KR SS- Rang Jo Lagyo Chap 7 - pg 99 * Updated* 09/10/14

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Ameena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

dabbe ne dhoka diya.
Dabbe ne dhoka diya. .
Dabbe ne dhoka diya. . .

Tch Tch!!!

Toh dabba badal le na madho 😛

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Tch Tch!!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Toh dabba badal le na madho 😛</font>

ghar pe warning mili hai,
jab tak 1st semister mein ache marks nai aate no lappy no new dabba. . . . .
Aur kambakht yeh colg hi start nai ho raha,toh exam kaha se start honge aur mujhe lapy n phone tb tak nai milega. .
Meri fuuti kismat. .

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

ghar pe warning mili hai,
jab tak 1st semister mein ache marks nai aate no lappy no new dabba. . . . .
Aur kambakht yeh colg hi start nai ho raha,toh exam kaha se start honge aur mujhe lapy n phone tb tak nai milega. .
Meri fuuti kismat. .

Haww!!! Matlab k No New Cell ,jab tak exams mein ache marks nai mile gay...

That means u toh must be waiting for the exams na?

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Yes. . . .
Life me 1st time i m desperate to write exams. . .
Bt,yeh exams hai ki ,saale aane ka naam hi nai le rahe. .

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

st.louis was filled with hustle bustle. people rushing here and there busy in their work but there were a couple of people who were doing nothing except than staring at the entrance as if waiting for someone eagerly.

"aur kab tak kahde rahenge hum yahan. btw hai kaun ye dono celebrity ya india ke prime minister jo hum unke welcome mein yahan khade hain" vicky sope irritatedly.

"agar meri nicole aati toh main poosri zindagi khada rehne ko taiyaar hun" nilesh spoke dreamingly and in return got a smack from simmi.

"she is married nilesh" simmi glared at him.

"toh kya main unke baare main soch toh sakta hun" nilesh spoke still in his dreams with nicole.

" kya yaar tu nicole ke baare mein sch raha hai i wish kaash kristen stewart aati toh kitna achha hota" vicky

"haan nahi toh kareena kitni khoobsurat lagti hai wo" amar spoke dreaming about his kareena.

" hum yahan hai usse koi matlab nahi tumlog kristen aur kareena ke baare mein soch rahe ho" simmi spoke angrily.

" leaving them simmi all the boys are like this only" she spoke glaring at vicky making a mental note to give him a piece of mind later.

" abey isne gaali di humein" bharat spokeand there started their never ending girls and boys fight which was stopped by the voice of our sweet sharon.

sharon: "enuff guys bohut hogaya. humesha bachon ki tarah ladte ho tum log"

simmi: sharon dekhana nahi ye log kya keh rahe the

sharon: i heard that and pls cut this crap lets focus on the work for which we are here.

rey: yup guys sharon is rite after all we promised the vp we won't let him regret rite.

At the airport

" finally i m in mumbai it feels great. i missed u my city of dreams and i wish this time when i return i take a lot of happiness with me" kria spoke spreading her arms feeling the soothing air of mumbai.

"main poori koshish karunga kritz ki iss baar tu ye shehar nahi chodke jaaye. i promise main tujhe tera pyaar, tere frnds aur teri family tujhe wapas dilaunga. teri har khushi jo maine cheeni thi main wapas karunga tujhe. ye tere bhai ka promise hai. i know u say that ab tujhe unse koi lena dena but somewhere in ur heart u still miss them" shivam thought smiling at kria's behaviour.

Kriya bets him on his head bringing him back on earth: oye bandar kya soch raha hai.

shivam: tere baare mein chipkali aur pls don't u dare call me bandar again.

kria: kyn tujhe achha nahi lagta *giving a pout*

shivam: nahi kyunki usse meri image kharab hoti hai after all itni saari ladkiyan mujh par marti hain " raising his collar"

Kria: hahahahhahahaha ladkiyan tujh par marti hai bandar.

Shivam: haww so mean and he turns around pretending to be angry.

Kriya holding her ears: arre mera bandar toh naraz hogaya acha chal sabke samne tujhe shiv bulaungi theek hai.

Shivam smile: thats like my sister

kria: nautanki.

suddenly they were convo was interupted by the driver who had come to pick them up.

shivam: aap humara luggage le jaiye hum yahan se college jayenge waise aap wo laye hain na jo maine maanga tha.

driver: ji shivam baba

kria: kya maanga tha tune

shivam: suprise hai chal dikhata hun but pehle close ur eyes

kria half closed her eyes when she got a smack on her arms.

