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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey all my exams are still going on but I took a short break to gift my friend a Manveer os I am sorry as neither can I mention the name nor the event if I do so than I will be eaten alive šŸ˜† without any further delay I would like to continue my os

MATWALLI
{LADY LOVE}



Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you was beyond my control

Her legs flew high above in the air , the sky was beneath her feet , with the force she felt she was racing with the winds , her smile rang in the forest as each time her anklet wet the water , her hands twirled in the air as she screamed her heart out , he loved that look on her face , she was so different from the age of other children, she was so innocent and such a free spirit , he loved spending time with her as being with her , he himself could always be what he himself is , no mask of cool dude , there was no need to smoke to impress her or either talk about branded clothes , with her he could eat chat by the roadside , steal guava from the orchard share all his sorrows , and suffering she was his perfect companion and his neighbor too they were like magnets inseparable , they were the bestest of friend as he pushed the swing higher and higher an excited ten year old manyata shouted to her twelve year old best friend uday in a childish way

higher uday i want to touch the clouds

manyata you have been swing for the past one hour my hand have started to pain now lets get back home

no uday please after some time five minutes more please

no manyata come down now we need to go

please see after all I am going tomorrow back to hostel than we can meet only after months please uday

he smiled as he pushed the swing even harder , this was her best method emotional blackmail , since a small age she was abandoned by her family and send off to hostel and whenever she had her holidays it was spend in the company of uday , he too requested his parents a couple of time to send him along manyata but his parents had their own principle and his mother scared getting her little boy bullied or ragged. Every time he thought of manyata departure his heart ached and ached but he was helpless and the just watched her leave with those eyes been wet by tears , he waved her bye and rushed along with the train till the platform came to an end aftermath went back to his home and broke into tears , he stayed gloomy and sad the entire time


time flew by things changed and so did people , in this many years there was a drastic change in manyata behavior , it was like a storm had hit her and complete taken her away from her ownself , during holidays she paid no heeds to him , she was too into her phone or with her hostel friends , his friends request went unanswered and his number was deleted , the simple innocence was bounded by heavy dark make up and clothes that hardly covered anything of her , if he ever came to talk to her she acted as if he did not even exits , even her parents could not figure this change in her behavior the sweet girl spoke in harsh tone with everyone , to her people around her had no importance , uday was broken into million pieces when he heard she loved someone , after that he distanced himself he did not come to her house , neither ever called her , he did not even show himself if she was to be near , his eyes burned each time he saw her with her lover , he knew she deserved better , he knew she deserved him but was complete lost in the battle of love he did not know what had changed but was sure that she was not the same manyata he ever knew , it was their Indian Certificated Secondary Examination [ ICSE] and , thing were normal with uday he indulged himself in his studies payed no heeds to anyone or anything around himself as he needed to go to the best school of the city , he no longer wanted to be struck in this same city and manyata had come on her winter leave of class 8 , on the Christmas eve when uday was indulge deep into his studies his parents had gone to visit some relative to exchange their greeting as he sat revising the sonar he mumbled to himself

sonar is used for sea navigation , it sends a vibration

with the last vibration there was a knock at the door which he could not ignore he went to open the door just to see a completely drenched manyata , she smelled of liqoir but from her clothes not her body , her clothes were shot and it stuck to her skin without any questioning he took her inside and she went to his bedroom and covered herself with his blanket as she sat there watching down the roads , he could get a glance of his old manyata , as without being moment delay he rushed her with a glass of water he sat beside her and looked at her face filled with confusion , tears rolled down her cheek , she was unable to held back her tears and he knew this was no time to pacify her he took her into his embrace and let her cry her heart out finally when she felt herself relieved she spoke

i am sorry uday

it is ok manyata

no uday i was so mean to you ...i acted so cold towards you i do not deserve a friend like you i am so sorry uday

it is ok manyata you was just under a trance not your fault

no indeed it is my fault i got influenced by my friends i forgot my self i forgot the person who was always be my side ... i started to do everything they say as i felt they cared for me and that Pritam I thought he loved me uday but he . today i went for Christmas party they all were drunk and so was Pritam he was forcing himself on me and when i shrugged him off out of frustration he and my friends poured down the entire drinks on me humiliated me there was no one to protect me everybody just laughed at me ...today as i splashed water on my face i could not recognize myself uday who is this ? definitely not the manyata you knew once !!

but indeed you are the same manyata and i can say so by this small pig nose

he said touching her nose as she smiled at him and asked

Uday will you help me to be the same girl again i was'

yes i will

things changed but only for the betterment , uday found his manyata back and her parents bought her with themselves after two years , they were never separated uday should drop her to school and pick her up too during his days on internship as a doctor , and manyata messaged his head during his head long working days , they spend their weekends together they were always together maybe with phone or something , time enrolled and now Uday had his own clinic in the city and also was a surgeon in one of the city biggest hospital as manyata was a practicing as an advocate bot loved each other but just did not confess it finally the time came when their parents approached with the relation with their approval in no time their marriage was fixed , it was their engagement day as she dressed in a pink sarri looking like a fairy descended down the steps leaving him completely shocked , some games were to be played before the engagement and they settled on antaksari after long they were into two teams team manyata and uday

UDAY


Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi
Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi
Mera Tujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi
Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
Maane Tu Ya Maane Na
Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi
Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

he sang pearcing his glance at her as she could understand that he revealed the words of his heart through the lyrics as she was mesmerized by his intense love

MANYATA

Kaho na kaho yeh aankhen bolti hain
O sanam o sanam, o mere sanam
Mohabbat ke safar mein yeh sahaara hai
Vafa ke saahilon ka yeh kinaara hai

Khwaabon mein tujhko sanwaara hai
Jazbon mein apne utaara hai
Meri yeh aankhen jidhar dekhe
Tera hi chehra nazaara hai

she too told the secrets of her heart thorugh the lyrics both were happy by this unique way of the proposal , that would be remembered by them forever and ever as it was uday turn

UDAY


Hey kash..
Kash yun hota..
Har shaam..
Sath tu hota..
Chup chap..
Dil na yun rota..
Har shaam..
Sath tu hota..

Guzara ho tere, bin guzara
Ab muskil hai lagta
Nazara ho tera, hi nazara
Ab har din hai lagta
.

manyata face was taken over by a sweet blush the opponent team declared their lost , uday too knew that manyata lost but she actually won her love after some months they were happily married and there love cherished each day and soon a little angle named ayaat came into their life . Then after they lived a happily ever after fairy tale life

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very cute os mona.
enjoyed reading it so much.
keep it up.
do write more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey!
awesome os dear
u have written it beautifully
specially the last part
when they proposed each other through lyrics
i just loved it


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS MonašŸ‘.Loved it!Favourite part was the Antakshari😳.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Mona
How u? 😊
Sooo sorry for the late reply
Amazing, superb, fantastic os šŸ‘
Seriously, truly loved it ā­ļø
Loved everything
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...anju...

very cute os mona.
enjoyed reading it so much.
keep it up.
do write more.


Thank you so much
I am glad that you appreciated it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari_pooja

hey!
awesome os dear
u have written it beautifully
specially the last part
when they proposed each other through lyrics
i just loved it



Thank you so much
I am glad that you appreciated it
Sometimes words are too less to describe the love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much

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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome OS MonašŸ‘.Loved it!Favourite part was the Antakshari😳.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Mona
How u? 😊
Sooo sorry for the late reply
Amazing, superb, fantastic os šŸ‘
Seriously, truly loved it ā­ļø
Loved everything
Thanks for the pm 😊


Thank you so much
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