MSNT ~~thread 2~~ UPDATE on pg148part99 KITNA DISTRB KAR RHE HO - Page 26

Awesome veena..i m speechless..well said i agree with u.. 👍🏼
Bilkul sahi or samjhdari ki baat ki hai..u re a very good person by heart, mind nd nature..i admire ur values..nd i truly mean it...love u 🤗
Agar sab aise sochne lage toh kitna acha ho but alas..iss duniya mein alag alag tarah ke log hai or sabki apni alag soch..kuch sahi kuch galat..yhi duniya hai.. 🤔

Coming to update...its too good...jis tarah se likha hai ki one can feel Ram's pain..every dialogue is superbb especially ending wale.. 👏
Itna acha scene create kiya nd last mein Priya ko jaga diya..i m dying to see something like this in show but i m happy aap hai na...jo waha nhi milega veena ki story se zarur mil jayega..har ehsaas bahot khoobsurati se dikhati ho apni writing ke through..well done 👏
Thank u soo much for this..

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

thank you daaarling

Originally posted by: rayaBALH

haai haai first one to read...zindagi mei peheli baar first :p ok now nice update...priya sach mei boli na kahi aap bhi humari excitement pe paani na pherdo ;) continue ASAP

Originally posted by: sahana747

👍🏼 Maar daala Veenadi.

aap ki soch se my 100 percent  agree karthi hoon.Aajkal ladkiyan hi maabaap ke dushman ban Gaye hain.

Rambabu -Priya ki prem kahani ko aapse behter koi likh hi nahin sakhta.

it is running along the same line as serial.,but usse achhe  aur usse khubsurat.

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Veenaji aapki Jo lecture sacchi mein dil ko choo gaya aap itni saadgi se kaise likh leti ho yaar. Kudos.
Arrey agar wo book AAP ko pihu se milgayi toh kya AAP apni life ko rewind karke wo sab karpaayenge aur pihy jaise kisi varun ko fasa paayenge . Hadh aap USS generation ki hai hi nahi toh ye sab kaise kar pavoge I know stupid question but out of curiosity. Lol
Last mein rambabu ki dialogue khamoshi bardaasht na karnewli dailoge choo liya.
Pyar ke different forms hote hai aur har form apne AAP mein khoobsurat aur khaas hota hai.
Aapko 100% agree karte hoon. Pls keep creating sach n share if time permits.

Originally posted by: Mini1991

Nice update...
aww ram ji ka priya ji ke bina bura haal hai😭
yayy priya ji coma se bahar aa gyi🥳
sachhi vaps aa gyi na ya dream hai ???
continue soon !!!!

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Awesome veena..i m speechless..well said i agree with u.. 👍🏼
Bilkul sahi or samjhdari ki baat ki hai..u re a very good person by heart, mind nd nature..i admire ur values..nd i truly mean it...love u 🤗
Agar sab aise sochne lage toh kitna acha ho but alas..iss duniya mein alag alag tarah ke log hai or sabki apni alag soch..kuch sahi kuch galat..yhi duniya hai.. 🤔

Coming to update...its too good...jis tarah se likha hai ki one can feel Ram's pain..every dialogue is superbb especially ending wale.. 👏
Itna acha scene create kiya nd last mein Priya ko jaga diya..i m dying to see something like this in show but i m happy aap hai na...jo waha nhi milega veena ki story se zarur mil jayega..har ehsaas bahot khoobsurati se dikhati ho apni writing ke through..well done 👏
Thank u soo much for this..

Ok..aaj thoda jaldi aa gyi...hamesha atka deti hu pr is bar nhi atkaungi...qki main khud super excited hu priya ko hosh me lane aur dekhne k liye...is bar to defnatly m rambabu ko ek senti strong aur samjhdar husband k roop me dekhna chahti hu...pita wo kaise bhi ho pr is bar unki biwi k sath glt hua h to he hv to undrstand...maine socha na tha ki ekta itna uljha k rakh degi sabkuchh...m ye to nhi janti ki ye cheeze sahi kaise hongi pr main ye jarur janti hu ki priya ki is bar glti nhi h to rambabu ko uska sath dena padega...beti nalayak nikal gyi to bechari kya kare??akele pala tha na isiliye gadbad ho gyi...lekin pichhli bar bhi to akele hi pala tha pr tab to bht achhi thi...khair...m abhi pihu ko koi importance nhi dena chahti jab sudhar jayegi tab dekhenge ki uska kya karna h...dekhte hain ekta kya karti h...main jra pati patni ki undrstanding aur bttr kar du...taki beech me bachhe bhi na aa sake..qki bachho ki bhi ek hadh hoti h..wo ma bap k beech me to aa sakte hain par pati patni k beech me to unke liye bhi jagah nhi hoti...aur ye bachho ko pta bhi hona chahiye aur samjhna bhi chahiye...khair...ek aur bat..rambabu ne darling kya keh diya logo k to muh khun lag gya har koi yhi bolta phir rha h...huh jab darling hosh me thi tab darling nhi sherni dikhti h...ab behosh h to bada pyar aa rha h...hattt...

