Virman FF- Mujhe pyaar ho gaya- Part 8+ Promo (Updated) - Page 68

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Hey guys... First of all kaan pakdke sorry 😛😉 Coz I know I am late...But I am so haaappyyy😊 Reason tho you know... YOU! You are indeed one of the reasons for my happiness... 82 to 96...that to for one part... I neva actually expected such wonderful responses from you guys... I am speechless...
Love you all! ❤️❤️
Soon the story is gonna reach the 100th page... 😊😛 Wouldnt have been possible without you guys! Thank you so much!
Now as the tradition of this story, this part is dedicated to Zainab di (Littles12)...
And as usual, this for all my eagerly waiting readers! 😉

PS. And pms are only sent to those members in the pm list!

Too much of talking na...😛 Lol... Heres the update... Hope you enjoy! 😊


Disclaimer: No portion of this story has been copied from any other story. And if you feel it resembles, then it is just the idea of the portion that is the same. The whole story is made by me. I dont like plagarism and hope no one copies my story as well as its purely my idea.

Recap: Manvi changes and then Virat wears his shirt, and they leave for college!

Chapter 7: Undefined Attraction 😉


Finally they reach the college. Jeevika comes running and hugs Manvi. J:(shouts while shaking manvi by her shoulders and crying) akele jaane ka itna shok tha kya? Hume se bata ke nahi jaa sakti. Tumhe pata hain jab yaha se missing the tho mujhe dar lag rahi thi...mujhe laga jaise ki meri dil meri mooh mein thi... Kisi ko apne saath leke nahi chal sakthi thi kya. Agar tum mere liye wait karti toh mein aati, ya phir virat the, viren the, sab log the...phir bhi tujhe akele jaani thi... Jab shweta ne bola ki tu gayi huwe 20 min already ho chuke hain toh mujhe kaisa laga...meri jaan jaa rahi thi... Pata nahi tum teekh ho ya... She couldnt say anymore. Viren comes and hugs her sideways.

M: diii... (crying) I am sorry...pata nahi tha ki meri yeh ek galti aapko itna dukh pahunchayegi...I am sorry...kaan pakdke sorry! Manvi says while catching her ears cutely.
J: chal...badi aayi maafi mangne...( hugs her) thank god! Tum teekh ho...(turns to Virat) thank you virat isse vapas laane ke liye .(to Manvi) vaise why did you become late?

Manvi looks at Virat and shakes her head right to left signalling him not to tell anything. Virat signals her ok with his eyes.

J:main kuch pooch rahi hoon...bata na..
M: voh...hmmm...voh...haan,pehlewala pharmacy band tha..,tho isliye mujhe doosre pharmacy mein jaani padi
J:ohh...ok..virat tumhe kaise pata tha manvi kaha thi?
V:voh...hmmm... Haan..voh maine dekha ki voh first pharmacy close tha. Tho mujhe laga ki manvi doosre pharmacy mein gayi hogi tho...
J:oh...ok...to ab rains band ho gayi hain tho hum ghar chalte hain...
V:aap donon ko drop karoon?
J:haan...chal manvi...


Jeevika, Manvi, Viren and Virat go to chaudhary nivas. The journey was a silent affair. No one talked to anyone. Manvi could still feel that tickling effect on her neck. She touched her neck and blushed. Virat kept looking at her through the mirror and saw her touching her neck and blushing. He smiled at this.
V: (to himself) why am i feeling so happy seeing the effect i have on her...ufff...i am indeed getting attracted to her. GOD... Kahi yeh...
M:(cuts off) Stoppp!
Virat applies break with a screeching sound.
V:chila kyun rahi hon?
M:kyonki meri ghar peeche hain!
V:huh...and looks out! Ohhh...he crossed her house while he was busy dreaming...
V:sorry... He goes back. Jeeman gets down. Viren goes out to tell goodnight to Jeevika.
M:thank you virat... Di se kuch bhi na kehne ke liye...varna bewaja tension lethe...
V:hmmm...you are welcome dedfutiya!
M:huh...chep! Bye!
Viren comes back and they bid good bye.


Jeeman enters the house.
Manvi goes in the front.
J:Manvi ruk... Manvi stops and turns
M:kya hua di?
J:toone top ulta kyun pehni hain? Yeh tag saamne kaise aaya?
M: voh shirt se change karne ke baad ulta pehni hogi... Vaise bhi kuch dikhayi nahi de rahi thi dim light ki vajah se... Says manvi absent minded.
J:shirt? Kiska shirt? Konsa shirt?
M:(to herself) oh no...ab kya karoon...mein kitni idiot hoon...ab kya batau?
J:kya hain?
M:voh...voh...hmmm...in between maine Kriti, meri friend ne ek shirt dhikhayi thi...hmmm...aur maine pehnke try kiya tha...uske baad ulta pehna hoga...sh-shaayad!

