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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

Awesome yaar...

Loved it..

Pleasee continue soon...

Feel really sad for Virat and Manvi..

Pleasee update soon...

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#863

Yess i am the 1st...

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Akay1692

@Akay1692

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#864

That was such n emotional update S! :(

Great writing

N this time continue superr sooon please

Tc :)

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manahil arif

@innocentmanvi1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#865

omg omg omg today i came early to comment wow dear amazing update ab jald ce theek kr do virat ko i want virat with manvi in this condition thanku u remembered me n pm me next part also love u

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Laveniya.

@Zion.Writings

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#866

yeh wala bahut emotional tha...!!!!😭
loved the part ...the maanvi's description was awesum👏👏👏
loved the way virat still cares for her😳

ab wait nhi hota ...update soon...😳

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#867

awesome update

so emotional

loved it

felt sad for virman

plz cont soon

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#868

😭

very painful...

😭

BTW thanks for the PM...

nyc work SHIVALI...😊

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#869

wow superb👏 update bang on dear...loved it very much...do continue soon...😊

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 11 years ago

#870

keep rolfing... 😡 keep crying likhna chahie tha

mujhe rula diya na... 😭 😭

itna saddie saddie update...

manvi and her pain... and the most painful thing is that she is still in the illusion that the epitome of hers n virat's love is still taking shape inside her... 😭

but today... today hell broke lose... that sheela aunty made manvi's worst nightmare her reality... 😭 😭 manvi knowing about her miscarriage was something very painful... i could feel her emotions... feeling shattered and i know virat was also feeling bad... but i wish u had elaborated his feelings a little more... it would have been more impactful...

the whole drama was very emotional... sb, vmaa n jeevika wala scene was fab

as u said lots more crying ahead, till u update next, i will prepare myself for this crying n emotional stuff...

anyways i more thing, suddenly the pakora thing reminded me of that breakfast scene u had in the earlier chapters... virat stopping manvi from eating those oily pakoras...

now please continue soon...

lots of aashirwaad

naina maiya 😉 😃

Edited by naina927 - 11 years ago