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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 4

Hoshiarpur

Geet is still thinking of the past..

Thiis happened just a couple of days after Geet was abducted fron Amritsar and kept under house arrestthats how she has been telling to Gia..

Gia ki story time toh ab bahut interesting ho gayi hai..

Geet tells her all her stories to Gia.and also warns her to be a brave child

Hummare desh mein toh ladhkiyon ko bahudur hona chahiye, kyunki unko hi har din ek nayi jung ladhna padtha..apne thoda ghyaan bhi Gia ko dethi..

Geet was so angry with her family that she never ever wanted to see them face to face.

She is confined to her room..

Her day starts with the bhook hartal that ends around 11 am when her hunger wins over her anger and how could she refuse those tiny hands that offer her favortire candies with an even swweter voice, Geet, khalo, mein kissi ko nahi bathaoongi, and her little angel would try to wink and finish with both eyes half closed along with a big smileGia always calls Geet by name when she is happy or angry with Geet

All day reading, hearing music and watching tv..

The only other visitors were Gia and her mother Preetho..

That morning..

It was as usual Preetho who was given the responsibility of getting Geet ready as the ladhkewale are coming to see her.

Preetho is also from Hoshiarpur..

She is a typical Indian wife.

Always ready to nod her head.

Saas kuch kehthi toh ji beeji.she nods .

Brij kuch kehtha hai toh ji.she nods.

Darji kuch kehthe hai.she just nods

Geet had never seen Preetho look at darji..she is so scared.

She always looks at the ground while Darji calls her.

Poor thing.Geet had nicknamed her noddy..

Gia also likes noddy.the cartoon character.Preetho even listens to Gia.

Geet had taught Gia to say no to what she doesnt like now itself.

Tumme dhoodh nahi pina hai? teek hai mat piyo.

Demand icecream.thtas also made from milk only

So thats also good for you.

She wants Gia to be independent, not like her mother..

Geet na Gia ko abhi se tayaar kar rahi haiwarna ye log Gia ki zindagi bhi barbadh kardenge.

Geet has already told her that when she turns 10 she would get out of Hoshiarpur, get admitted in Geets school.study well.get into a good college

Never return to Hoshairpur..otherwise they will keep her under house arrest just like Geet.

Gia understands not even a single word that Geet speaks but she knows her bua is very sad.

She loves her bua and she wants her to be happy.

She even gives her chocolates to Geet to make her smile.

dont cry, you want more chocolates? Have mine.i will get more from Darji

Geet would burst out laughing looking at Cute Gia..

Preetho peeps in silently.

Geet would get angry if she rushes in like any other room.

She knocks the already open door.

Geet had taught her to knock before entering.

Preetho: GeetGeethuuu

Geet comes out of her thoughts.

Though she is really pissed off she wouldnt lose her temper blindly.

Geet looks at her questioning.ab kya hai?

Preetho: woh..

She hesitates..why is it its always preetho who had to face Geet?...

Geet knows that its some message from her enemies..

But Preetho is only a messenger.why shoot the messenger.

Geet smiles.to make her comfortable..

Geet: bolo bolo, kya kabar layi ho meri kaboothar rani?

Gia smile at the new nickname of her mother..

Preetho blinks..

What would be Geets reaction on hearing the news?

Better run off after coveying it.she gets ready..

Preetho: Geet, tayaar ho jao, koi tumme dekhne aaraha hai shamko

Geet: kya?

Preetho wahan se bhaag jaathi.

Geet never bothers.

She thought it must be some guy.

But it was buaji.

Preetho comes to check whether Geet is ready.

But Geet is still asleep..

She had prolonged her afternoon nap..

Preetho: Geeet?

Geet opens her eyes..

Geet: babhi, mujhe sona hai

Preetho: hare, tere bhai wahan chila rahe hai, mujhe toh samj mein nahi aatha ki kya hoga ab? Who log Hoshaiapur pohunchgaye hai, jaldhi kar

Geet: kaun babhi?

Preetho: Geet, ladhkewale

Geet: unkko bolo kal aaye, mujhe bahut needh aarahi hai

Brij shout

Brij: oyeee, kitne samy hoga? Jaldhi kar

Preetho almost pleads Geet.

Geet pitied Preethos situation..

She then goes to refresh herself..

She puts on a salwaar kameez, the least she can do to save Preetho from her hubbys anger.

Buaji arrives and the whole family welcomed her as if she is a foreign deligate..

Preetho comes to inform Geet

Geet: babhi aap itne tension kyun lethe ho? mujhe patha hai ki kya hoga? Ye ladhka na apne vening snacks ke liye yahan aaya hai, aapne apne special jalebiyan ussko kilaya hai ya nahi?

