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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser
oh ho shes in danger...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
shocking teaser...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago

[banner credit goes to my darling🤗]

PART-4



Maan was on call with his boss giving details about his trip.When asked about the important presentation cd he bit his tongue as he had forgot the cd in his jacket which geet took from him.

He hastily turned and found she's gone!!"oh crap!!!where's she??"he held his forehead gasping at his state.


After pondering over many choices geet decided to seek her friend's help."oh freak I dont remember her number.."she pressed her eyes tight!!


"want any help sexy?"she heard a voice and moving her gaze a little she found the same gang of boys in train passing her lusty glares.."chhh...Idiots!!"chiding she turned and began to walk away from them.



She frustatingly increased her pace as they began to follow her passing ugly comments on her.

Finally her patience broke and she halted at spot.Turning around she slapped one of the boy hardly who was in her reach.They were beyond shocked as they didnt expect the slap!!!



"how dare you!!"he gritted his teeth stepping towards her.."Yes Iam!!!Thank me that I didnt break your ugly teeth.."she replied him in same tone he had!!"stay away from me you bas****"she pushed him away as he tried to get close to her.



"you b****"he harshly pulled her by hair whilst other 2 boys held her by arms..She was trying hard to push her away and kept hitting them with her legs but they were too strong for her to handle.



She bit one of the boy's wrist very hardly that he instantly left her yelling in pain..The other twisted her arm making her moan in pain..Tears brimmed from her eyes at her helplessness..when he tried to kiss her she kicked on his m****** with her knee..she smirked at the other boy who gaped at her in shock!!


She was quick enough to pick whatever came in her hand and hit those boys..Taking a chance she ran back towards the station to keep herself safe.



Meanwhile Maan started searching for geet to get the cd!!He was busy in gazing everywhere almost losing the hope of finding her when something hit his chest with force.He involuntarily held before it hit the ground.

It's none other than his weird attitude wali co-passanger Geet!!



He was shocked to find Geet panting horribly..she's sweating badly not even able to say a word..when he made her stand on her feet her already fragile body held his shoulders for support..She tried to breathe normally to control her racing heart beats whilst her tiredness seeked support of maan's taut chest.


Geet didnt realise that she is almost hugging him even maan was in too much shock to realise..He instantly helped her to sit on a nearby bench and offered her water.


"you okay??"he asked as she relaxed a bit..she nodded still panting and trying to get hold of herself.."what's wrong with you??"Maan asked finding red mark on her wrist..she followed his gaze and Thats when she realised that she was holding his hand tight.



Taking back her hand from him,"you didnt leave??"she asked avoiding his question.."oh yeah!!I forgot my cd with you I mean it's in the pocket"he gestured at the jacket which she was wearing..



"oh Iam sorry I forgot to return it to you"she said trying to unwear it but flinched in pain holding her hand..she pressed her eyes tight suppressing her sobs but felt her head is spinning.



The day was not less than a hell to her!!Her tormented state couldnt take stress and lost strength to hold herself"hey its ok I just needed that cd you can..."his words stuck in his throat as he found her holding her head with good hand.."hey you ok?..oye hello?"any of his words couldnt reach her ears and she fell unconscious on his chest..



Maan tried to wake her by patting her cheek,shooking her but she didnt budge..He sprinkled water on her face but still there's no response from her..Realising that she have high temperature he thought to take her to hospital.."How can I leave her alone there?"he dropped the Idea and finally he managed to arrange a taxi and took her along with him.



"Maan what's wrong??why you want doctor at this hour?you ok?"Aadi blabbered as soon as Maan let him in.."Aadi calm down man..Iam ok!!patient is inside"he pointed a finger at the closed door of his bed room.."nitya can you please.."Maan requested nitya,Aadi's wife who was a doctor by proffession.
He too followed her in ignoring Aadi's blabbering.



"Bhai seems she had a stress full day and being sensitive she's down with fever..no worries she'l be ok!!"nitya assurred Maan after dressing Geet's hand.


Later Maan narrated Aadi and nitya how he met Geet and how and why he had to bring her with him.



"Maan are you mad or what??How can you bring some random girl to ur home?you would have kept her at hospital!!who knows she may be a bride of a gangster who ran away from her wedding"

Aadi asked with terriffied expression.."Think what if she is a kid of a rich tycoon?her father may drop u behind bars "



Maan n nitya rolled their eyes at his super stupid assumptions."Aadi firstly Iam not that inhumane to leave a girl all alone when she was in need of help and secondly.."Aadi frowned at him.."stop watching those stupid daily soaps also ur silly assumptions ok!!"saying so Maan thrusted hot coffee mug in his hands.."ouch"he moaned dropping the cup on table.


Maan n nitya giggled at him and then he assured duo that he will manage everything.

After a while Aadi and nitya retired to their house.



Maan checked Geet's temperature and sighed to find it reducing..He dipped a cloth in water n put it on her forehead.

He kept looking at her innocent face.."stupid Aadi how can this innocent girl be a threat to me huh"he shook his head smiling and recollecting her antics.


He carressed her forehead which had frown lines.."what's bothering her so much?"he thought!!sighing he changed the cloth on her forehead.He didnt even realise when he drifted to sleep leaning at bed board.

shocked hai na?😉you all expected Maan to come n fight

Dont forget guys our geet is teeki mirchi here😆when she can scare MSK what's with them hai na😉

love..

-Mona

Edited by -Mounika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
i didnnt expect maan 2 come and fight
well ab kya hoga geet ka
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yup I expected Maan would come & fight... But our Geet was enogh for them... She was really tigress... I m worried for Maan now.. nor her dad or hubby would be gangster but she herself is enough for u Maan.. disaster will awake & then u see se poor Maan's condition...😆 Nice update.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey
can u plzz add me to ur pm list. Actually u added me 1 week back, but my account got expired and I lost access to my account where u are in my buddy list . plzzz again add me This is my userid inisah_hasini and email address inisah_hasini@yahoo.co.in
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsem update brave geet beaten the boys geet unconscious maan taking her adi assumptions natya nursing her
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update maan take geet his home and kya logic diya adi ne lovely update
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Awesome update for part 4. I loved that you did not go the predictable way with Maan saving Geet but instead made Geet handle the situation on her own. It was also really nice of Maan to take Geet to his home rather than at a hospital and in a sense it made him free from any unwanted questions as he does not really know much about Geet. Fantastic job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Not shocked bv happily surprised.You while reading Geet fighting d goons I cud actually visualise myself in her place.What if smthng like this happens to me??? Cud I be able to fight like her??? But we girls shud be careful.Brave to Geet for d fight and love to Maan for helping her.As in today's time we cant trust boys,in same way its difficult to trust a strange girl with stranger behaviour.Yet Maan brought her to his home and got her treated.



Hatts off to both Maaneet.


Gr8 part buddy.

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