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Hey people..
Sab ghussa.. Irritation.. Side main chodo and relax..
I think the title must be a bit confusing so let me clear it out..
This OS is based on the current situation of Swaron..
Ab 2 in 1 iss liye hai because maine same situation pe 2 alag OS likhe hai.. 😉
Ab dono similar hai ya different woh jaane ke liye toh dono padhne padenge 😆
So here is the first one

Shot 1

Sharon was sitting in her room.. Lost in her thoughts..

"Confused toh main hoon.. Tumhari life main meri ya mere feelings ki kya importance hai?"

"Main tumhari life main kuch hu bhi ya nahi?"

"Kahin aisa toh nahi na ke tumhe apne entertainment ke liye khilona or should I say toy-boy chahiye tha"

"Please Ms. Rai Prakash mujhe bata dijiye ki aapka mere se mann bhar gaya hai ya kuch aur time tak entertain kar hoga mujhe aapko?"

Sharon (immensely hurt): Really Swayam? Yeh sochte ho tum mere baare main? Yeh matlab nikala tumne mere feelings ka? How could you Swayam? How could you?

Just then she heard the doorbell ring.. Wiping her tears she moved ahead to open the door.. There stood Swayam.. Equally hurt and guilty.. When she saw him, new set of tears started flowing down her eyes.. In an attempt to hide them Sharon turned around and moved into the house..

Swayam was cursing himself for being so harsh with his lady.. He knew he had hurt her, that's why he was here.. He followed her into the house..

Both stood silent, trying hard to find their voice.. There was complete silence, Sharon's back facing him as she was trying hard to control her tears.. And Swayam just staring at her back trying to gauge how should he apologize..

Sharon: Kyun aaye ho yahan?.. Kya hua? Aur koi taunt maarna bhool gaye? Go ahead, I'm listening!

Swayam had expected this.. Though she was spitting out poison but he could sense the hurt behind them.. He hated himself for this.. He himself had never imagined, he would say something like this..

Swayam: Nahi Sharon! Woh.. Main.. Tumse sorry bolne aaya tha! I know maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya hai but I'm sorry for that!.. Main pata nahi tab kya soch raha tha.. Ghusse main tha.. Aur jis tarah se maine behave kiya uske liye mere paas koi justification nahi hai..

Sharon (looking at him): Phir kyun aaye ho? main hurt hu ya nahi yeh dekhne ke liye?

Swayam: Nahi Sharon tum mujhe galat samjh rahi ho..

Sharon: You know what Swayam mujhe toh lagta hai ke aaj tak main tumhe samjh hi nahi paayi..

Swayam (irritated): God Sharon why are you being so difficult.. Main bhi insaan hu yaar.. Mujhe bhi ghussa aata hai.. Main bhi hurt tha..

Sharon (shouting): Hurt the iss liye main tumse milne aayi thi.. Par tum.. Tumhe kya?!.. Bina kisiko bataye gayab ho gaye..

Swayam: Tumhe pata hai ke main kuch cheese khud sambhalna chahta hoon.. iss liye akele rehna chahta hu.. aur uss main..

Sharon: Tum itne selfish kaise ho sakte ho? Tumhe akele rehna tha.. Tum ghusse main the.. Par tumne ek baar bhi mere bare main socha?.. Tum kyun bhool gaye ke ab tumhare life se main bhi judi hui hoon.. Jo baat tumhe affect karti hai woh mujhe bhi karti hai.. Kyun sab baatein khud tak rakhna chahte ho?

Swayam: I'm sorry..

Sharon: Sorry! Yeah right! You know what Swayam I think you should leave..

Swayam: But..

Sharon (turning back): Just leave..

Swayam: Ok.. Fine..Jaane se pehle ek baat bolunga.. Harr relationship main compromises jaruri hote hai..Aur woh compromises dono ko karne padte hai.. par agar ek hi person continuous compromises karta hai toh.. uss person ke paas relation tod dene ke alawa koi option nahi bachta..

