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Manvi wearing her earing "tum kro to pyar. .aur men krun to pagalpan .Virat while locking the hook of her chain "to theek to keh rha hun , pagal to ho tum.." Manvi turnd & giv him an angry look.
Virat: i mean , aaj kal ye karwa chauth type stupid thnigs kon krta he ?
Manvi: kyun aaj kal koi kisi se pyar nhi krta?
Virat: krta hey jaan. is lye to keh rha hun , is sb ki kya zrurt he..?"
Manvi "men wart rakh chuki hun!"
Viren in his room turned jevika to face him "tum samajh kyun nhi rhi ho , tum pregnant ho , is halt men tumhara bhuka rehna theek nhi he , tumhe apni extra care krni chahey.."
Jevika annoyed "tum kitni baar pregnant ho chuke he ?"
Virat sigh to manvi in his room: "u r imposble."
Manvi proudly" I am"
jevika to viren"ab jaldi kro hme dehradun airport jana hey.."
Manvi excitedly to virat"God..m sure di would be so happy today..Viren jiju bhi naa..pehle nhi btaya..Kitne achhe din unhone humein surprise dia.. Dr. ne btaya hey k baby girl hey."
Virat "wow ,wraping his arms around her. mujhe bhi baby girl chahey!
Manvi slapped his hand which was around her waist..Nahi pehle hmara beta hoga..
Virat"mujhe grls achi lgti hen." Manvi narrow her eyes.
Virat: i mean baby girls , cute bilkul tumhare jesi.
Manvi: nhi mujhe to baby boy chahey.
Virat: mujhe pta he , it would be girl.
Manvi: no it would be boy first.. thats final.
Virat: ok wifey , cmng close to her.Pehle girl ,next time boy.Manvi push him: chlao.they went out in hall. after getng Vanshika's blessings they 4 lef in their car.
Virat noticed time in her wrist watch..yes plan was about to land..
Manvi was making plans wd jevika..But viren jumped in between "Aur bhi ache resorts hen , usi men kyun?
Manvi:Jiju wahan special party he "Karwa chauth special.."
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Virat:"whats wrong yar..hum log kiska wait kr rhey hein?"
Jeeman looked at eachother but remain silent..
Viren added "Kia baat hai?"
Jevika:"Bas 10 mints aur.."
Virat confused.."Hum pichhle half hour se airport je bahar kharey hein..nd still 10 mints more?"
Manvi just thn excitedly sigh.."Karan aa gaya..!"
Virat viren were confused..but shocked too "KARAN?"
Karan greet them..nd said "Sorry didis..Actually luggage late mila.."
Virat curiously "Tumhara yahan kya kaam hai?"
Manvi scold him "Kia hai virat..akela ghar mein bore ho rha tha..Achha hai experince hojayega..Atleast apni biwi ko wrath rakhne se rokega to nhi..She clearly taunt at him..but soon she added Wo Isne zid ki ke aana hai to mein mana nhi kar saki..Phir kya hua..!
Viren: oh to ye sb involve hen.
Jevika: yup, buht maza aayega.Aaj raat yhin stay kreinge.. surely tum log disappoint nhi hoge.
Manvi: lets go.
At the resort resturant, the place was echoed by their laughter.
Manvi excitedly "Dekha kitna bara event hai..Sab karwachauth celebrate krte hein..how beautiful.."
Virat shook his head "Madam for ur kind information..Different halls are booked for different events..Ye hall krwachauth party ke li nd look wahan kisi ki birthday party ho rhi hai..nd here K.K ki new album ka concert or uske sath kisi new News channel ki inaugration..or us taraf humari chhoti si meeting..
Jeeman mouth opened wide.."wt the hell..Aap logo ne yahan bhi meeting held kar li.."
Viren with a devil smile on his face.."To tum logo ko kya laga tha..?Hrishikesh chhor kar jo tum log shimla mein apna warth kholna chahte ho to us ke peechay ka reason kya humein pta nhi chalega?"
Virat "Ji wifies..Wahan nhi to yahan sahi..humne meeting bhi yhi rakhli..wt a beautiful place..!"
Manvi angrily"Ap log apni wives ko Ek din pura nhi dey sktey..yahan bhi kaam.."
Virat added"Bas thora sa kaam hai..just few mints.."
Viren to jevika"Baki time tumhara.."
Karan was looking here and there waiting foe someone may be..
