swaron OS by amit bhai on current situation

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sharon in room cryingg fater swayam went offf

after she sad chod dho and go

sharon cring badlyyy

y is dis happening with us

cant he understand me dat much

if i say leav he will leav me

cant he ask mee again...or talk to me abt dat

Pm- vrushi itna bhi character m mat gush yaar...and tune bina glacrine me itne aansu

Vrushi- pyaaz katne par ansu nikalne ka dard tum Kya jano director madam

Tannu- oye nautanki pyaaz wala idea mera tha

Vrushi - oye lambu...idea se Kya hota h implement to mene kiya na...tu to bahit has raha tha mujhe rota dekhkar

Pm- stop it both f u...always tom and jerry ban jate ho

Okk romantic Kaun continue karega

Tannu in mind - vrushi I can't tell u how terrible I feel

when u get sad or cry even for a show

I don't know wat this feeling is...one thing I m sure of that I can't c u in pain whether in real or reel

Pm- okk guys next scene...swayam is missing...Sharon dances her heart out she get asthma attack...and admitted to hospital

Bhart calls swayam and swayam rushes to hospital

Pm- light, sound, camera rolling, actiom

Gang - yaar sab pehle jaisa Ho gaya hum phir d3 ban gaue

And all coz of Rey

Rey - no guys its coz of u and most importantly r team captain swayam

Bt swayam Kaha h

Sharon do u know where he is

Sharon - reyanmsh sinhajnia how can I lmpw

Becoz of u I lost him...

All shocked to hear

She decides to leave for rh

She start dancing...simmi try to stop her bt no use

She then try to call swayam

Swayam ignored the call

Sharon meanwhile get asthma atgack

All run for her bt due to lack of oxygen she faints

Rey and gang member rushed to hospital

Swayam meanwhile think ing of their lovely moment...

I m sorry Sharon I know I hurt u and I don't deserve a girl like u

That's y I decide to leave Mumbai forevrr

He was in Mumbai only

Okies

In hospital

Doc- she got asthma attack and that too a serious one

Rey BT doc uska asthma to theek ho gaya tha na

Dox- yes bt due to tension and hypernes it again erupt

Doc- we r keeping her underr observation...

Simmi to rey...how do u know she has asthma...only me and swayam knows abt it

Rey - she told me

Everyone was shocked to know abt her asthma

All were worries as to how to help her

Simmi to Rey - bt how u know that she recovered

And how can asthma b heal

Rey - she said swayam had heal her asthma...

Simmi- yes swayam how can I forget...he is the one who can Make Sharon recover

All tries to call swayam bt no rply

Bharat also reached hospital along with amar

Kya hua guys...Sharon ko Kya ho gaya him..

Simmi- woh theek h...bt usse swayam ki zarurat h and swayam kisika cell nahi Utah raha h

Bharat- q uthaye woh kisika call...

All - matlab

Bharat- jab hum sab adi ke saath contract sign kar rahe the he stopped us bt humne nahi suni uski...rey tune to sabke saamne uski insult kardi

And aaj jab adi ka plan out ho gaya to sab sirf rey rey karcrahe ho

Swayam ko sab bhul gaye

All gang was feeling guilty of neglecting swayam yet once again

Bt right now their priority was Sharon health

Simmi- Bharat I know hum sabse galti ho gayi h bt Abhi Sharon ke liye we need to trace swayam

Bharat- mujhe Pata h swayam ke bare n

All- Kya...to usse bula na...

Rey - chal m chalta hu...

Bharat- rey wahi rukja...m khud usse bula lunga

Tujhe yeh natak karne ki zarurat nahi h

Bharat calls swayam and tell him all abt sharon

Pm- cut it

Pm- gud work Bharat...u have improved alot

And gang gud support

So aaj me liye itna hi...pack up

And vrushi pls APNA khayal rakhna

Vrushi thank her fr wishes and goes to pick up auto fr house

Tannu was waiting outside

He goes near vrushi and said--- a aye hate itni jabardast item akeli raat m...

Tannu- aaj to waiting ka maja aka jayega

Vrushi - tum jaise lafango ko m apni jootiyon m bhi na girne du...

