Good Night - A short FanFiction

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Chapter 1 - Page 1 (9/6/13)
Chapter 2 - Page 2 (9/7/13)
Chapter 3 - Page 3 (9/8/13)
Chapter 4 - Page 4 (9/9/13)
Chapter 5 - Page 9 (9/24/13)
Chapter 6 - Page 10 (9/25/13)
Chapter 7 - Page 12 (9/25/13)
Chapter 8 - Page 14 (9/26/13)

Chapter 9 - Page 17 (10/1/13)

Chapter 10 - Page 19 (10/3/13)
Chapter 11 - Page 21 (10/4/13)
Chapter 12 - Page 24 (10/11/13)
Chapter 13 - Page 26 (10/22/13)
Chapter 14 - Page 29 (11/07/13)
Chapter 15 - Page 30 (11/07/13)
Chapter 16 - Page 34 (11/13/13)
Chapter 17 - Page 37 (11/21/13)

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Good Night
Chapter 1


Zoya was staring out the window in her room at the night sky while a melancholy song played on her laptop.

Knock knock...someone was at the door.

"Come in," Zoya called out.

"Hi..umm..Miss.Farooqui..are you alright? You were so quiet during dinner today."

"I am fine."

"Okay."

"Good night Mr. Khan," Zoya proceeded to go to her bed.

Asad held her hand and pulled her to him.

"You are not fine Zoya. What happened? Is everything okay? Has somebody dais something to you?"

"Nobody has said anything to me...or done anything to me..I am fine. I just miss home."

"This is you home Zoya. I mean I know you miss the US but this is your home too."

"Is it?"

Asad frowned and asked, " What do you mean by that?"

"Nothing. I mean nothing. Good night Mr. Khan."

Asad was losing patience with these cryptic words.

"No good night. We have to talk. I need to know why you are so bothered and why are you even asking if this is your home or not? You know it is. You are my fiance..my to-be-wife!"

"Exactly! To-be...TO-BE...not wife..but TO-BE wife. Until I am your wife I am still legally an outsider living like a guest in your house in the guest room."

Asad sighed in relief. This was a topic he could handle.

"Hmmm you think we should get married...soon..right?"

"Wha..? No no, Mr. Khan why should we get married..and why so soon. I mean I have been living in this house for months, we got engaged 3 times...almost got married once...Tanveer came to our lives...I left the house...there is still so much drama left to encounter...why get married now? What's the rush? Go...sleep...good night." Zoya huffed and puffed and blurted out these words.

Asad couldn't help but smile. But he felt a little guilty as well. He could tell Zoya was scared.

"Zoya"

"What Mr. Khan? Please go now. I don't feel like talking. Please leave. Good night."

A wise man always know when to back off and Asad knew it was his time to leave. He will deal with it in the morning.

Zoya cried herself to sleep that night thinking "men" were heartless creatures who roamed the planet only to hurt the female kind.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you will be continuing this right?😳 I really wanna know what happens next😃 its really nice story
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Plz continue it...
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Zoya cried herself to sleep that night thinking "men" were heartless creatures who roamed the planet only to hurt the female kind.
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"Wha..? No no, Mr. Khan why should we get married..and why so soon. I mean I have been living in this house for months, we got engaged 3 times...almost got married once...Tanveer came to our lives...I left the house...there is still so much drama left to encounter...why get married now? What's the rush? Go...sleep...good night." Zoya huffed and puffed and blurted out these words

😆😆 so true...
great start
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Nice update ... 😃
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Chapter 2

"Zoya...Zoya...wake up.Its almost 10. Wake up sleepy head." Najma shook Zoya.

"Wha...what happened? Wait, I am getting up..Stop screaming Tamatar," Zoya replied groggily.

"No you cannot wait. Here wear this and come out right now. We have to leave soon. Just go to the bathroom, wash up and get ready. I am getting ready too. Meet you at the car in 15 minutes."

"Where are we going...Tamata...," the door slammed before Zoya could finish her sentence. "Pagal ladki."

Zoya washed up and came out wearing the outfit Najma gave her. It was simple but nice. A simple figure hugging dark red brocade kameez with a nice green and gold zardousi border. The dupatta was gorgeous. It had kundan work all over it. It had a scooped neck at the back...just as Zoya liked. She grabbed some matching earrings to go with the outfit and realized that she barely had time to brush her hair and put on some kohl in her eyes since 15 minutes was almost up.

It was too nice and outfit for a morning errand and Zoya wondered where they were going.

Zoya noticed that the whole house was empty when she stepped out the front door and made her way to the car.

Dilshad and Najma were already waiting in the backseat of the car while Asad impatiently tapped on the steering wheel.

"Phuppi, where are we going?" Zoya asked Dilshad, intentionally avoiding Asad.

"You'll see..ab chalo beta." Dilshad replied.

They rode in silence almost the entire ride. Zoya tried to initiate a few conversation but Asad dismissed her everytime (which only angered Zoya). Dilshad was silently nodding most of the time while Najma texted Imran and broke down in sudden fits of giggles.

Finally after 45 minutes in the car, Asad stopped in front of a house.

"Stay here. I'll be back." He got out of the car and glanced at Zoya with a naughty twinkle in his eyes.

"Was he always like this? This irritating?" Zoya frowned and asked Dilshad.

No reply from Dilshad...but another fit of giggles from Najma.

Zoya was thoroughly confused. What was happening?

10 minutes later Asad walked back to the car and asked the ladies to follow him inside the house.

Zoya could make no heads or tails of what was happening. Moreover, she hadn't had breakfast so the grey cells in her brain weren't working at their optimal level either.

"Allah Miya...I need food," Zoya mumbled.

Edited by asyafan6 - 12 years ago

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