" cheating kiya toh nahi dikhaunga"

" haan nahi karti" and she closes her eyes and follows him holding his hands.

" open ur eyes chipkali"

Kria slowly opened her eyes and shouted gaining everyones attention

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" oh teri intruder!!!!!! i can't believe matlab tune mere liye intruder!!! universe yeh kitni mast hai !!!!! thanku shiv thanku so much" she hugged him tightly.

" oye bache ki jaan legi kya" shivam spoke

" kaisi laga tujeh chahiye tha na so here it is ur rakhi gift bacha"

"par tune toh mujhe kal rakhi par Latest Iphone diya tha na phir ye aur tujhe kasie pata chala??

Ki mujhe Intruder chahiye thi??? . .

SO,what do yo guys think??shivam ko kaise pata chala hoga ki kriya ko intruder chahiye. .and iss nok-jhok ke wajah se,kya woh college pahuch payenge,kya Louians joh college mai inka intezaar ker rahe hai unka intezzar khatam hoga???
Jaanne ke liye
SCROLL DOWN
P.S I Loved writing the end part. .🤣🤣
ok. .ok. . .apni aankhein na dikhao. .aur SCROLL DOWN KARO . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

CONTINUED. . . . .

" tere bhai hun kal maine tere lappy par iski pics dekhitoh main apni cute si sis ki wish kaise nahi poori karta so brought it for u. dekh le teri fav colour ki hai"

"seriously i m really luckiest one to have u my bandar thanku "

"wo toh ha after all mere jaise log bhagwan sirf ek baar banate hai aur sorry dare u say that its my duty to fulfill ur every wish chipkali"

"acha nahi bolungi but really its superb and the bes gift i ever got"

" haan pata hai but ab baatein hi karegi ya iski ridebhi karni hai"

" bilkul karenge ji chal i'll drive to st.louis"

" na baba na mereko daant nahi khana dad se tu baad mein drive kariyo abhi college tak toh main hi chalaunga"

" pls shiv mujhe chalane de meri intruder pls"

"nahi baad mein abhi main"

"ok fine par jaldi chal i m dying to take a ride of it"

she sat on her intruder and shivam started driving it. she was enjoying it to the core afterall bike riding had become her fav hobby. she started bike riding after she left st.louis and latest bikes were her craze. when she drives it looks like she is talking to the wind, flying in the sky at that moment all she enjoys her riding never thinking about herself but atleast about the people.

At st.louis

they all were still waiting at the college entrance but this time accompanied with Vp and vishaka who had a million dollar smiles on their face they were the only people who looked happy there.

neha: vishaka u very happy today u know whp are they

vishaka: yup and u guys too know them and i won't be wrong if i say u guys know them very well especially swayam

swayam: me main kaise jaanta hoga unko i don't even know their names😕

vishaka: sab pata chal jayega just wait for few more minute " when her mobile beeped with a msg" no actually ur wait is over she spoke looking at the entrance.

a white intruder entered witha guy and a girl on it. guy was wearing a helmet so they were not able to see his face while the girl was talking on phone with her hairs covering her face.

she got down from the bike and continued her talking while as soon as the guy took out this helmet a wave of shcok passed through all of them. they all were shocked to see him back in their lifes but the real shock was still waiting.

rey was shocked to core seeing shivam there but more than that he was curious to know about the girl.

swayam was tensed for his sister seeing shivam back but somewhere his heart was telling him that this time he is back with a good cause. he too was curious about the girl.

while sharon was smiling as if she doesn't needed any explanation as if she knew who the girl was? as if she knew why was shivam back?and her smile added to reyam's confusion a lit bit of curiosity as if why was she smiling seeing shivam there???

while the others they were too shocked to see shivam but more than occupied in their own life as girls were getting jealous seeing the guys getting flat on the girl and the guys as usual were checking out the beautiful girl in their town..

nilesh: man she is hot

vicky: and sexy too

amar: haan but ek baar chehra dekh jaye iska

shivam came off from the bike and hugged VP: missed u dad

gang(except sharon and vishaka): dad

VP looked at them: yes his my son u guys have any problem

gang still in shock: no sir

VP: hows u beta kitne dino baad dekha hai tumhein tum dono ko meri yaad toh aati nahi bhool gaye ho mujhe new york jaake.

voice: aapko kaise bhool saktein hain afterall aap humare cute se dad ho and hugged him.. .

