow night? me and you as friends?
Aarti: of course! which movie!
Yash: any of your choice I don't mind!
Aarti: Okay!
Yash: thank you for agreeing! at least we can start our friendship with this!
Aarti: Yashji you are really nice.. I should say thank you to you!
Yash: no need for the thanks.. ok take care AartiJi.. I will meet you tomorrow
Aarti: Bye!

so what will happen when Yash and Aarti go to the movies? . . .

Edited by Yaarti.mini - 12 years ago

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