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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely and sweet update ...
update soon add pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premlata

lovely and sweet update ...

update soon add pm me

thnx dear! yey anthr reader!!
thnx a ton hun n will update soon n pm u 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey people..ssup??😃 so im here wid d 3rd chapter!! yey!! lol 😆 n i knw im very late so im sorry bt i hve been very busy! sorry guys 😊
enjoy 😃

Chapter 3

*as Swayam n Aditya shikhawat leaves for offce, ShaAni leaves for collge..St.louise collge, one of d most prestigious collge in Mumbai..like any oder collges, d students have divided demselves among diffrnt cliques..they have the jocks or male athelets, popular or the cool group, Goths, Nerds/loner and druggies..Sharon rai prakash has always been in d popular group n Taani, being sharons bestfrend n d daughter of a successful business man, has always been sucked into d group involuntarily..taani knws dat people wud do anythng to be apart of d popular group n she shud b happy dat she is one of the cool kids, bt d fact is dat she has never felt dat she belonged wid d crowd..She hates d system of cliques n she dsnt see d point in groupism bt she has to admit dat bcoz of dis, she met shivam..Shivam Kapoor, one of d most popular jock in St.louise collge..wid his typical boy-next-door looks, killer smile and masculine body, evry girl dreams of being wid him..Taani feels so lucky to have him in her life n she always wondered why wud a guy like him go for a pamperd, crazy and immature girl like her*

St.louise collge- canteen

*as ShaAni entr d canteen, they were welcomed by their frends..Taani ws searching for shivam bt she cudnt find him anywhere..suddenly she saw him standing near d canteen counter, ordering sumthng..bt wat caught her eyes n made her blood boil ws d sight of a slim n s**tty girl standing rather closely wid him*

Taani(standing up n going towards shivam) - Tanya..😡

Sharon - wat?😲 Arrey taani..whre u going?😲

*taani reaches d canteen counter whre shivam ws..she holds his hands n could see Tanya retrvng back wid her annoyed face, leaving TaaVam alone*

Shivam- hey baby! Tum kab aayi?

Taani - kyu? Mujhe aur 5 min late aana chahye tha na..sorry I disturbed u n miss s**ty over dre😡

Shivam - oh god taanu..i ddnt mean dat..i ws just ordering a sandwhch wen Tanya came n askd abt my next football match..we were just talking baby..dnt u trust me?😳

Taani - ofc I trust u..its her dat I dnt trust..woh humesha tumhari picche padi rehti hai..i dnt like her😕

Shivam(pinching taanis cheeks) - oh god..ur so cute wen u get jealous!😆 Accha baba next time I will nt b so friendly wid her ok?

Taani - good..accha shivam u remmbr na kal kya hai?😳

Shivam - ofc..tmrrw is our football match against d St.vincent collge! We r so excited for dat..u cuming na baby?

Taani - shivam cn u nt thnk abt ur match for one minute n thnk abt us? 😡 Kal humara bhi special day hai!

Shivam - wat is it?😲 Oh shit..our 1 year annivrsry! Im so sorry baby..actlly I remembrd bt we were talking abt football matches so it slipped my mind..sorry sorry

Taani - hmm..yes its our frst annvrsry!😳 toh I hve thought of evrythng special dat we cn do tmrrw

Shivam - yes dats gr8..bt baby tmrrw I will b so busy wid practice n d match..i dnt thnk hum kuch kar paengge afternoon mein..so cn we celebrate aftr my match? It will b a double celebration 😃

Taani - u knw its nt possible shivam..my parents n bhai will never allow me to..

