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Posted: 19 years ago
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Here's a poem i wrote, i hope u guys like it:

Freedom

She dreams of freedom
To do as she pleases
And not get punished.
To be who she is
And not get bullied.

She dreams of the freedom she doesn't have
But yearns for
She dreams of the freedom she never had
But heard stories of

With every new day
As the sun rises
And the horizon increases
She tries to make her dream a reality.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Very interesting... really good! Well done!! 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: navi18

WOW.. that is really good and touching.. ACTUALLY POETRY means a lot to some of us.. n poetry just makes you want to thing about that topic.. n i HAVE to say.. u did a gr8 job!! 😊 👏
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HINNA!!! hey how r ya.. gosh, haven't talked to ya since ages!! 😭



HEY NAVI!!!!! wassup?? yeah, i know, it's been AGES!!!! lol, i hope u feel better soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome poem 👏 👏
tfs 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!! very very nice!... the poem is very touching and very well written! 👏 ... i really liked it... u shud write poems wenever u get time, as i can see ur very good at it! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: mini2390

wow!!! very very nice!... the poem is very touching and very well written! 👏 ... i really liked it... u shud write poems wenever u get time, as i can see ur very good at it! 😊



lol, thx!!! i've written more poems, i've written about 10 in the last two weeks or so b/c we're doing poems in my English class, so my teacher makes us write a lot of poems. lol. if u want, i can put them up here, but i personally don't like them 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivyaD

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<FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color=#00cc33 size=4>Very interesting... really good! Well done!! 👏



thx

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