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Posted: 11 years ago
part 9
maansi slap amy i could not control my laughs dear secrate of amy and anneei wow party and maaneet first mitting wow ,how much maan trouble amy and party you brought hem in fairy style thanks thanks it is most dremy way of maaneet first meeting thanks wow hats off dear

part 10
can maan got that geet is his pari nain geet also attract to him but that girl ruined all this poor dadi fainted because of maan and his dad
anniee handle msk in good manner good update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you very much for awesome story, enjoyed reading every part.

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sad that i have to wait for the next update but waiting with a big smile😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.Me happy that maan came to know about that GK is geet .Maan hasnt got the details of Geet's father.
when he gets that he will rescue Geet from this evil witch Sheela.
poor Geet.wait for next part.thanks a lot for pm🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago


ADHOORI ZINDAGI




Banner credits goes to my drakulla aks aka "kingof me"
arey yaar tuje thanku wanku nahi kahogi dont expect that😆


Banner credits goes to my praff aks aka "reachsky 2011"
thanks u sooo much praff


Thanks guys for waiting for me this long really thanks I AM soo happy seeing comments my hard work was getting appreciation




REPLIES


@ GRILL 23
Geet is maan's pari or not is ur question well is was mystery
I wont say anything now enjoy baby the mystery ride
@ MAANSHI
Here you go masnee for you only
@ SWEETEST PARI
Hey cadburry why sheela doing this of course money only
Maan is designer but hiding it because of his past and his dad also
@AHITHI MAAN
Yes ur guess is right MG means maangeet only
@ desi girl 12
Hello ji welcome to you and ha read this if you really felt it deserves ur appreciation u urself was writer right so I am afraid sach kaho tho thanks for commenting in each part
@ NS KIRAN
Heey kiran ji I am waiting for ur comments maan was 5 yrs old so he remember few things not all and why geet don't know anything will be revealed soon
@ Ashakavyam
Welcome dear to my story tell me frankly did you like it or not
@ ShadiaKhurram
Welcome to you also
@ stephaniefer
Here you go I came up with update
@ San58
Haii buddy thanks for ur comments



@ all

Haii guys well sorry for late I have my reasons really very sorry kan pakad ke maafi manging well from now wll tru to give updates dialy
This part was necessary written after long time so don't know if you guys love it or not hoping soo


Clarifications
1) I said already mansee was not maaneet baby I expected all will be amazed to know that but I think all didn't payed much attention to that well who is manse is mystery
2) Arjun was maan's junoiur at school and plus 2 also maan believes in his hard work and arjun's soft nature made maan to give him such big responsibility
3) MG means maaangeet only it is passion for maan but for his family he did his MBA started KC London branch now leading it as no 1 now taken over KC india branch


PART 12

Kapoor mansion


In this rainy season sun was burning like lava SK and vid were in study room which have central AC giving pleasant feel but both were in heated conversation.

"What is this I told you no of times right I want geet at any cost. You told me you will send her to me then why the hell you again make her accept the deal as per your request I played along with you. She supposed to work with me right" shouted vid with frustration

But SK was calm very calm and silent like before storm will come she very well know how to deal with all especially with Vid
"Hotty calm down take this" said SK handling glass of hot drink to him (I don't know any brand name put your own fav name lol)
Signing big vid grab the glass from her harshly drank in one go "perfect" thought SK with smirk


"You know Vid how much popular khurana's were working with them was grabbing gold fish GK will get more popularity like you (SK st. you and popular she laughed at her words). Model of khurana's means it will contain many big ventures cosmetics, gold shops, fashion industry what not khurana's were involved in all most all businesses so it is for our sake only" said SK with deep thought revealing her cunning plan

"But how did you get this venture soo easily...?" asked vid with doubtful expression as he knows it is not at all easy process

SK was amazed still his brain working properly after that full dose

"That was my secret everything is possible for me hotty" said SK with pride in her voice but thought in her mind

"Geet beauty is the main cause hotty sees how much I can earn because of her she is charmer so credits go to her only"

"Ok as you say but at end geet have to be mine" said Vid with trembling voice as he already emptied the whole bottle

"In your dreams" whispered SK giving meaning full look to Vid but he already fainted because of over dose goes to a deep slumber.


Vid was highly obsessed with Geet he wanted her by his side in his arms sometimes even tried to touch her in intimated way but geet somewhat escaped from him due to servants at home due to crew on the sets each day each sec he was getting mad for her but by going opposite to SK he cont do anything she can destroy him he know her cruel mind very well. He is helping SK to get geet while SK playing safe game with him. He is very charmer girls will go insane for him he is very much popular because of his working he is son of top business magnet but it is not enough for SK she want more and more money so she is playing with him at same time Vid also not less he always planned something behind SK to know more about but always failed at end he decided to help SK for geet.



But this time he planned very big un knowingly SK getting into his trap he is more dangerous sheela know it very well still she is doing all this do destroy Vid's dad that was her top secret. Vid won't stand for any girl more than one night after getting pleasurable night he will throws girls out of his life no one knows about his dark life he has contacts with mafia also which is un known to vid's dad Anand Malhotra.
With maan busy meetings geet shoot the day came to an end but maan was not at peace same with geet maan because he is unable to forget what Adi asked him while geet for humiliation she got in the morning. People not left geet in peace even in lunch time they were continuously murmuring resulting geet to last her patience but she cont do anything to take all with silence to cry at her fate. For maan pari added fuel to his anger and helplessness in pretext of discussing for some deal she again test her luck, maan knows his effect on girls pari is very loyal employee also good at work but the hopes she is building in her heart for maan will break her he don't want to be cause of another person heart break. With most difficulty composing him he shoved pari out of his cabin but it is enough for her to bring tears in her eyes which again brake his little bit of patience he shouted at her. Maan was boiling with anger on his dad same time helpless for not getting any information about his pari he again wanted to go there palace where he celebrated his birthday it stuck him GK face came to his thoughts he decided to deal with this by himself called Arjun who is busy KF after setting everything he takes deep sigh of relief.


"So Miss.kapoor get ready for this game Maan Singh Khurana's game it will be fun" thought maan in his mind. All information he is getting about GK clearly saying she is not his pari but he don't want to obey his mind his heart saying don't left the hope even eyes will mislead people in his mind and heart battle he decided to obey his heart wishes deep in his mind he also wanted the same.

It was last day of shoot for geet in that film everyone were hoping to get success even few got emotional to left the set but for geet it all look like another drama like her all were just acting there is no emotions in her face can say in her life all her emotions were died long away. With heavy heart almost after sunset she makes her way to mansion it is not her home also she hated to take that SK name by her mouth but her maa is waiting for her she have to go to get some peaceful sleep at least. She is missing mansee also her chutki hoping to get her call with heavy heart she left to mansion. She don't want to know anything about deal for what SK was getting soo desperate any way SK will always think about money only so she was least interested to know anything about that all she have to do is to follow SK words.


KHURANA MANSION

"Yes ram we will meet soon everything will be done the way you are expecting it's my promise to you just leave all this to me ok Tc" saying soo Ranjith entered dadi maa's room cutting the call instantly

Dadi maa was resting on her rock chair while naina reading geeta he has habit of listening geeta whenever he gets time today also he entered room like always forgetting about their situation they were living he has something imp to talk with his maa that's why he forgot all things. Dadi instantly closed her eyes again rested back gesturing naina to continue reading who stopped seeing Ranjith there completely ignoring Ranjith seeing her reaction Ranjith got alarmed so he decided not to tell anything now it will worsen the situation he knows it. Naina was confused what to do she glanced at Ranjith he blinked his eyes she takes sign of relief resumed her work.
Ranjith kneeled down in front of his maa placing his head on her lap he sat on side by stool closed his eyes. Dadi heart instantly melted automatically her hand started muffling his hair naina giggled seeing this adorable scene. Ranjith also smiled slightly listening to naina's sweet giggle still closing his eyes knowing his mother heart but next sec his smile vanished as dadi left his hair closed her eyes to get hold on her tears and motherly love oozing out of her eyes.
"Maa bath karo mujse bathavo na aaj aniee tumne fir se bahut sataya na after her college aur aap ki bahu aap ko tang kiya kya isa hua tho bolo mujse mai nahi chodungi usko"
("mother talk to me tell me did aniee troubled you again today after her college and ur DIL did something not acceptable tell me if anything of that sort happened I won't leave them") asked Ranjith trying his best to be cool not to get hyper to ease the situation.



