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Posted: 20 years ago
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this seeing many fan made story i think i shuld write my own.
before reading: beware im a bad student in literature
and english


kkavyanjali the story

part 1:
dhum dhum.
not again..
this is the third time . why they dont want me to sleep!
i went to see whats going on.just as i thought.
anjali is screaming and breaking glasses.
this is her habit when some things happen with her and mom.
anjali what happened??
i asked
'o kkavya u have to make a final descition now.its simple.
either me and or ur mom.
either we will shift into another house.or im going to my mom house'.
anjali , anjali how much times i said to that i love my mom.i cant leave her.
who will tell me bed times story when i sleep.
who will feed me with her own hands in diner?
who will?
i said to her .
'oh kkavya ur so sick. final answer!
me or ur damb mom?
anjali!!!!. how can u say that.my answer is my mom ok?
anjali started crying 'ok!!! im going'
stay with ur mom.
anjali dont go plz !!!
no no no
(to be continued)

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Posted: 20 years ago
#2
thx. ur encouragement will help me write more.
may be someday i'll kick away kekta and be the story writer of kA(!)
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Posted: 20 years ago
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gud... but yar plz write properly meanz clear dialogues wth namez😃
Edited by rajeev_fan - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#4
ye i agree! keep it up! wts rong with ure english it seems fine 2 me!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#5
gr8 story waiting 4 the next part..... 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thx guys i'll start the next part

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