Virika SS:I'll stand by you! ~Thd II|Part 24 pg 67|11 Dec - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
😭 UPDTAE? 😭 PLEASE!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello buddies...Hope you all remember me! I am very sorry for the delay. My final year is eating me, on top of that my birthday then barun's bday, then exams..all the month i was held up. I would update in 2 days. Yes! The update would be in 2 days, and i promise this time, till the story completes i would update once a week, every saturday night update would come! Hope you accept me and my story! Sorry!

Thank you very much and very very sorry!😭😭

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Its ok Madhu. Ur back is all we want and cant wait till u update. Been missing ur story soo much have read it over and over again loads of time.
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Awee its okay babes..we understand!! just looking forward for the update, missed it so much <3 thanks for updating it even tho your busy..love ya <3
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Hello all...I am back with the update as promised..Please do read it and share your views as personally i feel i have lost the skill to write...This update is for all my loving readers who support me no matter what..especially my madamji..kays aka karina and my musketeer marzi!!
before going to the story..a quick recap as it has been sometime since i updated..


Recap: Jeevika bring viren out of jail with the help of barun and manorama, virika leave the house. jeevika is pregnant with two twins..her parents death anniversary comes and virika go to hrishikesh where jeevika shares her past with viren...

the rest continues...

Part 23

After finishing the chat, viren and jeevika started off to Chandigarh. Viren was driving and looked towards jeevika, she was fast asleep. He was worried as she doesn't sleep much, definitely not while they are on long drives, as she loves them. He took her phone, called her doctor.

The doctor spoke, "Hello jeevika how are you?"
Viren spoke, "Hello doctor, I am her husband"
Doctor-"Hello Mr. vadhera, whats the matter?"
V-"Who doctor, my wife just had food and she slept, I mean...its..her unsual timings..."
the doctor chuckled but controlled and spoke, "Mr. Vadhera, its okay, she must be tired.."
V-"TIRED?? Why?"
now the doctor couldn't stope herself from laughing,
She spoke, "Mr. Vadhera, I must say your wife is very lucky, coming to your question, well she is pregnant with twins, so of course she will get tired soon, make sure she has vitamins and good food and also please make sure she doesn't tire herself much"

Viren was not actually satisfied with the answer but he kept the phone, and was about to put the phone back in her purse, but he found jeevika awake and staring at him with tears in her eyes..

Viren was worried, he stopped the car to a side and asked, "jeevika are you okay? What happened?"
jeevika nodded, then viren asked, "Do you want anything? Why are you crying?"

j-"Virenji..aap kitni ache ho?"
V-"what?"
J-"Virenji, I was just asleep you called the doctor"
v-"woh..jeevika..." viren was looking here and there.
Jeevika cupped his face and kissed him on her cheek, viren was surprised with the gesture...and he spoke, "jeevika if you promise me you will give a kiss everytime I speak to the doctor, I will speak to her every one hour"
jeevika made an o' shaped face and spoke, "Virenji..dont think I will let you flirt with that doctor..every hour.."
V-"flirt and me? Jeevika!!"
j-"ha I wont allow..you are mine and mine alone"
Viren hugged her and said, "mrs. Viren Vadhera, you are mine too"

viren and jeevika continued their journey.

Barun wanted to meet viren for some suggestion in a case, so he went to his house, and found the door locked. So he called him up and jeevika lifted the call as viren was driving.

J-"hey barun! "
b-"Jeevika..wait..hold on..i thought I dialed viren's number"
J-"Arey..barun..yes...he is driving so I took the call"
B-"arey wah..where are you both?"
J-"we are returning from rishikesh barun..how are you and ma?"
B-"Rishikesh? Why?"
J-"who..aaj...my...parents death anniversary..."tears rolled down her eyes,
Barun was feeling guilty so he spoke, "I am sorry jeevika.."
j-"No barun..its okay"
B-"waise jeevika, I am angry at you.."
J-"why???"
B-"you called your parents as YOURS..arent they my parents? I thought you really considered me as your brother.."
Jeevika was overwhelmed listening to barun...she was unable to speak and was in tears...