First he wonna takes situation in his hold then he can make his maa realize her mistake. But it his mistake not any others he was unable to take that can say not ready to do that. Naina admired her husband god knows after how many years he is talking normally monifying his maa he is looking cute but still the stubborn voice same cold look he is still Mr.Khurana thought naina.

"You don't need to do this beta leave me alone" said dadi maa unable to take it Naina got alarmed
"aap chaliye dekho time kitna hogaya dinner kha ke rest kijiye aaj ahram gaye na aap kya hogaya waha bathado humko"
("let's go see how time was it have your dinner and take rest you went to Ashram right what happen there tell me na") saying soo naina dragged him from there ignoring his glares.
"Meer where is Aniee" asked Dev sitting in the chair for dinner

"Don't you know she is burning like lava with angry don't know what happen" said Meer in low tone as much as possible not wanting to gain Ranjith's attention

"Yes I forgot that must say because of Arjun only when I met her in office she is boiling with anger" said dev putting morsel in his mouth

"I can guess that Arjun bhai when you will get some brains god help that poor pagal premy" murmured meer

"What did you say?" asked Dev suspiciously

"Nothing just nothing ha I am just saying I went to dad's office as he asked me to come there I wonna start working again with him so from tomorrow I am joining there" said meera

"Yes wifey ji as you wish no one were not against of ur wish from 1st day of marriage itself I told you join he needs you no need to ask me also" said Dev with smiling face

Meera wanted to hug him for his sweet nature she is falling for him more and more but stopped as they were in dining table she returned sweet smile to him. Meera knows about Arjun love for aniee but she don't know why he is stopping himself Aniee is still doing her studies so she kept num but decided when time came she will do what she supposed to do to make them unite. Meera always have soft corner for Arjun and from maan she knows how much maan likes Arjun and he is very hard worker getting place in maan's heart is not all simple thing being maan's junior arjun always behaved in his limits after having that much imp form maan also.
KHURANA HOSPITIAL


"How much time Amy I am tired let's go now" asked maan seeing Amy immense in files and continued

"BTW can I ask you one question?" asked maan irritating Amy

Amy gives him a look "if I would say no you will care"

"You are doctor or accountant from past half an hour you are eating this file what is it in this file"😆 maan grabbed the file from Amy and continued

"Oh so its manse file then I have to take a look" maan started reading file with at most concentration


Amy nodded head in disbelief when he called maan from his voice he guessed something was wrong at last at evening het got time without wasting a sec he reached KC met with Adi he is pleased to met such a humble person by using his tricks and friendly nature he came to know reason of maan's fuel mood, so with lots of drama he brought maan with him but due to Ritzy's urgent call both were in KH. Amy patted himself seeing maan normal mood but now cursed maan for his mood swings

With little disturbance in environment he glanced at maan but he is not there

"Ab janab kaha kho gaya" "now where he went?" thought Amy but some giggles around attracted him

"Pari laugh little bit loud you know your smile have 1000w current" saying maan again lifted manse throws her in air.

The whole room echoed with their smile Amy also smiled seeing maan laughing hole heartedly Kids of her age will get scared for maan's act throwing in air more over she is patient but she is enjoying with smile may be she knows maan will caught her at right time but still Ritzy was amazed to see this scene but listening another laugh of manse Ritzy also laughs out loudly seeing manse like that for first time. It attracted Amy Ritzy laugh was soo musical soothing his ears he get last in her for some time getting conscious with his piercing gaze Ritzy purposefully dropped file in her hands bringing Amy from his lala land averting his gaze Amy cursed himself for his stupid act.


"So Ritzy tell me how is my pari did she missed me?" asked maan taking mansee in his arms she rested her head on his chest comfortably seeing her cute antics maan smiled placed soft kiss on her chubby cheeks

"pari sir who is pari" asked Ritzy with confused face it clicked in maan's mind he himself didn't acknowledged it he is calling mansee as pari but instead of getting angry/sad or getting last in his pari's memories he smiled at mansee who is busy playing with phone

"Yes Ritzy she is my pari she was soo cute and beautiful just like angel from heaven so for me her name is pari is there any problem" asked maan with bossy tone scaring poor Ritzy seeing mansee his tension, anger, pain everything vanished

"Don't scare her ok you can do whatever you want now leave poor ritzy" said Amy to rescue her shocking Ritzy while maan gives him a meaning full look like "you are taking her side really?" To save himself from more embarrassment Amy changed the topic.

