HUM TUM...EPI. 1 uploaded wid VDO

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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ˜†Guyz i jus got a new idea...i dunno why i'm laughin but it seems lyk today i cant think of nethin otha than kyph!!!šŸ˜†...so i decided to create a new ff of angad and kripa...

Characters:

Angad Khanna: A famous singer/rockstar and a flirt...loves his Di...and thinks his father doesnt really care bout him...(played by iqbal khan)

Arun Khanna: Angad's elder brother and a successful businessman...he looks after the whole family and a very loving brother...(played by Karthic: sowwie dont know his real name)

Aditi Khanna: Angad's "bhabi"...a very money-minded person..she loves angad and Ajay as brothers but sometyms becum really obssessed about money but shows as if she'll die for Angad and Ajay (wich is not possible as she's a selfish person: mainly the villain)...she doesnt have any children and thats how she gains everyone's sympathy...!!! (played by Rupali Gangoly...dunno y i chose her🤢)

Ajay Khanna: Angad's younger brother...a full time flirt and a loser...spends his money like water..carefree and doesn't respect anyone and doesnt really care bout his brothers...and a showoff (almost like angad but worse!) (played by the guy in Mayka: the guy opposite neha bamb)

Rishab Khanna: Angad's father...loves his sons very much...after Angad's mom died...Rishab moved tot he place where him and angad's mom first met...and stayed there for years...stayin away frm his sons...and mourned for his wife for almost ten years...but helps his sons when needed...(another reason for not returnin to city (Khanna aMansion) because of Arun's wife...as she doesn respect him...) (played by angad's real dad in kyph)

Di: Angad's aunt...loves Angad a lot and always saves him frm troubles but worried about him being wid girls...mite destroy his life...she lives near Khanna mansion but doesn live in khanna mansion coz of Aditi...(seems lyk everyone hates her except Angad and Ajay) (played by the dadi in kyph)

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Kripa Sharma: a very sweet, innocent, college girl... she just finished her college and thinkin of gettin int medicals and have three months break...her greatest idol..angad khanna...she wants t meet him and dream bout him day n night...she lives with her grandparents and aunts as her dad n mom (ravi and ketki) died of a car accident...theyw ere in canada but after her parents death..she came back to india when she was in rgade nine... (played by Neha Bamb)

Bua: kripa's sweetes aunt..and tells her everythin about her ambitions...and her music interest... (played by kripa's mom in kyph)

Dada: kripa's grandad...loves his grandaughter a lot and gave her full freedom...(played by umm an old manšŸ˜†)

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Josh: Angad's friend...always tries to make angad see a reason to not to flirt with girlsa and to respect them ad love (the josh frm kyph)

Tina: Kripa's friend...always teases kripa of lvin Angad but always helps kripa when needed...(urvashi frm kyph)

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Click here to watch Hum-Tum-Promo

so this is it guys..for now..lolzzz...first epi will be up in FEB 14...a sweet VALENTINE gift for ya all...šŸ˜›

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg! so professional! its great hun šŸ‘ cant wait for it! thanks so much! good job šŸ‘ šŸ‘ 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that's soo cool. but i have a really hard semester so it's gonna be sooo ahrd to follow it! I'll read it during the summer. 😃 šŸ˜† 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yeah

that's soo cool. but i have a really hard semester so it's gonna be sooo ahrd to follow it! I'll read it during the summer. 😃 šŸ˜† 😃

awww..i've a hard semster too..but i din noe...i'll write it durin the weekends and post it...and dun worry hun..if u want it durint he summer..i'll have it saved in word document...i'll pm to u if u want it durint he summer...but that'll b a LOT to readšŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 intro cnt w8 2 read da next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow sounds soo cool

continue soon

Anza 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow,it really is so professional😊.
Can't wait till you start😳.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds soooooooooooooooo cool yaar!!! Thanks!!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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AN ADVANCE VALETINE GIFT FOR YA ALL...lol...hope u lyk it.,..(the next episode might take sum tym..coz i'm gonne put in videos n stuff toošŸ˜›)

EPISODE 1:

It's a beautiful morning with a bright sun…green everywhere…suddenly there's smoke in the air…we see a bunch of girl circling around the fire (in the morning)…dancing, singing and having fun, and suddenly one of the girls call out:
"where's kripa??? Did you guys see her…I'v been looking for her for an hour or so…where's she?" (a tall skinny girl ***played by tannu frm kyph*** wearing jeans with a turquoise colour top)
"no worries, Tina!...she's probably lost in angad's thoughts…!!"
tina: "stop it guys u noe she hates it when we tease her like that!...from now on…don't mention Angad's name…!!"
"alrite, tina..just chill…we don't mean it..and by the way, meeting Angad…will always be a dream!!!"
Tina: "but where's kripa..what am I going to tell Bua when she calls me?"

