EVERYTHING IS FAIR, WHEN LOVE IS WAR -ch19 - pg 84 - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!

extremely sorry dear, for the late reply
The update was awesome, amazing, superb
i have no words to describe it
u both have written it soo... beautifully⭐️
i just loved it🤗
well cmng for the update
the flashback was really nice
poor Veer got slapped 😲
Manyata, she still loves Uday
i Wonder, what relation does maya & veer share
i hate uday in ur story
i'm eagerly waiting for the next update
please continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_pooja

Hey! Hi😊.

extremely sorry dear, for the late reply
The update was awesome, amazing, superb Thank you 🤗.
i have no words to describe it
u both have written it soo... beautifully⭐️ THanks so much😳.
i just loved it🤗
well cmng for the update
the flashback was really nice
poor Veer got slapped 😲 Yep.
Manyata, she still loves Uday Yes , even after what he did to her!
i Wonder, what relation does maya & veer share Any guesses?
i hate uday in ur story Poor Uday.
i'm eagerly waiting for the next update
please continue soon In a while.

Thanks 4 the lovely comment 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER : 15 :

Uday walked into his home carrying his briefcase. He did not even acknowledge Arthi who was sitting there. He had forgotten his file and had come to get it. "Uday" arthi called from behind him. He got irritated. "What does she want?!! ", he thought. He turned and faced her, his face clearly showing his irritation :

"ya?"

A:Uday, do you remember the time during our marriage when you said you will love me always?

Uday did not remember, but then he said: "yes, so??"

A: and you told me, let us forget the past and start afresh, and you would never ever cheat me?

Oh god!!! what has gotten into her mind, thought uday, he was getting more irritated by the second.

U: yes, I must have said all that!

Arthi continued: you told me after marriage only me and our kids would be your first priority na?

Uday lost his cool, he shouted ...

U:IF YOU HAVE SOMETHING IN YOUR MIND, JUST SPIT IT OUT? OK? DON'T GO BEATING AROUND THE BUSH, I DON'T HAVE MUCH TIME .

Arthi who was keeping her cool all this time finally exploded ...

A: mr udayveer singh, YOU CHEATED ME, YOU CHEATED OUR FAMILY, HOW COULD YOU DO IT TO ME, THE MOTHER OF YOUR 2 KIDS? EH? I believed you more than my life, and what do I get? A husband who finds pleasure with young er girls?

Uday was dumbstruck, he felt like he was given a electric shock!

U: what!!!! what are you talking about ?

A: you know very well what I am talking. So this is it! I cant stay any longer in this home with you, I am leaving

It was then, he noticed the 3 suitcases that lay by her feet. A lot of questions where haunting him. HOW? WHEN? WHY?

U: Arthi, don't leave, please listen to me, it is just a misunderstanding. Please!! Atleast stay here for Tani!

A: ah!! So you remember your kid, thank goodness! Uday - I . Am. Not . Leaving. my. Daughter. Behind.(stressing each word) especially with HER FATHER. I am going to my parents home, don't ever come behind me, and don't ever come saying that you want to see Tani, because from this moment her father is DEAD.

U: Arthi!!! You cant do this to me, you cant take away MY daughter.

A: I can, and I will. I fear her safety if I stay here any longer. Good bye uday.

Saying this, she picked her bags and left. After some moments , Uday heard the car start and then drive away. He just sat on the sofa, his hands supporting his head, His world had crumbled around him! And the irony was ... he , himself ; dug his own grave!

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"Ya", Uday irritatedly answered his phone. "Daddy - it's me", came Tanisha's reply.

"Hey sweet girl , how are u ... where are u?"

"I'm at grand-dad's house with mommy. Mommy says we'll be staying here from now on ... why is she saying that? I want to stay with both of you , in OUR house", she sobbed.

" ... And I also want you here with me Tani."

"Did u guys fight?" , she asked. "Ummm , ya ... a teeny, tiny fight " , he confessed.

"Then tell mommy , you're sorry ... then we can come back home".

"Sure honey", Uday told but in fact was lying to the child. Their fight was no where TINY , neither would a simple SORRY , bring his family back home!

"Bye Daddy ... love you", she wished him happily.

"Good-night Sweety , Daddy loves you so much!

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Uday was having his second drink when the calling bell rung. "Was it arthi and tani?" His heart raced thinking that they were back. He rushed to open the door, only to find Jaggat outside. He felt depressed.

U: hi Jaggat, what brings you here?

J: I just came to ask you some questions, you know routine investigation. Since Akash's murder I never got the time!

U: come in ...

J: the house seems so silent and empty, where is Arthi and Tani?

Uday did not know what to say, but he said: They went to her parents home. tani wanted to see her grandparents (he managed)

J : I see ... so I just wanted to ask some questions regarding your college days.

U: ask whatever you want to know

J: Do u know any MANYATA?

Uday was shocked, how did he know about Manyata? What should he say? Maybe he should lie, yes! He would lie

U: I don't know her Jaggat, (he tried to look innocent)

J: let me refresh your memory, you and your 4 friends were involved in a case some 17 years ago. The charge was that all four of you raped Manyata and left her to die in the auditorium. However within a week after the case was filed it was withdrawn and you four were left free!

Uday gritted his teeth: what does THIS INCIDENT have to do with Akash's murder? And let me make myself clear, we never knew the girl, we were just framed, I swear I never ever did anything.