NOW. . . Every one looked to the place where the voice came from. . . . Shock. . Yes,ALL the Lousians *except vish and shar* were Super Shocked. . .

SO. . . Humare Lousians ko laga Ha Shock. . Kya lagta hai guys. .kyu laga hoga unko shock?? Kiski thi woh voice?? KYU SHARON AND VISHAKHA nahi gaye shock mode pe?? Kya hoga aage.?? .kya hoga?? JAAN NE KE LIYE SCROLL DOWN KARO. . . . . P.S : AGAIN I LOVED WRITING THIS END PART. .🤣🤣. . Ok. . .SCROLL DOWN. .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

*CONTINUED*

Now it was the limit their brains were about to blast due to shock and confusion.😆

REY was numb seeing her back and that too with shivam. he couldn't comprehend his feelings. he never expected that after her sudden departure he would ever see her but there she was standing in reality. he had lot going through his mind and heart but had no words for them all he was dumb at that particular moment as is he lost his voice.

he was just standing there taking her image as if he had seen her after a decade but it was really the same the only thing that replayed in his mind was sharon's word
"jis din kria tumahre saamne aayegi u won't be able to speak u will have thousands of emotions but no word for them and it will be then u will realise u is ur true love"
and as if her words were proven right.

SWAYaM had mixed emotions he was happy at once but scared too coz he knew that her mere return might complicate his sisterslife. to precise he was in a dilemma whether to be happy to see his best friend or to be sad for his sis. he had a llot questions but somewhere head a instinct that he won't get there answers so soon.

To say SHARON was happy would be an understatement she was extremely happy to see her enemy isn't that what she addresses kria as always no she was more happy coz today her words were proven right she just looked at rey and had a proud smile but beside that she was happy for sis yup she knew everything but wanted to bring the things back on track in sharon's style.

TAANI the poor soul was just praying to her krishna ji that kria's sudden return doesn'taffect her realtions and her rey but the poor baby was unaware that the destruction already started.

And others too had a lot questions but first needed to comeout of the shock.

Vp gladly hugged his daughter, he loved her more than her own father would have loved her.

Vp: I missed my daughter a lot and kissed her on her forehead.

Kria: I too missed u dad and i am gald we came here to u.

vp: Yaa i know kyunki iss mahaan ko toh mujhse milne ka man nahi karta,ek meri beti hai jo mujhe yaad karti hai

shivam: daddd. . .*pout*

kria: rite iss bandar oops shiv ko time hi kahan hai and she winked at him

Shivam glaring at her whispered: zyada na bol warna abhi teri intruder wapas kar doonga

kria: oh sorry

Vp: hogaya dono ka toh meribaat bhi sunlo.

He introduced her to the gang

"so guys meet my daughter kria malhotra and my son shivam malhotra and they are the one from st.peter's new york."

The gang welcomed them with a fake smile but there two people who had a natural smile on their face sharon and vishakha.

Vishakha took her in a tight hug showering all her love showing how much she missed her besty.

vishakha: missed u sweetheart!!!

kria: i missed my besty

vishakha: hows u?? u have changed alot . .u look beautiful or i would say too HOTT MAN. . .!

kria: oh really u too look amazing sweeto

Vishakha: i have alot to say bohut baatein karni hai tumse.

.kria: i m all here for u dear.

shivam: arre yaar koi mereko bhi yaad kar liya karo

vishakha: tujhe kaise bhool sakti hun idiot come here and hugs him "mujhe toh laga tha ki iss janam mein mujhe tum dono ke darshan hi nahi hone wale"

shivam: bacha bhagwan apne har bhakt ko darshan dete hain but uske liye tujhe tapasaya karni padti hai

vishakha: ohh really. . Tapasaya and all haan.

kria: *cutting her in btw* tum dono tapasaya karo main chali dad ke saath and she followed vp soon joined by the two who were running after her.

Their gang headed towards the canteen to relax a bit from the shock.

