An ArHi FF : Fairytales. UPDATE PG5!!

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When I was thinking of possible plots for fanfictions which were going to be tentatively planned, I had rummaged through different themes and story lines which were all very common and probably already done.

Recently, I was watching Beauty & the Beast (yes i know...im a kid at heart), and I realized that the story was rather similar to that of Arnav-Khushi...! Now the writer in me kicks in and i start developing my characters and the stories...

Now since I am a mega fan of fairytales and all things Disney, I though why not base it upon ArHi...???

So to sum it up, this story is based on all the fairytales that were ever written! :D *
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And yes I know I said i will never write another FF because i dont think im capable of it but hey why not eh..? This is my third shot at it!! :D

This isn't too dramatic and lenthy...will be short and effortless and I will try to fill in all the loopholes left in the show...


Hopefully it will live up to all the readers and of course my expectations..! :)

I've been dreaming about this for sometime now...so hopefully you guys give me a good response and proper feedback..? 😳

Anyways...ENJOY...! ;) This is the Prologue...will be back to updating next week like i promised! :D

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Rajasthan - 1895



Grabbing a fistful of colors, she ran...smearing it across the happy faces of her family.

Her beautiful, long brown hair falling across her shoulders.

She ran...ran like the wind.

The sound of laughter and cheerful shouting engulfing the pleasant air of the usual summery weather.

She tied her dupatta around her head, shielding herself from the scorching heat allowing a few tendrils to fall across her colored face.

She pushed back a strand of hair away from her large doe shaped eyes...the bright orange color getting smudged across her face.

She turned around as she heard her sister calling out to her.

"Huh Jiji...?" she yelled, waving across at her beautiful sister.

"Jalebi...? Where do you think you're going...?? her sister exclaimed.

She smiled and shrugged it off.

"You know exactly where I'm going..?"

"At least not today Jalebi...? Please..." her sister pleaded.

She shook her head stubbornly, possessiveness darkening her irises.

"I will never leave him Jiji...you know that... she said, sadness taking over her voice.

Her sister rolled her eyes and said "Stop it Jalebi! You know that there is no one who lives in that god forbidden wrecked old mansion! Why are you risking your life by going over to that horrible place? It isn't safe at all!"

"Jiji..I have been going over there for the past 15 year for every holi, you think I will miss it this time?" she asked.

"Jalebi...you don't understand...its different this time!"

She groaned...rubbing her forehead in annoyance.

"What exactly is so different this time?" she asked,plopping herself down against a cushion.

Her sister looked frightened as she dragged her towards a corner,looking around to spot any disturbances.

She swallowed deeply and whispered "It's the full moon tonight..."

Her eyes grew in shock as the news took time to sink in.

"But...its holi! How can a full moon happen tonight?!" she exclaimed.

"It can..it was foretold. But please..please don't hurt father..." her sister begged.

But yet again,stubbornness overtook her every sense and motive.

"Jiji...do you really believe in all of that nonsensical predictions? For godsake, it was foretold 150 years ago! What makes you think it will happen today of all days?"

"Jalebi...listen to me carefully...this is the first time there has been a full moon on the day of the colors...yes it was predicted centuries ago but think about...why is it all happening now? Exactly a week after your 22nd birthday...just like it was prophesied years back. Don't go chotti..please...?"

"Jiji..let me go i'll be back by noon...trust me. I care for you...but I cannot leave him...I just cannot betray his trust..."


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Please Please do comment and Leave your feedback...!!! I will highly appreciate your thoughts and views...!

I'm open to constructive Criticism be it bad or good!

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-Tasneem :D


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow very intriguing! :) x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH


Khushi Akanksha Naik

The future queen of Rajasthan,stubborn, demanding yet has a heart of gold. Beautiful and talented, tall and sharp, witty and sarcastic. Lovable as a whole.


Arnav Singh Raizada

Hidden prince of the west..secretive and dark. Has a past nobody is aware of but one girl...Handsome, tormented and vengeful. His parents were hanged for crimes they never committed. Brutally scared, brooding and passionate.


Ashlesha Akanksha Naik

Elder adopted sister of Khushi...chubby, strong and protective. Addresses her sister as Jalebi.. On the verge of getting married. Secretly in love with Arnav Singh Raizada.


Kairav Tej

Tall, dark & Handsome. Witty, fun loving and extremely possessive of Khushi. Deeply in love with Ashlesha yet she fails to reciprocate his love. Vengeful against Arnav...considers him like rotten meat.


Randeep Naik

Father of Khushi & Ashlesha...has a sinful past of women, murder and all things bad. Believes in his two daughters. His wife was murdered years back. He is deeply rooted to Arnav's past.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue

Wow a fairy tale story. ❤️the character is cool. Now I am waiting for update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsommmiiieee i luv dis story already...i'm a fairytale fan too lolz..:p can't wait 2 c how dis story unfoldes...1 guess i cud make 4 arnav'z parntz death khushi's dad is responsible...he must b da 1 framd his parntz or somhow involvd with it...nodr thing ashlesha is in luv with arnav...is arnav in luv with her too? But yeh kese ho sakta hai fairytale mein prince always falls 4 princess n no1 else so arnav can't b in luv with ny1 else den khushi not b4 not aftr...i can't wait 4 dis story 2 get strtd btw i hope dis khushi doesn't addes a 'Ji' with arnav's name i hate da 'Ji' prt...so no 'Ji' plz...1st chp sooon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue
great
a fairy tale story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept...looking forward for more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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E P 7 ...BEAUTY

CARRY ON N DO PM ME

WAITING FOR THE TORMENTED SOUL TO GET SOME PEACE


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Posted: 12 years ago
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brilliant prologue
loved it
amazing concept
really looking forward to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! This is really good!

I'm looking forward to read more!
Oh, how I love your concept.. Fairytales and ArHi!

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