Jevika stopped him"Achha bas theek hai..M feeling dizzy listening u.."
Virat:"Bhabi u shouldnt keep fast.."
Viren: mene to buht mana kya , bt phr bhi Jevika ne wart rkha. buht pyar krti he naa mujhse.Viren tried to buttering jevika..
Virat set a prank "acha, mujhe laga dietng kr rhi he."
Karan stopd them , plz yaar pta hai how much u couple love eachother... just then rats started dancng in their stomach bcoz of the food servd on next table.Karan patted his stomach: kitni delicous smell he.Virat & Viren luk wid watery mouth. Viren: buht tasty lag rha he.Jevika: bt tum log to nhi khao ge.
boys: KIUN?.b
Jevika:"Jab hum tumhare lie bhuke hein to tum bhi raho.."
Boys lukd eachother.
Karan.."Mein to single hun bhai..m going..M so hungryy ya.."
Viren: kyun hm kiuyn rkhe ge?
Manvi: kyun k aap log hum se utna hi pyar krte ho , jitna hm aap se krte hen.
Virat: pyar pyar hota he aur khana khana. i mean , tum log ne hmare lye wart rkha he. aur bukha rehne se hmari health khrab hui to tumhe bura lge ga naa ?They 3 ran 2 othr table, orderd food & start eating hungrily. while jeeman were watchng them open mouth.
Manvi angrily: 3 idiots.
Jevika: choro inhe, concert shuru hone wala he, hum change kr ke aate hen.
Gorgeous princesses land down stairs..
They planned to dont talk with them..
Virat smiled looked at his angel ..The person VirVir were talking to turned to greet their wives nd Most annoying for her it was "Mr.Maan singh Khurana"
His devil eyes filled wd lust scanned her from up to down..Viren introduce his wife bt added.."Abhi thori si naraaz hein but She loves me more thn any thing.."
Before Virat introduce her..She herself slipped his hand around his arm nd said "I'm Mrs.Manvi Virat Vadhera"
Maan taunt"Oho..Too bad..i can see how much u love ur hubby..But he held a meeting wd us instead of spending time with you.."
Virika karan nd others were also there but quite..
Manvi could clearly smell his jealousy thays why he was setting fire in their relationship..
But manvi humiliate her by her crisp slap of words "Tue..tue...tue..So sad Mr.Khurana I dont had any idea that u also hv crush on my husband..That i should be jealous by u being with my husband..Sorry but dostana was a movie nd aisa movies mein hota hai..Mere husband jahan bhi hon..mere hi rehte hein..or mein jahan kahin bhi hun..inki hi rehti hun.."
Maan became embarrass while others burst into laugh listening her reply..Virat also. couldnt control her laugh..
She went to Virat who was busy give a peck on virat's cheek nd said..meeting khatam kr ke jaldi aaiyega..m waiting.."
Maan give manvi an angry nd warned look and left..
Virika nd karen amazd..Jeeman left..
And Virat followed Maan wid Karan & Viren.
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Virat quickly got her pulling her arm nd stood her behing curtain & whisper to her: "I bet , mera chand tumhare chand se zyada khubsurt he. . .
Manvi blushed
Jevika came in between "Hum in se bat nhi kr rhe. kbhi apne ladle pti ko chor bhi dya kro.Maa Virat: dekha, tum logon ki stupidty ki waja se meri Manvi naraz hogai.
Viren: oye , khane ka idea tera bhi tha. aur sb se zyada khaya bhi tu ne he.
Virat: han jese aap to sirf sung(smell) rhe they.
Karan: chill guyz.Gifts dekh kr un ka mood khud hi theek ho jayga. chlo fresh ho kr aate hen.
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Singers came 2 stage. light went dim.The atmosphere bcm perfctly suitd for romanitc date. Manvi seeing his handsm Virat in black suit. he automatcly start walkng towrds her like a magnet pullng him. but Viren & Karan grab his shoulder to stop him. Manvi brust out in laughter seeng his funny expression. Virat smild "its nt my fault dt i always fall for u again & again. boys sit on few tbles far from them.
Manvi decided: no need to worry, she hv to go on terrace wid othr women.
Singers started to sing..

Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha
Rahe na faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan...

Virat kept staring Manvi as the lyrics translated his feelings. .
Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh rahaRahe naa faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan..

Noticing his continuos stare producing buttrflies in her stomach.
Virat was admiring her each feature..
Tere qareeb main ho sakoon
De de tu apni razaa
Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main


Waiter give Manvi a note which Virat hv send 'i love you'
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish
Ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe
Manvi's heart started hammering inside her bossom..
(female) Tujh se mohabbat hui
Hai meri hai bas ye khata
Tujh se main door rahoon
Yeh mujh ko gawaara kahaan
Main tere saath mein hi rahoon
Chhodo ye saara jahaan..
Leaving Jevika , She marched to Virat nd sat beside her as viren left for jevika..
Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main
Hai dil ki ye khwaahishKi sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe woh ho ho...Ho ho...
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they hold each other hands tightly to mk sure they will nt let go eachother.
Ho ho wo ho... Ho ho wo...
Manvi kept her head on his shoulder..
Teri adaaon mein doob loon
Doob loon main tujhi mein
Ho..
jaaun tere itne qareeb
Ki main dikhoon ab tujhi mein
Paas bithaoon ye zulf sawaaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main.Hai dil ki ye khwaahish ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujheHo ho...
Virika eyelock broke by loud applause. host announcd to all couple, its time to headed towards terrace . which is fully decorated for much awaited occasion.
All couples headed towards terrace.
Manvi nd jevika bumped into jennifer ..they were shocked to see her there..
But jennifer made excuse that she came with her married doctor friend..
Virat checked his pocket "God, where is her mangalsutra" Manvi had forgot it in room while changing.
Virat saw it, and kept it in his pocket bt forgt to give her.
He took back steps down to search it.
Siddhart Malhotra was heading towards outside gate for leaving the half after his New News Channel inaugration has been done..He was going to pool to give newspapers journlist an interview, he felt something under his shoes.
'Mangalsutr'.Siddhart lukng at it confused just thnn Virat snatch it from his hand "Its mine"
Siddhart was shocked to see him there..Not Shocked because he was celebrity..But bcoz he is the husband of "His Manvi"
Siddhart uttered disheartedly:"To meine kb kaha , ye mera he . .Ab to sb kuch apka hai"
Virat realised his rude behviour:"Wo agar ye kho jata to meri wife ne sari dunya ko apne sar pr utha lena tha..Siddhart passed a sarcastic smile..he knows her nature also."Its all right. Virat turned back to stairs but Siddhart words stopd hm "kya is men sch men itni takat hoti he ke do logon ko janmon k lye sath kr deta he ?Aur phir koi unhein juda nhi kar skta.."
'Virat smiled & turned to him. Ignoring that his wifey is waitng: "Haan is men sach meni takat he. Its like do pyar krne walun k lye god ki blessings . ek aesi dori jo janmon k lye hme ek dusre k sath band deti he. . .apne hamsafar ka sath nibhane ke lye zndgi bhi de deti he.Zindgi adhori he jb tk koi use chahne wala na ho. .saying this he left Siddhart full of thoughts nd tears in her eyes..tears of regreat bd embarrasment...he cud hear the couples laughter from terrace.
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He took another sip of drink realzing how lonely he is. Many people were sitting around on table bt his heart is lonely. he wanted to complete his life his soul..But he had loat his Manvi by his own mistakes. . He wanted her . .He wanted Manvi..
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Like other women there. Manvi took the Seive and look at the beautiful moon.She moved it to Virat's handsome face, his deep brown eyes , his sharp features made her think. "how lucky she is" Virat gave her a flying kiss. Manvi blushed .After completing her pooja.He made her drink water and gv a spoon of kheer. she hugged him.a warm , passionate.Feeling the heat of his breath.She divert him. Manvi: mujhe bhuk lag rhi he.Virat slowly: mujhe bhi.
Manvi slapped his chest. DJ anouncd the couple get ready for a moon light dance. .he slipped his hand around her waist giving her goose bumps. While Manvi wrapped arms around his neck.. . .
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera
Forgetting the world around, they lost into echothr eyes.
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera
Virat pull her more closer , kiss her forehead. . .
Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa6
She rested her head on his chest. . .
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
They got closer while swinging on music..

