MG FF: Tremble - Complete (index on p. 1) - Page 14

Hey sweety.
Your updates seem to end with an explosion everytime I finish reading.
beautiful update, starting from geets remenicense of old memories to the dramatic slap.
Both need time to understand one another, though the love is already immense.
Loved the update, so update soon pretty please.

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The slap ... Now you must update soon...

@ priya111111 - Thank you for reading and for your comments!

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@ tanu3579 - Thank you for reading, I think Maan feels the same way!

@ Myra.nelly - Thank you so much dear, you are awesome and I always love reading your thoughts!

@ .Tulip. - Aww thank you very much sweetie! I also loved seeing Maan interact with kids, and actually "For the Love of a Child" (http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3175822) has a lot of that in case you ever get bored and want something else to read!

@ honeygrape - Thank you very much dear! You are the best and I'm planning to post the next part soon!

@ AISHAJS - Aww, you are so wonderful, thank you dear! Big hugs!

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@ sporthy_smile28 - Thank you for reading, dear! No need to apologize at all, thanks for sharing your point of view!

@ sweetsampa39 - Hi sweetie, thank you very much for your great comment as always! So happy that you liked the part with Maan and Anjana! I also love Maan interacting with kids, and "For the Love of a Child" (http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3175822) is basically about that in case you are interested. :)

@ punam2712 - Thank you dear for reading! Yes, I think Maan definitely got tired of waiting!

@ khwaishfan - Many thanks dear! You are awesome and I really appreciate you reading! I am planning to post the next chapter in a bit. :)

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@ Raina123 - Hey sweetie, thank you SO much! Your words were just so sweet and kind and I really appreciate it! I am definitely planning to update soon. :)

@ daredevilisback - Definitely dear! 🤗Thank you so much for following along with the story, it means a lot to me! The next part should be up soon. :)

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@ dqno1 - Hi dear, thank you so much for reading and for your extremely kind comments! Glad you liked the niece part. :) I am planning to update soon!

Hi guys! Thank you for your comments and likes! I left individualized thank yous above. Next chapter is below. :)

previous chapters: ch 1 - ch 2 - ch 3 - ch 4

Chapter Five

"Is this how much I mean to you?" Geet asked, her broken voice belying the anger that still lingered in her eyes. "I have a drunken outburst last night and you end our relationship, just like that? And you leave me by myself, so intoxicated that I couldn't even remember anything until Pinky told me this morning?"

"Are you kidding me?" Maan stared daggers at his ex-love, partly for striking him and partly for her hypocrisy. "Did you conveniently forget what you said in front of everyone last night? And that wasn't alcohol talking, Geet. You really have been just stringing me along with no intention of turning this into something real."

"What we have *is* real!" Geet cried. "Have you ever tried to seriously understand why I don't want to get married? It's because I'm trying to *protect* our relationship! Don't you know my mother's track record? Don't you see the divorce rate climbing higher every day? Don't you see --"

Maan raised his hand; a signal for her to cease talking. "Stop. Just stop. Have *you* ever tried to seriously understand that *not all couples are the same*? How could you even think that we would end up like that, Geet? After I gave you my love, my time, my wealth? I can't keep having this same conversation with you."

Geet swiped at her tear-stained face. "But I --"

"I said, stop," ordered Maan. He grabbed Geet by the shoulders and stared deeply into her wet brown orbs. "I could've had any girl I wanted, Geet. And I had chosen you. *You.*"

Geet attempted to swallow the lump in her throat, but it only grew larger. Was he really ending things, truly? "Maan Sir, please don't do this," she said desperately. "I love you and respect you as much as any wife loves and respects her husband, and --"

"Is that right?" inquired Maan bitterly. "By calling me out last night and then raising your hand to me? Is that what you call respecting me? Do you think I'll really tolerate that kind of behavior from anyone?"

"But I was *drunk*!" Geet spread out her hands helplessly while pleading her case. "And I -- I *am* sorry that I just hit you, Maan Sir, I -- I don't know -- I just -- I couldn't believe that you had broken up with me when I was in such a state last night, that you are breaking up with me at all when my only reason for being is you, I -- we --"

"We are through," said Maan through clenched teeth, interrupting her stammering. "You were nothing but a waste of time." He abruptly let go of his grip on Geet's shoulders, which caused her to stumble slightly backward. "Don't you ever show your face to me again." Geet then found herself gazing through her tears at the front doors he had slammed.

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Thank you for reading. :)

no no no...

I thought maan was much mature...
I thought even in breaking condition he'll hold the thread to not break it completely...
but here everything is different...

. "I could've had any girl I wanted, Geet. And I had chosen you. *You.*"
"You were nothing but a waste of time."

😲 how can he say something like this to her...
On the basis of marriage both were right at their place...
but in this moment i think maan is being immature...
Want to know more n more...
so don't be late I'll be waiting...
and thank u so much... For updating so fast😊

I luved ur rply😳

ok maan.. she had a drunken outburst... n u hd an angry outburst... bt just like she was wrong.. so r u..

Oh no😲Yeh kya ho gaya yaar,I wasnt expecting that 😔

Its sad on the part of Maaneet.I agree that Geet may be wrong smwhere with her thots abt marriage but the harsh words " I could've had any girl I
wanted, Geet. And I had chosen you.
*You.*" " After I gave you
my love, my time, my wealth? " "You were nothing
but a waste of time." Maan told her today are beyond repair.If they cud hurt me so much then what cud have it done to Geet!!!

Couples have fight on various issues,but one shud choose his/her words very wisely because time passes but the wound created by harsh words continue to stay on,carved in the heart.

I m really really really eager to know what happens next.Jaldi update karna.

Thanx a ton buddy for the link of "For the Love of a child" I know I'll defo love it jst the way I loved ur reply.

Thanx again buddy.