Preetho: kya? Geet, ladhka nahi aaya

Geet is a little disappointed.whats this?

Geet: kyun?

Preetho: mujhe kya patha? Aao , tujhe neeche bhula rahe hai

Geet comes in her casual waer.

Ranno is shocked.

Ye Preetho ne kya kaha? Aur Geet aaise kyun aarahi hai?

Meinne toh lal lahenga aur zaver bhi bheja tha?

Geet ignored everything

She threatened preetho that she would lock herself inside her room if she
compelled her to wear all that

Preetho had no other go but to listen to her.as always she nodded her head

Buaji looks annoyed.

But Geet looked gorgeous in her white salwaar.no one can complain.except our buaji..

Buaji: ye kya hai? tumme koi achchi sadhi nahi milli kya? aur kahli haath, khali gardhan?

Geet: whats her problem? Ye mujhe dekhne aaye hai ya mere paison ko?

Geet whispers on Preethos ears

Ranno heard it.

Ranno: chup kar, pagal

Kiran: shadhi karna chahathe hai toh aapne apne beti ke liye koi zaver waver banaya toh hoga? Meinne toh abhi se meri pothi ke liye banana shuru kardhiya, usske agle janam din ke liye 30 soverign ka hip chain banne ki order kiya hai abhi abhi

Ranno: woh haina, Geet ke paas bhi hip chain hai

Kiran: nahi banaya toh shadhi ke pehle banadho, mujhe fake pasand nahi hai, sab kuch sone ka hona chahiye

Ranno: ye hummari eklauti beti hai, humne toh bahut pehle hi sab banadhiya hai

Kiran: mein bas yuhi keh rahi thi, beti ki shadhi toh pariwaar ki izzat ka sawaal hotha haina?

Ranno: aapne sahi kaha

Geet full on angry mode pe chali gayi

Ranno signals Preetho to take her in

Preetho lterally drags her in.warna Geet uss ayrat ko keema banadhegi

Geet thinks that its the boys mother..

She hates her instantly..

She didnt even bother to ask about Geets studies.

If she had asked about that Geet would have proudly told about her degree and other interests too.

But this women is only worried about the extra kilos that Geet would carry with her to their house.

She rejects this proposal atonce.

Not even ready to listen who that lady was.

Preetho tried to tell her about the boy and his family.

But Geet was in no mood to listen.

Preetho kept telling her big stories

Geet kept nodding her head without interest.

Preetho thought that she was listening and nodding.

But she didnt know that actually Geet had her ear phone on and was just listening to her favourite album.

Geet almost forgot about that so called ladhki dekhene ka episode until one day in the following week Pretho came back that some one is coming to see Geet again

Geet thought that it would be some one else.

Ranno made sure that Geet was loaded with atleast 1/2 a kg of gold this time..

Dadi also came with Kiran this time..

Dadi came to meet Geet in her room itself..

She was so happy to meet her.

Somehow Geet too liked Dadi.

She was not interested in her jewels.

Dadi: you look so beautiful, my grandson is so lucky

Geet: thanks

Geet blushes

Dadi: so, you finished your graduation?

Geet : haan

Dadi: what did you study?

Geet: computers

Dadi: humme toh ye sab maloom nahi hai, its better you talked with my grandson, par hum toh bahut kush hai aapko dekhkke, I like you very much, aur haan, aapko ye Dadi pasand aayi ya nahi?

Geet: bahut pasand aayi

Just then Kiran enters

Geets face turns red with anger.

Ye phirse aagayi

Kiran keenly noticed her dress and jewels

Kiran: ye kitne soverign hai? ye bahut patli hai, make one bigger

Ranno was nodding her head like a puppy.

Geet goes back to her silent mode.

Ranno felt that it was better else Geet would ruin everything within a minute.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Good One...👍🏼

Geet ghar mein apni army bana rahi hai😆 Gia ke saath


Geet bhi na kya kya names deti hai noddy🤣 gia ka favourite cartoon😆


Geet toh Kiran ko pehli nazar mein hi pehchaan gayi😉

Dadi is as always SWEET😃




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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
part 4
nice part...
seriously whats wrong with Kiran?
if she wanted a girl with money and jewellery she could have accepted Sameera hai na...
and Geet hates this...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVE IT...
why bua ji is talking so much abt gold jewellary ? is she want to start gold business, she already belons to wealthly family. geet not liking bua ji
dadi is so sweet.
love gia nd preetho their nicknames also.
where is maan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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rofl.. lovely ff yaar.. lol both maaneet dont wnna get married.. kool.. ab dekhte hain age agey hota hai kya.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome story dear
read all the parts in one go
maan past is sad but atleast his uncle's concern is not fake
dadi is great as always
really liked geet's character
n it's great how u describe about her thoughts n all that n liked gia n geet bonboth maan n geet don't want to marry but
maaneet alliance get fixed
looking forward for their meeting

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved geet and gia's bonding😆
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part " 5

Maan's Amritsar visit...

