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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

thank u suku...i m happy..yup leaving this OS here...

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suku_07

@suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: rabzonedge
thank u suku...i m happy..yup leaving this OS here...

Continue it naa... I cant see a sad ending...

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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: suku_07

Continue it naa... I cant see a sad ending...

The story after this ll b very predictable...u wont njoi much...

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suku_07

@suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

The story after this ll b very predictable...u wont njoi much...

No... I enjoy your writing... you should write... 😉😛

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Beautiful OS Rabzi

Ashutosh's realization at the end brought tears to my eyes. It's true what they say "You never know the true value of what you have until you don't have it anymore".

You use of the hindi language is amazing. You have used pure hindi, which is very difficult, but have written the passage in such a way that it is not hard to understand.

I will be waiting anxiously for the next part.