Jeevika looks at her with a frown. Manvi looks here and there except at Jeevika.
M:hmmm...mujhe neend aa rahi hain..
J:virat ki shirt tho nahi hain? With a questioning look.
Manvi stops on her way shocked. She slowly turns.
M:a-ap kkyyaa keh-keh rahe ho-on?
J:jo sach hain! Tujhe kya laga ki agar tum jhoot bologi tho main tumhari vishwas karogi?
Behen ho tumhari...khoon ki rishta tho nahi magar dil ki rishta tho hain hi... Bata kya huwa?
M:kuch nahi...aap kya ulta seedha bol rahe hon?
J:maine vahi kaha jo mujhe dhikayi de rahi hain...smiling...kahi tum virat se pyaar tho nahi karti?


This came like a big shock to Manvi.
M:PYAAR??yeh aap kya keh rahi hain?
J:sach bolo...kahi tum...hitting her shoulder with Manvi's and smiling.
M:nahi...di, main aur virat sirf dost hain...aur kuch nahi hain...main jaa rahi hoon!
J: (Shouts from behind) iske baare main zaroor sochna...tumhari pyaar tumhaari aankhon mein dhikhayi de rahi hain...smiling!

Manvi enters her room and shuts the door. She sits on the bed and remembers what Jeevika just now said... "kahi tum virat se pyaar tho nahi karti?...iske baare main zaroor sochna...tumhari pyaar tumhaari aankhon mein dhikhayi de rahi hain"
M:pyaar?? Voh bhi Virat se? Nahi main kisi se pyaar nahi karti.. Huh...kuch samaj main nahi aa rahi hain... And shuts her eyes irritated. Suddenly she hears someone speaking.
Sound 1: ismein samaj mein na aane ki kya baat hain?

She opens her eyes to see who it was and finds herself standing in front of her.

Sound 1: Aise kyun dekh rahe hon...main toh sirf yaha tumhe tumhari pyaar ki ehsaas karvane ke liye aayi hain. Tumhe sach mein Viraat se pyaar hain.
Manvi:kyaaa...sach mein mujhe Virat se pyaar hain? Smiling..
Sound 1: haan...nahi toh yeh feeling kya hain?
Suddenly she hears someone else speaking.
Sound 2: Mere infactuation...yeh koyi pyaar vyaar nahi hain.
She turns and sees herself standing in front of her.
Sound 2:yeh sirf tumhaari age ki problem hain...aur kuch nahi...
Sound 1:nahi...Maanvi...tujhe sach mein pyaar huwa hain... Manvi keeps looking at both of them not able to understand what her actual feeling were.
Sound 2:nahi manvi...yeh sirf ek attraction... Aur kuch nahi hain...pyaar tho hum kisi se itni kam samai mein nahi kar sakthi...
Sound 1: pyaar samai se nahi dil se hoti hain... Aur manvi, tumhari aankhon mein jaise jeevika di ne kaha pyaar dikhayi deti hain... Uss raat ki hi lelo...club mein virat ke aasu dekhar tumhari aankhon mein aasu kaise aayi? Kyun tumhe uske aasun dekhar bura laga? Kyun? Manvi looks at Manvi 1...
Sound 2: voh aasu isliye aayi kyonki manvi thoda sensitive hain...voh kisi ke dukh bardaash nahi kar sakthi...virat ya kisi ke bhi...
Now what Manvi 2 said, did make sense to her.. It could just be infactuation or a crush...

Sound 1: Manvi tum iski baat mat suno...tumhe sach mein pyaar huwa hain...
Sound 2:nahii..
Sound 1: phir tumhe uske paas rehne mein achcha kyun lagtha hain?
Sound 2: isliye kyonki voh ek ladki hain...as simple as that.. Manvi suno... You and Virat are best friends. Usse zyada nahi... Tum ek ladki hon..to zaahir si baat hain ki tumhe opposite gender se attraction hogi ... So chill and just remain a good friend to Virat...
Manvi: ab mujhe samaj mein aa rahi hain..yeh sab sirf meri age ki problem hain. Virat meri friend hain, best friend. Tho i surely am close to him...thoda attract bhi ho gayi hogi...hmmm...ab se i have to be careful...i want a pure friendship with Virat... I will indeed stay away a bit...


At vadhera house:

Virat was in his room thinking about what happened...
V:kya tha yeh sab...kyun mujhe aise humesha manvi ke paas aate hi, dil dhadkne lagta hain...kyun...why am I being so protective about Manvi... Hmmm...hahaha...tu itna kyun soch rahe hon? Tu uski best friend hain...to zaahur si baat hain... Hmmm...kahi yeh koyi aur attraction tho nahi?

They kept thinking about their relationship till the time sleep engulfed them. However they promised themselves that they would remain normal and best friends. Will they remain just best friends forever or...???


Next day morning...

After their daily dramas with their respective alarm clocks, Virman reached the college along with Virika. They greeted each other normally... While they moved in, they saw a huge crowd in front of the notice board.

