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lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Love knows no boundaries. It is just a feeling one cannot escape! When it happens it just does!

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Farah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

First of all... I just find it so awe-inspiring ZZ, that you write so many different genres of stories back to back!!! I mean, there's something called being creative, & then there is something called being pure genius!! & I will let you figure out which one do you think you are for me!

& this story.. From the first time I visualized a decked up, young, Khushi sitting, terrified, while Arnav played a game that was more than just a game with Shyam, I was hooked onto the story.

& I love the fact that for the first time, I am reading a guardian-ward take on Arnav-Khushi.. Not sayng that it hadn't been done before.. Just saying that I haven't read any before.. & until I read your story, I hadn't even realized that I had always wanted to read one!

& I just love when depict a slightly older/more mature Arnav with a young Khushi, because I find that just accentuates all of the differences in their characters. But I also want it to be done subtly so as not to ruin any of my cherished ArShi memories, & I know for a fact that you're gonna do just that!

In this update, I could just feel everyone's anxiety for Khushi's well-being is so palpable.. & the polar differences in her circumstances before & after Arnav came into her life are so drastic.. It was really only a matter of time before she got overwhelmed with all of it.

Now I am just waiting to see, the last line of this update, that Arnav Singh Raizada now owned Khushi body, soul & mind.. That for me is just the end result of all the intense you built up in the first two updates...

So, ZZ, looking forward to the joyride I know for sure that you're gonna take me into the next updates.. Bring it on, baby!

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

This was bound to happen, Khushi sees Arnav as her knight who saved her from eternal hell and what else can she do but fall helplessly in love.

I am waiting to read more, the age difference is there but love does conquer all does it not????

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

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Wow that was unexpected! And such a pleasant surprise! If the first chapter got me hooked to the story, this one got me super-duper excited about where this story is heading. Would love to see how you build on this guardian-ward relationship between the two. The age different is another interesting aspect.

What were Arnav's motivations behind this? Do the rest of the Raizadas know where she is coming from?

She has already lost her heart to him. What is his side of the story? I am going to pester you for updates on this one. *Spammer alert* ! Bas!

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aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

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that day 28 yrs old Arnav singh Raizada won over mind, soul and body of 13 yrs old Khushi Kumari Gupta ! - this line brought me out of my reveire.. Seeing the happenings from Khushi's eyes, overwhemled me too!

Now , knowing her age i guess i can connect more with her charecter, her reactions and her thoughts!

For her, Arnav would be her prince Charming , her night in Shining Armour, her saviour..

Infact even Lavanya and Amn would be no less than hero's for her!
They saved her from that low-life shyam, and have brought her to a palace she refused to even dream of!

She is 13, clearly she would have to attend school, may be pursue some extraa classes.. And she's a new teen! While Arnav's 2 yrs more than double her age at present.. Clearly more mature!

Sometimes.. I have this feeling, that things which come easy carry a heavy price, which one has to pay sooner or later!

The truth is overwhelming,
but reality remains blurred.
A sense of forbidding creeps in,
Thinking of the things that would have occured..

The past holds some secrets..
While future seems bright..

Is it just me..?
And everythings actuallly alright!..

I tried thinking a lot.. Shyam the bad guy, Arnav our hero.. How come he's dere for Khushi after 1 year that she's orphaned or with Shyam uncle..? Devyani asked her to call her 'Nani'.. Hmmm zarur kucho raaz hai, inbestigation karega padi.. 😆

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

What the...is my first response after reading the chapter...she is 13...like really...all the while i was visualizing someone at least near 20...u r right...my questions increase after reading the update...not gonna ask any,coz I know i will get the answers in right time...really a nice update...so atleast my one guess became correct...they did save her from the hell...so Aman-Lavanya in relationship...good to see...and nani...actually thinking og nani is enough for someone to love her...and also seems like Arnav is not arrogant here...well waiting to see more...

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tina_1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Oopsi for d double comment

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daffodils06

@daffodils06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

u have got me totally hooked to this story...

A 28 year old Arnav Singh Raizada had just won mind, body, heart and soul of a 13 year old Khushi Kumari Gupta.

Now that is something that needs a lot of thinking..yes of course, this is one among all the other things ..like how does arnav know khushi..why did he take her to his house..y is nani happy to c her..y take so much risk for saving her...

And this arnav is so kind and caring...is it becoz of the age difference or is it becoz she is very important..

I will not guess..no I am not being lazy,the reason is simple..there is only one lazy and thatz u..jokes apart ..itz just that wen it comes to ur story..i totally suck at guessing...u surprise me every time..

Edited by daffodils06 - 12 years ago