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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one...continue sooon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all d parts together nd loved it a lot...
bt m nt liking maan here ,waiting for next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
updating! 😊😉⭐️
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Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

updating! 😊😉⭐️

finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 5

Geet was shocked to hell. That person was no less. They both started jumping childishly and run into each others arms

Person- angel!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD! ANGEL!
Geet- AMYYY!

AMY- it has been 10 dam years.

Geet just started hitting him " just get out of my site. Gadha u just vanished from the school I just hate you.

Amy " lol you didn't changed even a bit. What you are married? Wearing sin door and this locket? OH MY GOD? Who is the unlucky man.?

Geet just said looked at the surroundings all of the people in the office were looking at them weirdly !

Geet- we are attracting unwanted attention!

Amy- lol my first day at office and I m famous *wink*

Geet- you will not change right?

Amy- ARMAN MALIK can never change angel.

Geet-(rolling eyes) right

Amy- I m coming at your place tonight.

Geet- I didn't invited you.!

Amy- I invited my self only

Geet- gadha. (Murmur)

Amy- I heard that

Geet- good for you!

Rest of the day was smooth for geet actually for the first time she had little fun in years. Amy was her childhood friend, they were together since nursery but when they passed high school 12th. Amy moved out to a metropolitan city to gain higher education. And they lost the touch.

Evening! ***

Geet has to rush quickly to pick her kids. She was getting late when Amy come and noticed and offers her a drive.

Geet- XYZ School!

Amy- school why? Oh please don't tell me man.!

Geet- drive fast yar. I am a mother.

Amy- in this age angel you are young for kids. I mean kids in school I can imagine one in crib but school?

Geet- shut up I m not young I m 27 approx.

Amy- your wish.

She reached school and picked Kajal and Jeh.

Amy- these are your kids?

Geet - off course.

Amy- names please?

Geet- Kajal and Jeh.

Amy- heya kids! Myself Amy

Kids and Amy got together quickly with each other they were behaving as they know each other since years. They reached get's house and geet started to cook. Kids were having gala time with Amy and Amy was no less. Amy was finding it odd that kids was not talking about their father and geet was also quiet. They all set for dinner. Finally Amy asked.

Where is your husband?

At his house Amy

That means?

I m a single mother

What the hell are you talking about? (Shouting)

kids please go inside!

Arman it's true. I am a single mother.

But why?

He is love with someone else so!

What the f**k?

Mind your language

Fine ! tel me the dam name of the person. I will kill him bare handedly

I don't want that. I am living my life peacefully I have job, I have a house to live in, I have a friend like you. And most importantly I have MY kids with me. I am happy.

But...

If you are my friend then don't even pick this topic anymore.

I cant believe this

Amy walks out leaving geet in tears.

After putting kids to sleep she took out a frame.

THEIR WEDDING PICTURE

Maan why you did that to me? Where I lacked as a wife? I did every thing what you like then why? What was my sin? The only sin I did was to born in middle class family that's it. The only sin I did was to love you beyond the limits of sanity!

What was my fault?

Geet slept after crying a lot due to exhaustion!

**************** KM*********

Maan was frustrated why this incompleteness in his life? Why this un satisfaction? He wanted something but didn't knew what?

May be he is missing HIS kids!

Geet I am coming to Dubai. And will take away MY kids. Just 2 days and I will be there, and will make your life hell.

************** next morning********

Geet eyes were sore due to crying and she was emotional very weak now. She thought she will have support in form of Amy but he also walked out she needed someone. Needed to share her pain but there was none.

After reaching office she started absorbing herself in work after a while Amy come.

Sorry I was shocked yar, I never thought that.

Hmm was it my mistake Amy?

No it wasn't that was his mistake that he left such a beauty!

I m not beautiful if I was Amy my Maan would have loved me that not woman.

He didn't deserve you. He didn't deserve a pure soul like you.

I don't know but I will live for my kids. Live with my kids. But I m SCALDED IN LOVE Amy! it hurts to think that my love is in love with some one else. i Loved him with all my heart. i gave him everything but he!?

Precap. ?

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Edited by sweetgirls1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved amy's bonding with geet
he is true friend
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update. Maan u really love ur kids. Kbi apne bacho ko time diya h kya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved geet armaan bonding
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow lovelyy ff read all parts in one go
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
loved amy n geet scene
awww poor geet feekling bad for her
omg maan gonna take his kids in 2dayz
waiting for next...cont soon

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