Sharon was shocked.. Had she just heard that from Swayam?.. Her Swayam?.. The person who loves her so much.. The person whom she loves so much?.. She just turned back to see if he was the same person who had waited for her for such a long time.. Who had said that he'll make her fall in love with him.. This time Sharon's anger knew no bounds.. He had said something she had never expected..

Sharon (angry): What did you just say?.. Kya kahan tumne?.. Relation tod dene ke alawa aur koi option nahi bachta.. haan?! Is that what you think? (pushing him backwards) how dare you?.. How dare you Mr. Swayam Shekhawat?.. Kya yahin tha tumhara pyaar?.. Yeh thi tumhari commitment?.. Pehle toh tum Rey se kehte ho ke dusron ke point of view se situations ko dekhna chahiye.. Par kya tumne ek baar bhi mere point of view cheeze dekhne ki koshish ki?

Swayam (irritated and in an attempt to stop her): Please Sharon..

Sharon (shouting): No Mr. Swayam Shekhawat ab main bolungi aur tum sunoge.. Rey ko maine humare fight ke bare main kuch nahi bataya tha.. I was the one who told him ke yeh Swayam aur mere beech ki baat hai toh usse interfere karne ki zarurat nahi hai.. Par tumne khud assume kar liya ke maine Rey ko sab bataya.. I guess you are forgetting Mr.Shekhawat par Rey ke saath humare problems share karne ke liye main tumse ghussa hui thi aur uss par humara argument bhi hua tha..

Swayam recalls their argument they had in the basketball court..

Sharon (turning her back): Jis din contracts mile the uss din bhi humari fight ho gayi thi.. Tum mujhse seedhe muh baat bhi nahi kar rahe the.. Toh ghusse main aa kar maine contract sign kar diya.. I know woh meri galti thi and I'm sorry for that.. Maine tumse yeh baat chupai par jis din hum camping ke liye gaye the wahan tum bahut khush the.. Maine tabhi tumhe yeh contract ki baat batake tumhara mood kharab nahi karna chahti thi iss liye maine socha ke college main aane ke baad bata dungi.. Main tumse woh baat nahi chupani chahiye thi.. I'm sorry..

Swayam (moving forward): Sharon..

Sharon (hurt and looking back at him): Par tumne kya kiya haan? Bina kisiko ko kuch bataye chale gaye?.. Ek baar bhi mere bare main nahi socha?.. Poori raat main tumhara intezaar karti rahi.. Aur tum?.. You think ke tumhari mere life main koi importance nahi hai? Really? (hitting him on his chest) How dare you? Tum aise soch bhi kaise sakte ho? How could you Swayam? How could you?

Sharon fell down on her knees sobbing.. Swayam's words were yet ringing in her ears.. Swayam knelt next to her..

Swayam: I'm sorry Sharon.. I really am.. Pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha! I'm sorry!

Sharon without second thoughts hugged him tightly.. Swayam returned the hug with equal intensity.. Their life had experienced a roller-coaster ride in these 48 hours.. Things had gone completely out of hand so much so that out of all the people Swayam was the one who spoke about a break-up.. Both feared losing each other.. This could be seen from the way they were hugging each other.. Sharon was continuously mumbling sorry while holding on to Swayam..

Swayam (creasing her hair): Sshhh.. Sharon bas! Stop crying please..

Swayam slowly broke the hug and looked at Sharon.. Her nose had gone tomato red and she was sniffing like a kid.. He smiled looking at the cuteness of his girlfriend..

Swayam: Pata hai abhi tum kitni cute lag rahi ho?!

Sharon's cheeks turned into a deeper shade of red.. Swayam got her to looked into his eyes by supporting her chin.. Both looked deep into each other's eyes and found immense love for one another.. He forwarded his hand and wiped her tears.. Sharon again saw the injured hand and held it..