Tannu- janeman hum to aapke liye kahi bhi gir jayengem...ek baar mauka to do

Vrushi- oye lmbu nauyanki band kar...aaj lagta h bus nahi aayegi

Tu mijhe drop karega

Tannu- tu bilkul sporty nahi h...saara maja kharab kar diya

Waise my bike is punctured...so I guess Hume paidal chalna padega

Vrushi - wow so romantic...

Tannu- huhh u said sumthng...vrushi--- nahi nahi kuxh nahi...chalo

They start walking... suddenly it started rain...

Both In no time get drenched

Both shared eye lock and start laughing...

Vrushi--- dekha m bet jeet gayi

Tannu--- nahi humari bet yeh nahi tgi

Vrushi--- lambu bet yahi thi... rain dance

Tannu--- haa to dance Kaha hia

Vrusji--- ab woh bhi m puchongi Kya...itni hot ladki baarish m bheegi hui...and u r standing like this...tu gay to nano h na

Tannu----- nahi I m normal man

Vrushi--+ so let's danxe

They switch on the radio on the mobile... song was playing... bheege honth tere

They started dancing a close dance...both were moving in sync like their body and soul are one

From nowhere...tannu kept his lips on vrushi lips

She was shocked first bt after realizing what happened...she started responding

Their tongue were moulding with each other in their mouth to win

Both were out of oxygen bt the feeling passion and love diint allow them to leave each other

Tannu has meanwhile lifted vrushi and moved to nearby cottage

They didn't break the kiss

After like eternity they break apart and liked in each other eyes...

Vrusji---- wat was tht

Tannu---- smirking...bet ki final condition...which means I wonn

Tannu---- no I didn't cheat...u irself responds for kiss

Vrushi---- no u bite on my lower lips whiz made me to open my mouth

Tannu---- admit it u were desperate to kiss me...u can't resist me kissing for 3 days

Vrushi--- tannu u r too much... who will believe u r shy

Tannu I m shy...bt when I m with u I feel very comfortable

Vrushi hugging tannu...I love u very much shaan

I love u too vrushi...

Tannu--- chal I'll drop u

Vrushi--- jaana jaruri h kya

Tannu--- nahi par phir I will not b sleeping

And tum he m sone nhi dunga

Vrushi ...u r such a shameless creature

Chalo kal shooting bhi h...and himara kal intense scene h

Hmmm

Next day

Pm- tannu vrushi r u guys ready

Yes palki

So action

Swayam was not in his senses...as soon as Bharat told him abt Sharon condition...he came running with teary eyes

He was blaming himself fr her condition

He reached near the floor and gang saw him

Rey comes forward bt Bharat and Lamar stop him

Swayam didn't glance at gang and reached in the room where Sharon was unconscious

He reached near her and just frozed seeing her

Swayam--- I m sorry Sharon... pls forgive me...I m stupid useless arrogant person

I didn't hear ur POV and judged u

I know u r angry on me...pls spat ur anger on me

Shout on me ...bt pls stand

Don't leave me again Sharon...I will not b able to survive without um..

U r my lifeline Sharon...don't leave me...sobbing...pls I beg u

Pls Sharon...

He was crying hysterically and her tears were dropping on Sharon hand

Swayam just fell on floor crying...whole gang was confused as y swayam is saying this stuff

" when sum one loves u truly and selflessly...then god also bow down in front of the love"

Sharon started to gain consciousness

Simmi saw this and rushed to call doctor

Meanwhile whole gang was confused sad and more than emotionally blank as in few hrs they have witness the experienced of life emotion in one go

Doctor came and check up sharon

Doc--- its a miracle... I haven't seen patient recovering so soon

Simmi-- yes doc its a miracle...miracle of love

Sharon started to getup...she saw swayam on floor crying hysterically and understand that he may b doubting himself for her condition

Simmi understand that both needed a exclusive time so she sum how convince gang to leave them...

Sharon--- swayam...

Pm- cut it...

Gud shot guys

Next scene after the break

Sharon was on the bed whereas swayam was standing near the corner with his head down...tear still rolling from his eyes

He was still blaming himself for Sharon condition

Sharon----- swayam

Swayam--- with his head down...I m sorry Sharon...I m really sorry...I know all this mess up happen just coz of me

I shld have not shouted on u...I shld have given u chance to give ur POV...bt I was so imvloved in myself that I forget that u too may have the reason fr such behaviour

Sorry for letting u down...

