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Posted: 12 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX:

Chapter 1: Tum Mile...

Chapter 2: Dil Mera Churaya Kyu, Jab Todna Hi Tha

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Chapter 3: Tera Rastaa Main Chhodu Naa...

Chapter 4: Sare Sapne Kahin Kho Gaye, Haye Hum Kya se Kya ho Gaye

Chapter 5: Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain, Magar Chupke Chupke

Chapter 6: Aate Aate Aa Gaye Paas Hum...

Chapter 7: Ho Gaya Hai Tujhko Toh Pyaar Sajnaa..!!

Chapter 8:Saanso Ko Saanso Mein Dhalne Do Zara

Chapter 9(Part A and B)

Chapter 10: Te Amo

Epilogue: Jab Tak hai Jaan

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

I wud lyk 2 start 4m d intro lines u wrote 4 RG... I completely agree wid u here CC coz it ws my last day of peace too n u knw tht, dnt u????... 🤣

Cumng back 2 d update-

Aww... My CC wrote an SS... I'm so happy 4 u swthrt... May u hv many more 2 cum... 👍🏼

I luvd dere double meaning convo... 😉

I ws blushing n smiling lyk an idiot reading it... 😳

Cheeni Chameli= Chandan Chaubey= CC

Connection kya hai, ye bta pehle????? 😉

Kaam wali baai, apka kaunsi baar hai??? Dese lines cracked me up... 🤣 🤣 🤣

Arnav pecked Khushi in dere 1 meet only?? Luks lyk dis has my stuff too... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Khushi wearing a red saree n goin 2 meet him...

Sum hw i felt k kuch galat hone wala hai, is it so???? 😕

Luv u more CC... Muahhh...

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

I, Arnav and Khushi are sooo happy that you started a SS...

First of all superb banner Astha Di...I simply loved it... 👏 ❤️

Wow CC I didn't knew that u have such an amazing sense of humor...
I thought only Jiji Di was best in it but no, we have our CC who is equally amazing...

I was laughing in d entire encounter of Arshi...Khushi and Arnav here r just superb... 🤗

Chandan Chaubey from London... 🤣 I really wanna see him CC... 😆

"Thoda thoda Yaad aa raha hai. " 🤣 I mean seriously...He is sooo naughty...And then he kissed her before leaving... 😲 😉
M just loving it... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️

So Khushi is going to meet Arnav after 3yrs...
But the last line scared me...What's on your mind CC??? 😕

One request CC - If possible post it in a gap of 3 days... It will be a bit difficult to wait for next part...

A mind blowing start...And I have a feeling that this SS will hold a special place in my heart... ❤️ 🤗

All the best CC... Love u...

Will wait for next part...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 12 years ago

😡😡

Main agyii aur dekh saath mein kin kin ko layee hu

Dekh tera piyad ko sharam ai hai😡😡

Back to update

Hawww nai kahungi bcz i knew ab mera no hai dedication ka rofll

Par what the yehh description

I took away ur peace

Okaay nw let me strt awesome start re

I mean the misunderstanding between them

shuruwat hi galatfami se hui hai toh aga kya hoga

He was enjoying teasing her poor khushi and

seriously chandan chaibey cheeni tjhe koi naam nai mile bey khushi ko ara gere nathu khere ka saath jodne chali thi tu

He kissed her hayee pehli mulakat kiss de gya

agli mulakat mein toh matlab kapde v le jayega

three yr ka baad jo hoga acha hoga i trust u cheeni

humein bharosa hai apar apke pyaar par aap unko alag nai hone dengi

rest is dis

and jaldi upda8wa de mjhe

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

yehh mera liya tha alteast yaahn toh 😭😭 aplog mjhe ana deta pehle 😭😭

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

dhanno

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finally i m here...
dil to kar raha hai jo bhi🤬 ata hai muje sab bak du yaha!!!!!!
muje koi kuch q nahi btata!!!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

hmmm nautanki bht ho gayi back to point...😆
1st of all my basanti's very 1st ss
so chalo nacho!

thora aur...

i think its enough yaar😆😆😆
thnk U so much basanti ji for res...

1st of all loved the title!!!!!!!!
awesome ...
and astha didi a lovely banner!
just out of this world!
congo cheeni u r back in form!😆

yaar its just damn damn damn gud...still laughing😆😆😆
love ur sense of humor,,well hai tu sariyal hi🤣
but i guess ur sense works here...
Chuabye ji...her to be groom...😆😆
aww his all frustration vanished!
only Khushi can do it...😉
lovely re...cant wait for more...
seriously cheeni was hell tired and this new piece frm u..it just vanished my tiredness!
and i love u for this...
stay blessed...
urs dhanno!😳

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

new story by u yipee 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Superb yaar, outstanding start i loved it so much dear cheeni
Banner is beautiful👏👏👏👏👏
Teri aur pooji ki frienship kamal hain...i loved it😆
i m dancing by seeing your marvelous story
Arnav and khushi encounter is massah allah kya kamal hain..
Full double meaning..innocent khushi..
I really enjoyed it.
Loved every bit of it😛
Update next part fast...i can't wait now😳
Wanted some romance re☺️
U know i m a bhuki aatma for reading romance😉😳

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res😳

From my phone

Sorry Cheesy for late comment. But wanted to drink in every word of your new story and I am happy I did! It is very well written👏. The dialogues are so witty!😆 A really good humourous piece!

And the underlying layer of romance had me deadwa!🤢 I don't like the idea of Arnie having casual paid sex though! 😭Too good of you to send Khushi to his room at the last moment and foil his plans!😃

Chalo Aman did one good thing for a change! He brought them together! The biggest cupid was of course Chaubeyji NRI himself! Bechara Chaubey! Arnav kissed Khushi! Whatever little chance the skirt loving CChaubey had with her is now definitely over!😆

Uff! I love a flirty Arnav!

Worried about the end part! Hey DM raksha karna!

You rock,cheesy! Now tthat I know you have written all the parts I am dying to read all!

Love and hugs for a superb beginning!❤️ 🤗

Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago