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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola buddies😃
Welll. .
back with another OS
this time its dedicated to My Kiddo
coz she made me addicted to this song. ... .
scroll down for the OS

PS: Back to my experimenting spree😛
so its suppossed to be my signature Poetry + story
whats new?
its a song fic as well!!
hope I didnt mess it up BIG TIME!!
and well u can call it my Tribute to KiSha and Main Sharaabi. . .in my own twisted way!!

love
Rads😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tears never seize. .
in the memories of us. .
coz My heart still belongs to you. .
Who could have thought that the hottest couple in Imperial. .. will have such a sad and abrupt breakup. ..
He loved her with his whole soul. .
she loved him back with the same passion. .
but Trust. . ..
is never given or Taken. . its earned. . .
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The same Place. .
the same Date. .
situation?
who cares. .
life's not really been good so whats new?

He sat at the far end away from the dance floor. .
away from the crowd. .
a glass of mock-tail in his hand. .
he'd sworn he'd never drink Again and Keshav Desai was a guy who stuck by his words no matter what!!
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She was definitely a Head turner. .
every gal's envy. .
every guy's desire. .
looks. .
style. .
attitude she had it all. .
as she entered the disc. .. She had An arrogance abt her that suited her Diva Image!!
unknown to her a pair of deep chocolate brown eyes were probing her

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no no no no no. . ..
as soon as he spotted her. . .
his serene position shifted. .
the calm as sea chocolate brown eyes suddenly seemed to have been hit by psunami. .
You, gotta excuse me
You see I went looking for yesterday. .
That's where I think all the good memories of you and me, went, yeah
His eyes seemed pained. . .
troubled. .
if you saw him now ..
you'd know that Even a Rock Strong Man like him has a Heart..
that too unfortunately at the right place!!
As his eyes pierced the crowd and reached her. . . he couldnt possibly stop them from Glistening.
So I'm swimming in a sea of forgetfulness
Just to get a glimpse of the you I remember, damn (Damn)

Before his true emotions could come out in open. .
before he could break down. .
he stopped. . .
coz he had an Image to maintain. ..
that of a Stoneface. ...
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Taking the center stage she swayed away. .
carefree. .
giving away her best moves. .
that could pop anyone's eyes out ..
as she covered almost the entire Room . .

he could hear her speak to someone. . .
she was just a few feet away. . ..
I miss you cause the one I'm lookin' at right now
She, looks just like sounds just like feels just like you
But I'm so confused cause she don't seem like you
She seemed the same yet so different. .
was it the whole set up..
was it circumstances. .
what was it that made him cringe. .
that made him realize this isnt the gal he Fell in love with?
or is it?
involuntarily he stood. . .as he heard the familiar beats. .
in no time he had been piercing across the crown grooving to the beats. . . ..
as his head swam in memories. .. .
memories of them. .
'll be drowning, drowning
I'll be drowning
In my memories
When I get there
before she knew it she was standing right next to him. .
on the dance floor. . .
the same place. .
the same
song. .
the same day. .
was is co-incidence?
or was it fate?
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He swayed to the beat. .
placing his hands around her bare shoulders. .
I 'll be drowning. ...
flashback .. .
"Pehle Please kaho"
"in your dreams"
he plunged her into a steep dip and pulled her back suddenly .
I 'll be drowning. ...
flasback. .
their 1st unofficial date . . i.e the slave task. . on the beach
I 'll be drowning. ...
the times she'd hugged him. .
during the camp. .
then again when they were in an official relationship

the 1st time she'd kissed him on his Cheek. . .
in my Memories
as they danced. ..
their eyes were locked and He knew. .
she was remembering the same times as him. .

I rather be there than here
they both knew they wanted to go back to those times. .
those days. .
those moments. .
which were nothing but mere Memories now. .
I rather be there than here
I rather be there than here
I rather be there than here
Than here
Than here
no matter how much they tried. .
running away from each other. .
no matter how much Ego might have blinded them. .
no matter how bitterly their relationship ended ..
the fact always Remained. . .
that they belonged!!
that they still. .
relived those moments, ,
those times .
those memories. .
were not Mere Fading ones. ..
but rather those that they cherished. .
the ones which still reminded them of the fact they still lived in that past. .
that they hadnt moved on. .
that it wasnt over. . .

as they swirled around in each others Arms. .
insanely in love. . ..
seasons came and went. .
circumstances changed. .
but here I m in your arms my love. .
coz My Heart Still Belongs to you. .

