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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Lovely update, I love the dialogues u use it perfectly describe the current situation lol
Sharon one was awesome and Rey one omg I'm blushing. I hope he meant it for real soon
Aww Khushi is too cute


Ohh Thank you so much😃😃
My first appreciation for the dialogues..😛😆
He'll mean it soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello friends.

I know I'm damn late in updating my FF's. But kya karu time hi nahi milta.

Please gussa mat karna.

I've tried writing a good update.

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Chapter Eight

Rey, Taani, Swayam and Sharon along with Khushi reach the fair. The place is full of amusement rides. Khushi spots a roller coaster for children and drags Rey along with her. The other three follow.

"Bhaiiya mujhe sabse pehle isme jana hai" said Khushi jumping up and down on her place.

"Ok. Chalo tumhe bithata hun" saying this Rey moves towards the ride.

"Khushi you surely want to go in this?" enquires Taani.

"Meri Khushi brave girl hai! Voh inn rides se nahi darti!" said Rey with pride.

"Sahi kaha bhaiyya" Khushi added.

"Mein toh just puch rahi thi. Khushi pakad ke baithna" instructed Taani.

Khushi sat in it and enjoyed a lot. She was shouting and screaming in glee while Rey was clicking her pictures. After it got over she came back to them.

"Aap log nahi baithoge?" Khushi asked them.

"Yeh chote kids ke liye hai. Hum isme nahi baith sakte" said Swayam.

"Haan but usme toh baith sakte ho" said Khushi pointing towards a bigger roller coaster which had many twists and turns.

"OMG! It's awesome!" exclaimed Sharon.

"Chalo lets go. Mein toh isme pakka jaunga" said Rey.

"Guys mein nahi aa rahi. Yaha Khushi ke saath bhi koi chahiye na" said Taani excusing herself.

"Australia ki rehne wali bandi ek chote se roller coaster se darr gayi. Naak katwa di Aussies ki!" said Rey and burst out laughing.

"Aisi baat nahi hai" said Taani with a shaky voice.

"Toh kaisi hai?" Rey snapped back.

"Ermm.." Taani thought for some good reason but failed.

"Offo Taani! Tumhe jhoot bolna bilkul nahi aata. So tum try bhi mat karo" said Rey.

"Rey, tum force kyun kar rahe ho. She doesn't want to come. Aur Taani tum yaha Khushi ke saath ruko. We'll be right back" said Sharon.

"Ok!" said Taani.

The trio moved towards the ride. Swayam and Sharon sat next to each other. Rey was alone. A beautiful girl came and sat next to him. He smirked on seeing her. Taani's eyes popped out seeing him smirk looking at the random girl.

"Mujhe na roller coaster se bohot darr lagta hai" said the girl starting a conversation.

"Why fear when Rey is here!" said Rey giving a sexy smirk.

"Humpe vo phrase perfect suit hoti hai 'Ray of light'. Tum Rey aur mein Roshni yaani light" she said trying to flirt with him.

"Lovely name Roshni! It suits you" he said winking at her.

The ride started. Roshni held his arms tightly to show that she feared. Out of habit Rey too flirted with her. Swayam and Sharon were sitting hand in hand forgetting about the world. Khushi was enjoying seeing everyone happy. But Taani, she was restless, no jealous! She only wished that she shouldn't have said that she was afraid.

After the ride ended, Swayam and Sharon came back to earth and came to where Taani was standing. Rey had a few talks with Roshni and then came near them.

"750! Today's count!" said Rey proudly pulling up his collars.

"Matlab?" asked Khushi confusingly.

"Sweety tumhe abhi yeh nahi samjhega. Tum choti ho" said Rey stroking her head.

"Rey, 750? Really? She wasn't even worth it!" said Taani.

"Rey, Taani sahi hai. She looked like a despo!" said Swayam.

"Tune usse kab dekha? Tu toh Sharon ke saath busy tha! Aur please words thode dhang ke use kar. Bachon pe bura asar hoga" said Rey closing Khushi's ears while Sharon blushed on his comment.

"Aur voh kaise chipak ke baithi thi. Mein hoti toh bilkul bhi nahi darti!" said Taani.

"Atcha? Then prove it!" said Rey and smirked.

"Prove what?" asked Taani.

"Prove that you won't feel afraid in it. Jao baitho toh maanu!" said Rey giving her a 'You can't do it look'.

"Sure!" snapped Taani and went and sat in one of the seats.

"Taani wait! Mein Mazak kar raha tha! Don't take me seriously!" said Rey trying to stop her but she didn't hear it.

"Rey, dude she is scared. Tumne kyun usse force kiya" said Sharon annoyed.

"Rey bhaiyya aapko Di ke saath baithna chahiye. Unhe darr lagta hai and aapne hi unhe jaane bola" said Khushi.

