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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



i really wanna know more of past...

if its dev tara part... then surely what happened after the hug and the kiss...

then where is geet??

then ofcourse maaneet... they both were so happy after that nite.. uske baad kya hua??

bas ithna sa khwaab hai😳


Okay..will try to put a mix of all you have asked for.😛

next song: yeh dil tum bin kahi lagta nahi hum kya karein...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

It was a totally gripping update

start to end just hooked us to it
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
THANKS HEYTAL🤗
Thank God! Tara is safe
😳

Buffalos donkeys pe bhaari pad gayi 😆
aur sherni bhaag nikli😉
At first I was like what? and then it clicked. Good one 😆😆
Dev's detective following her and NT is mistaking him to be Suraj's goon😕
It is not Dev's detective. Its just a random person but fear makes us fear everyone.
Poor thing being stalked is one of the most scariest feeling specially when such criminal minds are involved
Thankfully she has Dev for her😳

NT side of her past and how she got involved in all this mess was so painful
Such people should rot in hell
Psychos🤬
Yup. She does not believe in love for this reason. People only have used her. Their story gets more interesting as we proceed.
PS : Avi I so want that Brij and Suraj😡 to pay for each and everything and Maan and Dev doing the honours!!!
When my heroine is so tough why should the hero have to do anything? I have always found that with the power of those who love you, any woman can take on any challenge. They will pay all of them be assured.
It is so truly said that when u are in trouble u always remember the people closest to u
And Dev it is!!!😳

her wanting to meet just once before her death to confess her feelings, picturing him in her eyes forever and ever... was so heart wrenching
But the end was just awesome
The hug and the kiss
FINALLY!!!!!!!
😃
She needed that scare to realize how important he has become to her.
Though I love the whole song but these lines are my favorite and these really fit her psyche here

Tu jo choole pyaar se, araam se mar jaaun
Aaja chanda baaho mein tujhmein hi ghum hoi jaaun mai,
Tere naam mein kho jaaun,
Saiyaan, saiyaaan.
😳
Me too Heytal. I love those words.

Avi thanks so much for updating
and I'm really sorry to keep u waiting
Just loved this part
Please precap is tricky phir se fight na ho jaaye dono mein😕

Don't mind waiting as long as you show up Heytal. I know you will.🤗
Love u for all your support
🤗

Thanks Heytal😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

TEASER

This had not been a good day so far. The conversation with Dev had left her in a sad mood. When the driver dropped her off at Chandni Chowk she realized she had left her purse in the outhouse office. There was nothing left to do but walk home. It was at least a forty minute walk and she mindlessly walked the dim lit neighborhood. The song playing in the market had made matters worse and she was gripped with a sense of sadness. Thoughts of Maan flooded her heart.

MUSIC SELECTION please play

Kisi ke dil mein bas ke dil ko, tadpaana nahin achchhaa
Nigaahon ko jhalak de ke chhup jaanaa nahin achchhaa
Umeedon ke khile gulshan ko, jhulsaana nahin achchhaa
Humein tum bin, koi jachta nahin, hum kya karen,
Tumhi kah do, ab aye jaane vafaa, hum kya karen


Ye dil tum bin, kahin lagta nahin, hum kya karen
Tasawur mein koi basta nahin, hum kya karen
Tumhi kah do, ab aye jaane wafaa, hum kya karen

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I am walking along slowly with my broken chappal on the dark street returning from work at the car repair shop. Across the street I see someone who looks like Geet. Surely, it would not be her this late in this neighborhood. I am about to cross the street when a black Mercedes passes by slowing down when the driver sees Geet. The driver stops and makes a U-turn approaching Geet from behind. The man dressed in black has a black ski mask on so I cannot see his face. Only his eyes are open.

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I watch spell bound as Dev navigates the car full speed in the darkening neighborhoods of Delhi. His cell phone is crackling with the instructions from the police commissioner. Anxiety and fear grip my insides as I realize that if my phone call had been tapped it could very well be Brij or Suraj behind Geet's disappearance. I beg God that it would not be her who has to pay for my foolishness. Tomorrow, I decide, I will leave from here and return home to face the consequences. They could kill me but if they hurt a hair on her head I will never be able to forgive myself.

PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!

It is my only motivation to continue writing this story.

SONG from the movie Izzat, sung by Lata, Rafi

Thanks!

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Avi😡
koi aise teaser deta hain kya
ab toh neend bhi nahi aayengi
Geet ko Brij ne kidnap kar liya😭
🥺 😒 😔 😭
Edited by heytal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Avi😡

koi aise teaser deta hain kya
ab toh neend bhi nahi aayengi
Geet ko Brij ne kidnap kar liya😭
🥺 😒 😔 😭

Red face ki mujhe aadat dalni padegi...😆
Song kaisa hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Red face ki mujhe aadat dalni padegi...😆
Song kaisa hai?



Awesome song Avi
Its Izzat movie song na😳

Dev better rescue Geet in time Avi😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal



Awesome song Avi
Its Izzat movie song na😳

Dev better rescue Geet in time Avi😡

🤔
Rescue ho jaayegi😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
haiyye haiyye
they are gonna get tara through to geet
geet ko kuch hua naa
a lot of people will be after your blood
wait who saw geet was it kabir
hope they find her and soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet and brij ka kya connection?????
i'm canfujed..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

Geet and brij ka kya connection?????

i'm canfujed..

It will be revealed in the update. There was a hint in the Priyasi chapter but I think only Muskan picked it up.

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