Andankaaka Colony - Chap23/24 pg. 23!! Final

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Shammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Hahahaha pinna Gisel ivlo varushama Tanu va love pannithu suddenly friend love panra na sogama irukaatha? Athaan crying 😆 Hope i dont sodapufy 😳

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Shammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Chapter 10

Shemmo is sleeping and thinking how to impress Tanu. Suddenly he hears someone screaming. He wakes up and goes to his mother room. Shobi screams "NOO". 😕 Shemmo wakes her up and asks what happend. Shobi comes back to reality and is relieved. She replies Shemmo "Shemmo nee love marriage panniko aana enaku first uh ponna kaatuda". Shemmo is confused and says "Enna ma olarureenga? Enaku onnume puriyala". Shobi says "Antha Thendral serial ah oru villi irupale peyar Charu, ava yen dream la vanthu ennai Atthai nu calling da". 🤣 Shemmo laughs loud and says "Enaku Charu vendam ma, venum na Thulasi ya kalyanam pannikiren". 😆. Shobi says "Unaku irukura kozhuppu ku, unnai katti vachu adikanum". He replies "Hahahaha, pesama thoongu ma". He leaves to his room. Shobi in mind voice "Etharkum ivana koncham spy pannanum". 😆

Bhagi is thinking how to help her brother Gisel. She goes silently in his room and listens what he talks. Gisel is still sad and talking to himself about what Shemmo said today afternoon. Bhagi gets to know that Shemmo also loves Tanu. She wants to confront Shemmo and tell him the truth about Gisel. 😲 She decides to meet Shemmo tomorrow morning.

Its Monday morning and everyone is getting ready to school. Shemmo is going after ages to school. He gets ready and is wating for Gisel. He asks Shubba and she replies that Gisel left already. He has no other choice than going alone. 😆

All aunties are doing sweets as today there is ponnu parthufying function for Autumns. Autumns comes back from night shift and is very tired. Mini asks her to sleep koncham and later get ready. Autumns asks why. Mini says "Inniki unna ponnu parka varanga di". Autumns is shocked. She asks Mini why so suddenly. Mini says that in her age she has to marry nu. Autumns tries to stop it by convincing Mini but its a fail. She is still sad and thinks in her mind "Naan epdi vera oruthana kalyanam pannikarthu? I love HIM, how will I tell my sister?".

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What do you think? Yaara Autumns love panra?

Edited by Shemmo - 12 years ago

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viswai123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Triangle Love Story kelvipatturuken... ithu ennathu spider web love story!!!!

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Shammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: viswai123
Triangle Love Story kelvipatturuken... ithu ennathu spider web love story!!!!

Hahahaha spider web love story ah? Apdina??

Guess pannunga ma yaara Autumns love pannuranga nu 😆

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JAYASHREE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

ha ha shasmz...intha colony kula, ivalo love blossoming va? yaaru athu? sri va?

shoba's dream...Rofl...

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suhasini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

shamz...aappada oru valliya Ff a continue panitinga...
nandri shamz...

thendral charu in shobi akka dreamss...athum athai nu kopidarathu...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

nice parts shamzz...
and gisel don't cry ma...don't worry be happy...

autumns loveraaa...uhmmm i think it is sri nu...

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Smiles-20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Thanks Shamz for the next part, interesting characters!

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Pallanguzhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

I just started reading until Page 18 today and I must say what a wonderful story! 👏👏👏

Very quick-paced, creative and funny situations with IFians with loads of comedy! 🤣😆😆

Eagerly waiting the next part and keep it up Shammo! 👍🏼

Ravi

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Shammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Chapter 11

Autumns is confused on what to do. She goes to sleep with a positive thought. All aunties are getting ready for the function. Haritha is back from school and goes to see Autumns. She sees Autumns crying and goes near her Chitti. She asks Autumns what happend, why is she crying. Autumns is silent. 😳 She thinks whether she should say everything to Haritha, but is scared too as Haritha is a otavaai. She tells Haritha that she is just tired. Haritha asks her to take good rest and leaves the place. Autumns knows whom to tell about this matter and sleeps in peace. 😕

On the way to home Shemmo sees Tanu. He gets happy and goes to her. Tanu sees him and smiles. Shemmo "Hii Tanu, how are you?". Tanu replies "Im fine and you? Aama yen per Tanu nu ungaluku epdi theriyum?". 😆 Shemmo says "Unga amma thaan ovvoru vaatiyum Tanu Tanu nu koopduvangale". Tanu smiles and walks fast. Shemmo stops her and says "Ennanga ivlo fast ah poreenga? Enaku semma tired ah iruku, ungaluku ethuvum illathi oru cup coffee kudippoma? Itho pakkathula thaan coffee shop iruku". 😆 Tanu says no and she has to leave, otherwise her mother will search her. Shemmo says that he will take care of that and begs her. She hesitates first and later says yes. 🥱

Bhagi coming after school is searching Shemmo. She thinks maybe he is at Mini house and goes there. Anga Autumns calls her. Bhagi says "Autumns neenga ennum ready agelaya? Ellarum vara poranga innum koncha nerathula". Autumns replies "Bhagii enaku intha kalyanathula istham illa, yaarume ennai purinjikka mathenguranga". Bhagi asks why. Autumns replies "Because I love someone". Bhagi is shocked. 😲

Tanu and Shemmo enters a coffee shop. Shemmo asks what she wants to drink. Tanu says coffee is enough. Shemmo stares at her. Tanu feels weird and asks "Eppo povom? Erkanave romba late achu". Shemmo says "Ippo thaane vanthom and I have to talk with you". Tanu is confused and asks about what. Shemmo says "Athu vanthu, naan ungala...". 🤣😲

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Edited by Shemmo - 12 years ago