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Add few extra lines please. Please
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Moni where the hell is update''yeh dikh kyo nahi raha
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"Woh Pehla Ehsaas.."

PART 3
Geet too was going through the conflicting emotions, thinking whether to call him or not. She also wanted to talk to him, know a bit about him, his nature, his thoughts.. everything about him. But babaji, mein kaise call karun..unke paas bhi to mera number hoga naa, why can't he call me.. unhe thode na itni sharam aati hogi.. haina..!! she looked upwards cutely, hoping to get an answer to her doubts.. She sighed tucking her hair strands behind and thought to take a walk to calm her anxiety..
She walked slowly in her garden without slippers, feeling the soft wet grass under her feet.. lost in her thoughts when she was disturbed by her sister, who got a wonderful chance to tease her elder sis, to which geet couldn't help but smile, carrying on with her walk..
diii, aapko jiju kaise lage..aashi asked after sometime..
maine kaunsa unse baat ki hai geet sighed..
but apne unhe dekha to na, engagement me.. first impression to bataiye..
geet thought..first impression..bass unki aankhe hi to dekhi maine.. so much filled with warmth, admirance, so tender but with so much of sincerity.. she blushed, as she recollected the his intense gaze all over her, so deeply lost in her, never had she felt so beautiful before that day, never had she felt soo much complimented even with words..
his eyes expressed something, that may be difficult with words..
achcha wo chodo, aap batao how do you want jiju to be..she was very excited..
She was about to answer but aashi ran as mom called and geet resumed with her walk, still lost in thoughts.. what did she expect her husband to be like.. he should be smart and handsome.. that he is, haina babaji she smiled..
aur wo intelligent hone chaiye, aur good sense of humour aur unhe gussa bilkul nahi aana chaiye.. thik hai babajii.. looking upwards, nodding her head.. pointing her finger towards her babajii..
aur..umm.. aur wo mujhe bahut saara pyaar karen..bass..!! she twirled around fully opening her arms, overwhelmed with her own expectations and events in her life.

She came out of her trance as aashi came running towards, shouting something that wasn't audible clearly..
aaram se bacha..!! kya hua? geet asked
Aapke liye phone hai.. aashi flashed a wide smile..
isme itna khush hone wali kya baat hai.. geet thought.. kiska hai.. de mujhe..!!
kisi maan ka hai.. aashi said trying to be ignorant but laughed loudly looking at geet's shocked face, geet was breathless with the mention of that name, her heart churned with anticipation..

Aashi ran with the cell making her come out of her trance..She ran behind aashi to catch the cell from her but before she could, aashi took the call asking geet to be quiet..
Maan , who was waiting peacefully for the call to be taken ready with his intro, was surprised with the hustle-bustle at the other end..
hello..!! aashi said extra sweetly, giggling to herself looking at geet's worried face.. taking maan with another surprise as he was expecting her to be a little shy, after all it took him, him the Maan singh khurana an hour to gather the guts to call his fiancee.. umm hii.. he said hesitatingly..
hi jiju, kaise hain aap..aashi smirked at geet while maan let out a deep breath, knowing he wasn't talking to geet..
mein bilkul theek hun..aap bataiye..
hum bhi achche hain, waise aap puchna chahe to mein aapko bta deti hun, meri dii bhi bilkul theek hain.. she giggled, aashi.. geet warned her, moving a step ahead to take the cell
Maan smiled.. aapki dii ki kaun chinta kr rha hai, humne to aapse baat krne ke liye call kiya hai..
achcha jee..aashi laughed loudly, geet pouted.. aisii kya baatein kr rhe hain and took the cell from her, asking her to go with her eyes..

Aashi shouted out achcha, to meri dii chahti hain ki mein yhan se chali jaaun.. geet stared at aashi shocked, while she ran from there leaving her there to talk peacefully while maan laughed at her antics..

Geet who just then took the call was mesmerized with his laugh, she herself smiled..
Maan stopped noticing the silence other side,smiling he said, hii.. he spoke in his husky voice making her heart flutter..
Geet closed her eyes tightly, trying to answer him but it felt as if there was sudden loss of air, forcing to take a deep breath. He could hear her heart beat with the silence and very well understood her silence, which was his situation a few minutes ago.. geet just stood trying to voice out some words but just enjoying the silence between them, hearing their heart beats..
But he was desperate to hear her voice.. hii geet. he started simply, not to make her feel more conscious
hii.. she replied making his enthralled with her sweet yet soft and melodious voice.. both kept silent after that waiting for the other to speak, but none knew what to speak next..
woo..umm.. both started at the same time, stopped and then smiled at their cute stupidity..
But before they could talk, pari came to maan, for his approval over certain clothing design maan, ye design dekho..

