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ElmWizard5017

@ElmWizard5017

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

Res!!

Yes I should brag about!!
U r gonna update after like weeks and m the first one!!
HUHUHUHU

Unres

Firstly i just woke up in the middle of the night do bear any insanity :P
Secondly, m commenting from iPod so the length might not be long :P
Honestly speaking i so wanted to torture u in the coments on all latest updates but ill save that for the next ones! I pity u :P

ZAAINE IS LOVE N DATS ALL I HAV TO SAY! <3
Bye!

Kiddin!
I love the mother-son bond ... Who doesnt?? He was waiting for jeevika and the way he waited looking back till the end was so effin cute and then jeevika cane n picked him up! Adorable <3

Bdw doesnt Viren gets jealous cuz Zaaine is nowadays always after jeevika instead of enjoying with his da like he used to?? :O
Wait!! I already got my answer! U dun need to do that for me :P Insane like i said :P
Sachi mein samajh aa gayi mujhe!!!

When is the baby girl coming??

Update soon!
Now Bye!
Mirah ;)

Edited by ElmWizard5015 - 12 years ago

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Charu

@-Charu-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#572

I'm not the first 😡

But I missed my Zaaine sooo much 😊

#unres

CHARUCRAZY YOU HAVE A NEW EMAIL A PRIVATE MESSAGE FROM KAYS94 HEARTBEAT UPDATE!!

Wait omggg are u serious?

What I read was true?

Miss Meanyy Karina Is gonna give me an update of Zaaine?

Hard to believe that she is but thats true 😛

Haha coming back,

I missed my zaaine so much 😭

And he no eat food 😭

Awww my poor baby wants his mother!!

I loved how he longed for his mother :')

This is one of the cutest update!!

Continue soon dude.

Before anything happens to Chavi 😆

Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago

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PEACE4Life

@PEACE4Life

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Well I'm the 4th person to comment 2nd to like ur chapter
But I wasn't first :( well anyway there's always a next time
Thank god u finally updated I was missing ur stories so much
I've read ur storie 5 times from the beginning
This was an amazing update as usual
Please update soon
I wanna know more about them moving
Don't update late it has to be soon ur stories r irresistible
Thanks for the pm

Edited by Silentreader324 - 12 years ago

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Madhu

@MADHU.BARUN

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Res

Thank God you finally updated

And this update is fab

Especially the ending of moving into a new house

I wish jeevika likes it

Loved it madamji

Thank you very much for the pm

Please write this time sooon 😛

Edited by MADHU.BARUN - 12 years ago

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Shaza (Atma My LifeHeart)

@Saba_Pari

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Firstly thank u sooo much for the updates sissy love u loads muaahhzz :-* <3
updates was superb fully filled with zainee's cuteness awww he was super cute just love how he love and care for her mom and he didn't ate his breakfast and wait for his mom that part was so sweet and jeevi came viren want to move to another house lets see if jeevi agree or not

Edited by Sabapari - 12 years ago

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Riddhi

@Riddhi_S

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

RES!!! 😃

#UNRES!!! 😃

FINALLY!!!! 😆 I Got A UPDATE!!! 😃 Waiting For The Other Two Now!! 😭 😃 How Much I Missed Zaaine, Riva & Veera!! 😛 😃

Coming To The Update! 😡 Very Short! 😆 Yet OUTSTANDING!! 😃

Every Single Bit! 😃 From Jeevika Wanting Her Own Space To Zaaine Being Stubborn And Worried For His Mom, Missing his Mom Dearly To Her Finally Coming To Zaaine! 😳 ❤️ Can This Update Get More Special And Amazing? 😃

I'm Sure You Would Have Done Something AWESOMEST Then This! 🤢 😃 😳 But I'm Still In Love With It!! ❤️

Zaaine Is Such A Darling!! 🤗 Awww...The Way He Never Fogets About His Sister!! 😳 And We All Here Know He's Gonna Be The Best Brother For A Baby Sister! 😳 ❤️ And That Little Munchkin Is Growing Up Now! Getting Matured! 😃 Worries About Everything, Understands Everything! 😳 I'm In Love With Him All Over Again!! 😳 😆 His Innocent Smile Is To Die For!! 😳 😃

Your Punishment For Short Update!! 😭 My Small Comment!! 😳

Now Get Started With The Other Two FF's Too!! 🤣 WFL & BIL! 😃 PLEASE!!!!! 😆

Edited by RiddhiTacker - 12 years ago

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Beautiful Update..Loved it..😊

Zaaine was so cute...

Loved how he waited for his mom n blamed Viren for Jeevika not coming down to eat...

Thanks for the PM...Continue soon..

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

res ❤️
Unres 😃

can't believe u updated ur story 😲
the update was as always amazing 👏

hehehehehe zaaine is sooo cutee and stubborn !!!
he refused his food just coz he was waiting for his mother awww he loves his mom soo much 😳

jeevika-zaaine's relation is beautiful and u always describe it brilliantly 😊

thanku for the pm and m waiting for the next part !!!!

Edited by -Latty- - 12 years ago

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--Iqra--

@--Iqra--

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

I really, really missed your updates Kays. They make my day so much better. Jeevika is unfortunately not having the best day. :/ I really hope she feels better. Zaine is THE most adorable child!! Loved, loved, loved it! Thank you! And thanks for the PM! :D

Edited by --Iqra-- - 12 years ago