Moving on update hope u all like it...

Part 71...

"last priya k sath kaun tha"

ram priya ki taraf dekh rha hota h priya ram ki taraf ram ko samjh hi nhi aa rha hota h ki react kaise kare...wo ek lambi sans leta h aur kehta h...

Ram...aah priya aaj tumhare "mr.kapoor" k sath tumhare mr.kapoor ki jindgi laut aayi...tum soch bhi nhi m kitni bechaini se ye sunna chahta tha...aaj mujhe tumhari har bechaini bebasi ka ehsah ho rha h to tumne mehsus kiya hoga un salo me jab m tumhare pas nhi tha aur tab bhi jab m tumhare pas to tha par sath nhi tha...

Priya muskurati h aur ankhe band kar leti h...

Ram...priya...priyaaa...kya hua???..dekho meri taraf ...priyaaa...priyaaa.litsen to me damn it...doctor...doctor...doctoooorr

doctor...what happen mr.kapoor aap itna chilla kyun rhe hain??

Ram...doctor dekhiye na ise kya hua??

Doctor...mr.kapoor apko kya hua h???..ap jante to h ki apki patni ki mentle state kya h...phir bhi..

Ram...are m janta hu lekin aap nhi jante abhi usne mujhe mr.kapoor bulaya...

Doctor...kya???

Ram...ham usne ankhe kholi mujhe dekha bat ki muskurayi aur phir se so gyi...please aap kuchh kariye...

Doctor...ok ok let me handle...

Doctor priya ka checkup karta h...use possitive sign dikhta h...

Doctor...mr.kapoor progress to h pr agar hosh me aayi thi to phir se behosh kyun ho gyi...aap ko achhi tarah yad to h na ki unhone ap ka nam liya??

Ram...aap pagal h kya???..ye bhi koi bhulne ya confuse hone wali bat h...main iski dhadkane sun skta hu to m iski kahi hui bat me cnfuse ho sakta hu??? R u gon mad...??

Doctor...sorry mr.kapoor mera ye mtlb nhi tha...main bas ye kehna chah rha tha ki agar to inhone apka nam liya h to iska mtlb inki yaddasht ko kuchh nhi hua h...ab hame in k next movement ka wait karna padega...

Ram...lekin aap kuchh to kariye m isko aur aise nhi dekh sakta yar

doctor...mr.kapoor peteince to apko rakhna hi padega...achha aap mujhe ye btaiye ki inke sath last kaun tha..

Ram...meri beti pihu...kyun??

Doctor...mujhe lagta h shayad wo hamari madad kar payengi...aap unhe yha bulaiye...

Ram...theek h...

Ram priya ko dekhta rhta h...sochta h shayad phir se uth jaye aur use roke le pr...

Doctor...mr.kapoor sab theek ho jayega...please himmat rakhiye...

Ram..7 salo se whi to rakha h...darr lagta h kahin tut na jaye...

Doctr chala jata h..ram ghar wapas ata h..pari aur mayra asusual bhag k uske pas aati hain...bachpan se unhe yhi to seekhaya gya h...lol...qki humne abhi tak yhi dekha h...khair ram unse thodi bate wate karta h...phir wo myra se kehta h ki ..

Ram...myra m kamre me ja rha hu...pihu di kahan h??

Myra...apne room me papa

ram...theek h use mere room me bhej do...

Myra...kya???

Ram...sunayi nhi diya...??..pihu ko mere room me bhej do...

Myra kuchh bol hi nhi pati h...wo pari se kehti h...pari tune bhi whi suna jo mne suna...??

Pari...han 

dono bhag k pihu k kamre me jati hain...

Pihu...areee kya kar h tumdono..??...tufan aa gya h kya??

Pari...di lagta to aisa hi h

myra...nahi bhi aya h to shayad ane wala h

pihu...mtlb

myra...pihu di papa ne apko ...apne...kamre me bulaya h

pihu...kya???sachhiii

myra & pari...han di

pihu...pari mayra agr ye koi prank hua na m tumdono ko jinda nhi chhodungi...

Myra ...cmon di hamari itni himmat ki apse jhuth bole wo bhi papa k bare me...sawal hi nhi uthta...

Pari...han di m waqt se pehle m marna nhi chahti

pihu...shutup pari...yeeesss...m abhi papa se milke aati hu...

Pihu ekdm excited hokar bhagkar ram k room me jati hai aur uske gale lag jati h.ram bhi use pyar se gale lagata h aur forhead pr kiss karta h..

pihu...thank u thank u thanku sooo much papa

ram muskurata h...

To b continue.

Thank u fr the PM dear, will comeback after reading.😉

😲😲😲
dii aaj suraj kha se nikala ???
aap ka update etni jaldi 😲
hehehehe...
lovely update...
ye dr. to ram babu ko ghanchakkr samjh raha hai...
are priya ji ki awaj sunu hai tabhi to bulaya...
ab ye peehu bhi aa jaaegi to priya ji jakdi theek ho jaaegi
continue soon !!!!!
thanks for pm dii🤗