Maan was startled with the sudden interruption, he looked at pari who was busy with the designs. He coughed..umm i'll talk to you later geet.. he said in his husky voice but softly trying not to gain pari's attention..
jee..she said sweetly, making him go flat with the "jee".. he smiled wider, his eyes sparkling with happiness and got busy with pari for the designs..

Geet smiled, though they didn't talked much but still it felt so beautiful, so pure, so serene, so awesome..She returned to her room making sure not to bump in aashi who would sure tease her as hell..

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Right now, it was a critical situation inside the khurana mansion, with father and son in a serious arguement over buisness issues..
They both were having different views about an importent project in khrana constructions.. While Raj was rooting for his experience of about decades, maan was completely confident about his thinking in the certain project..
maan, why can't u just understand.. its a very crucial project for KC and we can't try new ways and risk it.. u can take some other project
dad please, i have studied the whole situation related to this project and i'm sure this way it'll ne going to yield us very high profit...they argued for a while over the statics but none was ready to understand others view, while simran and pari were worried about the heated situation.

Simran tried to calm maan down..maan, try to understand beta..
Ma, dad isn't even trying to understand my view.. i've done quite many projects with KC, not as much experience as dad, but i do know what i'm doing is right or not..
Raj didn't even listen to him maan, but i can't risk this project.. it was kind of a dream project for dad..
Dad, i know but my views are really beneficial..raj sighed looking away from him.. okay, lets present it to the board members and our staff and i'll go along what they decide.. maan said hopefully..
they will say yes, even if its beneficial or not.. maan was shocked with raj's claim.. because you are the upcoming MD of KC, so no way the are going aginst you..

Dad, you are setting a question mark on my talent, you are saying as if i'm nothing without the khurana tag..raj looked away, though raj had no issues over maan'a talent, he knew maan can do wonders to the company.. but he wanted him to acquire experience before he goes for important projects,to get the MD's place because of his talent not because he is a khurana..

Maan was hurt with raj's silence.. so, you want me to prove that.. his voice shaking yet firm..
what are you going to prove, son..!! raj was firm on his stand..
That i'm everything even without the khurana tag.. maan said with complete self confidence..
Raj folded his hands over his chest, looking straight into his eyes trying to intimidate him.. really, you can make a mark in this harsh buisness world without the khurana tag.. his voice was confident but he forgot that maan was no less..
yess dad..!! without being related to the khuranas..

Okay, then prove it..!! stand yourself in the buisness world without khurana name and without khurana constructions..
Sure dad..!! they both shook hands sealing the deal..
Pari and simran looked horrified at them, what were they doing.. there is a marriage in the house after number of days, and what were they fighting over..
you are not living in khurana mansion during that time and neither will you ask help from anyone related to khuranas until you complete the challege.. you'll have to be all by yourself..okay..
hmm..yess.. maan started moving towards his room..
and ya another thing, your time will start after ten days and your wife will be your responsibility.. raj smiled..knowing this was the thing, that could waver his confidence..
definitely dad..maan though was confident about his talent, but how will he be able to talk to geet over this issue.. but in no way, he was backing for the challange.. he left for his room. He could hear simran and raj arguing over the issue till he closed the room's door..

He took his change and went for a shower to refresh himself. As he came out, he saw an annoyed Pari sitting on his bed..who stood up seeing him and glared at him..
dii.. aap bhi..!! you also think like dad.. he was quite shocked..
you idiot..!! did you even think before taking such a stupid decision..she was enraged
Stupid..!! really dii.. he reflected her expressions. mocking her..
Mr maan singh khurana, you are getting married in 10 days.. and you take such decisions without even thinking..
Dii, in dono ka kya connection hai..he knew what was she hinting at, but at the time he didn't had any answer to her question, not atleast till the time he doesn't talks to geet about this..
connection hai.. Mr. khurana.. stop taking all of your decision by yourself, its time you understand ki ab se tumhara koi bhi decision tumhara apna nahi hoga .. it will reflect on her life, your happiness, pain, challenges will be shared by her.. so..pari looked at him worriedly trying to show him other side of the coin..
don't worry dii.. i'll take care of it.. but the ques of which even he didn't have the answer was "how..??"
how was he going to talk to geet.. and what..??


Edited by moni6262 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

Moni where the hell is update''yeh dikh kyo nahi raha

sorry dii.. 😳
abhi post kr diya hai..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part
finally maan called geet but aashi pick up
maaneet small convo was cute
maan and maans dad arguement
Edited by preeti555 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally maan called geet and what a challenge lovely waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice parts dear loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update.

Maan finally calls Geet.
Aashi teasing Geet. That was funny.
Enjoyed Aashi Maan talks.
Geet n Maan small convo. It was sweet.

Maan n Raj fighting. Maan wants to
Make a mark in this world. Family against it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh cute parts 😊
what twist now raj is telling maan to prove himself just before his marriage 😲
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Awww maaneet first call so cute
Yo MSK i liked ur confidence but pari also right
waiting for next update

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