Shivam - yeah yeah..go out at night..bt taani cumon..we hve been tgthr for 1 year n we hve never gone out alone! humesha ya Sharon aati hai ya fir koi aur..aur raat ko ur parents never allow u to go out only..im sick n tired of only hvng lunches wid u woh bhi collge mein wid our frends..never alone! u dnt thnk u will b safe wid me?😕

Taani - esa nahi hai shivam..u knw hw my parents n brthr r..dey never allow me to go out alone..n I cn never tell abt u to dem..dey r gonna burry me n u alive if dey knew ki main yeh sab karti hoon collge mein🤢

Shivam - toh fine..dnt come kal raat n we wont celbrte our frst annvrsry den..u go n celebrte it wid Sharon n ur brthr

Taani - shivam pls dnt b mad..accha ok fine..i will ask my parents n bhai for permission bt dnt expect much😊

Shivam - really? U will ask? Thnx baby! 😃I love u so much n dekhlena kal will b very special to us😳

Taani - ok..accha chalo class..bell baj gayyi hai😃

* After classes, Taani ws dropping Sharon home*

Taani - shar..u knw wat..u n bhai will look so cute togthr!😃

Sharon - omg! Taanu..Seriously? u thnk so? I thnk so too!😳 N we r perfect for each oder..im so prtty n he is so hawt n..wait a minute..ur sayng dis?😲 U used to always feel disgusted wen I talk abt ur brthr dat way bt today ms.taani shikhawat ko kya ho gya? Oohh..i get it nw..wat do u want?😕

Taani - shar I dnt want anythng..bas just need ur help😊

Sharon - ab na aayi line mein..wat help?😕

Taani - who actlly shar..tmrrw is mine n shivams frst annvrsry n I really wanna spend time wid him n celbrte it wid him..

Sharon - uugghh..toh u go n celbrte wid dat chevam na..maine kaha roka hai😡

Taani(glarng) - shar! I knw u dnt like him bt dnt cll him dat!😡 Anyhoo..i wanna spend time wid him raat ko coz tmrrw he has a mtch also na toh aftr mtch we gonna celebrte..just d two of us 😳 toh im gonna ask permission from mom, papa n bhai to allow me to go tmrrw for d match n celebrte d winning aftr wards bt im gonna tell dem dat im going wid u..toh u just hve to convince dem dat ur going wid me, its gonna b safe n ur gonna drop me bck safely..u cn do dat na?😃

Sharon - wat? Lie to ur parnts n swayam?😲 R u kiddng me taani? I cnt lie to my future-in laws!😆 N u hve nvr lied to dem abt anythng b4, well excpt for shivam part, bt nw ur gonna start lying to dem?😲 Dis is all bcoz of dat cheevam! I cnt blve he is askng u to lie to ur parents so dat u cn spend time wid him😡

Taani - esa nahi hai shar..its been 1 year n we hve neve spent time alone! we hve nevr kissd too😳 I want to exprnce my frst kiss wid him shar n wanna celebrate dis special day wid him tmrrw 😳 so pls cn u do dis one thng? Pls pls pls bestie..pls (cute pout)

Sharon - uugghhh..oh god..aggar tujhe kuch bhi hua na kal, im gonna kil dat bloody cheevam😡 fine im gonna help u..bt u owe me big time!

Taani - aawwee..ur d best! Luv ya❤️

Sharon - haan-haan luv u too..bas once u talk to ur parents, just cll me n gonna convince dem 😉

*Taani den drops sharon n went bck home..by d time she got bck, it ws allrdy dinner time..her parents n bhai were waitng for her at d dinning table*

Taani - im home😃

MS - beti itni derr lagadi? Kya hua?😲 Sab kuch theek toh hai na? tum akeli aayi?😲 U shud hve clld ur brthr or d driver na so dat dey cn ftch u..its allrdy dark outside taanu n its nt safe for u to drive like dat alone!😕 Mumbai is nt safe nw n u knw na dat ladkiya..

Taani - khuley tijori ki tarah hoti hai..so I hve to b careful..i knw maa..gosh ur so dramatic 😆 i got late coz I ws dropping Sharon n traffic jam bhi tha..sorry maa😊

Swayam - toh next time cll me n will fetch u ok?