Sharon: Kyun tumhe khud ko hurt karne main maza aata hai?

Swayam (apologetically): Woh.. Actually.. Woh pata hi nahi chala!

Sharon (sternly): Agar aaj ke baad khud ko iss tarah hurt kiya, toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga!

Swayam looked down and nodded like a 5-year old.. After the warning he got, he looked up at Sharon with cute babyish expression..

Swayam: I love you..

Sharon: I love you too..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shot 2

[Ok so I won't repeat the entire fight.. Jo upar dialogues hai usse repeat karne ki himmat nahi hai]

Swayam: Ok.. fine..Jaane se pehle ek baat bolunga.. Harr relationship main compromises jaruri hote hai..Aur woh compromises dono ko karne padte hai.. par agar ek hi person continuous compromises karta hai toh uss person ke paas relation tod dene ke alawa koi option nahi bachta..

Sharon was shocked.. Had she just heard that from Swayam?.. Her Swayam?.. The person who loves her so much.. The person whom she loved so much?.. She just turned back to see if he was the same person who had waited for her for such a long time.. Who had said that he'll make her fall in love with him..

Sharon (hurt): Kya tum yeh chahte ho?

Swayam (choking on his own voice): Circumstance aise ho..

Sharon (cutting him): Maine pucha kya tum yeh chahte ho?

Swayam (walking passed Sharon): Haan!

Sharon (control her tears): Fine then..

Swayam (turning to look at Sharon): Kya?

Sharon: Tumne mujhse kahan tha ke main bina kuch kahe jab main chahu tumhe chodke jaa sakti hu.. Aaj tumhe mujhe chodkar jaana hai toh maine bhi tumhe iss relationship main rehne ke liye force nahi karungi..

Swayam was just looking at her.. he was hurt as well as shocked.. He turned his back and walked out of there.. As soon as he left Sharon broke down.. She couldn't believe that Swayam has done this to her.. He was the one who had made her fall in love.. who had taught her the true meaning of love and today he was the who had misjudged her.. Who had ended up breaking their relation.. breaking her.. She also knew that he was equally hurt.. She could see it in his eyes.. She knew he loved her but he didn't trust her.. She herself had broken his trust.. She just needed a chance to explain.. a chance to apologize.. but instead he broke the relation?!.. Was it that easy?

On the other hand Swayam was endlessly walking on the abandon road.. Recollecting their fight.. the argument.. his baseless accusations.. her reply..

Swayam (in mind): Itna easy tha haan bolna?.. Itna easy tha break-up se agree karna?.. Humare beech kuch tha bhi ya nahi?.. I guess main sahi tha jab maine kahan ke tab tum khush thi par shayad baad main humare iss relationship se tum upset thi.. Just like the trail relationship.. Ok Sharon.. Break-up toh break-up!

Swayam immediately removed his phone and dialed a number..

Bharat: Aare Swayam tu kahan hai?

Swayam: Pata nahi.. Maine yahin bolne ke liye phone kiya tha ke main kuch dino ke liye bahar jaa raha hu.. Koi puche toh kuch mat batana.. Aur haan agar koi problem hui ya koi emergency ho toh mujhe call kar dena.. main sirf tera call uthaunga..

Bharat: Bhai ek lafda hai!

Swayam: Kya?

Bharat: Bhai woh.. Adi hai na uss ne Sharon ka bhi woh con.. con..

Swayam: Contract..

Bharat: Haan wohich.. Phad diya aur team idhar bahut tension main.. Tu aa na.. Teri zarurat hai..

Swayam: Kya?! Sharon ka contract cancel kar diya? (in mind) Ab yeh kaunsa naya game khel rahe hai Mr. Khurana? Sharon ka contract cancel kar diya par team ka nahi?

Bharat: Swayam!

Swayam (out of his thoughts): Uh.. Haan.. Aur tum logo ka contract?

