..Shanae.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Today i felt like writing something worthwhile... Something that has meaning... So here's a bit of writing on a girl... On her poor state. Its about poverty.

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She's 12... And she's hurting.

She hasn't eaten anything for days...
Not even a grain.

Its summer now and all her crop is destroyed...
She's been praying for rain, although she knows if it does come, it'll flood her house which still doesn't have a roof.

Her mumma has promised her a roof before the rain season.
She admires her mom. Her mumma works all day through. Earning 50 cents each day.
That doesn't get them much. Actually it doesn't get them anything...

But in a couple of years they'll have enough for food.

But thats if they'll make it through.

Each day is a struggle.
She's so hungry it hurts... She's so poor it makes her wanna cry. She has dream, a dream to become a doctor... And it breaks her heart to know. To face the truth that this dream will never be true.

She's 12... And she's hungry. she has dream. she's hurting.

(C) ..Shanae..

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Hope u liked it. Was just sitting and this came to mind... Hope it made u think about the poor for a while. about their struggles. and made u understand the importance of all u have: a roof. a bed. Food. Money. Internet. The power to make your dreams a reality. You have everything... They have nothing yet still are living in hope.

I'm sorry if u didn't like it.


~Shanae
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-GoluGudiya- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow !!
It was painful !
It had such a deep meaning !!
Really beautiful work !!
Great Job ! 👍🏼
Mean.Girl thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!! it's awesome..
I have never read anythiing like this before on IF..
u r brilliant..
sierapomeroy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsome n emotional



thnx 4 pm
Ridzi123 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..loved it
it is so meaningful
really the poor in all countries
face this ..
they need support of the people..who just waste their money on waste things
rather that wasting better..it better to donate to them
even these poor..have dreams...which they wish that it could be fulfilled
they struggle each day..
and someday..their struggle will definitely pay them
some day..a day will come
when these poor..will be able to fulfill their dreams
will be able to live in peace
free from pain
with a smile on their face
Nichuss thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
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its so lovely n emotional shanu
--coco-- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful and thought invoking...
Feels good to know that not all people are insensitive towards the poor...
Good work. 😊
-Fam_TaaReY- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was emotional and heart wrenching 😭
Awesome 👏
...Natasha... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so emotional...
Wonderful writing
Prettypriya95 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#10
its seriously awesome...
it so wonderfully expresses the feelings of a poor child...
nice try... loved it

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