Dev and Meera greeted him with a big smile...

They knew that it'stime for Maan to tie the knot...

But Maan was very upset...

Maan ka mood bahut karab hai...

No one dared to speak to him about the wedding...

Everyone just acted as if they didn't know anything about the marriage plans...

Only little Arthi asked him when his wedding was and will he get her that angel dress(white gown with intrigue work that she wanted that day at the mall and Meera said it's white and she would apoil it first day itself) for his marriage...so even Arthi is ready for the wedding?

Maan wonders whether Kiran had flashed this news on the local bulletin...

Now why are they after his marriage?

Vijay comes back in the evening and it is up to him now...

Vijay: there you are, Dulhe Raja

Maan couldn't control his anger...

He keeps silent...

Vijay continues...

Vijay: so Maan, what do you want to know about the handas

What was that? Handas?

Did Maan hear it properly?

Handas...there would be hundreds of Handa families ...

Maan is now curious...

He should know more about these Handas...

He looks at Vijay...

Vijay: they are from Hoshiarpur...

How could Maan forget the fact that the girl is from Hoshiarpur not Amritsar...

His curiousity dies in a minute...

But Vijay had to tell him the whole story...

Vijay: and you know Maan? this Darji is the head of hoshiarpur, and they are also business people. This should be interesting? Haina?

Maan shows no interest...

Vijay: are you listening or what?

Maan: ji

Vijay: good, if not listen now, Geet is a very lovely girl, very bubbly and full of energy, not so dull like you, atleast one of you should be fun loving, isn't it?

Maan didn't hear a word after Geet...

His heart started dancing in joy...pumping faster and faster...

Geet Handa? Is this some magic?

This girl comes in Maan's life again and again like some divine power is behind it...they say matches are made in heaven...that must be true...

Vijay kept on speaking and Maan was lost in Geet's thoughts...

How he met her for the first time...

Here at Amritsar...

At Dev's computer centre...

Yes Dev runs a computer centre and Geet came here for her summer classes...

It was one of those holidays that Maan and dadi came to stay at Chandigar...

Seeing Maan Meera packed her bags as usual...

This is the time she gets a break...

Kiran never bothered her when Maan is around...

Infact she kept Meera out of the kitchen for Meera often added extra salt and spoilt the dishes and Maan always wanted them less salty...health conscious...

Kiran prepared the dishes herself for Maan,she never allowed the servants to cook...

Kiran is an expert cook just like dadi...

And Meera...she is such a lovely character...

Dev is so lucky...

Meera had a tough time after her delivery...

Kiran wanted a boy and it was a girl...

Kiran never went to see the baby...

Meera stayed at her mother's place and even Dev didn't visit her for 6 months...

When Maan came to know this he thought that afterall Dev is also a typical Indian husband...

Afraid of his mother...but still Dev loves meera very much...

Maan was visiting a friend at Chandigarh and he took dev along with him...

They went to Meera's house ...

It was noon and Meera was still sleeping...

Her mother welcomed them...

Meera's mom: Meera so rahi hai, woh kya haina, choti ussko raat bar sone hi nahi detrhi

Meera usually wakes up late...

Meera heard their voice and came down jumping in joy...

Meera: dev

Dev went with Meera upstairs her to her room...

Maan had little chat with Meera's mom...

She always said that she wanted Meera to have a brother like Maan...

Then that Kiran wouldn't dare to trouble her daughter...

Meera always considered Maan as his little brother...

Not only her, the entire family loved Maan so much as he is so unlucky losing both his parents early...

As they were getting ready to return Meera came down with her bag...

Meera: take me with you, I can't stay here anymore

Dev was scared about Kiran...

She doesn't even know that dev is here...

Dev: tum yahan bahut kush ho toh kuch din aur rukh jao

Meera: nahi, mujhe tummare saath hi rehna hai

Maan: Dev, let her come

Dev: what?

Maan can't force him...it's their life...

Dev left Meera back but he is still thinking abput Meera and his little angel...

Maan had to do something...

He asked dadi to talk about meera...