J: Uday!! Chill!! I just was trying to make a list of all the people who would want to kill you four. I never said that you all did it, did i?

U: ya you are right

J: so do you know where Manyata is now?

U: how would I know, I never saw her after that incident.

J: so can you tell me what really happened?

U: um, it was long time back, this girl was a gold digger and a big flirt and a sex addict. She tried to force herself on us, we never were such kind of guys who went behind girls, we all told her off, she then filled a case against us, because we never gave her what she wanted. God saved us, otherwise do you think we could walk free?

J: Hmmm, that's right, I should go now, thanks for spending your time with me.

U: no problem Jaggat. Good bye

As jaggat left uday , he smiled, uday , even after 17 years, I can see the guilt on your face, however hard you try to hid it. now I am sure you really did rape manyata. Humph... you know an awful lot Uday ...and yet u say u don't know any Manyata!

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Kut, kut kut kut ... the sound was so loud , that although it was coming from down-stairs ... Uday felt it was hammering on his head , whilst he was still in bed. He pulled the pillow over his head , but the torment continued. Someone was knocking on Uday's front door and was adamant about getting into his home today. In full aggression , Uday walked to the door and flung it open...

"Hi sir", Jai grinned flashing - not only her teeth , but other assets too!

"What do u want?" , Uday barked at her.

"I found out that you're staying ALONE now , so I thought ... you'll be needing someone to cook and clean ... and keep house for you!"

Before Uday understood her words , she moved pass him and made herself comfortable inside. "Shall I make breakfast for you?" , she quickly took out an apron from her bag and began tying it around her waist.

"Get out!" , Uday ordered and pointed to the door. "But ... but , you must be hungry", she flirted trying to push her upper torso onto him and Uday caught her double meaning dialogue when he noticed her lack of bodice.

"Jai , get out of my house ... I have a house-keeper, AND I'm NOT HUNGRY!" , he grabbed her arm and pulled her till they reached the door , where he pushed her out! "And 1 more thing Jai ... don't bother coming to the office , EVER AGAIN"

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Geez ... never thought I'd complete it tonight!

But I did 😆 ... now , kindly LIKE and comment before you'll leave!
Love ,
Andy + Navina😳.
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Edited by ...navina... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I think I am first to comment...😃

yupieee

Nice update as usual...👍🏼

Wanna know more about Manyata..

So Uday raped her!!!! 😲

OMG..😲

He should be hanged 😡

No mercy...😡

You know, if I am a vampire I would never drink this Uday's blood..he's sooo dirty...his blood will taste nasty 😡

Though some parts of my heart totally doesn't think he raped her(after all he's Uday hai na)!!!!

May be he only flirted with Manyata and then used her; Uday's friends might have raped her...and Uday didn't do anything to stop them and save her.. what a horrible person yaar...That crime also deserves hanging as well 😡

Ooops my wild guess again 🤓
Edited by panchaali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really nice update Andy and Navina.

So Manyata was raped by four of them,RIDICULOUS! And what's wrong with this bug named 'JAI'?

I really want Tani to get back her fathers love.

Loved the update. Do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey advina
finally i am commenting
as i am afraid i will not be able to comment again
this ss is awesome
the twist and turns are depicted in a very good way
raping a girl might be nothing for them
i do not know how the story may end
but i truly want no manveer here
instead i want uday DEAD
anyway i hope barfi jiji you dad gets a speedy recovery
bye andy jiji
hugss anni
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey andy the update was good bt i hv starting hating uday...
This is the first ff where i hate uday sooo much, i totally despise him, he is a bloody rapist...
I dnt knw hw can manyata leave that bastered without sending him to jail n hw cud she still love him...
Veer was right in murdering all four of dem,uday does nt hv shame...
A day back she saved him n luk at him blaming her for his sins...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hai again wounderful update.i hate uday.he doesnt deserve any love of a daughter.why does he want arathi and tani back as if he love them .he is a cheater.he has no humanity he is only cheap jerk who uses beautiful girls for his desires.he should be hang to death.devil!good to see arathi and tani back to her parents house.
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Posted: 11 years ago
FIRST I HATE UDAY I WANA TITE PUNCH ON HIS FACE HE IS A TRULY ASSOLE I MEAN APNE PE KOI BLAME NA AYE THATS Y USNE MANYTA KO PROSTITUTE BNA DIYA EVERY MAN ARE THE SAME ... 😡😡😡 SAALE KUTTE KAMINY HARMI KAHI KE HAA NHI THO
N THAT J GIVE A SLAP ON HER FACE 🤢

N AARTI OMG AARTI IS AWESOME SERIOUSLY KYA ... BOLA HAI👏👏 ... !!! MAZA AA GAYA !!! 😉😉

KOI INSAAN ITHNA KAMINA KESE HO SAKTA HAI UDAY ITHNA GIRA HUA KESE HO SAKTA HAI 😭😭😭
Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update andinas.
i am so happy dat arthi broke up wid uv.
no need to live wid such a person.
but i felt bad for tani.poor girl.
den jaggat is very near to truth.
but i dont think uv will force on manyata.
i loved d last part.it was needed for j.
enjoyed d chappy so much.
continue soon dearies.
Edited by ...anju... - 11 years ago

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