Taani - oh god bhai..nw u dnt start..im very hungry..lets just eat

*while dey r eatnng*

Taani - uumm..mom, papa, bhai..actlly..umm..kal na humara who football match ho raha hai..St.louise v/s St.vincent

Swayam - oh yeah..i heard abt dat..we r even sponsoring for dt na papa?😊

AS - oh yeah..its gonna b a gr8 match..St.vincent is a tough competitor

Swayam - bt st.louise bhi toh kam nahi!😉

Taani - guys..aggar match ki baatein ho gayyi toh cn I cont?😕 anyway toh I ws thnkng cn I go n wtch d match wid Sharon n my frends?😃

MS - ofc u cn..match toh will end by 6 na..so aftr dat u cn come bck home

Taani - uumm..woh actlly mom..match ke baad Sharon aur baaki frends r going to an aftr party..toh main soch rahi hoon..

Swayam - no ways!😡 I knw hw dese collge aftr party is n ur defntly nt going wid Sharon alone!

Taani - bhai!😲 I wont b alone..i hve so many frends u knw n we wont do anythng illegal..pls pls pls..i hve nevr askd for anythng like dis bt nw main badi ho gayyi hoon n i wanna go..pls pls

MS - oh god taanu..ok fine u cn go bt u hve to take ur brthr wid u..i cnt let u go alone

Taani - wat?😲 No!! I cnt go wid my big brthr to a prty! I will b knwn as d girl-who-came-wid-d-brthr!!😕 My frends will all tease me abt dis n dat will b d end of my social life..might just burry me alive den to go to a prty wid my brthr!

Swayam - nw ur being dramatic taanu..n im an ex student of St.louise toh jab hum ek sath jaengge na toh all will welcome us in a grand way..dekhlena😆

Taani - yeah rght..pls if I go to d party wid u main ek dum social exile mein chali jaunggi!🤢 Toh no thnx..pls pls guys..let me go..papa aap kuch bolo na😕

AS - hhmmm..taani even though I will u to go, tum nahi jaa sakti

Taani - matlab?😲

AS - remember I told u dat tonight I wanna talk abt sumthng important? Well d thng is tmrrw my very dear childhood frend is cuming to visit us aftr 14 years!😃 He is cuming wid his son tmrrw from france n dey wud stay wid us here for 2 months..actlly they r in a food business n dey hve so many chains of restaurants all over d world bt nt in india..so dey r cuming here to open a chain n also to visit us! Im so excited dat im gonna meet aashish aftr ages!

MS - wow..dis is gr8 news adi! I knw u miss him so much n nw he is cuming n styng wid us! Gr8😃

Taani - ok im very happy for u pa..bt wats d connction wid me n going to d party?😕

AS - well dey r coming tmrrw evening n I will b very busy in an important meetng..i wanted to cancel d meetng bt its really important n my client cnt cancel it at d last minute..toh I wud like u n d driver to fetch dem from d airport tmrrw

Taani - WAT?😲 R u serious pa? y cnt bhai go n fetch dem? Y must it b me?

AS - taanu beta..ur bhai will b busy wid me in meetings toh he cnt go..aur weise bhi tannu his son..wats his name..roy sumthng..i cnt remmbr bt he is ur age only..u guys used to play tght n stuff toh if u fetch dem, u cn get to knw d son also bttr na.. u guys cn bcome frends n u cn show him all arnd Mumbai..bechara ka koi nahi hai na yaha..bas hum hi toh hai

Taani - bt bt d match tmrrw? Its very imp..i cnt miss n..

AS - bas taanu..maine keh diya na..u will go n fetch him..pls beta..help ur old fathr out

Taani - pls pa..dnt emotional blackmail me..fine I will go..happy guys? Nw im nt hungry anymore..main apni room mein jaa rahi hoon..apprntly I cnt go anywhere else n so will just rot in my room

MS - Taanu..taanu! ohfo yeh ladki bhi na😕

AS - its ok mallu..she will b fine by tmrrw I hope

Thats it guys..end of chapter 4..i knw u all r patntly waitng for reyaansh's entry..woh bhi ho jaega..ptnce 😉 next chapter mein uska entry n taarey meetng hoga..so gonna update soon dearies 😃 n yeah in dis story, shivam has a hidden agenda bt he is nt dat evil like in d3..bt he is still bad! pls hit like n commnt guys!! 😃