Bharat: Nahi woh toh abhi tak uss Adi ke paas hai!

Swayam: Ok.. Theek hai main kal aa raha hu..

Bharat: Kal milte hai phir..

They both hang up.. Amar and Bharat both hi-5.. They just wanted Swayam to come to college because all knew he was hurt.. They just wanted to be there with him as his support.. Both ran to the rest of the team and told them about the phone conversation.. And all sighed in relief that Swayam was fine and was coming to college.. Simi was worried for Sharon.. She immediately messaged her about the cancellation of her contract.. Here Sharon thought that she should go to college so that she can atleast divert her mind a bit.. But she also knew it wasn't possible..

Next day in Rehearsal Hall..

Sharon was sitting resting her back on the huge mirror, lost in her own world.. She had come to the RH to dance out her agony but she just couldn't.. All the while she only thought of Swayam and just praying that he was fine.. Suddenly she heard someone calling out to her.. As she saw that person she stood up in her place..

Sharon (angry): Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Rey: Sharon woh..

Sharon (sarcastically): Oh I'm sorry I forgot.. The Reyaansh Singhania ko rehearsals karne honge.. I think I should leave.. (picking up her bag and about to leave)

Rey (standing in her way): Nahi Sharon main yahan tumse sorry..

Sharon: Apna self-respect ghar chodke aaye ho kya? Itni insult sehene ke baad bhi aur insult karvane aa gaye?

Rey: I'm sorry Sharon.. Maine jo kiya uske liye sorry is nothing.. But meri wajah se tumhare aur Swayam ke beech jo hua usse theek karna chahta hu..

Sharon (warning): Don't you dare! Swayam aur mere beech jo hua woh hum khud solve kar lenge.. Kisi outsider ki madat nahi chahiye.. Waise bhi tum humare relation ko jitna bigaad sakte the bigaad chuke.. (turning her back) Aaj tumhari wajah se Swayam mujhse itna dur chala gaya hai..

Rey (apologetically): I'm sor..

Sharon (cutting him): Swayam aur mujhe apna best friend kehta ho na?! (looking at him with anger blazing in her eyes) Toh yeh batao Mr.Best friend,ek stranger ko blindly trust kar liya aur apne best friend ko iss hadh tak judge kar liya that tum usse thapad maar diya.. You know what Mr. Reyaansh Singhania ek baar tumhe main Swayam aur mere beech misunderstandings create karvane ke liye forgive kar bhi du.. Par Swayam ko slap karne ke liye kabhi nahi!

Rey (guilty): I'm sorry Sharon.. Maine jo..

Sharon (calmly): Just leave Rey! Nahi sunni tumhari koi bhi baat.. Just leave.. Get out of here.. Tum yahan ruk kar sirf mera stress aur bada rahe ho.. So leave..

Due to the stress her throat went soar and her breath was heavy.. The uneasiness had surrounded her lungs.. she wasn't coughing but struggling for breath.. Rey moved forward to help her but she stopped him by putting up her hand.. She searched her bag but couldn't find it.. Rey was standing there dejectedly.. Sharon was struggling for breath and the weakness was not letting her stand.. She was on the verge of losing conscious..

Swayam was walking to the RH.. He had just come to college to let out all his misery through dance.. As he moved forward he saw Sharon panting for breath.. That was like an alarming moment.. He rushed to her avoiding Rey..

Swayam (panicking): Sharon.. Sharon..

He got her to sit and was fanning his hand for some air.. He searched his pockets but couldn't find the spare inhaler he had.. His fear knew no bounds.. He checked his bag but couldn't find it.. Swayam was cursing himself.. Lately Sharon was completely fine but still he would carry the inhaler as a safety measure.. And today was that one day when he had forgot to carry it as he was lost in his own world..

Swayam (scared): Sharon.. I'm sorry.. I'm sorry aaj mere paas woh spare inhaler nahi hai.. Please stay with me.. stay with me Sharon please..

