Love Happens (Virman SS)New Part 3A pg 14 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
awesome update
manvi brokeup with raj
manvi drunk
ohh you stopped at wrong place😭
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Another amazinggg update
love reading ur updates
damsel in distress manvi
knight in shininh armour virat
both made for each other
at least she sed sumthin in drunken state
cnt wait for next part
plzzz update soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Awesome..!!! Nice Progres...Maanvi is affected so much around him that she has avoided him for 1 week..but he was nice all way long...thts sweet..and finally she broke up with Raj...and Finally she asked the question that has been bothering her...Waiting for next..!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Great update.. Mindblowing but why did u stop it here.. Arghhh.. Pls update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Awesome update...
You really end on a wrong place..
Pleasee continue soon...
And thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Hello, I'm back, I hate cliff hangers too, well this might turn into one too lol, this is part of the last update which is why its short, got tired while writing before so stopped short, its a bit ahem ahem, not much just a bit, so beware.


Part 3b

Virat just sat beside the bed looking down at a Manvi sleeping. She looked so peaceful. He laughed to himself thinking about the first time he met her, she was like a bomb waiting to explode but he knew that it was all an act as she was sweet and innocent at heart not wanting to show her vulnerability to the outside world. It was his luck that she happened to be Viren's sister. But no matter how much he tried to get close to her and she always managed to push him away. That night in the kitchen at her house he could feel that there was something between them, the way she got all nervous when he got close to her but then she completely switched off but then tonight he felt it again. She was affected by being around him, but he couldn't why she always try to push him away.
He brought his face close to hers smelling her perfume and kissing her forehead.
"No matter how much you try you can't hide it, the way you get goosebumps when I'm close to you, I'm make you confess one way or the other,"he said.
She stirred surprising Virat, she opened her eyes, and was taken aback by him leaning so close to her.
"What are you doing," she said drowsily, "where am I,"
"I brought you to my place, Viren will be here later to get you," he said.
She woke with a start, hearing where she was,
"Can you take me home," she said getting up from the bed a little too quickly and he had to grab her arm to keep her from falling.
"Hey relax," he said pulling her close to him, "you don't need to be afraid of me,"
"I'm not afraid of you, I just want to go home," she said trying not to look at his eyes,
"Look at me," he said, lifting up her chin with his fingers. She slowly lifted her face to his.
"Look in to my eyes and tell me you don't feel anything when I'm close to you," he said.
"I don't," she said trying to look away,
"Why do you have goosebumps all over," he said letting his fingers run up and down her bare arms.
"I'm just cold," she said shuddering at his touch.
"Come on Manvi,"he said bringing her body closer to his, "admit it, why are you lying to yourself,"
"I'm not," she said pushing away slightly but his hold on her was too tight,
"Dammit Manvi," he said getting frustrated, "I've had it been the nice guy," and cupped her face in his hands bringing her face close to his, she fell numb at his touch and couldn't pull herself away. She didn't want to.
"Manvi, I won't hide it anymore," he said and pressed his lips into hers, taking her lips in a soft kiss, deepening it at the sound of her heightened breath. She let herself get lost at the touch of his lips on hers, she didn't make him stop but lifted her hands and started running her fingers through his hair.
He pushed his lips harder on hers, letting his tongue penetrate through her mouth, she let out a soft moan making his tongue go hungrier and wilder with sound of moaning. He slowly started nibbling her ears, bringing his lips down to her neck, giving her soft kisses and then caressing her lips on her collar bone, she pushed her head back, taking it all in, he guided her towards the bed kneeling on one leg and placing her gently on the bed, she ran her finger down his neck and started playing with the buttons of his shirt.
He brought his head down and buried it on the crook of her neck rubbing his lips all across her arms, her neck and then finally finding her lips again.
One by on she started removing the buttons of his shirt, feeling his rock hard abs as each button came undone. He brought his hand over her thighs finding the seam of her dress and running his hands up her thigh.
"Virat,"she moaned and lifting her head up so that she could place soft kisses on his chest and moving her lips across his upper body. He lightly tugged at her hair letting his hands roam around finally finding the zip of her dress and slowly undoing it so that it fell down from her shoulders revealing the soft skin of her cleavage.
"You are so beautiful," he said admiring her beautiful body, he ran one hand over her face, lingering at her lips and then tracing her neck and the shape of her breasts. He slowly pulled at the straps of her bra kissing her shoulders. Moving his hands behind her to undo the hook.
"Virat," she whispered, "Virat, please,"
She wanted him stop from going any further but he misunderstood thinking she wanted more,
"Virat, please," she said more forcefully pushing him away from him, "I told you that's enough,"
"I'm sorry Manvi," he said trying to touch her,
"Leave me," she said louder trying to get away away from him,
"It's ok Manvi," he said trying to calm her down,
"I have to go," she said fumbling at her clothes,
"I'll drop you," he said, putting his arm on her shoulder trying to calm her down,
"Don't touch me," she shouted pulling his hand away,
"Manvi," someone shouted from outside the room.
It was Viren, within seconds he was inside the room and took in the sight of Virat half naked with just his jeans on and his sister clutching her dress with tears in her eyes.
"Viren, this is not what you think, Manvi tell him," Virat said looking at Manvi,
"I was drunk Virat I didn't know what I was doing," she said.
As soon as the word were out of her mouth, Viren grabbed Virat and pushed him against the wall.
"She's my sister,"Viren said angrily, "how dare you touch her, you tried to take advantage of her,"
"It's not what you think," Virat said, "Manvi don't just stand there tell him, I wasn't hurting you,"
"I don't ever want to see you again," Viren said, "I can't believe I trusted you with my sister, you disgust me, your not even worth my anger,"
"Listen to me, she doesn't know what she's talking about," Virat said,
"My sister doesn't lie,"Viren said, "come on Manvi," putting his hand around Manvi's shoulder he turned to take her home, looking one last time at Virat with a disgusted look.

