keep rolfing... š” keep crying likhna chahie tha mujhe rula diya na... š š
itna saddie saddie update...
manvi and her pain... and the most painful thing is that she is still in the illusion that the epitome of hers n virat's love is still taking shape inside her... š
but today... today hell broke lose... that sheela aunty made manvi's worst nightmare her reality... š š manvi knowing about her miscarriage was something very painful... i could feel her emotions... feeling shattered and i know virat was also feeling bad... but i wish u had elaborated his feelings a little more... it would have been more impactful...
the whole drama was very emotional... sb, vmaa n jeevika wala scene was fab
as u said lots more crying ahead, till u update next, i will prepare myself for this crying n emotional stuff...
anyways i more thing, suddenly the pakora thing reminded me of that breakfast scene u had in the earlier chapters... virat stopping manvi from eating those oily pakoras...
now please continue soon...
lots of aashirwaad
naina maiya š š
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago