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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

hey shanae

this is really very beautifully and painful also

through this we can understand the real meaning of life

life is full of struggle but there is also a hope that everything will be alright soon

in this u emotes the emotions of a girl very beautifully

really loved it ❤️

penned down very amazingly

really awesome job 👏

keep the great work 👍🏼

and congratulations for writing such a master piece 🤗

plz do write more...

love

Mehvash

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abi

@taareylover14

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awww my Bestieee wrote something to awesome kun na hoti ;-).

Wase rolaney ka irada ha kya.

It was amazinggg.

Nd too emo too ...felt sooo bad for her.

Nd am feeling so blessed that i hv so much happiness nd comfort.

U made me relize hw lucky i am ..

Thank u sooo much shane...

Nd when i saw pm from shane i was like is it true :-P pm nd from her ...hehehehehe...aur issi liye sab se phelay tera pm kola .

IT was fab dear really luved it.

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--Suhani--

@--Suhani--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome :D
Heart touching <3
It's so true that we have everything yet we want something
But somewhere people have nothing
We think we have every damn problem in our life while the problem we have is nihinh compared to the ones they are going through...
Loved it :)

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Oh..My..God.. This is so amazing Shannu ..

So Heart Touching and so different ..

Superb ..

Very realistic and so amazingly written ..

Good going Shaanu ..

Well Done ..

~Arpita

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Tulasi14

@Tulasi14

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Can u post this here is the link

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3721043

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Tulasi14

@Tulasi14

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Life is full of ups and downs!

We all know that nothing new about it!

The question arises ,how we can stand those storms!

We can't go against it,let the storm clam down!

By the time the storm clams down !

Hundreds of people die with hunger,no shelter!

Then comes the mental stress,

Caused by family,work or a friend!

This called mental storms,

When the mind is not set,

People go thru depression and become suicidal!

Then comes health storms ,

The toughest of all,

If you have health you have wealth!

Reading all this makes anyone depressing!

If God as blessed you abundantly,

Please help at least one person.

If God as blessed you with sense of humor,

Please make some one laugh!

There are different ways we can support the community!

What you give back will come back to you as a blessing!

God bless you all!

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khyati( the pagal )

@khyati2000

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

wow di . :D
it was awesome
loved it
it was really painful
amazing...

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chinudolly

@chinudolly

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

🤗 , shonu , my little sweetest cutest baby sis ,

dont know what 2 say

i m short of words gudiya , actually because of many reasons ,

1- because of ur heart touching lovely emotional poetry ... so so so so so s o loved it gudiya ,

2- thinking about d poverty n poor people😭😭😭 , it hurts 2 see them suffering , it hurts 2 see them yearning 4 even d small basic things ,😭😭, it hurts when they r damn hungry but dont have anything 2 eat , it hurts 2 see a small baby lying on d road with his mother working at d construction site 😭😭 although that child is also a human being and have not done any mistake 2 suffer like that , 😭😭 it hurts 2 see them craving 4 everything , it hurts 2 see that they r yearning 4 studies , 4 food , 4 shelter , 4 care , 4 toys , 4 clothes and 4 everything 😭 but its hurts d most when we can't do anything 4 them 😭

GREAT WORK SHONU , totally outstanding and mind blowing ,..

keep it up ,!!!!!

love u so s o so so so so so so so so so so so so much shonu muaahhh muahhh muaahhh muaahhh muaahhh muaahhh muaaahhh muaahh muaahhh muahhh

take care shonu n keep smiling always 😊

keep writing more !!!!!!

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Archana

@Archi_Taarey

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

wow..!! dats simply brilliant..
it is so painfull
it has deep meaning...

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Sowwy for commenting late
Coming to the ur piece of work
Wow just wow
I m speechless
U wrote it so beautufully
It reached my heart ❤️
N i m sure it reached the hearts of all who read this work of urs
Please do write more like this
U did a fab job 👏

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