Virat turned her that her back touchng his chest. . . .
Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera
Virat slipped his hand down and placed tightly on her bare stomach. Manvi closed hr eyes to calm buttrflies in her stomach.Virat start kissng her neck..
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi hi..
He moved his kisses to her shoulder.. . .
Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saarey ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

he turned her, taking advantage of dim moon light he cupped her face and widout waistng a sec his lips met her.. . .

They apart to took air , Virat pull her again "I Love u"
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
Manvi luking into his eyes: hun ?
Virat: I Love u Manvi"
Manvi : hun ?
She wanted to hear those wrds ever , again & again.
Virat creasng her lips:"I Love you".
Viren putting hand on eyes:"Is sb ke liye to sari rat pari hai. .pehle pet pooja hojaye"
They quickly aparted. Manvi went to Jevika & Jennifer and grab a plate.
Manvi:Tumhara mangalsutr kahan he?Manvi worriedly looked it here & there and went down for looking for it. Siddhart who was in his thought, surprisd to saw Manvi..Beside pool side..
Waiter came there nd give her a note..She read it.."M waiting for u Outside of the hall"
Manvi came out looking here nd there"Left side jaun ya right?She went to right then.. but no one was there..
She looked at a person was standing alone there..She came nd hugged him from behind.."Yahan kia kr rhe ho"
He heart was racing but it became hammering inside her bossom when he turned.."Sid...!!"
Siddhart: tum yahan ho?
Manvi thought"Nothing could be worst then it. Manvi quickly turned back to go..He was totaly drunk..Her presence added more fuel to the fire of his emotions ..He tried to held hr hand..And she tried to escape..Her foot turned nd she fell in his arms..She closed her eyes in tension..
Manvi was annoying by his touch..After all now she is wife of someone else..She escaped nd tried to leave..
Siddhart held her hand ..He started crying nd poured down his heart infront of her..
Sid"Mera beleive karo manvi..Mein bohat embarras hun..Jab insan dil se maafi maangey to Bhagwan bhi maaf kar deta hai..Manvi mujhse bohat bari ghalti hogae..Mein bohat pachta raha hun..Tumhei kya khoya..meine to apna sab kuch kho dia..He wiped his tears.Cupped her face but she took back steps..Sid added "Manvi 2 months ke baad ab meine New News channel start kia hai..New Magazine office..Ek new start..Manvi..Please mujhe masf krdo..Meri life mein wapis aajao..Hum phir se ek new start kreinge.."Manvi was blank"Hum sab kuch bhul jayengey..jo bhi hua..Mujhe to Bhagwan ne bhi ek mauqa dia hai..Tum mujhe bs ek mauqa de do..Ek aakhri mauqa..Mein sach keh raha hun..Mein tumse bohat pyaar krta hun..tumhein hmesha Khush rakhunga..Mera bs ek basr yakeen kar lo..Tum to mere dil ki har baat janti ho..Mujhe samajhti ho"He kept her hand on his heart.."
Manvi withdrew her hand with a jerk..
Manvi"Bas Mr.Malhotra..Bas..Mein tumhein aaj tak samajh hi to nhi saki..Aur ab samajhna bhi nhi chahti..sab khatam ho chuka hai..Aur behtar ye hai ke tum meri zindagi se nikal jao..Mein virat se bohat pyaar krti hun..Aur ab humein koi juda nhi kar sakta..Koi bhi nahin..Suna tumne..Dubaara mujhe apni shakal mat dikhana tum..nafrat krti hun mein tumse nafrat.."
Manvi felt a thundr inside her. she didnt knw the results could be so worst. she took back steps , start runinng back to stairs.
Tears rolld down her cheeks , she was feeling so cheap so ashamed.How could anyone think about her, about Virat ki Manvi. she just wanted to throw herself in Virat secure arms. her head start spining. she closed her eyes..
A pair of eye was watching her the same who burnt news paper..
Manvi's eyes opened feeling Virat around her.
Doctor:She is all right. people who were gathered around them, took a sigh of relif. Viren & Karan patted hs shouldr.
Virat: tumhe pta he naa , mujh se tumhari tkleef bardasht nhi hoti he bt phr bhi tum apna khyal nhi rakhti.Meine mana bhi kia tha warth rakhne se.. he wrapped his arms around her.
Manvi hold Virat coat tightly to make sure he is around her to protect her. . Manvi hugged Virat tightly & brust out in tears. Virat ran fingers in her hairs to calm her.
Virat: Manvi! kya hua? tum ro kyun rhi ho? plz chup ho jao. .Karan: tum aese danto ge to wo roy gi bhi nhi.Virat pull out her from embrace ,cupped hr face : "Meine kb danta? he wiped her tears.
Jennifer:"She need rest."
Viren moved the people to get the way.
Virat carry her in arms & took her to their room.
He put her on bed. he gave place to Jennifer & Jevika for sittng but she hold Virat hand to stop hm.
Karan: hum jate hen tum log rest kro.
Virat orderd dinner 4 her. soon it arrived. All for went out aftre giving courage to Virat he locked the door.
Manvi was unable to think wt she should do..No she cant lose a Faithful nd lovable husband by telling him bitter truth..Her face was pale..Thinking about sid.. Virat for changing her mood "wow, itni delicious smell hey is ko dekh kr to mujhe dubara bhuk lag aai. . .his eyes fell on Manvi, who was sitting huggng her legs, deep lost in thoughts.Virat put the plate down went to her. He cupped her face , kiss her forehead:"Kisi ne kuch kaha he tum se?"
Manvi looked in Virat's eyes, which was full of concern, full of love.She wnted 2 pour out all the matter infront of him. bt she stopped, bcoz she clearly knew Virat Vadhera is not a man , who cud bare a stuff or digest like "Her wife's Horrible Past" Nd now in love wid his wife and again trying to propose her ..
Tears rolled down her cheeks on the thought "No i cant tell you..!" its nt that she has doubt on his love or trust infact that she is sure of his unlimited love means anger & possesiveness. & she has no any intention to test them.she quickly got up: "kuch nhi. she started removing her jewelry.Virat stood up: "koi baat to hey jo tumhe preshan kr rhi hai.Manvi turned her back: "Meine kaha na koi baat nhi he.Virat turned her to face himself "Mujhe sab pata hey"
Precap:"Shareing same bath tub nd shower *************"
Love u all..plz keep reading..Lubb u...leave ur precious comments..🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update thanks for pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi, thanks for such a beautiful update.
u r such a wonderful writer. i always read ur story non time but never commented . sorry for that.
as our show is ending. i m feeling very sad & alone. so. i hav decided to share my feling with you guys.