Rey hurried up and sat next to Taani. She looked at him and made an angry face.

"Yahan kyun aaye ho?" she asked.

"Agar tumhe darr laga toh tumhare saaath koi toh hona chahiye for protection!" he said.

"Koi jarurat nahi!" she snapped back.

By the time their argument was going on, the ride started. As soon as Taani realized this she held Rey hands tightly and closed her eyes shut. Rey kept his palm over hers.

"Taani mein yahi hun" he said in a soft and assuring tone.

Throughout the ride Taani held his hand and was screaming due to fear. Rey held her firmly with his arms encircled around her. When the ride ended and she recovered from the shock, she hug Rey as tightly as she could. Tears were flowing from her eyes. Rey sensed it and hugged her more tightly. Swayam, Sharon and Khushi rushed there on seeing Taani's condition.

"Taani I'm really sorry. Mera koi intention nahi tha. Tum mujhe itna seriously mat lo, half of the time I'm just kidding. I'm really sorry please don't cry" said Rey guilt visible in his voice.

"Rey tum poore pagal ho! Taani dear stop crying" said Sharon comforting Taani.

"Kya hum sab wapas ja sakte hai. Please?" asked Taani.

"Haan di but pehle you stop crying. Aap aise bilkul bhi atchi nahi lagi" said Khushi.

"Haan Taani, tum rote huye bilkul atchi nahi lagti. So sorry to make you cry" said Rey holding his ears.

"Decision toh meine hi liya that oh tum kyu sorry bol rahe ho? I feeling uneasy here" said Taani.

"Chalo chalte hai!" said Rey walking towards the parking area.

'While walking Taani was lost in her thoughts. Mein itni restless kyun ho rahi thi jab Rey uss ladki ke saath baitha tha! Was mom right? Am I.. no hows that possible! Hum toh abhi mile hai. But fir mein itni restless kyun thi? Aur mein Rey ko aise hug kyun kiya? Aaj tak kisi bhi ladke ko aise hug nahi kiya hai meine, then why Rey?' With all these thoughts she left the place.

"Guys mein toh batana hi bhool gaya! Kal mujhe and Sharon ko kuch kaam hai so we'll not be attending the morning rehearsals. Tum dono apni apni solo ki preparation chalu kar dena" said Swayam.

"Tum dono ko kaam?" asked Rey then realized something and said, "Atcha ok you two have fun!"

Rey drove them back home. After dinner Rey and Swayam were discussing the happenings of the day.

"Rey tumhe nahi lagta thoda jyada hua aaj Taani ke saath?" asked Swayam.

"Ya I know! But seriously meine intentionally nahi kiya. Actually knowing her behavior, mujhe voh sab nahi karna chahiye tha" said Rey.

"Bhai tu theek hai?" asked Swayam.

"Copy. Paste. Same question for you" said rey making a weird face.

"The Reyansh Singhania kisi ladki ke behavior ko observe kar raha hai! Shocking!" said Swayam and giggled.

"Very funny!" Rey snapped back.

"Got to go. Sharon calling. Good night bro" said Swayam and left from there.

Rey was sitting idly in his room and Swayam's words played back in his mind 'The Reyansh Singhania kisi ladki ke behavior ko observe kar raha hai'. He thought Swayam is right. This is odd. Aaj tak Mom, Sharon and now-a-days Khushi ke alava toh kisi aur ladki ke baare mein meine kabhi nahi socha. Then why now? He drifted his thought aside and went to sleep.

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Hope you all liked it.

Also sorry to those who might feel bad seeing VD's character beings portrayed totally opposite of what she is. It was necessary for the character here. Hope no one felt bad.

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Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awsm both taarey
Are confuse same as SS name lol
Luvly hope for some brave Taani thanks
For PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
taarey part superb
jealous taani
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
res😉
unres

it was just awesome😃

no words to describe ur awesome update😃

taarey😳
Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update :D
awe Tani was scared...
Hmm so both Tani and Rey are thinking!!
But I think Tani will realize first but I still want Rey to realize first!!
Update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Taani jealousy was awesome lol
Omg roller coasters are horrible
I'm so glad that Rey was there to comfort Taani and try and make her feel a little better
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved how protective Rey was of Taani, when she was scared on the Roller Coaster you should add a guy flirting with Taani, so that Rey could realize that he is starting to have feeling for her please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a great update !!
Taani scared of rides ! OMG !! 😆
But her jealousy was more fun to see ! 🤣
But Rey's joke didn't turn out that well !
I really hope they realize they are in Love Soon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww... it was such an ossom and a cute update!!!
taani jealous and accepted rey's challenge!
and thank god rey taani ke paas baitha...
and rey ke rehte hue taani ko darr lag raha tha...
agar nahi rehta toh??? oh my god!!!
and poor rey is confused now... finally!!!
loving this ff more and more...
update soon!!!

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