YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread3*ch.52 page 141 - Page 60

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Posted: 12 years ago
Zaaine is too cute brilliant update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update from so long you continued your story and you met karan thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahhh u updated after meeting karan :D :D
the update shows how happy u r coz i fantastic! :D
continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
an update fr me ??
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thank u keeeniii ❤️

nd theres no need to tell u how good the upadte was :)
especially the swimming pool loool
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant updt
zaaine is too cute nd loves his mom sooo muchhhm...love him
viren is the best dad tht took care of zaaine sooo much
amazing updt
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cutie, sweetie n loving update
Enjoyed reading it
This proved tat zaaine loves his mom more than anything
Cute zaaine, love him like hell
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 44



After the beautiful walk in New York, the six friends and Zaaine decided to head back to the hotel. Zaaine was exhausted from all that walking. Not only walking, but playing with every occasional dog he saw as they walked. He would start playing with them and Jeevika and Viren would have to move him aside telling him he couldn't just stop in the middle and start playing with them whenever he felt like it. Back in the hotel, everyone headed to their rooms with Zaaine asleep on Jeevika.
j - "viren I want to get him a puppy"
v - "I do too, but its too much work"
j - "But Viren he gets so happy. I'd do anything to see him smiling"
v - "But we don't even have enough space in our condo where are we going to keep a dog"
j - "Well"
v - "Well what?"
j - "You forgot already?"
v - "Forgot what?" he said smiling
j - "Stop it! I know you remember"
v - "Remember what?" he said testing her out
j - "The new house you looked at and which I wasn't ready to move too"
v - "So you will make the move for Zaaine's happiness?"
j - "Only if you get my baby a puppy. If not we are staying in the condo"
v - "Thank you" he said kissing her forehead.
j - "I'm doing it for Zaaine and Zaaine only"
v - "And for my little angel that's going to come in a few months"
j - "You really think it will be an angel?"
v - "I know for sure it will be. We have so much to decide on now"
j - "How about you show me the house first"
v - "Okay come"

Viren turned on his macbook as he sat on the bed. Zaaine was sleeping in the center of Jeevika and Viren.

v - "So this is the front of the house"
j - "Not bad"
v - "And this is the master bedroom"
j - "Thats quite large don't you think"
v - "The larger the better. We will set up a huge tv and a couch and make it very cozy. And there's also a fireplace. So whenever its Friday night, we all can snuggle in our room and watch movies"
j - "That does sound quite exciting Viren"
v - "And then we have three bedrooms upstairs. One for Zaaine and one for our angel and the third one can be our office"
j - "And this room over here?" she said pointing to the screen.
v - "That will be the play room. So Zaaine and our daughter can spend time there and once they grow up we will transform it to a study area for them"
j - "You know, I think I want to move now?"
v - "Really?" he said quite ecstatic
j - "Yeah. New home and new memories. But this condo will always remain close to my heart"
v - "I know. Our first home as a couple, then as a married couple, and lastly as parents"
j - "Parents to the cutest 4 year old out there" she said kissing Zaaine's cheek.

Zaaine's eyes opened to see his mom and dad next to him.
v - "Took a nice nap Zaaine?"
z - "Yeah, but sleep more"
v - "After dinner"
z - "Mommy we go home please?"
j - "Why? you don't want to stay here more?"
z - "No. Me want to go home and wait for my sister. Me want friend to play with"
j - "She will come in a few months"
z - "Why so much time"
j - "Because she is too small right now. She needs to grow"
z - "She can grow with me. Me grow too"
j - "Yeah, but just give it a few months. You want to see your new room?"
z - "New room?"
j - "Yup in our new house"

Viren clicked on the picture and showed Zaaine what his room may look like.
z - "Mommy its so big"
j - "I know"
v - "There's a pool too in the backyard"
z - "daa me scared of water"
v - "You won't be anymore. I'll teach you how to swim"
z - "No me too scared"


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Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res!
Me first!

ThankGod i unresd my previous comment before u updated :P

Unres!

Starting with the cutest part ever : Zaaine playing with every dog ... And tgen Jeevika n Viren trying to pull him along ... Awww ... Like so so so so freaking cute! Loved it <3

Jeevika is the best mom ever!! (After mine :P) lol ... She wants to get zaaine a puppy and for his sons happiness she is even willing to shift in s nee home which she wasnt even ready for even on Viren's much persuasion!! Awww <3

Then i really loved that small part where Viren was kind if teasing jeevika like "Forgot what?" N "Remember what?" ... Too cute! <3

Coming to the house, m loving it as far as u have described it!! Big n Awesome! Perfect for a family of four snd then Viren is a mastermind!! His plan of warching movies ... Ah! Perfect! Who wouldnt say yes after that? Lol

So jeevs finally agreed and They showed it to zaaine too and virens happy! M happy :D
Zaaine's questions!!! Ufff!!! They crack me up all the time! He is just so innocent n cute and now jeevika and viren also know how to answer his never ending questions! <3

My poor baby is afraid of swimming! Awww ... But m sure his Da will teach him soon!
Cant wait to read about the fun they sre ging to have in their new house!!!
Update soon! Thats a common dialogue now :P

P.S : m gonna miss their old home too cuz it actually does have lots of memories attached and then i literally hav the perfect map of it in my mind ... Sachi but as u said new home means bew memories ... So m much more excited for the new one! :D

Lots of love!
Mirah :*
Edited by ElmWizard5015 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OH GOD keeni di u r an amazing writer sachii
n zaanieee awww he is really a cutie pis di n new house new memories well said
hahahahhaaha zaanie wants her sis to grow with him lmafao 🤣
hahahahaha i actually imagined it hahahahhahahha



LOVE
Jenny
Edited by JennyKryan - 11 years ago

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