Hum Jee Lenge ||Kria Os|| Update 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A really short os on Kria.Got this idea while listening to this song from murder 3 . Listen to it while reading the story.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rChUahZQDZM


Hum Jee Lenge

Kria had finally made her mom take back her promises , and was all set to go back to Mumbai and get her Dil , Dosti and Dance back . She had never been so happy .

She thought how rey would react seeing her . She knew he would be angry , but had a belief that he could not move on . And she would somehow convince him , after all he cant stay angry with her for long can he.

She thought about him , the thought of being in his arms bought made her cheeks turn crimson . She did not know how she would face them , but she knew one thing . She wont cry and tell them everything with a smile , cause she had cried enough and now it was time for her to be happy .

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She entered st.louis , people were looking at her some recognized her while some did not , she took a deep breath inhaling the smell of her college . She straight went to the rehearsal hall , and she went numb . Her love was hugging someone else , and was saying i love you to her . She saw the gang smiling at them .

Never in her worst nightmare she had thought that rey would move on so easily , forget her. Did she not mean anything to him? Did he even loved her. She had three roses in her hand which she had thought to give rey one by one , but they got crushed and she left them . Kria ran away from there . She ran out of the college , out on the streets , she ran till she could and then fell down on her knees . People around her went to help her , but she got up on her own . No tear escaped her eye , she had a blank expression . She took a cab and reached home.

Her mom opened the door , in a hope to see her daughters smile back , but what she saw was her plain expression , kria reached her room and closed the door . She sat down on her bed . She did not cry , just sat looking at nothing particular .

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Days passed , into months . Kria had joined another college and had turned into a silent girl . She did dance , but not for anyone . She had come to a mall to buy something , when she saw rey he was with the same girl , buying gifts for her . Her heart wrenched seeing the sight , rey looked up and saw her . She looked away , and at that moment she realised something . She wiped the lone tear which had rolled down her cheek , and with a determined expression went from there .

She reached her home , and gave her mom a tight hug . She smiled at her mom , her mom was overwhelmed with emotions after seeing her daughter smile . Kria went to her room and took out a box , taking a match box , she went to the terrace.

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She turned the box upside down and all the contents came out , there were many pictures of the gang and her , the gifts rey had given her everything . She took the pictures and tore them into pieces and threw them down , she threw the glass ball of the dancing couple down making it break into pieces and took the heart and tore it harshly with a scissor . Tears were rolling down her cheeks but she had a constant smile on her face . She finally took the match stick and lit it . Throwing it on the broken and torn things she turned , wiping her tears.

Bye Rey , Bye St.louis!

And she came down to her flat . She went to her room , and took out her diary to write something. After writing the days event at last she wrote.

Tere bina ab hum jee lenge.

And with that she closed the worst chapter of her life forever . And decided to start a new chapter , of fulfilling her dream . Her dream of becoming The Worlds Best Dancer.

Hope you liked this.

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res :-D
me 1st. .
Yupie. . . .
Amo,
kaha hai tu. .
Kahi nazar nai aa rahi. .:-P
YEH COMENT TAB UNRES HOGA,
WHEN I WIL GET NEXT PART OF THE OS.
DARE U SAY,"NAI CONCEPT YEHI HAI","OS ITNA HI HAI" AND ALL. ..
Coz u knw me well dat i wil nt listen to anythng. .
So,
WE WANT ONE MORE PART . .
@ALL. .
HAIN NA GUYS??
U AGREE WITH ME NA??

unres. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Really Superb part. . .
I totaly lovd it. .
1st kriya ne joh dekha usse belive kiya,she was totaly broken then she promisd herself ki woh apne dance k liye jiyegi and apne adhure sapne pura karegi. .
I realy livd the way u potrayd kriya's feeling. .realy beautifuly done. .
Realy awsome yr. .it indeed was a treat to read. .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was amazing
wow !!!!
👏👏👏
really well written
what emotions
it was heart breaking but wow ishana 👍🏼


maza aa gaya padh ke
please say iska next part bhi hain
please
please

thanks for the PM
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No i didn't like it ...

*No Comments*

Humari mang puri karo...
N No Hum nai jee lenge
Edited by Roxxy47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mera Doc pe appointment tha Madho ...
Tu mere se pehle isiliye yahan pohanchi hai 🤔...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roxxy47



<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Mera Doc pe appointment tha Madho ...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Tu mere se pehle isiliye yahan pohanchi hai 🤔...</font>


BAHAANE. .BAHAANE. .:-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhukumari


BAHAANE. .BAHAANE. .:-P


I'm Serious!!!
I guess mai tujhe bata kar gai thi 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haan re pata hai. .
I knw. . .
Chil maar. .:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WE WANT 2ND PART. .
We want 2nd part. .

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