Swayam dropped on ground crying hysterically

He was asking for sorry again and again...

Sharon couldn't see the devastated swayam

She tries to stand up...bt due to weakness she was unable to stand

She sum how manage to stand up and went near swayam...and sat with swayam

She cupped his face and kiss both his eyes

I can't c my lover boy crying so much

This eyes meant to b have me only in them not this teared

So from now on...no more tears in this eyes...

She kisses his nose

This nose color shld b changed only on mention of my name and by me only...not coz of any stupid reason

So from now my lover boy shld b better aware abt this fact

She then kiss his both cheeks deeply

I know u might have try to slap u fr saying those words...

Dare u do again. ...this cheeks are my property

Only I can touch them...and this cheek doesn't need hands only lips are needed fr them

Then she kisses his forehead...

My majnu shld get fore lines in this place only when he is thinking of surprising me and not becoz of any tension...until we r together I promise no tension will come near u

Swayam finally raised his head to meet the most lovable site for him...his laila his siren his Sharon was luking in his eyes with so much love...

Finally the moment comes which they have waited for so long...their lips gonna touch each other ...they just came closer and closer...and then.

Pm----- cut it...well done...finally shot over

Next scene in college

So that's the end of my os

This OS is by Amit Bhai...

he has finally agreed to post it after many ppl requested himmm

pls share ur views here

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg amit u chupa rustam
Damn u write so bloody well

Hats off for bringing such a unique and fresh concept
Two in one haan its highly commendale how u managed to write vrushan Nd swaron
Its all fitted so perfectly

And vrushi called shan lambo hahaha that wS hallarious man
Rain dance and all was just so beautiful to read trust me i am immenly impressed
Kudos to u for such awesome os

I love how u showd bharath and swayam boned and how ray was presented hehehe
I loved the decription of that moment in the hospital where sharon kiss him everywhere and wiv each kiss she has some thing romantic to say to shan

This is really something new and for the first.time ever am reading vrushan/swaron os two in one
Great job done but plz be quick wiv next update cnt wait longer plz plz fast fast soon soom jaldi jaldi 😉
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awsum zabardast amazing
I luved it alooot
Wah swaron os ke saath vrushan os bhi free
Yeh toh 2 in 1 nikla wow
Amit bhai its seriously very awsum i luved it alooot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's awesome 👏
loved it
swaron and vrushan love story together 😳
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one amit bhaiyya---
although i dont like linking actors togrther like this in imaginary os---still enjoyable
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dam my like button is not working. .
Bhai amazing os..
Vrushan n swaron dono os sath wow yeh toh double dhamaka tha..
Simple cute n romantic. .
Really i was smiling n blushing all throughout..
Brilliantly written. .
Am glad u wrote one after a very long time..
Pls continue writing..

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u all for liking...

@angel...thank u for posting bt apne comment to DE...

@bebo...thank u glad u like it

@medha...I know many don't like real character story and I m too in the same zone bt my angel wanted this and I can't say no to her...

@Shilpa...thank u dear...I m glad u like it...I was afraid that may b no one will like it as it is lame...therefore I was not posting it...and yes it is gud to b back in writing...

@swathu...I know ur comment is not here BT just to inform u my next os on ur wish...swaron romance in jungle
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amit bhai agar yeh lame tha toh aap jab interesting likho ge toh woh kaisa hoga 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg !!!
wow amit bhai this was freaking awesome
amazing
but seriously yeh kisi bhi angle se lame nahi hain
i disagree

please do write more
and please can anyone PM this to me
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay just read it.
The os is amazing you should keep writing. is there more parts coming up ?
As I felt this one is too rushed. you should have made more parts of this os. as u know I am super greedy about swaron os 😆😆

Never the less Loved the way you showed their romance both onscreen and offscreen 😃

I saw u used lamar instead of amar😆 That was funny😆

I personally liked the vrushan romance part and that tannu ki cher khani wali lines.
keep writing😊 and next time please aur badha likna😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉😉
Edited by AninditaSwaRon - 12 years ago

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