V: (to Rahul who just passed by) waha kya ho raha hain? Log crowd kyun kar raha hain?
R:woh sarganjali ke final list is put up...jaake dekho...
M:list is put up? Mein dekhe aati hoon...
V,Vi &J: hum log bhi aa rahe hain...
M: toh chalo...

Manvi runs to the notice board and squeezes herself through the crowd and moves in. She looks through the list...

M:ho..our names are there for double dancing... Ufff... She turns to leave when suddenly she stops. Her eyes pop out. She turns back and looks at the list again.
M: OMG...hum donon ke naam duet singing mein kaise aaya?
She comes out of the crowd and is thinking hard who could have given their names, when suddenly she remembers...
"V: teekhe tum jao...mujhe toda information jana hain iss competition me baare mein.." M: kahi yeh...
V:(cuts off)haan maine hi kiya...
Manvi looks back and sees Virat.
M:tumne mere naam competition ke liye kyun diya hain?
V:voh kya haina..duet hi empty the...and i wanted to take part...tho i am with you in dance and you with me in singing...nice na..
M:what nice na... Punching his shoulders. I cannot take part in singing competition... V: You have to sweetheart...
M: Tumhe samajh mein kyun nahi aata...you will lose chep...
V: No bandariya...we will win... I have full faith on you!
M:tum tera faith apne paas hi rakho...virat samajne ki koshish karo... Mujhe music ke ABCD bhi nahi pata...fir kaise wi karogi?
V: as if maine dancing mein phd ki hain!
M: tum samaj nahi rahe hain...
V: tum samaj nahi rahe hain...
J: manvi jaana...its ok! Try, try, till you succeed!
V:thats the spirit bhaabhi...kuch seekho apni di se...
M:hello...meri spirit ki doubt mat karo... main manvi chaudhary hoon... Main kisi se darthi nahi hoon...Pointing her fingers at him.
V:joke of the year...says virat moving two fingers of both his hands up and down indicating in quotes!
M:truth of the year you fool!
V: how lame!
M: soo stoopid!
V:thank you... And leaves!
M:(running behind him) and you are most welcome!
V:losers do not have to take part...
M:but winners can na...so i am in!
V:great...
M:when will we do the practice?
V:will decide and tell...
M:how rude!
V:Bear it!
M:agggrrrhhh...

Virat smiles and Manvi follows him angrily to the class.


Class goes on well.
Trrriiinggg...
Prof: I forgot to tell you something important. There is an assignment coming up. Its a very simple one. But you will be doing in teams of 4 members and you will have to submit it 2mrw...
The teams were made based on the taking of chits.
Prof: Team one: Rahul, Shwetha, Shruthi, Megha
Team two: Tanya, Manvi...
M: f**k it!
Prof:...Karan and...
V:me please...
M:you please...pointing at Virat...
Prof:...Virat...
V&M: Yipooeee...
Karan and Tanya comes to Virman.
K: Manny...We both are gonna make a good team...
T:Virat... We are gonna make a better team...
Virman shook their head...
M:Karan and Tanya...we are all one team...so act as ONE TEAM!!
V:soo..why not we meet at my place at 4...what say?
M:sure...di and jiju will also be there...it will be fun!


" Sometimes closeness can take us far apart whereas sometimes distance can bring you closer-how ironical, isnt it?"- Is that the case with Virman? Stay tuned to know!

To be continued!

Really sorry if it was boring... It was indeed necessary to show what they think of their feelings for each other...

Please like and comment! PLEASE!!!😊😛
Sorry for the mistakes... Too busy! 😛
Will sent pms later...
Take care! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Tooo gud ,,,,,luved it ...soo dey r realising dere feelings 4 each other ...seems intersting ..virman in cute singing ...dammit coolll...till d comp plzz make dem realise dre feelings plzzz...continue soon dis time ...plzzz
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Originally posted by: Sweety_cool95

Tooo gud ,,,,,luved it ...soo dey r realising dere feelings 4 each other ...seems intersting ..virman in cute singing ...dammit coolll...till d comp plzz make dem realise dre feelings plzzz...continue soon dis time ...plzzz


Thank you so much!
Yes...hmmm...wait and watch! Not letting thd cat out of the bag! Lol!
This time I really doubt of updating soon...but will surely try! 😊
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Originally posted by: pritivirman

mndblwngg updt.. cont soon


Thank you so much!
Though I doubt, still will try updating soon! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ypdate ...
the confused and all that mixture of feelings well written ..
now the two devils with virman in one team its gonna be interesting ...
update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
liked both their feelings
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lujeyn9

superb!!!!!!!!!
loved it


Thank you so much! 😊
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Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

awesome ypdate ...
the confused and all that mixture of feelings well written ..
now the two devils with virman in one team its gonna be interesting ...
update sooon



Thank you so much!
Lol...lets see! 😛
Though I doubt, iwill try to update soon!😊

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