for this uodate, loved foresum & karan part. also u hav portrayed cgadacters very beautifully.
last, eagerly waiting for next romantic update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: under123

hi, thanks for such a beautiful update.
u r such a wonderful writer. i always read ur story non time but never commented . sorry for that.
as our show is ending. i m feeling very sad & alone. so. i hav decided to share my feling with you guys.

for this uodate, loved foresum & karan part. also u hav portrayed cgadacters very beautifully.
last, eagerly waiting for next romantic update 😳


Love u frnd..Most welcome dear..I'll love u as my new reader yar..Dont be sorry.. 😳
Thanx alot..Glad u like it 🤗
Please keep reading nd gving ur views..Please share ur feelings wd us 😛 We r goona miss Ehmmbh 😭
but we can discuss our virman virika here 😆
love u..thanx alot 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update especially d whole karwa chauth sequence
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u so much for accepting me so kind heartedly. & my name is kanika . i wll definetly be in touch with u guys thru this ehmmbh forum.
this is my request to all stories witters, pkease never stop to write ur ffs for virman as we cant expect our single day without surfing on this forum.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...luvly update...tat was just awsome...!!😃
hope manvi says evrthing and virat frgivs her sooonnn...😊
and the precap...ahem ahem...waiting...😛
cntinuuu sooonnn...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update ... the karwa chauth sequence was awesome, but I hope that Sid & Man Khurana don't cause any problem.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome..!!! Lovely Update..and its nice to read Mature Virat interms of handing his Wife's past...hope that wht it is reading the precap..Waiting for next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved their romance during karwachauth
hope sid doesn't come btw virman
thanks a lot for the pm
please continue soon

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