So viren took the phone and switched on the speaker and spoke, "arey barun..what did you do? My wife is crying because of you.."
Barun knew jeevika became emotional so he spoke, "Oye viren..let me remind you, your wife is my sister..dont try to poke your nose between a brother and sister."

Jeevika laughed and viren was trying to show that he was hurt and angry.."wait barun..once you get married..even I will get a sister.."

They shared some lighter moments and viren said that he will meet him in the office in the evening. Viren and jeevika reached home and viren had some calls to do, jeevika was getting bored so she started to watch TV.. viren sat beside her and jeevika put her head on his shoulder and dozed off.. he thought..god jeevika one day you will become sleeping beauty!

Later in the evening, viren asked jeevika to take care and promised that he will be back soon, he lfet for baruns office. They were discussing some case when baruns friend called him up and asked him to come to a party.. barun agreed and both of them left.

In the evening

Barun was actually enjoying the party when he spotted the same girl by whom he was carried away in viren's party! He thought! Arey...she only comes to parties kya?

He went near her and asked her,

"Hey beautiful, can i have a dance with you?"

"Excuse me?"

"what is your name?"

"why should I say you?"
"Coz I love you!"

The girl was shocked beyond words, how could someone propose her like that.."Excuse you just saw me and you said I love you?"
"well I saw you few days back and trust me I was having hard time from them...well please tell me your name?"
"No.."
"Please.." he made a puppy face and the girl was actually spell bounded seeing how handsome he was..
"My name is Pashmeen.."
"Wow nice name..! "
"will you dance with me..please.."
"Umm...sure!"

Viren stopped at a place, made necessary arrangements and went home. He asked jeevika to get ready. She asked him why, he said that they are going for a marriage. Jeevika wore a wonderful red saree, and viren was in black suit. They were a perfect combination. They started off and stopped near a beautiful bungalow. Viren took her inside and jeevika sked about the wedding,

Viren asked her to stay silent for a while and took her to the master bed room

J-"Virenji why is the room decorated?"

V-"Jeevika, i guess room should be decorated while having...umm...suhag raat!"

J-"WHAT!!!" jeevika was very nervous...

Viren understood that and took her to the bed and made her sit down..he kneeled in front of her.. and spoke, "Jeevika I know our suhaag raat was spoiled because of me that is the reason I want to make it proper.."
J-"But virenji..now? I mean..."
Viren understood and spoke, "Its completely alright jeevika, I spoke to the doctor.."
Jeevika blushed though she was hell nervous..viren made her lie on the bed and started to dropping kisses on her jaw line and neck...

to be continued...

update as promised will be on next saturday or maximum sunday!

Please do share your views


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Madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago
res..
unres...

me first...
party time...
let me do my victory dance...😎


this update is damm sweet...
viren is indeed the most caring husband...
i luv him...
he called doc..awww...so sweet...
jeevika had tears in her eyes...
barun found tht girl...nd danced with her...
viren took jeevika with him...
fr suhagraat...eeekkkss... really beautiful update...
cont soon!!!!
cant wait...
Edited by millee18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing..awsome...brilliant..lovely
n cngrtss dear..
fab part
hard n gud job
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally an update. It was amazing loved Viren being concerned and phoning the doctor. U stopped at the wrong place so u have to update really quickly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Awww viren care alot for jeevika...
Loved the barun and viren's convo...
And the last part was fab,great,awesome...
Update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omfg James bond way a fabulous update it was👏
Viren called the doctor for suvh smal thing 😳
He's so cute :*
I love him <3
And finally barun also got a new gf ;D
Hehe
And the suhag raat 😳
Super adorable 😃
Continue Soon
N I miss u 😭

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