Dadi said that Meera is satying at her maika way too long...this is not good...haina Kiran?

You should call her back now, if she gets used to her maika she won't want to come back to her sasuraal, then Dev have to go and stay there as ghar jamai

What? Kiran would never let her son become a slave...

Kiran called her back the next day itself...

And Kiran was too happy to welcome Arthi this time...

Her naanu sent a lot of gold along with her know...

Kiran accepted them with pleasure: kya karein? Ladhki haina? Abhi se save karna padega? Haina sambandhiji?

Meera: haan haan, aapko meri beti ki kitna fikar hai?

That's Meera ...

Now...meera is getting ready for her missed HM after 5 years of marriage...

Poor soul! Kiran called that pilgrimage to Vaishno devi along with Kiran, Dai and Maan Meera's HM...

This time Meera waited for Maan to come and relieve Dev and they flew to Europe immediately...

So Maan had this summer class to handle...

Dev had recruited a new girl Sasha for this and she would be there in two days...

He just wanted Maan to keep the students engaged till then...say some quiz or puzzle...

But Maan took his job seriously...he prepared for the next day's class over night...

But no one was interested in his class...the boys made a lot of noise...

Maan got angry and scolded them...

They said that it's just a summer class and not any entrance coaching class...

Maan: very well, enjoy your vacation. I won't disturb you

Maan left immediately...

Everyone left the class except for this Geet Handa who sat before a system and started her self-study...

Geet loved learning this way...on her own...

Maan had to take notice of her then...

Just a cute girl in her sweet sixteen no no maybe seventeen...

Next day Maan went to the class just for Geet's sake...

She was the one who showed some interest...

Maan explained something with his own example...

He was using his name "Maan Singh Khurana" as the example...

Everyone but Geet copied the same...

Geet sat in the front and Maan saw her note...

She had written "Geet Handa" instead...

This made Maan more curious...

This is not just another girl...she is different...

And with some attitude as well...

Why not? She is such an intelligent girl and why not take some pride in that?

She is like..."I know everything" ...

Maan was eagerly waiting for the next class but this sasha took over the class next day...

Maan thought...Why couldn't she come after a few days...

What's the hurry? Dev is also out of town...

Then Maan had to be happy with just a glimpse of Geet when she comes in or leaves...

And the girls were disappointed to loose such a good tutor like Maan...

Maan used to stay in Dev's cabin...

And the girls took turn and visited the cabin(to see Maan) pretending to take an A4 sheet or some other book for reference...

But the girl Maan waited for never came...Geet didn't show any respect to this Handsome Hunk!!!!

What a girl?

But the boys loved the class now, no one missed a single class...

Sasha had a tough time handling Geet and her never ending arguements...

Sasha complained to Maan...

Does she come here to learn or to teach me? This Geet Handa is too much to handle...

But Maan loved it very much...somehow he was hooked to this girl...

15 days passed in a jiffy...and the class ended...

Maan was so disappointed then...he kind of missed Geet...

They never talked or even had an eye contact but just looking at her from a distance meant so much for Maan...he was also young at that time, maybe 20...so that must be the chemistry working there...

Maan felt that time ran faster those days...

So that was how Maan met this Geet Handa for the first time...

Vijay had finished long back...

Maan is still thinking...

Vijay: Maaan, how long would you take to answer this simple question...

Maan came back to reality...

Vijay: so, what do you say?

Maan didn't want to ruin this golden pppurtunity to meet Geet...

And the last time he saw her she was almost in tears...so sad and depressed...

From that day Maan had this urge to know what's wrong with her...

Somehow Maan didn't get the chance to see her again...

So this is the time to know the truth...

Maybe he can tell her that he is not interested in marriage at all...

It's not her, he wouldn't marry any one for that matter...

There is no place for marriage in his life...

He didn't want to send a messenger...he wanted to tell her in person...

He just wanted to meet her...

Vijay: what do you say?

Maan: I'll go meet this girl

Vijay is surprised...Kiran was so much worried, but Maan didn't even oppose...

He is all ready to see the girl? What's this? Some magic?

Anyway, everything is fine as of now...

So Maan would go meet her tommorrow...

And guess who is going with him...

Meera and Dev...

Meera is so angry that Kiran didn't take her to see the girl...

Meera is also part of the family know?

She should also see the girl, Maan's would be...

Doesn't she have the rights?

She was having a huge fight with Dev for that?

So Kiran asked Dev to take her along with Maan...

Geet, tayaar raho...here comes our MSK...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls update soon! Can't wait 4 Maan & Geet first formal meeting.
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awesome maan getting chance to meet geet

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