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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey di
How u? 😊
Sorry for the late reply
The update was fantastic 👏
Had a feeling that Akash fell in love with Jai
Yayy, One villian down n One more to go
Worried in case there's more
Loved manveer scene especially the flashback
Lol, Uday never liked Manyata for what she did but it so hsppened that he married her n he loves her
Thanks for the pm
Plz update soon
Edited by humairaa1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey di
How u? 😊
Sorry for the late reply
The update was fantastic 👏
Had a feeling that Akash fell in love with Jai
Yayy, One villian down n One more to go
Worried in case there's more
Loved manveer scene especially the flashback
Lol, Uday never liked Manyata for what she did but it so hsppened that he married her n he loves her
Thanks for the pm
Plz update soon


hey
I am fine'
it is ok dear
thank you so much
indeed but maybe she will turn a villain for her own life
i am glad that you did
yea he was a serious type of guy
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update...loved flashback scene...manyata was so naughty in her teenage...and uday was serious type...uday was jealous from rajdeep love to see further...hope jay and akash find their love in eachother...and left manveer alone...and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

fantastic update...loved flashback scene...manyata was so naughty in her teenage...and uday was serious type...uday was jealous from rajdeep love to see further...hope jay and akash find their love in eachother...and left manveer alone...and thanks for pm...


thank you so much dear
i am glad that you liked it
yea he will get jealous
maybe dear
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey anni pls update, waiting for it eagerly...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Hey anni pls update, waiting for it eagerly...


Saturday and Sunday are of the week are the update days dear will update tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 14

The sun filled the city with its huge orange color, the birds crippled in the sky as the waves hit the sea shore. She looked out of the window watching the enormous sky, she had nothing but a blanket covering her nude body and there beside her was Akash sleeping peacefully like an innocent child. She had made love to many people but the last night was different it was magical for her she could not hide the fact that she too have feeling for Akash but unlike him she decided from her brain getting out of the bed she dressed up and just before leaving she kissed his forehead softly and said in a voice broken with lots of pain and sorrow

JAI:I am leaving as I know the moment you wake up and announce the last night as mistake I will be broken completely and even if for the sake you do just fake loving me then you do not deserve a s**t like me you deserve someone much more better in your life I hope you be successful in your plans I do not want to be the stone in your path bye akash

Saying this she left the room empty and dark all over again

It had been just some hours since they reached yet the house was packed with neighbors both were kept extremely busy after coming they did not even have the time to go and change there they were in the living room assembled by all the neighbor they had gone to Uday house and menuka had informed Ds too, whole the time manyata really enjoyed attention given to uday by all the aunties, they really loved teasing him by his childhood story and she added fuel to the fire by her giggles, she was exchanging a conversation with menuka it was more like she was talking to her mother at this scene Uday felt proud to choose her as his wife as suddenly someone made her entry through the door, manyata face was filled with joy she looked up it was her dearest Ds she rushed to her and pulled into her embrace as both of them shed their tears of separation, as manyata cried and ds said

DS: why didn't you tell me earlier that you are going to come?

MANYATA: I wanted to surprise you dadisabh

DS: bacha it was really an awesome surprise

Uday came and took his blessing as she looked at him with her teary eyes and said softly

DS: thank you so much beta for taking care of her, she is really happy to find a husband like you

UDAY: no need for thanking me dadisabh

Just then menuka came and said them in a cheerful voice

MENUKA: see dadisabh you came and made my little daughter cry very bad

They wiped there tears and smiled by then the neighbor had gone and it was only the four of them when menuka said

MENUKA: I think manyata you should stay for someday at your home with your dadi

Before anyone could react Uday panicked and slipped his tongue

UDAY: but this is her home ma and moreover even Dadisabh can stay here after all she is my dadi too

Both the ladies burst into laughter as manyata hide her embracement in the blush , uday indeed sounded more like a despo but he was too blinded by his love to realize that though by their laugh he finally could understand that now, he bowed his head down as dadisabh replied

DADISABH: sure beta I am staying here

MENUKA: ok I think you all must be tired and you all should go and rest now

MANYATA: ok mom

DADISABH: and beta today is Atul s sangeet and he is really eager to wait his sister

UDAY: Sure dadisabh we will be going

Saying this they headed to uday bedroom which now had become there room, as she opened the door her worst nightmare was in front of her, the room was dull painted in grey and the entire room had self filled with thick books he comfortably went inside and asked her

UDAY: what happened wifey?

She walked like a dream walker and said him

MANYATA; seriously this is your room god you are such a bore I mean before I can to your life you had only books

He was not paying much attention to what she was actually speaking and blurted out

UDAY: not it was jai

At the last word she grew alert and so did he, as all the color flew from his face and sweat covered his face, she was rooted to the ground as she clearly remember his each and every word that he spoke during their first meet and she asked in a soft voice

MANYATA: who is jai?

UDAY: no one wifey just a girl I had a small crush nothing more

MANYATA: a small crush and you remember her name till now

He walked towards her and spoke in a flirtiest tone

UDAY: I did not know my wifey was so possessive

He came to hug her but she kept her hands maintaining distance as she spoke in a cold and curt tone

MANYATA: many people had fooled me and cheated me in my life uday just do not get your name included among them

Saying this she went to change as he stood there, he knew he was cheating her but he would certainly say about jai not now maybe but once the right time would come he would tell her about jai and about all that happened when he meet her and after they were married also

The evening stars filled the entire sky, as the grazing grass swayed themselves in the direction of the winds. In the house both dadisabh and menuka were having a tea as uday came down in his white sherwani, his face was filled with tension has since that time manyata had been curt to him and did not even let him flirt with her, he took their blessing and exchanged a few words as they watched manyata making her way down the steps, she was beautifully dressed in a pink and orange shed gagra her bare waist and curve was hide by a netted pink duppata, her magalsutra adored her neck and the vermillion added to her beauty. She looked heavenly biding all bye they drove towards Atul house as uday to kill the silence he tried to make a conversation and being ignored so much he could not bear and stopped the car as he raised his voice a bit and asked

UDAY: I said I am sorry now please talk to me

A smile crept in her face as she softly placed her head on his shoulder and said

MANYATA: I am glad to see that you love me so much

His anger vanished into thin air as he could understand her heart and took her hands into his and said

UDAY; I love you wifey and I will never cheat you

MANYATA: I love you too uday

UDAY: now shall we leave

MANYATA: yea lets go

Saying this the car started as they drove to atul house, he at once recognized both manyata and udayveer. They were introduced to all the friends as most of them were shocked by their marriage but were happy for the couple, as suddenly manyata felt herself into the arms and all she said was

MANYATA; rajdeep


done with the update

i am sorry if i offended any body

please hit the like button and no res box

hugss anni

Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Aneesha...
Yieppi I am the first...
Was just going to sleep...
And then saw your PM...
Anyways...
The chappy was fabulous...
Aww... first time in this story I am feeling bad for J and Akash...
I hope they get together...
Udayveer's desperate attemt was really cute...
Uday is lying to Manyata...
I hope he tells her soon...
So there is no misunderstanding...
Manyata is Rajdeep's arms...
Uday is not gonna like this at all...
Ab dekhte hai Rajdeep ka kya hota hai...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome anni.
wow posessive manyata.
den seems like we will get posessive uday too.
try to continue soon anni.
thanks for pm.

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