Virat slammed his fist on the wall, "damn you Manvi, why didn't you say anything, I hate you, because of you I lost my friend. I'm going to make you pay. If this is how you treat me after everything I did for you, then fine, lets see how you like to get a taste of your own medicine."

Viren took Manvi to her room, "I'm so sorry Manvi, I should have never left you with him," he said.
"Bhai, I don't want to talk right now, I'm tired," she said gong in to her room and closing the door and fell to the ground in tears.

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Will try to update soon. But the next update will first be of my other story because I need to finish that :p. Thanks again for all the love and the lovely comments,
Nush.


PS:Fariaji expecting a long complaint again. 😛
Edited by NushIsh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Zoobi doobi zoobi doobi pampara zoobi doobi parampa ...i m 1st i m 1st...lolzzz

fab updt...hwww kissy..ulalala...loved their proximity...as a brother viren is completely right at his place...any1 can react like this...manvi really dont knw anything or she is just pretending to keep him aways frm herself?...but due to this viren n virat frdshp is going to affect very badly...virat looks super angry on manvi...wud love to c his next move...cont soon

updt ur other story too
Edited by rasp_berry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
I looovveee thisss..!! ^_^ ❤️
Update sooon nd do pm me :)
Sent u a buddy req too..!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
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Shall I call u silly or slap myself for screwing ur mood???? I'm very sorry!!!!!! Well it's UR FAULT u didn't finish that part earlier n I was so mad at u... Again blame u cuz u always give me a fullpact adorable chapters in full version toh expecttion was high naaa hahaha...
that one didn't live upto anything n I got mad psh... Anyhow I take my words back!!!!
This small section was enough to drool over! Not cuz u gave some ahem ahem part it's cuz the way u ended!!!! Misunderstanding n wrong timing r the strongest tide for weakening a relationship which will get in ur next update... awesomely written!! I like how he made loveee *faints* sexyyy I hate it when people misunderstands him.. Hump n that manvi... Is she being a melody queen now??? Hesitant to accept reality that she fell for him? Or scared to get rejected!!!!??? Whatever the reason is I DON'T CARE hahah selfish biased reader too bad!!

MY DEMAND U know it well darling!!! BAD BAD BOY!!!!!! U have written good boy stories thorax bad boy Bhi dedooo pleaseee!!!! N yes not to mention thanks for not screwing viren's character <3 my boys rocked n I'm having tears of joy *drama queen!* I will sue u if u take ages to update!!!!!! I will for sure!!!! It's bad boy time n u CAN'T LEAVE US HANGED!!!!! Murder u !!!! Samhjeee yah samjhaooo?? Muaah oh thank u for giving a small version!!! Next time will scold u more so u can give more hahahaja :p LOVE ya
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..
Feel sad for Viren and Virat..
Why was Manvi quite?? She should tell Viren that is not only Virat fault...
Please continue soon...

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