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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Narita 😊

Excellent update yaar 👏 ⭐️
I think.Priya will trust Ram as he told truth before their engagement..
I m speechless with ur write-ups.. 👏 ⭐️

thanks for pm
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Friends ,

I am Presenting a Long Term Preview to you .. and after the preview , means after you complete reading the preview , all the jhootas and chappals (in pairs 😛 ) are accepted ..

Cheers

Nairita



Preview


Many years later ...

Ram Kapoor , who turned himself into a ruthless entrepreneur , who discarded all the happiness from his life , after she left , after they parted , but somewhere , they are still connected . Once they decided together that , they cannot walk along , they have to part. Priya said that time , sometimes we need some distance to grow the relation even more stronger .' Ram had some fault that day , even she did committed mistake. But the punishment which they gifted unknowingly , to their only , soul , their heart , their daughter PIHU'

Priya moved out of India , after their divorce , that only Ram knew , but where she went with their daughter , he don't even have an idea. The best part of their relation is , Priya kept him notified about the every single thing about their daughter. Her four birthdays , her first day of school , even she once sent him a voice recording to Ram , when pihu was only of 8 months . Pihu said Papa for the very first time.

Priya never failed to punish him every moment , he felt his togetherness with daughter , but there was a distance between them . Ram wanted to write back to Priya , he wanted to tell her how much he misses them , how much he craves to be with them. But priya punished him once more. Priya did sent him letters but it was through her friend , Shruti. Shruti was her childhood friend , from London , but she came back to India , with her husband , for the sake of his job.

Shruti never disclosed , Priya's address . She never used to talk with him . The only thing she used to do is , to come down to Kapoor Mansion and drop priya's letter to him in a white envelope , where nothing remains scribbled.

Present days...

That day was not exception , he turned to the calendar , it is 9th September , Pihu will turn into a chubby cute little girl of 5 , she is a big girl now . only few hours from then shruti must be coming with the letter from Priya . he leaned on his chair . From the last 4 years , he used to have sleepless night on 8th of September.

He sat straight and took out a file from his drawer. Many letters and white envelopes were there.

He pulled out a letter ...

Ram ,

I will not ask you , how are you ? because I know how are you ? you are the same whom I loved , and still love . But the string somewhere cut. Do you still snore? You know I laughed as I wrote the word snore' (ram laughed as he read) Ram , today mark the date , our love , your mini me came to our world . I know you are getting this letter on 15th , I had a caesarian , that's why I was not able to write letter immediate to you , even , some time it took to reach shruti . Ram , you are a father now . I am a mother . Your little princess , Pihu came to our world. May be we are not together , may be you are not be able to hold your daughter in your arms , but I promise you , I will keep you notify about every little thing of our princess. Even she will be knowing everything about her father . now without wasting time check the envelope, there is something for you. (Ram took out the picture of Pihu , his new born daughter. He kept on looking at the snap , that priya took , in the pramp , when she took pihu out for a walk . from the scenery it was very clear to Ram that , Priya settled herself in abroad , but she was not in London , but she was somewhere , very far from him . he always wished , one chance if he get to see priya he will mend every little thing between them. Ram continued to read the letter.)

Ram this is our princess, Pihu , as you wanted , I kept her name pihu only . Pihu Kapoor she will be called . Are you feeling proud to be a father Ram ? I again smile as I write this Ram. This is our Princess's first walk with mamma , she is very similar to you . she loves to sleep .See the snap , she is sleeping . I wish she don't snore like you . I am habituated with the snores , but I fear for her prince charming . I am a mad nah Ram , she is just of 7 days , and I am thinking about her prince charming . Ram I need to go now . don't think about me , I have a pain less pregnancy almost . about pihu you should think , because you are the father . But I promise you Ram , I will keep you notify about her every single development . Thank you Ram , Thank you for completing me in every means , Thank you , Thank you so much ... Thank you for PIhu...

Bye ,

Take care Ram .

Loves ,

Priya... Only yours.

A lone tear escaped his eyes as he closed the letter . He then pulled out the CD and playing it he kept on listening to his daughter s first words ... On the loop PAPPPA... PA...PAPPP..PA PAAAPPA ..' Ram leaned back to the chair , placing pihu's picture , near to his heart he closed his eyes , waiting for the morning to come fast... Waiting for Shruti to come down to Kapoor Mansion with the letter from priya on Pihu's 5th Birthday.

Edited by nairitabala1988 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chillpc

Very emotional and lovely part...
Priya jus needs smtym...hope she undrstnds him and the reasn fr his lie...
Ram shld have tld the whole truth...

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Ram should have told the whole truth , to priya , but how the truth comes out lets see ... and dekhte hain priya samjhti hain ya nahi , Thanks for loving it
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update as well as nice preview
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshiram

Read it in one go...u portrayed priya's character vry strongly i liked tht focus in your story she s punctual and sincere...and engagement arranged suddenly...loved ram's and priya's conversation regarding their first meeting finally ram proved himself right and gt opportunity to go with his lady love...evn priya's wish was nice..loved their level of comfortability of selecting the rings...and last part finally truth is out,ram took good decision...now really worried abt priya's decision..u ended the story at an interesting plot...want to knw hw priya wil react for it..ram s tensed evn she noticed t..ram's intention was good and evn he ws regreting for tht lie will priya understand t,tht s the question..hw she wil react...hope she wil take good decision and realise depth of ram's love for her,which she already knows...if anything wrong happened thn wnt shikaji to make her understand as she knw tht white lies are acceptable...once again nice update..really loved ram's move bt one thing s he should hv told her full truth hoping for the good in nxt update..thnks for pm..loved the update nairita



Ram should have told the whole truth , but he has the fear of loosing her , lets see how Priya reacts . Thank you for loving it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG this is the sourness i was only expecting theekhi theekhi nok khok .. Nairitaaa .. what you have done yar abhi tak mene update bhi pada nhi aur ye dhamaka .. is this all because ram lied to priya .. but they divorced so may be after marriage he told her everything about preeti ... :'( :'( ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

fantastic update

loved Priya's character..her puntuality, her love towards words.👏
hey If Priya won the bet what she asked from Ram...just curiosity to know 😛
Ram said truth to her...much needed before moving into any relation...
Priya needs her time..and hopr she understand him and will not called off her engagement
I really don't want to see Priya again shatterred. But I think Ram will handle her as he said.
u stop at the wrong moment...need update as soon as possible
thanks for PM😊


Priya had already asked , for something that will surprise her , that will be new to her . 😆 . Ram ko udhar bhi pasha diya tha . well lets see , if Ram can surprise her in future . thank you for loving it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Raya_some

OMG this is the sourness i was only expecting theekhi theekhi nok khok .. Nairitaaa .. what you have done yar abhi tak mene update bhi pada nhi aur ye dhamaka .. is this all because ram lied to priya .. but they divorced so may be after marriage he told her everything about preeti ... :'( :'( ...

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read the update , he has said everything about preeti already , but why they parts , they get divorced , well time will tell the tale , as sweet chapter PIHU comes into their life , Pihu and Ram knows eachother very well through a string called Priya. Lets see why they parts and if they come together again ... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shocking preview nairita...didnt expected...thnks for preview...but really confused hw he s able to control though he knw tht their bundle of love s there with priya ...punishment s really vry hard one
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Posted: 11 years ago
just fabulous
so beautifully written
i think priya will be in rage but
later realise ram did it only for her
i just hope my guess is true
thanks for pm
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