"Your pari is absolutely fine now come on move Ritzy take mansee to her room now its already late" saying Amy tries to take mansee away from maan but stopped remembering mansee's slap (lol). Maan was not ready to go away from his new found pari also making face he murmured "god help me"😆
"Now don't make faces lets go" said maan placing chocolate in mansee hand for which her face lit up she kissed on his cheeks making "ummaa" sound cutely in return maan placed peck on her forehead tries to give mansee to Ritzy but she is not ready as usual . Making thoughtful face she whispered in mansee ears "tomorrow we will have day out don't said this to anyone it is our little secret ok" for which manse cutely nodded her head like she gets his intention long but poor soul didn't understand but left him again placing kiss making "ummaa" sound but it is loud enough Ritzy heard that smiled at maan


"so shall we leave or you wonna give chocolates and kissy wissy to any one also" asked Amy with amused face but his whole concentration was on Ritzy only watching her with corner of his eyes both left from there.



"Idiot stupid monkey (add some more I don't know much galiyas silly me) what he thinking himself I hate him hate him soo much" busted out aniee after geet lifted the call taking deep breathe again started

"Now you tell me pari how can he enjoy all these he don't have any manners and in KF also he is enjoying with that model swetha flirting he ignored me pari"
Geet smiled at last listening to her chutki voice she is missing her badly not to forget mansee also but she cont listen mansee like aniee so she enjoyed her nonstop bak bak

Aniee was soo mad at Arjun 1st when he came to drop her at college after meeting maan her friends were drooling over him openly everyone knows him as famous designer he purposefully used that option to make aniee go away from him. After her lot of lot of pleas he takes her to the KF as aniee wanted to see shoot for his luck Swetha starts flirting with him he is enjoying aniee jealous avatar soo much but he wanted to be away from him he already did mistake by loving aniee he don't want do another one by breaking maan's trust on him.
"Talk something pari are you alright" asked Aniee with fearful voice

"Yes chutki I am very much fine BTW who is this Arjun I pity him he became your prey to day poor he" Said geet to add fuel only her chutki have the power to make her feel normal will make her talk
"Pari I am saying it don't take his side you are my friend ok he is duffer" said aniee like possessive friend making geet smile but something stuck in her mind
"chutki why you are thinking about him soo much he is your friend only right don't think much leave it all have dinner sleep well" said geet like warning


Being in Film industry she knows about boys well specially fashion world people from aniee talk she guessed Arjun was working with them she don't want her chutki to be trapped but what she don't know is not every one bad. She sees soo many cases boys using pleasure and throwing them on road without mercy crushes and love are the words geet don't know she is never attend her college. Listening geet stern voice aniee changed the topic she herself was not having answers for her questions the feel she is having right now was making her mad. Saying her about different things especially about maan they ended the call aniee forgot to tell her geet that she was the new model of KF.

With conscious pressure from aniee dadi also have her dinner about 11pm reached home without having anything straight away hit head bed removing his shoes tucking him in blanket naina also slept awaiting for new morning.


prev: PART 11 next. PART 13


soo ge ready for maaneet meetting

3079 words UFFO 😆 ALWAYS BIG UPDATES IT WAS UN INTENSIONAL HOPE YOU WILL LIKE THIS UPDATE

I written 70% of story yester day but writing after long time I stopped but this SWEETEST PARI was hellbent for update so here I am with update love you sooo much re

This part is for SWEETEST PARI cadburry see ur wish fulfilled
@ reachsky 2011
I know u are mad at me that's why stopped asking for updates sorry big sorry
@ IDUNNO and leher
Guys thanks for asking updates thanks for giving some brains to me also

dedicating this SS to trio

muskan di, aniee di and valli di

(dont judge the book by cover itself)

pooja


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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
still maans heart is able to recognise geet as his pari. Yeh sheela aur vid dono ki dono apne apne plans may lagey rahe hai.maansi and maan moments are heart touching.
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update... i like it this story very much
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
yr want maaneet scenes now
aise maza nai aata
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nice part
arjun loves anni
anni is J
lovely moments between maanse and maan

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wonderful update..feel very sad for geet..hope maan free her from the hell soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb one...
loved maan here...
thnks for the Pm...

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