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Anvesha.

@Anvesha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Guys . I am Anvesha , lol co-incidence right 😆. Well discovering Maaneet relates to my name , i came across them through my name (Proud of it) . I badly wanna write something on them , i hope you guys support me <3

Waada Karo

Khusbo'n Ki Tarha Meri Har Saans Mein
Pyar Apna Basane Ka Waada Karo
Rang Jitne Tumhari Mohabbat Ke Hai
Mere Dil Mein Sajane Ka Waada Karo

Hai Tumhari Wafaon Pe Mujhko Yaqeen
Phir Bhi Dil Chata Hai Mere Dil Nasheen
Yunhi Meri Tasalli Ki Khatir Zara
Mujhko Apna Banane Ka Waada Karo

Jab Mohabbat Ka Iqrar Karte Ho Tum
Dharkano Mein Naya Rang Bharte Ho Tum
Barha Kar Chuke Ho Magar Aaj Phir
Mujhko Apna Banane Ka Waada Karo

Sirf Lafzon Se Iqraar Hota Nahin
Ik Janib Se Hi Pyar Hota Hai
Mai Tumhe Yaad Rakhne Ki Khaun Kasam
Tum Mujhko Na Bhulne Ka Waada Karo

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Anvesha.

@Anvesha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 1

As the dark night continous to spread , moon shining then ever and rain pouring insanely . The nature seems to be true friendly towards the girl who stood amidst the beautiful view , swirling around , her wet hair flowing freely , diamond like drops touching her diamond like face , her purity may give tough competition to even diamond too .

As the breeze blew , touching Geets soul , giving her a feeling of heaven .

She danced in rain along the big mansion , decorated like a bride for the reception party of Anwesha Kapoor and Arjun Kapoor .

Maan sat by in shed , boring his eyes into the angel that enjoyed in this heavenly rain , giving tough time to the natures beauty with her's .

Geet turned around , rain drops lining her form , music blasted from the mansion , who knew that the music gave an unknown touch to the preety moment .

She indicates Maan to come out but he moves his head in denial.

Yeh Saajish Hain Boondon Ki Koi Khwaahish Hain Chup Chup Si... (2)

She sang along and naughtily ask him to join her and dances around making cute gestures.

Dekho Na Dekho Na... (2)

She goes to him and asks him to see the tantilizing view and join her and again recieves a denial.

Hawa Kuchh Haule Haule Zubaan Se Kya Kuchh Bole

She nudges him and flash her eye lashes making baby faces and ask him to close the distance between them .

Kyon Duuri Hain Ab Darmayaan

She continous to pout and sing ,

Dekho Na Dekho Na... (2)

Maan laughs and join her , and she immediatly hugs him fron behind and tells him to dance with her but Maan makes a face and startet to turn to leave , Geet catches his arm.

Phir Na Hawayen Hogi Itani Besharam

She winks .

Phir Na Dag Mag Dag Mag Honge Yeh Kadam... ) (2)

And pulls Maan who comes forward and clashes her , Geet turns him around so that her front is touching his back .

Haa Saawan Yeh Seedha Nahi Khufia Bada

She sings making serious face and looks at the dark sky.

Kuchh Toh Baraste Hue Keh Raha

She imitates rain with her fingers and smiles cutely and suddenly dips him down and looses balance , falling under him .

Samjho Na... Samjho Na... (2)

She cutely pulls his collar and makes a baby face while singing , Maan laughs the way Geet is connecting lyrics to current situation .

Hawa Kuchh Haule Haule Zubaan Se Kya Kuchh Bole
Kyon Duuri Hain Ab Darmayaan
Dekho Na Dekho Na... (2)

Maan pulls her up and dances with her in rain , they dance their heart out , loosing their sanity , he picks her up , Geet opens her arm wide while Maan twirls her .

They intently look at each other , holding each other close , their hearts beating eroctically and the whethear playing with their senses .

It all makes a very breathtaking sceanerio as both looked in each other eyes , the moon shining on them and rain pouring its heart out.

Please Please if you guys like it , like and comment . I've great story in my kitty so if you guys give me a chance i'll be really happy . I'll continue after i recieve 7+ likes and 7+ comments <3

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Downhill

@Downhill

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

lovely start.. do cont soon

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Poem was too good! !

Character sketch to de deti! !

at least itne doubts to nahi aate!! 😳

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.Tulip.

@.Tulip.

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Posted: 12 years ago

dat ws a really cute romantic start of a story

luvd it

plz do continue

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Anvesha.

@Anvesha.

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

[B] Thanku for the response , i will give character sketch of main characters.

Maan Singh Khurana
Completing 2nd year of MBA and plans to reach for London . He is a jolly guy , can be highly aggressive or possessive , his belief is the thing which is his should not be looked by others . Has a girlfriend Sameera . Geet is his bestfriend since long . Belongs to a rich family . Loves his Dadi , can't go against her command

Geet Handa
She is an orphan with a potential to be an painter , she has no big dreams , she doesnt expect much from life after the death of her parents , being neglected by relatives breaked her confidence . She is a naive , bubbly girl . Has bestfriend Maan to whom she loves from her soul bcz he is the one who is actually now a source for her to live .

Rahul Singh
He is a kind hearted boy , he is the only one to whom Geet opens due to his warming personality , he treats Geet as his baby , he can never see her heart . Geret sometime enjoys his company which irritates Maan .

(Guys he is Yash , but i named him Rahul here)

Sameera Shroff

She is a black hearted person

(or kuch janna hai iske barey mein ? Well zarurat hai 😆 )

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miss_dreamy

@miss_dreamy

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice... dekho naa is one of my favourites too... continue soon

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