Edited by -Serendipity- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Color Index:
Blue : KD's Part
Purple : Kiya 's Part
light purple italic : my poetry
blue italic : facts that cant be denied
light blue bold Italic : song Lyrics

Song : Drowning by Conor Maynard
Edited by -Serendipity- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Partner!!
OHMYGOD!!!
This is an emotional turmoil...that lead me to Imagine
all the things happening right in Front of me...!!
The depth...everything once again proving many that emotions are your Forte.
This one had such an awesome poetry...!!
And all the best of KiSha scene precap..how i wish we had such intense scenes back in TBP!
bt have given up hopes..coz as of now i don see it anywer near..!!
The very 1st kisha scene..."Please kaho chicklet...in your dreams!!"
Then the unofficial beach date...another wer we found an adorable yet sensible KiSha..!!
This had so much Emotions...the CVs should so use atleast half of this depth in real KiSha 🤣
Gosh bt wad can we do..!! huh!!
Bt a wonderful piece of writing Partner.
You once agen have made me proud 🤣
Regards,
Safrena
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res :P
Unres

OMG!
Rads, this is awesome!
Simple AMAZING!
I loved the way you portrayed their emotions...
I miss this Kisha! SO DAMN MUCH!
CVs ruined them for me 🤔
*sighs*

Coming to the OS again,
I loved your poetry...And the parts of song you used went perfectly with the words..
I love that song <333
Another amazing piece from you!
I loved it to the core! ❤️
I needed this,
Because of obvious reasons, 🤔
So thanks a lot! 🤗
Write more :)
Edited by -Crazy..Life- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah! Rads... AMAZING!
Really nicely written & hot & full-on emotionnal & passionate!
Missing all of this like hell in the show...
Thanky'all writers for writing such good OSes.
I dont know why, but I really love OSes wherein KiSha patch up during a party! I think I could write thousand OSes on that theme (in fact I have one in mind) without getting bored 😃 ! 'Cause they look way too hot in that particular situation!
Anyway - getting too excited hahahah - thanks for this great piece!
And I have your other oneshots in mind too, will comment soon! 😃
Love, Ishta
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: forevermine

Partner!!

OHMYGOD!!!
This is an emotional turmoil...that lead me to Imagine
all the things happening right in Front of me...!!
really??? mission accomplished then😃
The depth...everything once again proving many that emotions are your Forte.
This one had such an awesome poetry...!!
I m glad to know that😃
And all the best of KiSha scene precap..how i wish we had such intense scenes back in TBP!
bt have given up hopes..coz as of now i don see it anywer near..!!
me neither
The very 1st kisha scene..."Please kaho chicklet...in your dreams!!"
Then the unofficial beach date...another wer we found an adorable yet sensible KiSha..!!
that was the point of writing this OS actually😃
This had so much Emotions...the CVs should so use atleast half of this depth in real KiSha 🤣
Gosh bt wad can we do..!! huh!!
half? I'd be greatful if they showed even 1/4th of it😕
Bt a wonderful piece of writing Partner.
You once agen have made me proud 🤣
  • oh yay😃😃😃😃😃😃
Regards,
Safrena

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoyolo

Woah! Rads... AMAZING!
Really nicely written & hot & full-on emotionnal & passionate!
I m glad to know that u feel so😳
Missing all of this like hell in the show...
me too
Thanky'all writers for writing such good OSes.
thanks to u too my dear😃
I dont know why, but I really love OSes wherein KiSha patch up during a party! I think I could write thousand OSes on that theme (in fact I have one in mind) without getting bored 😃 ! 'Cause they look way too hot in that particular situation!
so agree
Anyway - getting too excited hahahah - thanks for this great piece!
the pleasure is all mine😃
And I have your other oneshots in mind too, will comment soon! 😃
will be waiting😃
Love, Ishta

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful yaar Radsy...
You just nailed it...
Listened to the song after reading this, and I loved the song...
I miss this hawt passionate Kisha and reading the OS makes me lament more about what we've lost in the show, but leave it as long as writers like you are here I can hang on to the show...
Once again, amazing job Rads...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: sajan_kisha

Beautiful yaar Radsy...
Really?? I m soo glad to know that😃

You just nailed it...
awww. . thankies😳
Listened to the song after reading this, and I loved the song...
haina?isnt it just amazing?
I miss this hawt passionate Kisha and reading the OS makes me lament more about what we've lost in the show, but leave it as long as writers like you are here I can hang on to the show...
I crave for that depth gal. . wish a miracle happens and we get our KiSha back!!!
Once again, amazing job Rads...🤗
anytime hon🤗

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