KRIPA ENTERS:

Click here to watch kripa-entry---HUM-TUM


Tine: KRIPA: I seriously am goin to kill u one day!!!>… ur Buamom was askin about u!

Kripa: oh shoot!!!...dammit it…I gotta get home…bua's probably worried…bye guyz!


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Kripa sneaking in, and the slowly walkin and before she could open the door..Bua comes and grabs her ears frm behind and asks "kahan thi tu aab tak?"
Kripa: "aaah.bua, mera kaan choro..i'm telling u!!!....woh main late hogaye kyun ki…c'mon bua aaj hamare college ka akhri din tha!!!... toh humne socha kyun na pahre main jaye aur thodi si masti kare…aur waise bhi main Mumbai jaane wali hoon..for three months!!!..."

"Nahin" standin tall Dada, "nahin tum waha nahin jaogi!"

Kripa: "lekin kyun nahin buddy!!...i have three months break and after that I've to go to Mumbai anyways for my medical studies...and int hese three months break I can join the music academy!"

Dada: "tum nahin jasakti!...tumhe pata hai wahan kitni corruption aur …aur…traffic hai!"

Kripa: "buddy, ur worried about traffic?"

Dada: "nahin, waise bhi akeli ladki ko wahan nahin jana chahiye…hum log ek saath jayenge..baad mein…c'mon we don't wantu to b away frm us!"

Kripa: "lekin buddy.."

Dada" lekin wekin kuch nahin tum nahin jarahe ho and that's it!...mera decision koi nahin badal sakta!"

"MAIN TO BADAL SAKTA HOON NA, UNCLE!" Rishab khanna (angad's dad) standing on the doorway, "uncle, pehchana?..main rishab…ravi (kripa's dad) ka bachpan ka dost…aur aphine mujhe Mumbai bheja tha…apne paise se…bhool geye?"

Dada" aareee Rishab!!!...tum…yahan…kaise…aao aao..baitho!"

Rishab and dada sits down…kripa is still confused…

Rishab: "maine ravi aur ketki ke bare mein suna tha…lekin kabhi bhi mauka nahin mila…I'm really sorry uncle."

Dada: "yeh jo kismet pet ha wahi huya…anywayz..yeh kripa hai..ravi aur ketki ke ek lauti beti!"

Rishab stood up and looked at kripa for a long time… and then kripa comes and takes his blessings: "jeete rahon beti"

And then kripa goes in her room..and rishab was stil wandering about something…(by the way kripa doesn noe that rishab is angad's dad!)

***********Break*************

Rishab: "uncle…kripa Mumbai jana chahtii hai?"

Dada: "haan..lekin main nahin chahta ke who aise chali jaye…akeli kya karegi uss sheher main?..isilye maine socha ke baad mein chali jaayegi!"

Rishab: "uncle mere deemag main ek baat ayi hai…kyun na kripa akeli hi jaye Mumbai..aur woh mere ghaar mein rehsakti hai…main Arun ke kehdonga…"

Dada: "lekin…"

Rishab: "lekin wekin kuch nahin uncle..mujhe aapne beton pe bhi bharosa hai…aap beshak kripa ko mubai bhejiye.."

Dada" theek hai…aur haan…tumhare beton ka naam kya hai?"

(kripa was comin and hears

Rishab: "arun toh sabse bara hai..aur uski biwi Aditi, Angad aur Ajay…"

Kripa still couldn't believe her ears…

Dada" angad yeh naam kahin suna sa lagta hai"

Rishab: (laughs) "haan uncle…who singer hai…ANGAD KHANNA!"

Hearin this KRIPA IS SHOCKED!

***********DONE*************

Edited by Fwendy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww cool... continue... this is going to be fun to read.. 😳

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