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Laveniya.

@Zion.Writings

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

waiting for the update eagerly...!! jaha bejhna hai bhejo bass update deto...!! BTW hell or heaven?? hell ko tho hamare virman ja nhi sakte..!! so i guess heaven ...😆😆😆😆😆 pm me whn u update... 😊

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negha

@negha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Superb And Wonderful Update...I loved it a lot...

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Hiba

@Kicha111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Nice update

aur virman 2 hm😉

cont soon

wait'g eagerly

plz pm frm nxt part plzzz😔

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

uzma dear update na Yar...how long we will have to wait for ur wonderful update ...
plz update na yar

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

uzma dear when r u going to update yar...

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Note:-Well I know the last two updates were not upto mark I can c that effect on no.s of like but still thanks for liking it I dn't have problem with no.s of likes for last updates becoz I myself was not happy with update but I m satisfied with my this update hope this will match with ur xpectations and ya no update till next Saturday as I have practical exam next week From now only maanvi's pov till few updates because viraat's pov will change the story lol eheheheh ya m planning something very evil so fasten ur seatbelts for coming updates u r going to b on very emotional ride and u will be confused suddenly 360 degree turn for tht u need to read coming updates and ya virman r still going on honey moon

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Maanvi's pov We reached our suite whatever happened in the lift was something I never experienced before ,I I can't describe my feelings.i just can't it was a moment of bliss for me I saw something in his eyes which gave me peace I saw care for me I was feeling complete everything was perfect until aunty came and disturb us but after that his behavior was very different and weird he was trying to distant himself from me he didn't even look at me he just look at me once and which crash all my hopes and dreams I saw regret in his eyes...he was regretting whatever happened just now between us,and it is killing me seeing regret in his eyes so it means he is not happy with this marriage just thought of him not happy with this marriage broke me even more so that's why he is leaving...but then this date and all this why all this drama m so confused. We entered our suite he is still not looking at me and this is killing me even more our clothes were wet and we had nothing to wear,then I hear him asking manager to manage some clothes for us and also about his car he ended the call and said 'manager will bring some clothes and he left from there''. I was feeling very alone so I went near the window it was dark outside and raining heavily same was the situation of my life there was no ray of hope the pain inside my heart over comes my fear of thunder and this made me smile with tears in my eyes. Before I just heard love has power to do anything and today I...wait where did this love came from...m I in love with my husband ya yup m in love with my husband I fell for him this soon...I just can't express how I was feeling the moment I realize m in love with my own husband but thn next moment the regret in his eyes crash all my dreams my chain of thoughts were broken by the knock on the door I open the door and found guy with clothes must be room service waiter I took clothes from him and closed the door I was looking for viraat I heard his voice from the bedroom must be talking on the phone he was talking very slowly I went inside the room as soon as he saw me he hang up the phone everything was very confusing the sudden change in his behavior is hurting me and made me think was he forced to marry me...my thoughts were broken by his voice 'kuch chahiye'' he said little rudely and I wanted to kill myself tht moment but I composed myself and spoke 'woh clothes aagae hai'' and I gave him his clothes not bothering to look back at him I moved in washroom to get change.

I came inside washroom locked the door I heard voice if door he went out again to make a call I don't know what is happening y suddenly everything changed few hours ago everything was perfect like fairy tale everything was like an dream I was happy with him in our new world we I know he was going but I still had some hopes now everything is finished I went in front of mirror and look at myself all I saw was lonliness and pain y all this was happening I dn't know till how much time I was in washroom I cried my heart out till I felt better I changed my clothes and came back in room he was still not back I went and tried to sleep but sleep was far away from me far very far all I had near me was loneliness When I was kid and I was not able to sleep I use go to my mum sleep in her lap and all my tensions worries use to vanish in seconds I want tht lap today but she is to far I just pretend this pillow is my mum's lap and tried to sleep but still I can't I heard door's voice I knew it was viraat as my back was facing him he can't see m still awake but I closed my eyes and pretend to sleep I heard his phone he picked up his call and went outside again I was wondering who was calling him at this hour of night and why he can't talk infront me here I know he r not hubby wify in true sense but we r friends r we he came back in room

After sometime I felt something next to me I guess viraat came and slept today he didn't put his arm around me like he does when der is thunder I turn around and found him sleeping far away from me his back facing me I slept facing him in the hope he will turn around but he didn't and I slept waiting for him to turn around

Okay I know tht was short m very buzy that's y short update Like Comment

I know u must be thinking u guyz r reading some other story but nope it is same story and ya it was planned from the beginning

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