On the way all they heard was about "KRIA MALHOTRA" , the popular topic of st.louis. Guys were going gaga over here all they talked about her looks, her attitude.But the gang except sharon ,all they thought was she didn't even noticed us?sharon was happy and sad too that inspite of having her sis infront of her she can't hug her tell her how much she missed her..
SO. . .
Here u go guys. . .
Our kria Finally arrived at the college. . .
Logo ko mille shocks pe shocks. . . .
Kuch Log ho rahe hai haairaan toh kuch pareshaan. .
Pyaar ka ehsaas hai aur nafraat ki aag bi,
Dosti ki chahat hai aur ibaadat bi,per,
kya past ke puraane panne fir khul payenge??
What do u think,
kya hoga aage. .
Aur kitne suprises milenge,aur kitne shocks. . .??
Kya bichade hue Dil Mill Payenge??
kya bichadi hui Bahene mil payenge??
kya bichade hue Dost Wapas Mil payenge??
Kya DIL ,DOSTI N DANCE kaa wapas meel ho payega??

UFF. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
ITNE SAARE QUESTIONS. . .
Aur Answers hain,
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STAY TUNNED. .And Wait 4 Next Chapter 🤣
P.S : AGAIN. . . .I LOVED WRITING THE LAST PART. .🤣
nw,SCROLL DOWN. .:-D

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

FINALLY UPDATED. . . . . . . . . . . .
Guys. . . .
Do Like . . . .
Nw,we are waiting 4 ur beautiful coments. . .
Do Review. .
Again,
we both r realy happy with the response we are getting. . .
Keep it up guys. . .
And yesh. . . . .
Ur coments have bein repiled 4m page 24 to 32. .toh check. . .
Hope,is chapter mein,humne aap logo ka thoda bahut confusion durr kiya hoga. .
Any doubts or Questions ho toh feel free to ask. .
And TO MY FRIENDWAS ,
partner,kuhu,Amo and Kaanchi, kal ke liye sorry. .
"Mere dabbe ne dhokka diya tha. .*sob*,hope aab tum 4 happy hoge mast-mast coment karna. .and and and mere pyaare thread ko baksh do. .*baby face*"
so,our kaam finishing ur's starting. . .
Chalo -chalo kaam pe lag jao. . . .
With lots of love
Madhu n Aanchal

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Res

unres

Firstly hats off to u guys too 4 writing such an awesome story...👏

luv u guys..!!

Nw cumng to de update

yeh nil aur vicky kabhi nahi sudhar sakte...😆

ek taraf nil apni nicole mam ke kwaab mein hai toh dusri taraf vicky kristen stewert ke khayalo mein hai...🤣🤣

fnally shivam aur kria ne mumbai me entry le li...😊

aur kya nasib hai kria ka ate hi ek intruder mil gayye usse as a gift...😉

aur upar se shivam ne usse pehle i-phone diya as rakshabandhan gift...wahh (bhai hoto aisa...kaash mera bhai bhi aisa hota...)

nd kria luvs bike riding yeh unexpected tha...

bichare gang ko kya shock laga...😲 vo bhi 100 volts ka...🤣

lekin vp. vishaka, aur sharon kitne khush the...😃

krisha r sisters nd sharon noes dat...yaay...🥳

par kaise?? 😕😕(woh jaldi disclose karna..)

luv vishaka nd kria's friendship...❤️

bt feeling sad 4 sharon dat she cannot hug her sister also...😔

i luvd dat part were rey was speechless whn he saw kria...😊

nd sahron was proved ryt...😎

feeling sad 4 swayam 1 side her bff nd 1 side her sis...

bt i dont give a damn care 4 taani...🤢

hope to see swayam nd kria's frienship soon..😊

de way u hav shwn shivam nd kria's bhai-behen relation is jst amazing...

par confusion hai ki woh dono bhai behen kaise aur kria ka surname malhotra kaise..??😕😕

Inshort de whole update was fantastic, fabulous, amazing, super, nd soo on...😊😊😊

Luv it..❤️

Thnx 4 giving such long update..

nd nxt tym plzz isse thoda jhayda bada dena...coz maza ata hai aise bade update read karne ko...😛😉...

Nd Amazingly written guys...👏👏

Lots of Luv

❤️

Edited by Kanchi.. - 12 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

I guess I can res 😳

oops sowwie for d late unres

madzz and aanchal d update was awesomeee as always

finally kria and shivsm back to st.louis

loveeddd kria-shivam bonding

and sharon s kria's sis

wowwsss interestinggg

waiting eagerly for d nxt part

update soon both of u

Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago

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