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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

I am generally not a fan of descriptions but the way you've written this, it doesn't seem forced. Succinctly written (and who am I to comment on length anyway 😆 ) but brilliant all the more for it.

I hated Arnav in the scene you've penned. But thank you for redeeming him with that aww-worthy gesture. And isn't that so well thought out too? Cause Arnav had trouble wording what he actually felt.

Thanks for this lovely piece. Very satisfying. :)

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautifully written! Loved reading it.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

What a beautiful piece.

So well written and descriptive.

One of my least favorite scenes from the show but you've given it a beautiful twist.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the way you described Arnav's emotions here.

He redeemed himself here.

He's so caught between his feelings.

Beautifully written, Anu.

Was waiting for this, and as always you didnot disappoint.

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Take_That

@Take_That

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Posted: 12 years ago

Vow! Anu!

Wonderful piece of writing!

Loved the detailed description of a man who is caught between mohabbat n nafrat. Who is more inclined towards the mohabbat only TONIGHT.

Write more often!

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

WOW WOW WOW!!!

I knew you wrote fiction but you never told me you write poetry Anu...That was poetry. It was lyrical, it was beautifully painful and touched a chord that forms those lumps in my throat.

They say it is not easy for a woman to write from a man's perspective and you just proved them wrong. I think you did better justice to that scene than the original moreson because of where you took it after he hurt her.

The moon light never seemed more romantic and a kiss that light never felt more hot.

It was stunning Anu. Thank you😊

P.S - I second Nivi...you need to write more often.

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

this is the first i read something from you and the first time in a really long time that i felt like i am actually reading arnavs mind .its true that though he always put her down ,he loved her all the same even when he believed that she betrayed her sister how i wish they come clean about each other the way it should,,,,,but lovely piece would be interesting to read her version and their patchup too:)