Edited by forever18able - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Resv!!!!!
Before d pm yaaayy!! 😆
Unres!!!!
As u told ur gonna pm me first isliye mai to pehle se hi ready baithi thi!!! 😆 ... n yesss!! I resed first!!
Awesome update dear👏👏... bt adhe tym to my face was lyk dis!!! No no... not ur fault!!! Ab agar shivam ko taani ke saath dikhaogi to aisa hi hoga naa!!! 😆
Ohhh!!! So yaha par bhi st. Louis me students hav their own grp!!! N obviously Sharon Raiprakash n Taani Shekhawat to popular grps ne honge hi... aww my two divas of d3!! Luv dem!! 😃
N taani hates dis... obviously... afterall she is sooo sweet!!! 😊 ... bt den i hav yo forget wat she did wid swayam in d mrng!! 🤣
Shivam... handsome hunk n killer smile?????? Taani in luv wid him 😭 ...
N she is getting jelous!!!! Agar rey ko lekar jelous hoti to mai samajhti bt shivam ke liye!!!... i know i know... uska bf hai!! -_- .. bt still
How dare dat shivam touch her cheeks!!! 😡 😭 ... i know..mai paagal sound kar rahi hu!! Bt cant help it aparna!!!
Wanna celebrate their anniversary... n kya kaha... im tired of having lunches wid u in colg... i wanna spend tym wid u alone!!! 😲 ... ek baar mere saath alone tym spend kare... aisi haalat karungi ki washroom bhi akela nai jaa paayega!!! 🤢 🤣... sry dear.. bt i cant see taani wid anyone else dan rey!! 😭
Taani buttering sharon to lie to her parents!!! 😆 😆 ... n loved dat line of sharon..." i cant lie to my future in-laws" 😳 😆
Hawww!!!! I wanna experience my first kiss wid shivam... ye kya bol rahi ho taani!!! 😲 *banging my head on d wall* 🤢 ... just cant imagine dat!!!!
Omg... cant stop laughing at her mom's dialouge n den taani completing it..."ladkiyan khuli tijori ki tarah hoti hain" 😲🤣...
Hehehehehe...lolzzz!!! Swayam taani ke saath jaayega!! 😆😆... just imagine d situation... tasni n shivam le liss ksrne ke pehle hi shivam hospital ke bed pe leta hua milega 🤣🤣
Yipeee!!!! Taani wont go wid cheeevam😆... rey ki entry ka tym hogaya n taarey meet in next update!!! Me dancing ... thankgod her dad stopped her frm gng!!! Awww... my poor taani...gussa hogai!! 😛 😆
Really dont hav patience to wait for rey ki mindblowing entry n taarey ki super awesome meeting... i know u must hav really written something tooo amazing!!!! So pls update soon!!! 😃
Edited by shikha_taarey - 12 years ago
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Res/unres
AWSEOME UPDATE
dont like shivam
taani buttering sharon
next part our heros entry n taarey meet cant wait
Update soon 😉
Edited by taarey_vrimar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i dnt lyk tht shivam n nyc update👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update...love shani bonding...

taani's family is so possessive...

waiting for taarey meeting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Res/unres

sorry fr late unres😛

nyc update n u know sometime i also face d same situation as taani😔
don't think i have a bf or something else bt when i see my other going out fr movies or a ppizza party i also wanna join😊 them
bt mere parents ki sooo much care or possessiveness beech mein aa jati hai...

n my deadline 2 home is 7 p.m...😭

dekho update ke baare mein batana to bhul hi gayi...

back to update...

nyc part...
story is going really well...
n thanxx fr reminding me through scrap😊

update soon😃
Edited by muskituski - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update appu di

loved shaani taayam taani n her dad bond


update soon with taarey 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww!! cute taani dialogues.. n shaani frenship is so perfect..
i rely wish to read more bout reyam frendship aftr rey enters.. n ofcorse if nt much reyam den shaarey n taarey frenship..
n then finally ishq wala love in taarey..
hehhe .. shivam is fishy it seems bt i hope he make taarey one or frenz for a strt.. thnx 4 update n pm.. :)

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