Sharon's state was getting worse though it was a minor attack but still felt like a major one.. She clenched on his t-shirt and rested her head on his chest.. Swayam immediately wrapped his arm around her and was panicking.. He was about to pick her up and take her but she stopped him..

Sharon (breathing heavily): I.. I.. n..ee..d.. Y..O..U!

Swayam's face was teary.. he was hell scared.. He tightened his grip and started rubbing her back to get her to relax..

Swayam: I'm here.. Main hu tumhare saath!.. Please relax.. Stay with me Sharon..

Rey was just standing there looking at his best friends.. He had tears in his eyes.. He was cursing himself to blame his best friend and to question his relationship..

Slowly Sharon's breath was even and Swayam kept soothing her back.. He looked at her and saw her resting on his board chest.. She looked weak and her face pale with tear-stains..

Swayam (concern): Tum theek ho?

Sharon just nodded positively.. Swayam saw a bottle of water there and bent forward to take it..

Swayam (giving the bottle to Sharon): Yeh lo thoda paani pee lo..

Sharon opened her eyes and moved a bit backwards to drinking water.. The uneasiness had gone now and she felt much better now.. It just indicated that he was her medicine.. She looked at him whose face was covers with tears.. She moved forward to wipe them but he caught her hand..

Swayam (sternly): Subh ki medicines nahi li na?!

She looked down and nodded negatively..

Swayam: Kyun? Kyun khud ka dhyaan nahi rakh sakti? Kyun hamesha itna careless behave karti ho?

Sharon (still looking down): Sorry..

Swayam (forwarding his hand): Chalo.. I'll take you home.. You need to rest..

Sharon (looking at him): But Swayam mujhe tumse baat karni thi.. Woh kal..

Swayam (placing a finger on her lips): Sshh.. Abhi kuch nahi.. Baatein baad main bhi ho sakti hai.. Abhi ghar chalo!

Sharon agreed.. He helped her stand as she was too weak.. She taking support of his torso started walking when Rey moved forward..

Rey: I'll help..

Swayam (stopping him): Don't you dare touch her!

Sharon didn't even spare Rey a glance and they left from there..

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So how was it?

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Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
res
unres
it was amazing Tanvish di
loved it
the most think i liked was "apni self respect ghar chod k aae ho kya" 🤣
and swayam " Don't u dare touch her" 😎
Bechara rey mujhe uspe taras aa rha h ( yakin karo di main jhooth bol rahi hu🤣 )
and my swaron were as usual adorable 😳
show me inme se kuch bhi ho jaye but koi outsider interfere na kare 😡
Thanks for the pm😃
Edited by muskan108 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

my god tanvish
mind blowing
superb job yaar 👏👏
really amazing

the way you wrote both the OS's was fab !!!
loved it
but pure OS main mujhe rey pain taras aa raha tha..
i just hope show main yeh ho jaye
dont want a third person in b/w swaron

mind blowing job
proud of you
please do write more
and do PM me

PS. mujhe first hona tha 😭😭
i wanted to do my victory dance 😭😭
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres

super os loved it

both point of view
Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it ws jst superb tanvish...i luvd ot...poor rey pe bohot taras aa rha tha muje...
nw u beter continue soon...
n plss do pm me whn u update...
Edited by vrushaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i so want u to join those god damn creative...who are hell bent destroying their own beautiful creation...amazingly written OS dear...loved it ...loved it so much...thank u so much writing this 👏...u are such a realistic writer ..loved the flow in the story ...both situations were amazingly continued and the fact i loved the most is they didnt let any third person interfere between them
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice piece of work
Hope this also happens in d3 you should join the creative group
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear both the OS are out of the world😊😊😊 so soothing with ther pressure we are handling now😊😊 Thank u so much for writing them😊😊 keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both areee just awesomee dear👏👏
second one is the one i loved most😃

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